1、四川盐边县2016高考英语书面表达二轮训选练及参考范文【2014高考英语广东省中山市华侨中学二模试题】读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。When Sam first got to his boarding school with his parents, he was very happy. He thought he would be able to go home every weekend. When he was told he would not, he started crying because the thought of
2、 not seeing his parents was driving him crazy.He was given uniforms and all other things that he would need for the term. He started crying when it was time for his parents to leave. He was then taken to the dorm, where he saw other children happy. He tried as much as he could to fit in but could no
3、t because his mind was at home. He started feeling homesick (想家) and wanted to go homes as soon as possible.He got sick soon because he could not eat the school food. He could not concentrate in the classroom. All he could think was being at home with his family. He had no mobile phone or other mean
4、s to get in touch with his parents. He was angry and felt lonely. He thought his parents hated him and that was why they left him in a boarding school.写作内容1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2. 以约120个词讲述一次你(或你的朋友)想家的经历,内容包括: 时间、地点和起因; 想家给学习和生活带来的影响; 你(或你朋友)是如何应对的。写作要求1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.
5、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确,语言规范,内容何时,语句连贯。【参考范文】读写任务:Version 1:Sam, a student, was sent to a boarding school, in which he missed his parents very much, and thus he got sick and could not focus his attention on his lessons. (31 words) In fact, in real life, everyone must have an experience of feeling
6、homesick. I remember when I was 10 years old, because my parents were busy, I was sent to my uncles in another city. Right here, I would have to study in school for two years. Although my uncle and his family were really kind to me, I still felt homesick. At first, I couldnt sleep well, because I di
7、dnt adapt to the climate there. And, since different teachers have different teaching styles, it was difficult for me to understand the lessons in the beginning. Besides, I was new for the students there. As a result, hardly did I have any close friends. Feeling terribly lonely, I couldnt help think
8、ing my parents and my fellow guys in my city every now and then. However, as days went on, I slowly adapted myself to the new environment. It was because I actively communicated with my new schoolmates and made friends with them that my homesickness gradually disappeared.(167 words)【参考范文】读写任务:Versio
9、n 2:Sam was sent to a boarding school and tried to adapt himself to it but failed. Consequently he began to feel homesick and lonely and became reluctant with his study. (30 words)Being homesick is not at all strange to anybody. In reality, I had a similar experience. In order to promote our competi
10、tive strength in exams, we were only allowed to go home once a month this term. It was the first time that I had had to stay in school for such a long time. So much did I miss my parents that on no account would I meet them without bursting into tears. It was this homesickness that had a bad effect
11、on both my life and study. Missing my family so much, I did find it difficult to have a good meal and fall asleep. I could not concentrate on my study and my study efficiency went down sharply. Worse still, totally lost in the great pressure from study, I didnt know how to deal with it. I was about
12、to abandon myself when my teachers gave me some advice on how to adapt to this busy school life. As a matter of fact, it was high time that I should study hard and independently. I then turned my homesickness into the motivation to study diligently. Moreover, I made more friends and frequently parti
13、cipated in outdoor activities, through which I was able to relax myself and share my feelings with others. Having seas of interesting things to do, I finally became accustomed to enjoying my school life. Tough as it was to adjust to a brand new school life, I succeeded eventually. The experience of
14、overcoming the difficulties has now become a precious memory and a sum of wealth in my life. (264 words) 书面表达 (满分30分)在英语课堂上,你喜欢你的老师上课时只用英语,还是英语汉语兼用?某英语杂志就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请你围绕“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only, or in both English and Chinese?”这个话题,参考所给要点,选择一种授课形式,写一篇英语
15、短文。注意:1只选择一种授课形式;2词数120个左右授课形式一: 只用英语 授课形式二: 英语汉语兼用优点: 有助于提高听说能力等 优点:易于理解等缺憾: 不易听懂等 缺憾:英语氛围不浓等结论: 结论: 【参考范文】书面表达范文( 1 )I prefer my English classes to be taught in English onlyAs we all know, a good learning environment is vital if we want to study English wellClasses taught in English provide studen
16、ts with such an environmentWhen English is the only language used in the classroom, students will have more opportunities listening and speakingTherefore, they will be able to learn more quicklyHowever, there are some problems with this teaching methodAs we havent mastered enough English words, some
17、times we may find it difficult to follow the teacherSlow learners may even lose interest in EnglishPractice makes perfectTo learn English well requires a lot of practiceTherefore, I like my English classes to be taught completely in English ( 2 )I prefer my English classes to be taught in both Chine
18、se and EnglishIn my opinion, learning English is a step-by-step processAs middle school students, we only have a small vocabularyIf the teacher can use some Chinese in an English class, we will understand the lesson betterOf course, an English class taught in two languages has its shortcomingsSuch a
19、 class cannot create a good atmosphere for English learningSome students will speak Chinese all the time and cannot learn English wellIf you want to learn a lesson well, you have to understand it firstTo help students understand the lesson better, the teacher should use Chinese from time to timeTher
20、efore, I like my teacher to use both English and Chinese in teaching写作(满分30分) 假如你叫李华,你的加拿大笔友James想了解一下你要参加的2012年全国中学生英语夏令营的有关情况,请根据以下信息给他写一封回信,并邀请他参加你们的活动。营址大连活动时间2012年7月底,共4天参加人员1.全国中学生英语能力竞赛获奖者2.中国,美国和澳大利亚的英语老师活动内容1.举行英语演讲比赛2.观看学生表演3.游览大连风景名胜4.交流英语学习经验注意:1.信须包括以上提供的内容要点,可以适当增加细节,使内容连贯; 2.词数:120150
21、; 3.参考词汇:全国中学生英语能力竞赛NEPC 【参考范文】One Possible version:Dear James, Nice to hear from you again!As you know,this summer vacation,at the end of July,2012,we winners of NEPC will go to a four-day English Summer Camp in Dalian,Some English teachers from China,the USA,England and Australia will join us.In t
22、he camp,we will have some English speaking competition,watch some wonderful performances given by the students and visit some places of interest in Dalian . Besides, we will exchange our English learning experience and talk about our colorful school life in English.I think this sum-mer camp will gre
23、atly improve my spoken English and I will make some new friends there.I do hope you will come and join us.Best wishes,Yours truly,书面表达(满分25分)假定你是李华,广西某老牌高国的一中名高三学生因为某种原因无法参加本周日上午你班外教Mr Jackson组织的户外郊游活动。请就下列要点用英语给MrJaekson写一份请假条。 要点:1请假原因:昨天下午踢球扭伤了脚,医生建议你静养一段时间; 2恳请准假; 3表示感谢 4表达良好祝愿。 注意:1词数100左右; 2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3请假条的标题、开头和结尾已为你写好,不计A总词数; 4参考词汇:郊游,outing。 A Sick NoteDear Mr. Jackson, Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】