1、句式正确为王道 精巧布局乃精髓 Paul Shaw谈高考英语写作备考 Every great achievement is a dream before it becomes a reality.The sentence is the thing.Step by step,spare no effort,and succeed in timeWhat to write?How to arrange?Why to write?Is what Ive done super?2010201120122013内容邀请信预约信申请信私人信件文体应用文应用文应用文应用文内容邀请理由寻求辅导课程申请加入夏令
2、营请朋友接机信息点7个7个7个7个词数9710910510520102013年高考英语试题卷书面表达题一览 Dear Peter,I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China.Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students.If you come,you can choose three of the following four courses:Speaking,Writin
3、g,Britain Today and American Today,and teach of English learning experiences.Besides teaching,you will also work as an advisor to our students English club or our schools English newspaper.Please let me know if you are interested.Whats more,if you have any other questions Id be more than happy to he
4、lp.Best wishes,Li HuaOne Possible Version for 20105 sentencesOne Possible Version for 20119 sentencesDear Sir/Madam,Im Li Hua,a Chinese student taking summer course in your university.Im writing to ask for help.I came here last month and found my courses interesting.But I have some difficulties with
5、 note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library.I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and Im anxious to get help from you.I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons.Please let me know which day is OK with you.You may email or phone me.Here are my email ad
6、dress and phone number:lihua ,and 12345678.Look forward to your reply.Yours，Li HuaDear Sir or Madam,Im Li Hua,a middle school student from China.I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.I know that you welcome students from different c
7、ountries and Id like to take part in it.Ive been learning English for 10 years,and I speak fluent English.What is more,IlI be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well.I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.Looking forward to yo
8、ur reply!Regards,Li HuaOne Possible Version for 20126 sentencesDear Peter,How are you doing?Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference,and Ive asked him to bring you the Chinese painting youve asked for before.Also,Id like you to do me a favor.Would you pleas
9、e meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.?Thank you in advance!His flight number is CA985,and it will arrive at 11:30 am,August 6.My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses.And he will be in a blue jacket.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li
10、 HuaOne Possible Version for 2013(A)9 sentencesOne Possible Version for 2013(B)Dear Tom,How are you doing?I wonder if you could sell Chinese knots for me.I made them myself with red silk threads,cloth and other materials.They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond,about 5 inches long and 4
11、inches wide.In China,these knots stand for friendship,love and good luck.People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their house.They are only 12.99 US dollars each.If anyone wants to know more about the knots,let them write to me.Also,do let me know if you need further informati
12、on.Thank you!Yours,Li Hua10 sentences 由表格和试题可看出,高考英语写作有以下六条规律。(一)作文话题：与考生学习生活密切相关,话题熟悉。(二)作文文体：应用文。为书信体，要求考生熟悉各种应用文体，注重语言表述基本功考查。(三)写作形式：近几年一直采用中文提纲,含隐性表格，信息要点有序化,写作顺序一目了然。(四)作文词数：考生作文一般要求为100词左右。(五)内容要点：内容要点基本给出,考生只要考虑如何用510句英语句子完整连贯表述，同时可做有限度发挥即可。(六)评分标准：“句子结构准确,要点齐全,语言流畅”为标准。考生能熟练掌握基本句型和各类句式结构,能根
