1、 专题 06 读后续写之各种不同的“说”描写+易错点 -新高考满分作文读后续写高分突破 目录一 say和各种常用“说”的替换词二 八种表达修饰的“说”三 “说”出现在句中的位置三 常见容易丢分的“说” 说的不同表达法1.可以替换say的动词 众“说”纷纭say说; speak说；tell告诉；add补充说；insist坚持说；chat (聊天)自言自语的说think aloud; say to oneself; think to oneself（暗想）; talk to oneself; murmur to oneself(喃喃自语)；soliloquize(自言自语)哭着说cry哭叫；大声说
2、；sob呜咽着说; weep out哭着说出笑着说smile 微笑着说; laugh 笑着说；say with a smile ; chuckle(轻笑着说)“高声”、“低声”说call 喊，叫; yell喊叫(因激动，恐惧); shout 高喊;大声喊叫;scream 惊呼，高声叫道；scream (尖叫),roar (吼叫), let out a loud voice (大叫/大声呼喊), shout at the top of ones voice (大喊)whisper(小声/低语)，murmur (低语/嘀咕/低声抱怨)表扬、抱怨说praise 称赞； complain 抱怨；sig
3、h叹息；mutter低声抱怨；murmur嘟囔问答说 ask问；explain解释说； reply=respond 答复,回答； answer 回答 demand 质问； inquire (询问)； tell告诉反对说disagree不同意；deny否认；scold责备;contradict反驳说；argue争论；protest抗议声明说state声明；declare宣布；announce宣布;claim声明;point out指出评论说comment; observe; remark;hint(暗示)；add (补充说)同意、建议说admit 承认；agree 同意； advise 劝告，建
4、议 ；suggest 建议；argue 主张acknowledge承认；其他说repeat 重复；promise答应/许诺；comfort安慰；warn 警告；whisper 悄声说; 低语 道 ；beg 恳求 ；promise 承诺道；emphasize=stress强调 ; swear发誓；典例赏析1. 【2022年新高考全国I卷】 “You have a full preparation before this event, which is the most important reason why you show up here”, I added with a sincere t
5、one.“你在这次活动之前已经有了充分的准备，这是你来这里的最重要的原因，”我用真诚的语气补充道。2. 【2022年湖南周南中学模拟】“No, it is not your lamb. It is ours! ” said Charlie, placing himself in front of it.“不，这不是你的羔羊。这是我们的了！”查理说着，站在它面前。3. 【2021年新高考浙江卷6月】“How much money have you earned?” Dad asked. I was surprised, reluctant to say my income.“你赚了多少钱？”爸爸
6、问。我很惊讶，不愿意说我的收入。4. 【2022年厦门大学附中2022-2023学年期中】As the boat was approaching, Kiana pointed to her father and sister and someone screamed, “They are in the water! Help!”当船驶近时，基亚娜指着她的父亲和妹妹，有人尖叫道：“他们在水里！”救命！”5. “I did finish my work, he emphasized.“我真的完成了工作。”他强调说。6. “It is all your fault! he retorted.“那都是
7、你的错!” 他反驳说。7. Lily scolded the child gently for being naughty.Lily轻声责备了那个调皮的孩子。 被不同表达修饰后的“说”一 被介词短语修饰 1.“Do you know the answer ?” he said with eagerness.“你知道答案吗？”他急切地说。 2. “Of course,” Nancy replied with a smile.“当然,”南希笑着回答。3.The house got really noisy at that time, with everybody hollering and sho
8、uting at the top of his voice.那栋房子真是很吵闹，每个人都在用最大的嗓门大喊大叫。二 被副词修饰 1.【2022年新高考全国I卷】The children said loudly, “Happy Mothers Day!” 孩子们大声说：“母亲节快乐！”2.“I wont let you down,” he replied confidently.他信心十足地回答道，“我不会让你失望的。”3.“My best friend is leaving, ”she said sadly. “我最好的朋友要走了，” 她难过地说。4.“Thats impossible, sh
9、e thought aloud.“那不可能，”她自言自语地说。三 被分词形容词修饰 1.“I didnt get an ideal score in the math exam, ”said Lily, disappointed. “我在数学考试中没有得到理想的分数，”莉莉失望地说。四 被非谓语短语修饰 1. “Time to go.” I whispered to the girl, wishing she could follow me right away.“该出发了。”我轻声对小女孩说，希望她能立马跟上。2. “ He turned me out of the room this mo
10、rning, ”said James, stamping his foot with excitement.早上他把我赶出了房间，”詹姆斯激动的跺着脚说。3.“I didnt know what I was doing,”she said, laughing.“我不知道我在做什么，”她笑着说。4. “Ill get us some coffee,” she said, heading for the kitchen.“我去给我们拿点咖啡，”她说着朝厨房走去。五 先后发生的一连串动作 1. Frank quickly told Belle Ringer and the other two dri
