1、第三部分 高考题型突破题型七概要写作Writing 12021福建福州一中质检阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。You might think that whether you choose a blue shirt or a yellow one for work or college makes no difference to your day and the people around you. However, an increasing number of experts argue that the colors we choose affect our moo
2、ds, our career prospects (前景) and even our health.The power of color has been used for centuries and we should make the most of it in our lives. Color affects us to a greater degree than most of us realize. It is used increasingly by psychologists and therapists for influencing moods and states of m
3、ind, and for various types of treatments when we are ill.Companies use color to great effect to encourage us to buy their products. For example, purple is seen to represent creativity and mixes well with red, to show that a company has ideas and the power to make them happen. Orange and blue are als
4、o recommended colors for companies to use, because orange is the color of communication and blue suggests safety and security. So this could be a particularly good combination. Companies have found certain colors speak to specific age groups. They often use red to attract younger people to their pro
5、ducts, for example, as it is vibrant and more youthful than colors like gold and navy, which older customers seem to prefer.Wearing different colors can affect how you feel and how others react to you, so it is important to consider this when you decide what to wear in the morning. If you want peopl
6、e to take you seriously, then wearing navy-blue or black is good. Blue would also be helpful for an interview or oral examination because it relaxes you and makes you feel calm. Red gets you noticed by everyone and makes you, the wearer, feel energetic, but be careful, as it can raise your pulse rat
7、e and not everyone wants this effect.So think carefully before you leave the house. The colors you choose are a wonderful tool. Are you making the right impression on yourself and on others?_Writing 22021浙江宁波中学测试阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。The Theobroma cacao tree provides us with one of the worlds mo
8、st delicious foods chocolate! Theobroma is a Greek word meaning food. The tree originally comes from the Amazon region of South America. Hand-sized pods that grow on the tree contain cacao seeds often called cocoa beans. These seeds,or beans,are used to make chocolate.The earliest use and consumptio
9、n of cacao beans dates back to around 1000 B.C. Later, the Mayan and Aztec civilizations consumed cacao as a drink. They often flavored it with ingredients such as chili peppers, and other spices.It is believed that drinking cups of chocolate was important in Mayan rituals such as wedding ceremonies
10、. Consuming cacao was also believed to have positive effects on health. In Peru, eating or drinking a mixture of chocolate and chilies was said to be good for the stomach. The Aztecs thought it could even cure sickness!Christopher Columbus, along with Spanish explorers, made his fourth voyage across
11、 the Atlantic in the early 1500s, and arrived on the coast of Honduras. It was at this time that he first discovered the value of cocoa beans,which were used as currency in many parts of Central America.In the sixteenth century, chocolate was taken back to Spain by Hernando Cortez, another explorer.
12、 The Spanish people added ingredients such as sugar and vanilla to make it sweet. It later spread to France in the seventeenth century. The popularity of chocolate continued to spread further across Europe and the Americas. The only Asian country to adopt it at that time, though, was the Philippines
13、, which the Spanish invaded in the sixteenth century.As chocolate became more popular, the demand for people to work on the cacao plantations increased. Slaves were brought to the Americas from Africa to farm the cacao. Eventually, the cacao tree was taken to Africa and cultivation began there. Toda
14、y, the African plantations provide almost seventy percent of the worlds cacao, compared with one and a half percent from Mexico._Writing 3生活感悟阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇 60词左右的内容概要。These days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rush. It appears that people have got used to being in a hurry. Howeve
15、r, its better for people to take their time and live their lives at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done.The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrong in a rush. When people do their jobs or take action in a hurry, they cant make a soun
16、d decision and probably regret it later. As the saying goes, Haste makes waste. We should think carefully before making a decision and do our work less quickly. We should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly.Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better. For example, taking