13、据内容进行适当发挥。高考英语作文六大规律应用文(practical writing):指日常生活和工作中为某种具体的实用目的而写的文体，主要有书信、通知、海报、请柬、请假条、便条、日记、启事、祝辞、履历表等。应用文的语言力求平实、准确、简洁，表达的内容结构严谨，且易于理解掌握。考纲解读1正式应用文格式比较规范，但高考英语写作至今尚未考查过格式，只要求表达正文内容。2注意时态，如日记常用过去时态，通知、请柬通常要用将来时态，而履历表用现在时态。3应用文写作有一些特定习惯语句或套话，这些语句通常在考试中会考到，故要重点掌握。注意事项 英语作文：基本篇章结构 主题句：交待四要素，引出全文的话题 主体
14、句：展开话题/过程叙述/具体事宜/具体 要求/不同认识/如何处理等；注意以时间顺序为主；或相互对比，或以主次原则为主。结束句：概括/总结/归纳/建议/客套。英语作文的基本框架英语写作四个坚持坚持每天进行英语阅读强化输入坚持每天熟读高考范文侧重借鉴坚持每天认真写作练习熟能生巧坚持每天背诵成语名言锦上添花先写出无意义的主干句写作技巧点拨再根据句意要求补充附加信息主语谓语宾语定语状语词，短语，从句词，短语，从句Steve Jobs,born in 1955,is an American.Steve Jobs is an American,who was born in 1955.Steve Jobs
15、,born in 1955,is an American,who is considered as Father of Intelligent cell phone.Steve Jobs,Father of Intelligent cell phone,is an American,who was born in 1955.Steve Jobs is an American.Steve Jobs who is regarded as Father of Intelligent cell phone is an American,who was born in 1955.When was he
16、born?What is he?审题排序须用心：分清文体，确定短语，细心归类信息谋篇布局有智慧：合理清晰，主次原则，有条不紊分段遣词造句用技巧：主干句式：先主谓宾，配上附加信息誊写作文须认真：认真书写，避免错漏，注意标点符号高考写作注意事项Do your performance best at any time and take serious care of anything at hand.Nothing is impossible if you are sticking to it without rewinding.Skills for Writing in EnglishHow to
17、 write lettersSeries 1:practical writingBy Paul Shaw1信封：收信人姓名和地址写在右下角，寄信人姓名和地址写在左上角；姓名和地址顺序为先写姓名然后按照由小到大的写法写地址。2书信基本要素：(1)信头。包括写信人地址和日期，一般写在信的中间或者右上方，收信人姓名一般写在左上方。(2)称呼。怎样称呼与亲近程度有关，最正式和最不亲近的称呼为Dear Sir/Madam，比较熟悉的可称呼其姓，最随便和最亲近的可以称呼他的名，称呼后用逗号。写作指导 英文书信须注意以下几点：(3)正文。正文部分一般说明写信目的、主要内容和结尾问候语等。(该部分才是考核部分
18、)(4)结束语。常用结束语有Sincerely yours或Yours sincerely,Truly yours或Yours truly,Yours ever或Yours等。(5)签名。如何提升写作能力五个建议1.熟悉项目语言短语和句型2.明晰谋篇布局和写作顺序3.多种练习方式和实战演练4.熟读高考写作范文和名言5.限时写作三个关注和誊写How to write a letter of complaintTopic 0ne.每日经典谚语和句型背诵与仿写1When in Rome,do as the Romans do.入乡随俗。2It is 过去分词 that 从句【点拨】常用结构为：It
19、is said/believed/hoped/reported that.(注：若分词为表示建议、命令、请求，从句常用虚拟语气即should 动词原形)写前热身仿照上述句型，翻译下列句子。(1)据说他将要出国继续深造。_(2)有人建议我们这个周末开一个晚会来放松放松自己。_ It is said that he will go for a further study.It is suggested that we should relax ourselves by open a party this weekend.活学活用书信一直都是高考英语的考试热点。书信种类繁多，常见的有邀请信、感谢信、
20、道歉信、祝贺信、求职信、推荐信和亲友之间的私人信件等。除此之外，还有非正式的信件形式，如留言条，便条等。.书信(letters)相关短语 1.make reservations for预订2.a professional tour guide一位专业导游3.famous attractions/brand著名景点/品牌4.places of interest风景名胜5.share with与某人分享 6.a star hotel 星级宾馆7.without patience没有耐心8.get punishment受到惩罚9.go wrong出毛病10.return my money to me
21、退款11.apply for 申请 12.worse still更糟糕的是13.a full refund全额退款14.for the above reasons基于上述理由15.travel agency旅行社16.make mistakes犯错误1.我写信的目的是要向你投诉我最近在你们网站上购买的一双运动鞋。Im writing to complain about a pair of sneakers I recently purchased from your website.2.更糟糕的是,交鞋的日期推迟了10天。Worse still,there was a ten-day dela
22、y indelivering my shoes.相关句式3.我要求要么马上寄给我一双新的黑鞋子,要么全额退款。I demand either a new pair of black shoes be posted to me immediately or I be given a full refund.4.请退还我30%的钱,否则我会被迫采取进一步的措施。Please give 30%of my money back,or I shall be forced to take the matter further.5.她是个没有耐心的人,根本不耐心回答我的问题。She was not a pe
23、rson with patience and didnt patiently answer my questions at all.6.我要求她当面向我道歉。I demand that she make an apology to meface to face.Dear Mr.Wang，Thank you very much for your kind financial aid and valuable advice.The money I received is of a great help.It will be used for schooling tuition fees and b
24、uying some reference books.I realize the value of time to a busy person like you and it makes me feel more appreciative the whole morning you spent with us talking the ways and the importance of studying.I am determined to study even harder to contribute more to the people and our country in the fut
