1、高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家专题模拟训练(书面表达)书面表达(一)1(2020北京市中国人民大学附属中学高三6月模拟(三模)假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom参加“汉语桥(Chinese Bridge)”世界大学生中文比赛，获得赛区一等奖进入决赛，现在准备决赛当中的中华才艺展示环节，来信向你咨询，请你给他回信，内容如下：(1)表示祝贺；(2)推荐一项中华才艺展示内容及理由。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【答案】Dear Tom，How are you? Im very glad to learn that you passed the first rou
2、nd of the Chinese Bridge.Congratulations on your success.Your efforts in the last few weeks finally paid off.With the final contest coming，you may be worried about Chinese arts performance.If you want to be excellent in this performance part，I recommend you to sing a GuFeng song.Firstly，a GuFeng son
3、g is catchy and easy to sing，so you can learn it well in a short period of time.Besides，GuFeng music is a kind of music that mixes traditional Chinese elements with pop music very well，which not only spreads classics，but also shows the unique charm of music.Come on! Just show yourself and you will b
4、e the star in the final contest.May you succeed.Yours，Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给进入汉语桥决赛但不知道如何准备决赛当中的中华才艺展示环节的Tom，向他推荐一项中华才艺。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：(1)表示祝贺；(2)推荐一项中华才艺展示内容及理由。第二步：列提纲 (重点词组)be glad to do sth.；pay off；the final contest；be worried
5、 about；Chinese arts performance；recommend sb.to do sth.；mix.with.；not only.but also.第三步：连词成句(1)Im very glad to learn that you passed the first round of the Chinese Bridge.(2)Your efforts in the last few weeks finally paid off.(3)With the final contest coming，you may be worried about Chinese arts per
6、formance.(4)I recommend you to sing a GuFeng song.(5)GuFeng music is a kind of music that mixes traditional Chinese elements with pop music very well，which not only spreads classics，but also shows the unique charm of music.(根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。)第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)(1)表文章结构顺序：first of all，firstly/
7、first，secondly/second，and then，finally，in the end，at last，last but not least(2)表并列补充关系：what is more，besides，moreover，furthermore，in addition，as well as，not only.but (also)，including，also(3)表转折对比关系：however，on the contrary，but，althoughclause(从句)，In spite ofn/doing，on the one hand.，on the other hand.so
8、me.，while others.，as for，so.that.(4)表因果关系：because，as，so，thus，therefore，as a result (5)表换一种方式表达：in other words，that is to say(6)表进行举例说明：for example，for instance，such asn/doing(7)表陈述事实：in fact，frankly speaking(8)表选择：either.or.，or连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇
9、连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如If you want to be excellent in this performance part这句话中用了If引导的条件状语从句，如GuFeng music is a kind of music that mixes traditional Chinese elements with pop music very well这句话中用了that引导的限制性定语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如pay off，be worried about，recommend sb.to do sth.，mix.with.等，为文
10、章增色不少；并注意了句子的衔接，如Firstly，Besides。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。2(2020广东省高考模拟英语试题)假定你是李华，曾在你校工作的外教Peter得知你们最近搬迁到新校区学习，来信询问新校区的情况，请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：(1)介绍新校区(地理位置，建筑布局，设施设备等)；(2)邀请他闲时来访。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【答案】Dear Peter，I am really glad to hear from you.Things ha
11、ve changed quite a lot since you were last at our school.The biggest change is probably our new campus which you might be interested to know more about.The new campus is more conveniently situated，within walking distance of the city center.On campus，with the modern teaching block standing in the mid
12、dle，surrounded by other functional areas like the library，the gym and the stadium，etc.Above all，equipped with a computer and a smart screen，the spacious classrooms help create an ideal atmosphere for our daily study.Do remember to drop by when you have time! Our new campus is well worth a visit.Your
13、s sincerely，Li Hua【解析】这是一篇提纲类写作。第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，曾在你校工作的外教Peter得知你们最近搬迁到新校区学习，来信询问新校区的情况，请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：(1)介绍新校区(地理位置，建筑布局，设施设备等)；(2)邀请他闲时来访。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词(组)：hear from (收到来信)；campus (校园)；in the middle (在中间)；equipped with(装备有)；atmosphere (氛围)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。第4步：连句
14、成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如The biggest change is probably our new campus which you might be interested to know more about.运用定语从句；Above all，equipped with a computer and a smart screen，the spacious classrooms help create an ideal atm