17、 a train to some place certainly will take more time than taking a plane. However, taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new friends. Besides, it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way. On the contrary, being in a hurry will make us lose chanc
18、es of enjoying our life.Finally, a slower life pace provides better health condition for us. As is known to all, taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stress. People think if they are not in a hurry, they will become a loser and that annoys them. But being in a hurry can hurt peop
19、le both physically and mentally. According to some studies, people who have a slower pace suffer fewer diseases, tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense, even if the former finish work more slowly than the latter.In short, working quickly will bring about more material
20、 benefits to make our society more advanced. Yet, much stress cant bring enjoyment, friends and health, which are much more important than money and other material advantages. Therefore, take your time and live your life at a slower pace._Writing 4人工智能阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Artificial intelligenc
21、e (AI) teachers can provide customized teaching for students to meet their unique requirements through analyzing data and deep learning. In the future, they may replace human teachers for basic teaching tasks. Since some students may find it hard to follow teachers in class, AI can meet their indivi
22、dual needs, give them confidence and put new power into traditional teaching patterns. An education system providing customized teaching centered on students represents the future trend of AI education.Chinas AI education has developed rapidly in recent years with the rise of several thousand releva
23、nt companies. Currently, AI teachers are able to help students learn pronunciation, analyze their condition, guide them to learn independently, and even grade writing assignments. Some foreign AI education systems have been introduced into several domestic schools and have worked well on trial.Howev
24、er, the promotion of AI education is still facing several difficulties in practice such as low technological levels, the inadequacy of data and lack of funds. AI education still depends largely on human teachers work. Most importantly, it conflicts with current educational patterns because the cours
25、es developed by foreign countries are not suitable for Chinese exam-oriented education. Teachers may also find it hard to change their original roles in classrooms since easing control on classes may make them seem irresponsible. These problems need to be handled before the mass promotion of AI educ
26、ation.With AI teachers, the original teacher-centered classes will be transformed into student-centered ones where teachers only organize the class and provide guidance. Since teachers are supposed to not only equip students with knowledge but also shape their values and help them develop creative a
27、bilities, AI teachers will not replace human teachers but only pose higher requirements of teaching. A combination of AI teachers and human ones can create the best future for AI education._ Writing 1健康阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。As humans, were all completely different. So there isnt a one-size-fits-
28、all answer to being your healthiest self. Instead, you have to have the ability to work out whats the greatest on your body. And that is at all times going to depend upon things that have an effect on you personally, together with the lifestyle that you choose. What plays the most important role is
29、what you daily eat. Natural trans fats(反式脂肪)are present in small quantities in milk products and meats, and consuming fat-free or low-fat milk products and meats will cut back the quantities of pure trans fats taken in from these foods. Because quantities of natural trans fats in milk products and m
30、eats are really small and these foods can be essential sources of vitamins, these foods do not need to be removed from the food plan.Another method that you could help your body is to be a bit more lively. We all know that exercise is good for us. However, its simple to underestimate(低估) its good. F
31、or example, we can often see that many people quit exercising halfway because they simply cant tolerate the difficulty that exercise brings them. Actually, it is easy to have the intention to take up exercise but it is very challenging to carry it on until you can see the positive effect that exerci
32、se brings you. How healthy you are is indicated by the level of a substance in your blood referred to as homocysteine(高半胱氨酸). Keeping your homocysteine level low, indicating that youll be able to rapidly adapt and respond to lifes stresses, is the third secret of 100 percent health. A low homocystei
