1、南京市29中、南菁中学等四校高三第一学期12月第二次阶段检测66. 假如你是李华，是某国际学校的学生会主席。你发现有些同学迫于同伴间的压力，在过生日时经常攀比谁买的生日礼物好。请你用英语写一封倡议信，发表在你校校园网上，呼吁同学们不要攀比。内容包括：1. 互相攀比的危害；2. 对生日礼物的建议；3. 向同学们发出倡议。注意：1. 词数80词左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear students,_The Students Union【答案】Dear students,There is a disturbing trend in our school that some stu
2、dents are forced to spend lots of money buying expensive birthday gifts for their friends. This results from peer pressure.It is really a waste of time and money to compare whose gift is the most fashionable or expensive. In fact, teenagers have many ideas about creative but inexpensive birthday gif
3、ts. For example, we can take a cycling trip, which will be for sure a good memory in our life.Therefore, boys and girls, please save your money and use it properly when you are deciding to buy an expensive gift.The Students Union【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生一封倡议信，发表在你校校园网上，呼吁同学们不要攀比。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据
4、提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 互相攀比的危害；2. 对生日礼物的建议；3. 向同学们发出倡议第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）disturbing; spend lots of money doing sth.; peer pressure; a waste of; fashionable; take a cycling trip; memory; save money; properly; decide to第三步：连词成句1. There is a disturbing trend in ou
5、r school that some students are forced to spend lots of money buying expensive birthday gifts for their friends. 2. This results from peer pressure.3. It is really a waste of time and money to compare whose gift is the most fashionable or expensive.4. In fact, teenagers have many ideas about creativ
6、e but inexpensive birthday gifts.5. For example, we can take a cycling trip, which will be for sure a good memory in our life.6. Therefore, boys and girls, please save your money and use it properly when you are deciding to buy an expensive gift.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）表因果关系：There
7、fore连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】高分句型1 For example, we can take a cycling trip, which will be for sure a good memory in our life. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)高分句型2 Therefore, boys and girls, please save your money and use it properly when you are deciding to buy an expensive gift. (运用了when引导时间状语
8、从句)浙江省湖州中学2021届第一学期高三年级高考仿真模拟测试66. 假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack下个月要来你校进行短期游学，他发邮件向你询问该如何准备。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：1表示欢迎;2就学习和生活等方面提出建议。注意：1词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】One possible version:Dear Jack,Id like to express my sincere welcome for your coming next month and my proposals are as follows:Its necessary that you
9、learn some basic Chinese for daily communication, which will help you avoid some unnecessary misunderstandings. Besides, to have a better knowledge of Chinese culture and custom, I strongly recommend you to live with a Chinese family. Moreover, People here are accustomed to using chopsticks, so it w
10、ill be helpful if you have some practice ahead of time. Hope youll have an unforgettable experience and best wishes.Yours faithfully,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Jack写一封邮件，告知他有关来学校的准备和建议。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量一般将来时。结构：总-分-总法要点：1表示欢迎；2就学习和生活等方面提出建议。第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）as follows；basic
11、Chinese；daily communication；have a better knowledge of；Chinese culture and custom；live with；recommend sb to do sth.；be accustomed to；ahead of time第三步：连词成句1. Id like to express my sincere welcome for your coming next month and my proposals are as follows:2. Its necessary that you learn some basic Chi
12、nese for daily communication, which will help you avoid some unnecessary misunderstandings.3. Besides, to have a better knowledge of Chinese culture and custom, I strongly recommend you to live with a Chinese family.4. Moreover, People here are accustomed to using chopsticks, so it will be helpful i
13、f you have some practice ahead of time.5.Hope youll have an unforgettable experience and best wishes.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表并列补充关系：and；Besides；Moreover2.表因果关系：so连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】高分句型1 Its necessary that you learn some basic Chinese for daily communicati
14、on, which will help you avoid some unnecessary misunderstandings.（使用了it作形式主语和由which引导的非限制性定语从句）高分句型2 Besides, to have a better knowledge of Chinese culture and custom, I strongly recommend you to live with a Chinese family.（使用了由动词不定式作目的状语）高分句型3 Moreover, People here are accustomed to using chopstick
15、s, so it will be helpful if you have some practice ahead of time.（使用了由so连接的状语从句）河北省实验中学2021届高三年级第一次月考46. 假定你是李华，下个月要参加某外国语大学入学英语面试，发邮件向你校外教Chris请教， 内容包括:1. 口语表达； 2.面试技巧； 3. 注意事项。注意:1. 词数80左右；开头已给出。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Chris,Im Li Hua, a student in your class._Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Chris,Im Li Hua,
16、a student in your class. Im writing to ask you for a favor as Ill attend an English interview by a foreign language university next month.My first concern is how to express myself fluently in English, as Im afraid of making mistakes whenever I speak. I also wonder if you can give me some tips on imp
17、ressing the interviewers. Besides, if there are any dos and donts in terms of dressing, manners and so on, please do let me know.Looking forward to your reply.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇应用文，向外教Chris请教一些英语面试的问题。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 口语表达；2.面试技巧；3. 注意
18、事项。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）attend; fluently; in terms of; reply第三步：连词成句1. Im writing to ask you for a favor as Ill attend an English interview by a foreign language university next month.2. My first concern is how to express myself fluently in English, as Im afraid of making mistakes whenever I speak.3. Besid
19、es, if there are any dos and donts in terms of dressing, manners and so on, please do let me know.4. Looking forward to your reply.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly, And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreov
20、er, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+ clause(从句), In spite of+ n/doing4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Im