15、osphere for our daily study.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。书面表达(二)1(2020河北省衡水中学高三下学期十调)在这次比SARS危害更为严重的新冠病毒(novel coronavirus)肆虐之际，为了大家的健康，为提高全民素质和文明程度，社会上很多人提出“公筷公羹计划”。假定你是李华，请围绕“用餐改革”这个主题，根据以下内容向全校写一封英语倡议书。(1)要点提示：用餐使用公筷公勺(包括家庭用餐)；聚餐实行分餐制，聚餐时不高声喧哗，必须说话时应用手将嘴遮挡；养成
16、餐前洗手的好习惯。(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。(3)词数100左右。参考词汇：公筷公勺 serving chopsticks and spoons分餐制 separate dining systemDear schoolmates， Li Hua【答案】Dear schoolmates，Im Li Hua，a senior three student.Im writing to call on everyone to carry out a dining reform for the improvement of peoples health and national civiliz
17、ation，especially in the crucial period when the novel coronavirus does more harm to humans than SARS.To begin with，I firmly believe that serving chopsticks and spoons are better choices for us to prevent germs from spreading during meal times，family dinners included.Moreover，wed better dine together
18、 at a restaurant where each individual can only eat what he has in his plate；in other words，separate dining system is of great necessity.In addition，dont speak loudly and cover your mouth with your hands if you have to.Most importantly，developing a good habit of washing hands before meals is the bas
19、ic，which can be beneficial to us for a long time.I would appreciate it if you could support the above proposals.Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封倡议书。第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封倡议书：在这次比SARS危害更为严重的新冠病毒(novel coronavirus)肆虐之际，为了大家的健康，为提高全民素质和文明程度，社会上很多人提出“公筷公勺计划”。假定你是李华，请围绕“用餐改革”这个主题，根据以下内容向全校写一封英语倡议书。要点提示：(1)用餐使用公筷公勺(
20、包括家庭用餐)；(2)聚餐实行分餐制，聚餐时不高声喧哗，必须说话时应用手将嘴遮挡；(3)养成餐前洗手的好习惯。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词(组)，如：a senior three student(一个高三的学生)；the improvement of peoples health and national civilization(人民健康水平和民族文明程度的提高)；to prevent germs from spreading during meal times(防止细菌在用餐期间传播)；of great necessity(很大的必要性)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，
21、注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级句子。especially in the crucial period when the novel coronavirus does more harm to humans than SARS.句中使用when引导的时间状语从句；wed better dine together at a restaurant where each i
22、ndividual can only eat what he has in his plate句中使用where引导的定语从句和what引导的宾语从句；the basic，which can be beneficial to us for a long time.句中which引导非限制性定语从句。2(2020黑龙江哈尔滨三中高三三模)假定你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办以“Changes in My City”为主题的作品展评活动。优秀作品将在校园网上展示。请你用英语写一份书面通知，内容包括：(1)活动目的；(2)作品形式(绘画、摄影、音乐等)；(3)作品要求(原创、紧扣主题)；(4)截止日期
23、：6 月 25 日；作品发送至邮箱：hilihua。注意：(1)词数 100 左右；(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Notice Student Union【答案】NoticeAn exciting event “Changes in My City” is around the corner.Every one of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your talent and skills.Note that your cont
24、ributions should present the changes of our city.The following contribution forms are suggested：painting，calligraphy，photograph，music，folk art and so on.All the works are expected to be original and positive.Excellent collections will be shown on the campus net.All the students are welcome to send y
25、our artworks to hilihua by June 25.Your contributions will certainly make the event a huge success.Come on，everybody! Its your show time.Student Union【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一份书面通知，通知同学们参加“Changes in My City”为主题的作品展评活动。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：(1)活动
26、目的；(2)作品形式(绘画、摄影、音乐等)；(3)作品要求(原创、紧扣主题)；(4)截止日期：6 月 25 日；作品发送至邮箱：hilihua。第二步：列提纲 (重点词组)around the corner；be expected to；give full play to；contribution forms；are welcome to第三步：连词成句(1)Every one of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your talent
27、 and skills.(2)All the works are expected to be original and positive.(3)Your contributions will certainly make the event a huge success.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)(1)表文章结构顺序：first of all，firstly/first，secondly/second，and then，finally，in the end，at last(2)表并列补充关系：what is more，besides
28、，moreover，furthermore，in addition，as well as，not only.but (also)，including(3)表转折对比关系：however，on the contrary，but，although clause(从句)，in spite of n/doing ，on the one hand，on the other hand，while，as for (4)表因果关系：because，as，so，thus，therefore，as a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】
29、范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了定语从句，如：Every one of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your talent and skills.这句话先行词为event，which在句中作主语引导从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。书面表达(三)1(2020福建省厦门市高三线上