33、ne level means a smaller risk of heart attacks, mental illness and many other health issues. To balance your blood sugar, eat fewer fast-releasing meals (sweets, cakes and biscuits) and more slow-releasing foods (fruit and vegetables, wholegrain foods). Additionally, you must eat slowly rather than
34、just swallow._Writing 2科技阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Scientists have already shown that genetic engineering can rapidly spread a self-destructive genetic modification(基因改造)through a species. Researchers have been ready to test it in mosquitoes. If proved successful, the new technology might cause mosq
35、uitoes as a species to die out. A question is raised: Do humans have the right to use gene extinction(灭绝) against other species?With mosquitoes, there may seem to be enough reasons for some to say yes. According to data from the World Health Organization, mosquitoes cause the death of at least 725,0
36、00 persons annually by spreading deadly diseases such as malaria, dengue fever, yellow fever and type-B encephalitis. So many argue that we have the right to pay mosquitoes back and defend ourselves.However, a basic rule of evolution is that every existing creature has reason to exist, and is part o
37、f the Earths ecosystem as a whole. Ending one species might lead to chain reactions beyond the expectations of everyone. If mosquitoes die out under the genetic attack of humankind, it is possible that certain frogs, spiders, as well as birds might die out, too, because they hunt mosquitoes for food
38、. Then species that feed on these might die out and so on up the food chain. Even with the best intentions, gene drives could potentially change the food chain and wipe out beneficial creatures alongside the pests being targeted when released into the environment. Besides, if people decide they have
39、 the right to end mosquitoes, they might choose to end other species they consider harmful. Who gets to decide which species is the next to go extinct?While voting against the proposal to temporarily ban the release of genetically-driven creatures, the United Nations Conference on Bio-Diversity did
40、require the researchers of genetically-driven mosquitoes to evaluate the possible effects of their research to avoid unnecessary harm. Gene drives are being announced as a quick fix, but we can never be too cautious about interfering(干涉)with nature._Writing 3环保阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。In the deepes
41、t dive in a manned submersible(潜艇), US explorer Victor Vescovo spotted and video-recorded a plastic bag and a pile of candy wrappers on the seabed. His discovery of plastic waste 11.2 kilometers below sea level in the Challenger Deep in the Pacific Ocean, the deepest known point in the Earths oceans
42、, means there is nowhere on this planet plastic waste cannot reach, as it has been found on Mount Qomolangma and in both Arctic and Antarctic waters.Since the patent(专利)for plastics was registered in 1907, 8.3 billion tons of plastic products have already been produced, of which 6.3 billion have bee
43、n gotten rid of without being processed. Most of the abandoned plastic products end up in the ocean. In the Pacific Ocean, plastic garbage and other waste have already formed an island, which is 1.6 million square kilometers in size. It is estimated that the total weight of plastic waste will reach
44、12 billion tons by 2050, more than the total weight of oceanic fish.Plastic waste kills life in the oceans and on the land alike by filling in their stomachs so they cannot eat, or winding itself around their bodies so they cannot breathe. It pollutes the Earth and prevents plants roots from digging
45、 deep into the ground. Plastic micro-particles(微颗粒)also join the water cycle and enter the bodies of animals and even humans. As humans are at the top of the food chain, plastic micro-particles build up inside our bodies.Want to do something to change the situation? Dont get plastic bags at the supe
46、rmarket but take your own reusable one instead. Give up fast delivery lunches and cook or go to the restaurant instead. Get into the habit of sorting your garbage. But its easier said than done. Environmentalists have been calling for behavioral changes for at least three decades, yet we continue to
47、 use a growing amount of plastic products. Maybe we can hope a new environmentally friendly material is used in the future, but for now at least, unless we control its use, plastic is going to continue to get everywhere._Writing 4阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Perhaps youve heard the old saying curiosity
48、 killed the cat. Its a phrase thats often used to warn people especially children not to ask too many questions. Yet its widely agreed that curiosity actually makes learning more effective. In fact, research has shown that curiosity is just as important as intelligence in determining how well studen