25、ure.Thank you again and wish you the best of health.Yours sincerely，Li Hua观摩领悟英文书信包含四部分：信头、称呼、正文和结束语。考试时一般给出信头和结束语，正文部分整个结构为：写信目的主要内容结尾或问候语。句用简单句表达写信目的；句和运用定语从句和并列句连接；句同样运用定语从句和并列句连接；句运用了简单句表达。句也是运用简单句表达结尾问候语。文章思路清晰，结构严谨，基本上无需用复杂的语言结构就可以把内容表达完整。结构分析与解读 假设你是李华，你上个月买的某外国品牌IPAD出了故障，屏幕无法显示内容，现在你写信到其公司反映
26、问题。现场写作 写作要点：1日期与故障；3已跟当地销售商家投诉，但其不能解决；4要求：更换一台新的，如不行则要求退货、拿回货款。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。Dear Sir or Madam,Thanks for your attention.-I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua现场写作 Dear Sir or Madam,Thanks for your attention.Im writing to complain about your product.L
27、ast month,I bought an IPAD made by your company,which brought me enjoyment for some time.But last week,something went wrong with the screen and I cant see anything on it.I have talked about it with the shop which sold me the IPAD,but they couldnt do anything about it.Having no choice,I have to turn
28、to you for help.I hope you can get me a new one or return my money to me.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua参考范文 该书信为投诉信，与所有书信一样，要开门见山写明来信目的，即投诉的具体内容，切忌转弯抹角，久久不入正题。写信时，要注意写信的对象，语言表达须得体，但在表述中可适当增加unluckily，unfortunately，to ones disappointment，worse still，to make matters worse等符合投诉信感
29、情色彩的词语，以加强证据，使表达更加丰富。同时，恰如其分运用适当连接词和过渡词润色文章，可使文章更加连贯。点评与解析 短语与句型 1.Im writing to complain about.2.,I bought sth.made by your.,which brought me enjoyment.3.But.,something went wrong with.4.I have talked about.with.,but they.5.Having no choice,I have to turn to.for.6.I hope that.假设你叫李华,最近在某国外购物网站购买了一双
30、鞋子，但出现了以下问题。请根据下表内容给网站写一封投诉信。内容要点：1.写信的目的；2.投诉内容：3.要求：重新邮寄或退款；4.询问：若寄回,谁承担寄费?申购情况实际情况颜色黑色白色号数98.5到货日期4月10日4月20日共同商榷 1.突破词语难点 正确理解翻译(1)在你的网站上:_(2)投诉:_(3)从购买:_(4)一双九码的鞋子:_(5)寄回:_(6)为付款:_a pair of size-nine shoessend/postbackpay for.on your websitecomplain about.purchase/buy sth.from.(7)退款/获得退款_(8)我订购的
31、是,但我收到的是 _ give sb.a refund/get ones refundWhat I ordered was.but I received.2.开门见山、写明目的。凡书信开头,一般可使用“Im writing to.”的句型开门见山点明写信目的。请根据中文完成句子。(1)I am writing to make a complaint about_.(我在你网站上购买的鞋子)the pair of shoes I bought on your website谋篇布局(2)I am writing to complain that_.(我在你网站上购买的鞋子有点问题)there i
32、s something wrong with the pair of shoes I bought on your website(3)I am writing to inform you that _.(我不满意在你网站上购买的鞋子)(4)I am writing to _(对表示失望)the shoes I bought from your website.show my disappointmentaboutsatisfied with the shoes bought on yourI am notwebsite3.确定文体 规范语言 这是一封投诉信，因此必须注意语言的规范性和得体性，
33、不能使用与朋友书信交流时的亲切语言，但也不能出现语气倔强等不礼貌用语。4.划分信息 统筹全文 根据内容要点，可将写作信息划分为：(1)写信目的;(2)申购情况;(3)实际情况;(4)要求;(5)询问。(见表格内容)(见内容要点最后两点)注意:写作前要把“要求和询问”的内容补充为完整句子,明确动作的主语,写作时才不会出错。(可在引入部分找到)Dear Sir，Im writing to complain about a pair of sneakers I recently purchased from your website.What I ordered was a pair of blac
34、k size-nine shoes but I received a pair of white,size-8.5 shoes instead.Worse still,there was a ten-day delay in delivering my shoes,which should have been received on April 10.For the above reasons,I demand either a new pair of black size-nine shoes be posted to me immediately or I be given a full
35、refund.Also,if I send back the wrong shoes,will your company pay for the postage?Thank you for your consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Hua One possible version(1)我写信是要投诉你们餐厅服务差。I am writing to complain about the poor service in your restaurant.(2)我写信是要投诉你们公司产品质量差,并要求你们尽快解决问题。I am writing to complain a