30、质量检查一)假如你是李华，你已和英国朋友Lucy约定于本周六下午去高铁站接她。但你临时有重要会议不能如约前往，将委托他人接站。请你给Lucy写一封致歉信，主要内容包括：(1)表示歉意；(2)解释原因；(3)接站安排。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【答案】Dear Lucy，I am writing to apologize for being unable to meet you at the railway station this Saturday afternoon.Ive just been informed to attend an importa
31、nt conference，so I will arrange for my colleague Li Ming to pick you up.He will be waiting for you in due time at the arrival exit.You can contact him at 13999667788 if necessary.Sorry again for any inconvenience that may be caused.I shall meet you at your hotel in the evening and then we can have d
32、inner together.Wish you a pleasant journey.Yours sincerely，Li Hua【解析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给朋友Lucy写一封致歉信。体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时和将来时为主要求：(1)表示歉意；(2)解释原因；(3)接站安排。第二步：列提纲(重点词组)apologize for/ inform sb.of sth./ arrange/ pick up/ wait for/ the reason why./inconvenience/ attend/ arrival第三步：连词成句(1)I am writing to
33、 apologize for not being able to meet you at the railway station this Saturday afternoon.(2)I have to attend an important conference，so I will ask my colleague Li Ming to pick you up，who will be waiting for you in due time at the arrival exit.(3)His phone number is attached，so you can contact with h
34、im if necessary.(4)Sorry again for any inconvenience that may be caused.(5)I shall meet you at your hotel in the evening and then we can have dinner together.(6)Wish you a pleasant journey.第四步：连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so.状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although.定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where.第五
35、步：修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，使用了较为高级的句式：so引导的并列句Ive just been informed to attend an important conference，so I will arrange for my colleague Li Ming to pick you up.；that引导的定语从句Sorry again for any inconvenience that may be caused.。高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
36、2(2020北京市北京大学附属中学高三下学期模拟)假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华。你从报纸上得知英国人Christopher JA.Smith先生骑自行车从英国抵达北京，创下了新的世界纪录。请你用英文给他写一封邮件，邀请他近期到你校做一次演讲。内容包括：(1)说明邀请他的原因；(2)告知演讲的相关信息(例如：时间、地点、听众等)；(3)询问对方能否前来。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mr.Smith， Sincerely Yours，Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr.Smith，I am the president of the Student
37、Union at the Hongxing Middle School.On behalf of our school，I would like to congratulate you on the new world record you have set.Meanwhile，I am delighted to invite you to give a speech in our school about what you experienced because you are very popular in our school and your stories published in
38、the newspapers are a great source of encouragement to many people.The activity will be held in our school auditorium on November 17th.It will start from 15：30 and last for 2 hours.The audience may include all the students，staff and some parents.We really hope you can come to make it.If you are inter
39、ested in this，please write back to me at your earliest convenience.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours Sincerely，Li Hua【解析】本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成红星中学学生会主席李华。从报纸上得知英国人Christopher JA.Smith先生骑自行车从英国抵达北京，创下了新的世界纪录。请用英文给他写一封邮件，邀请他近期到你校做一次演讲。第1步：审题。根据提示可知本文要求考生把自己当成李华，用英文给英国人Christopher JA.Smith写一封邮件
40、，邀请他近期到你校做一次演讲。全文以一般现在时、一般将来时。人称以第一人称为主。第2步：组织要点。说明邀请他的原因；告知演讲的相关信息(例如：时间、地点、听众等)；询问对方能否前来。第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为：congratulate on，be delighted to，a great source of，at ones convenience等，写作时注意书信的格式和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的
41、所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化，并不死板。文章里使用了较多的高级词汇，如congratulate on，be delighted to，a great source of，at ones convenience等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如宾语从句Meanwhile，I am delighted to invite you to give a speech in our school about what you experienced.；省略that的定语从句On behalf of our school，I would like to congra
42、tulate you on the new world record you have set.。同时文章里还使用了一些串联成分，如meanwhile等，这些串联成分让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。这些高级语法结构的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了很强的驾驭语言的能力。书面表达(四)1(2020湖南省长沙市第一中学高三月考)假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom在给你的邮件中提到他对中国传统文化很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位中国古代名人。请你给Tom回信，内容包括：(1)该名人是谁；(2)该名人的主要贡献；(3)该名人对你的影响。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；(3)结束语已为