11、vers about Stevies surgery, and then sighed.弗兰克快速地告诉Belle Ringer和其他两名司机 Stevie手术的事，说完之后叹了口气。2.“I dont believe you any more”He turned around, slammed the door and stormed out.“我再也不相信你了。”他转过身，砰的一声关上门，冲了出去。3. James murmured a thank you and ran home all the way.James 轻轻地说了声“谢谢”后一路跑回了家。4. He paused, look
12、ed straight into her eyes, and said in a quiet voice, “Thats true.他停下来，直视着她的眼睛，平静地说:“那是真的。”5. The Queen, quite out of breath from yelling and screaming, went up to Alice and asked,“Have you met him yet?”女王因为大声喊叫而气喘吁吁地向爱丽丝走过来并且问道:“你见过他吗?”6.“Drive safely, he said, and waved goodbye.“小心开车，”他说着挥手告别。7.“C
13、ome here,” said the little man, and took her to one of the corners of the building.六 不出现say，.+动作描写来修饰 1.“I was attacked by a wolf and I thought I would never see you again.” Mac hugged them and burst out crying.“我被狼袭击了，我以为再也见不到你了。”麦克抱着他们，大哭起来。2.He interrupted the silence with an announcement: “The d
14、eadline to enter for the Competition is tomorrow.”他用一则通知打断了沉默:“报名参加比赛的截止日期是明天。”3.She suggested a walk in the open air and he readily agreed.她提议去户外走走，他欣然同意了。4.He went along, stopping his friends beginning endlessly his statement.他走过去拦住他的朋友们，开始了他无休止的陈述。七 状语从句来修饰say后接状语从句，增加了细节描写。即：“.”sb said,as/when/b
15、efore/as if. 1.“What a beauty!” said the nurse when she came to the door.“多美啊!”护士走到门口时说道。2.“Watch out!” she shouted, as the car started to move.“当心!”当汽车开始移动时，她喊道。八 并列句来修饰say后接并列谓语或接并列句，增加了动作描写。即：“.”sb said, and (then he) did.1.“I was attacked by a wolf and I thought I would never see you again.” Mac
16、 hugged them and burst out crying.“我被狼袭击了，我以为再也见不到你了。”麦克抱着他们，大哭起来。 “说”出现的位置一 出现在前面 1.She said, “ I would like to go with you, but I havent finished my homework.”她说：“我想和你一起去，但我还没有做完成作业。”2.He added softly “I miss you.”他又温柔的说了一句:“我想念你。”二 出现在句中 1. His son smiled somewhat shyly, and replied softly,“Me,to
17、o,Dad!”他的儿子有些腼腆地笑了笑，轻声答道:“我也是，爸爸!”2.“Very clever,” said the teacher, nodding his head as if pleased.“很聪明，”老师高兴地点了点头说。3.“我的答案是对”汤姆争辩道，“你的答案是错的。”“My answer is right, argued Tom, “and yours is wrong.”4.“To your health!” said Mr. White, who also emptied his glass, and wiped his mouth with his handkerchi
18、ef.“祝你健康!”White先生说，他也把杯子倒空了，用手帕擦了擦嘴。三 出现在后面 1. “ I would like to go with you, but I havent finished my homework.” She said.她说：“我想和你一起去，但我还没有做完成作业。”2.“He is a fine young man, observed Stephen.“他是一位优秀的年轻人，”斯蒂芬评论道。3.“你疯啦!”她哈哈大笑起来。“Youre crazy! she laughed.4.“救命啊,救命啊!” 他高声喊道。“Help, help!” he cried/screa
19、med. 常见容易丢分的“说”错误一 滥用修饰词【典例1】“How can you do this?she said angrily, looking at me furiously.【点睛】 此句使用了大量副调。并且套用了分词作伴随的句型。过度使用副词让阅卷老师觉得你词汇贫乏。废话连篇，对情节发展和刻画人物性格没有帮助。【典例2】“That is fantastic news,”he said happily.【点睛】 此句中完全没有必要加上一个happily来表达说的方式，因为句中的fantastic一词足以说明说话人的表情，过度强调对话标签会让读者的注意力集中在“说话的方式”而不是“说话
20、的内容”。错误二 追求花哨，过度使用“对话标签”【典例】“Hey，how are you?”“Im fine, how are you?”“How is the weather?”“Terrific! Nice day for a walk isnt it?”【点睛】 这样的对话在现实生活中很真实，但是小说毕竟是艺术加工，无助情节推动的，不能刻画人物性格的日常寒暄和偏离文章主线的对话绝对不用。错误三 用词不当，逻辑混淆【典例】“I cant believe it,” Emma gasped.“Thats hilarious,” Henry chuckled.【点睛】这里把动作描写逻辑混淆了，gasp(喘息)不能.chuckle(轻笑)出一句话。“I cant believe it” Emma said with a gasp.(Dialogue tag+with介词短语)错误四 重复使用，废话堆积【典例】“I told you already,”I said, glaring.【点睛】 此句对话中的主语“1”已经清晰地说明了说话者，完全没有必要用 dialogue tag“I said”来说明说话对象。可以加上一点动作描写就可以避免这种错误，并且提升语言的生动性。I glared at him,“I told you already.”