36、bout the poor quality of the products of your company and ask for solutions to the problem as soon as possible.5.连句成篇 能力提高 2.请根据括号给出的中文提示填空。Dear Sir/Madam，I have just returned from the English Summer Camp at your School of Language,and Im writing to express my unhappiness with your program.I took pa
37、rt in the program in order to improve my English but(1)_(使我失望的是),there were too many students in a class,in which case students were not able to practise a lot.to my disappointment Moreover,(2)_ _(课程内容简单,话题不够新颖)so that students interest in English could not be aroused.(3)_(更为糟糕的是),no lunch was provi
38、ded and therefore I had to go to the nearest restaurant,which was 30 minutes away.the course was simple andthe topics were not fresh enoughWorse stillIt was once said in your ad that(4)_(学生可以参加丰富的社会实践活动)but badminton was the only activity organized.You can imagine how upset I am to have wasted my ti
39、me and money and please(5)_ _(请在此处合理地提出你的赔偿要求),or I shall be forced to take the matter further.Yours，Li Huabe provided with many chances to enjoy socialstudents couldpracticemoney backgive half of myDear Sir,I am writing to complain about the two-day trip to Shenzhen organized by your travel agency.
40、It was promised in your advertisement that a professional tour guide from Shenzhen would lead30 tourists as a team,but actually,the tour guide even did not know the exact route and there were 40 people in our team.Besides,it was claimed thatwe would visit five famous attractions,while in fact we onl
41、y visited 3 places of interest.现场强化演练Worse still,we not only had to pay for our mealsexcept lunch,but also four people were arranged toshare a room in a poorly equipped hotel,which was totally different from your promise that two tourists would share a room in a four-star hotel and meals were free.P
42、lease give 50%of my money back,or I shall be forced to take the matter further.Thank you for your consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Ming本文作者旨在对比广告宣传和实际情况，在文中恰到好处地运用but,while,be different from等词语表达;另外,信息点较多,从句的巧妙使用也很关键,如It was claimed/promised that,your promise that等。共同分享How to write a letter of invit
43、ation or an applying letter1.be born on/in 出生于2.in my spare time 在我的空余时间3.be familiar with熟悉4.ability of communication 交际能力5.be informed/told of 获悉；听说6.an outgoing person一个性格外向的人相关短语7.teamwork spirit 团队精神8.deal with emergencies 处理突发事件municate with 与交流10.(have)a good command of精通,掌握11.fill in the for
44、m 填表12.have a basic understanding of对有个基本了解13.on the website 在网站上14.meet your ability requirements 符合你的要求15.be in good health 身体健康16.warm-hearted and patient 热心和耐心的17.be skilled/experienced at 熟练于18.have some related knowledge about 具有相关知识1.我愿意为贵公司工作。Im willing to work for your company.2.你可以告诉我我能否得到
45、这个工作吗？Would you please tell me whether I can get the job?3.申请者应该具备相关的工作经验。The applicants are supposed to have relevant experience.相关句式4.不要再犹豫了;机不可失,时不再来。Dont hesitate any more;its now or never.5.我写信来询问你的工作状况。I am writing to ask about your work.6.我期待不久收到你的来信。I look forward to hearing from you in the
46、near future.1.招聘广告属应用文,写作时往往使用被动语态和第三人称,使文章显得客观、公平。2.写应聘信时要注意写作语气,不能口气狂妄,但要有自信。3.无论招聘广告还是应聘信,都涉及对应聘者的要求,因此考生要多掌握表示技能技巧的短语和句子,写作时才能显示出语言的多样性,避免过分单调。技巧点拨 假如你是李华,你看到了“第28届世界大学生运动会”组委会招聘志愿者的广告,请根据下列内容用英语写一篇自荐信。内容要点1.你的基本情况和条件；2.询问的内容。Dear Sir，Im glad to see your advertisement.Many thanks,and Im expectin