43、你写好。Dear Tom， Yours，Li Hua【答案】Dear Tom，Its great to hear from you and I feel proud you are passionate about the Chinese traditional culture，and would like to introduce a distinguished literary figure in ancient ChinaLi Bai，one of the greatest poets of Tang Dynasty.Leaving behind a legacy of over 1,0
44、00 great works of Chinese literature，Li Bai is just as significant as William Shakespeare to the language of English.Most of his poems still survive today and have been translated into many languages all over the world，considering that they are easy to understand with rhyming，rich imagination and st
45、riking imagery.What influenced me most are his strong affection for landscapes，friends and people，his writing poems from different perspectives，his innovative spirit of breaking established rules of poetry at the time and his confidence and ambition in adversity.Interested in knowing more? I can rec
46、ommend some books to you.Just let me know.Yours，Li Hua【解析】这是一篇提纲类写作。第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom在给你的邮件中提到他对中国传统文化很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位中国古代名人。请你给Tom回信，内容包括：(1)该名人是谁；(2)该名人的主要贡献；(3)该名人对你的影响。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词(组)：be passionate about (热衷于)；distinguished(出色的)；literary figure (文学人物)；leave behind (留下)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词(组)
47、进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Leaving behind a legacy of over 1,000 great works of Chinese literature，Li Bai is just as significant as William Shakespeare to the language of English.非谓语动词的运用；What
48、 influenced me most are his strong affection for landscapes，friends and people，his writing poems from different perspectives，his innovative spirit of breaking established rules of poetry at the time and his confidence and ambition in adversity.运用了主语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自
49、然，为文章增色添彩。2(2020辽宁部分重点中学协作体高三5月联考)假定你是李华，星期六晚上学校要放映电影丝绸之路(The Silk Road)，你想请在学校学习的外国朋友Peter一起观看。请给他写一封邀请函。内容包括：要点：(1)时间和地点；(2)简单介绍丝绸之路：(3)建议他先了解相关的历史。注意：(1)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；(2)词数100词左右：(3)信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Peter，How are you doing recently? Yours，Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter，How are you doing recently？I
50、m glad to tell you that a film named The Silk Road will be shown at eight pm.in our school hall this Saturday，so Im writing to invite you to join us.The Silk Road，dating back to the Han Dynasty，was the most famous trade route connecting China and the western world.It not only promoted the trade of g
51、oods but also spread religions and technology between countries.Undoubtedly，its a good opportunity to learn about Chinese history.Given that the film is open to the whole school，I advise you to get there earlier and read some relevant history books about it so that you can understand it better.See y
52、ou then.Yours，Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生邀请Peter一起观看星期六晚上学校放映的电影丝绸之路。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：(1)时间和地点；(2)简单介绍丝绸之路；(3)建议他先了解相关的历史。第二步：列提纲 (重点词组)be glad to；invite to；date back to；advise sb to do第三步：连词成句(1)Im glad to tell you that a film named The S
53、ilk Road will be shown at eight pm.in our school hall this Saturday，so Im writing to invite you to join us.(2)The Silk Road，dating back to the Han Dynasty，was the most famous trade route connecting China and the western world.(3)It not only promoted the trade of goods but also spread religions and t
54、echnology between countries.(4)Undoubtedly，its a good opportunity to learn about Chinese history.(5)Given that the film is open to the whole school，I advise you to get there earlier and read some relevant history books about it so that you can understand it better.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连
55、句成篇(衔接词)(1)表文章结构顺序：first of all，firstly/first，secondly/second，and then，finally，in the end，at last(2)表并列补充关系：what is more，besides，moreover，furthermore，in addition，as well as，including(3)表转折对比关系：however，on the contrary，but，althoughclause(从句)，in spite ofn/doing，on the one hand，on the other hand，while，a
56、s for(4)表因果关系：because，as，so，thus，therefore，as a result连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了not only.but also.的固定句型，如：It not only promoted the trade of goods but also spread religions and technology between countries.使用了not only.but also.的固定句型，意为“它不仅促进了商品贸易，而且促进了各国之间宗教和技术的传播。”。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。- 13 - 版权所有高考资源网