21、writing to ask you for a favor as Ill attend an English interview by a foreign language university next month.这句话用到了as引导的原因状语从句。此外I also wonder if you can give me some tips on impressing the interviewers.这句话则使用if引导的宾语从句。此外文章还使用了一些高级表达，如attend; fluently; in terms of; reply等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能
22、力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。淮海中学2021届高三年级阶段性测试46. 假定你是学生会主席李华，你校将举行“用英语讲中国故事”比赛，请你给留学生Mike写一封电子邮件邀请他参加，内容包括：1.比赛的时间和地点；2.比赛的意义；3.报名方式。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Mike,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mike,Our school is going to hold a contest in the hall to tell Chinese stor
23、ies in English, starting at 9am next Friday, which Id like to invite you to participate in.As you know, we organize such activities every year, for they can boost our spoken English. Considering you are always a big fan of Chinese culture, I think you must be crazy about joining us,by which you can
24、have a better understanding of Chinese stories. If you are available, please register at the student council office before next Wednesday.Im eagerly awaiting your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是学生会主席李华，你校将举行“用英语讲中国故事”比赛，请你给留学生Mike写一封电子邮件邀请他参加，内容包括：1.比赛的时间和地点；2.比赛的意义；3.报名方式。第2
25、步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：start at(开始)；participate in (参加)；invite sb. to do sth.(邀请某人做某事)；organize (组织)；boost (促进)；a big fan of (热衷于)；be crazy about (着迷于)；have a better understanding of(有一个更深入的了解)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范
26、文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Considering you are always a big fan of Chinese culture, I think you must be crazy about joining us, by which you can have a better understanding of Chinese stories.运用非限制性定语从句；If you are available, please register at the student council office before next Wedn
27、esday.运用条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。珠海市2020-2021学年度第一学期高三摸底测试52. 你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以我最喜爱的一本书为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1.该书简介；2.喜爱的原因。注意：1.词数100左右；2.短文题目已为你写好。My Favourite Book_【答案】My Favourite BookOf all the books I have read, I love A Dream of the Red Mansions most.It is my f
28、avorite not because it was written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist in Qing Dynasty. Rather, I deeply value the book and have read it over 10 times, firstly, for the moving love story between Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu. Besides, if given enough patience and devotion, the novel will also reveal the rise
29、 and decline of a famous royal family to its readers. What I also enjoy about the book is its language and writing style of Cao Xueqin, which had a profound effect on the writers of his times and later generations.All in all, A Dream of the Red Mansions has won my heart and I am convinced that it de
30、serves yours too.【解析】【分析】这篇书面表达是一篇提纲类作文写作。你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以我最喜爱的一本书为题，写一篇短文参赛。【详解】你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以我最喜爱的一本书为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1.该书简介；2.喜爱的原因。通过审题，可知应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布
31、局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。What I also enjoy about the book is its language and writing style of Cao Xueqin, which had a profound effect on the writers of his times and later generations.主语从句和定语从句的运用；All in all, A Dream of the Red Mansions has won my heart and I am convinced that it des
32、erves yours too.宾语从句的运用。浙江省杭州市杭州二中2021届第一学期高三年级第一次月考46. 假设你是学校英语角负责人李华。在新学期第一次英话角聚会上，你将向新生宣传英语角。请根据以下内容写一篇发言稿：1. 介绍英语角的基本情况;2. 参加英语角的好处；3. 呼吁同学们积极参加英语角。注意：1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】 Hi, everyone. Welcome to our English Corner. This corner was set up two years ago. We gather here every Friday e
33、vening. Many English lovers and some foreigners have joined.English Corner is very popular. It is a good way to learn English because we can practice English in it. In class we can only learn the grammar and some language points but at English Corner we have to speak out. In addition, we can make ma
34、ny good friends and have a good time here. There are a lot of students communicating with each other.If you want to improve your English and make your life more colorful, join us!【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，在新学期第一次英话角聚会上向新生宣传英语角。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。结构：三段式：第一段介绍英语角的基本情况；第二段介绍
35、参加英语角的好处；第三段呼吁同学们积极参加英语角。要求：1. 介绍英语角的基本情况2. 介绍参加英语角好处3. 呼吁同学们积极参加英语角第二步:列提纲 （重点单词及词组）set up (创建); gather (聚集); popular (受欢迎的); a good way to do sth. (做某事的好方法); speak out (大胆说出); have a good time (玩的开心); communicate with sb. (与某人交流); improve (改进，改善)第三步：连词成句1. This corner was set up two years ago. 2.
36、We gather here every Friday evening.3. It is a good way to learn English because we can practice English in it.4. We can make many good friends and have a good time here.5. There are a lot of students communicating with each other.6. If you want to improve your English and make your life more colorf
37、ul, join us!根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1. 表文章结构顺序：first of all; to begin with; firstly/first; secondly/second ; and then; finally; in the end; at last2. 表并列补充关系：Whats more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition(本篇文章使用过); additionally; not only but also; as well as; bothand3. 表转
38、折对比关系：but; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand, on the other hand; some, while others4. 表因果关系：because; because of; for; so; since; thus; therefore; as a result; why 5. 表总结：in short; in a word; in conclusion; in summary; all in all; generally speaking连句成文，注意使用恰当的
39、连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改根据写作内容需要，加入高级句式，如名词性从句，定语从句，状语从句等。It is a good way to learn English. 本句用来介绍英语角的一个好处。可以使用原因状语从句，进一步介绍为什么会有这样的好处。润色修改为：It is a good way to learn English because we can practice English in it.【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中合理使用了复合句，如：It is a good way to learn English because we can practice English in it. 这句话为because引导的原因状语从句；其次，使用了一些固定短语，如：set up; a good way to do sth.; communicate with sb.等，使语言更加丰富；同时使用了一些高级词汇，如gather; popular; improve等，让语言更加地道。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