47、g your early reply.Yours，Lu Hua典型例文(1)应聘 _(2)符合应聘的要求_(3)关于的笔试 _(4)体检 _1.短语翻译meet the requirements of applicationapply fora physical examinationa written exam on sth.相关词语(5)对感兴趣_(6)适合这份工作_(7)擅长于做某事_be good at/be skilled at/be capable of/have good performance inshow great interest in/be greatly intere
48、sted inbe fit for this job/be qualified for this job(8)团队精神 _(9)期待你的答复_(10)截止日期是 _the deadline is.teamwork spiritlook forward to your reply请用适当的高级表达或优美句型等将下列中文句子翻译成英文。(11)贵公司在6月30日的报纸上登载的招聘记者的广告引起了我极大的兴趣,我希望能到公司供职。(11)Your advertisement for a reporter on June 30th newspaper arouses my interest a gre
49、at deal and I hope to offer my service at you company.句型演练(12)你们在昨天的广州日报上登载的广告非常有吸引力。我认为自己非常适合做这份工作。(12)Your advertisement in yesterdays Guangzhou Daily is very attractive and I believe it is fit for me.(13)我能够在学习、兼职工作和课外活动之间合理安排繁忙的时间。(13)I can arrange time properly for my study,part-time jobs and e
50、xtracurricular activities.(14)在暑假期间,我曾到一家公司工作，获得了很多有关外贸的第一手资料,并且,学会了怎样与不同兴趣和不同背景的人进行沟通。During my summer job in a company,I gained a great deal of first-hand knowledge about foreign trade and learned how to communicate with people of different interests and backgrounds./During my summer,I worked in a
51、 company,where I gained a great deal of first-hand knowledge about foreign trade and learned how to communicate with people of different interests and backgrounds.(15)我的英语和法语的流利程度是一流的。(15)My fluency in English and French is first-rate./I can speak English and French fluently./Not only can I speak fl
52、uency English,but I can speak French fluently as well./I can do a perfect performance of English and French in expression.Dear Sir，Im glad to see your advertisement.Im willing to be a volunteer for the 28th Universiade to be held in London.I was born on March 28th,1993,and I am in good health.I thin
53、k I can meet your ability requirements because I am skillful at communicating with foreigners in English.Besides,I can drive and have some related knowledge about sports and computers.Would you please tell me whether there will be any training before the Universiade and how I will be informed of the
54、 result?Many thanks,and I am expecting your early reply.Yours,Li HuaOne possible versionRecently,a group of American middle students will pay a visit to our city and theyneed a student travelling guide.The applicants should be 15 to 18 years old,and over 1.60m tall for the female and over 1.75m tall
55、 for the male.We hope to find an outgoing applicant who is good at communicating with others and skillful in dealing with emergencies.再接再厉Whats more,the applicant should be familiar with our local history and geography and has a basic understanding of the American culture and it is a must to have a
56、good command of spoken English and a high level English listening ability.The payment is 200 yuan per day and if you are interested in it,please fill in a formon and upload a photo.要求类的表达：should be/hope to find/is a must 等的灵活使用，可避免句型单调。第三句We hope to findwho with emergencies的信息点，组合得很好。共同分享I read abou
57、t your advertisement for a summer part-time English teacher in the newspaper and I am quite interested in it.I am a Senior Three student with excellent academic results.My English pronunciation is clear and standard and I can speak aloud and write beautifully.Besides,I am kind,patient,outgoing and g
58、ood at communicating with others.More importantly,I have been a member of the Students Union and I am skilled in leading others,so I think I am qualifiedand I am looking forward to your reply.强化巩固用be skilled in/be qualified in 等表达“能胜任”，很出色。列举时除了Besides/Whats more等，还可用 More importantly/Last but not least 等。共同分享