49、ts do in school.Curiosity can also lead us to make unexpected discoveries, bring excitement into our lives, and open up new possibilities. In science, curiosity-driven research can have unexpected important benefits. For example,one day in 1831, Michael Faraday was playing around with a coil and a m
50、agnet when he suddenly saw how he could produce an electrical current. At first, it wasnt clear what this could be used for, but it actually made electricity available for use in technology, and so changed the world.However, curiosity is currently under the biggest threat coming from technology. On
51、one level, this is because technology has become so advanced that many of us are unable to think too deeply about how exactly things work any more. While it may be possible for a curious teenager to take a toaster apart and make sense of how it works, how much do you understand about what happens wh
52、en you type a website address into a browser?In addition to this, theres the fact that we all now connect so deeply with technology, particularly with our phones. The more we stare at our screens, the less we talk to other people directly. All too often we accept the images of people that social med
53、ia provides us with. Then we feel we know enough about a person not to need to engage further with him.That means we end up inside our own little bubbles, no longer coming across new ideas. Perhaps the real key to developing curiosity in the 21st century, then, is to rely less on the tech tools of o
54、ur age._ 答 案题型七概要写作Writing 1【写作指导】本文属于说明文,文章主要说明了颜色对我们生活多方面的影响。第一段的主要点是an increasing number of experts argue that the colors we choose affect our moods, our career prospects(前景) and even our health,由此可知,专家们认为我们选择的颜色会影响我们的心情、职业前景甚至健康。可以概括为Some experts claim that the colors chosen by us affect our moo
55、ds, careers and health.。第二段的主要点是Color affects us to a greater degree than most of us realize,由此可知,颜色对我们的影响比我们大多数人意识到的要大得多;次要点是It is used increasingly by psychologists and therapists.when we are ill,由此可知,色彩也被用于医疗。综合主、次要点信息可知,色彩对我们的影响比我们大多数人意识到的要大,并且它现在还用于医疗。可以概括为The effect of color is greater than ex
56、pected and it is now used for medical care.。 第三段的主要点是Companies use color to great effect to encourage us to buy their products,次要点是Companies have found certain colors speak to specific age groups,由此可知,本段讲述的是公司将颜色应用于促销,以吸引不同年龄段的人。可以概括为Companies apply color to sales promotion to appeal to different ag
57、e groups.。第四段的主要点是Wearing different colors can affect how you feel and how others react to you,第五段的主要点是think carefully before you leave the house,次要点是 making the right impression。这两段都是讲衣服颜色的重要性,可以合并为一个要点:因为衣服的颜色会影响我们的感受和别人对我们的反应,所以我们穿什么很重要。可以概括为As the color of our clothes can affect our feelings and
58、 others reactions to us, what we wear matters.。第二段讲述色彩可用于医疗,第三段讲述色彩还可以用于商品促销,所以可用also, moreover, whats more或in addition等衔接第二句与第三句。【参考范文】Some experts claim that the colors chosen by us affect our moods, careers and health. (要点1)The effect of color is greater than expected and it is now used for medic
59、al care. (要点2)Also, companies apply color to sales promotion to appeal to different age groups. (要点3)As the color of our clothes can affect our feelings and others reactions to us, what we wear matters.(要点4)Writing 2【写作指导】本文属于说明文,主要讲巧克力的来源、巧克力的使用及食用历史、巧克力的价值和它的流行。第一段的主要点是The Theobroma cacao tree pro
60、vides us with.chocolate!,次要点1是The tree originally comes from the Amazon region of South America,次要点2是These seeds,or beans,are used to make chocolate,由此可知,本段讲述的是巧克力是由来源于南美洲亚马孙地区一种可可树的种子制成的,可以用Chocolate is made from the seeds of the cacao tree, a native plant of the Amazon region of South America.概括。第
61、二段的主要点是The earliest use and consumption of cacao beans dates back to around 1000 B.C.,次要点1是consumed cacao as a drink,次要点2是have positive effects on health。合并要点信息可知,本段讲述喝巧克力饮料的悠久历史及其对身体的有益影响,可以用Drinking chocolate has a long history and is good for health.概括。第三段的主要点是 first discovered the value of cocoa
62、 beans。第四段的主要点1是In the sixteenth century, chocolate was taken back to Spain,主要点2是It later spread to France,主要点3是continued to spread further across Europe and the Americas,主要点4是The only Asian country to adopt it。结合第三、四段的要点可知,这两段主要讲述的是哥伦布首先发现了可可豆的价值及巧克力在欧洲和世界其他地方的传播,可以概括为Columbus discovered the value
63、of cocoa beans, and then chocolate began to spread across Europe and the rest of the world.。第五段的主要点1是As chocolate became more popular.increased,主要点2是the African plantations provide almost seventy percent of the worlds cacao,次要点是the cacao tree was taken to Africa and cultivation began there。由此可知,由于巧克
64、力需求增长,种植可可树在非洲流行起来,目前非洲的种植园已成为全球最大的可可生产地,即With the demand for chocolate growing fast, cultivation started in Africa, which has now become the largest cacao producer worldwide.。【参考范文】Chocolate is made from the seeds of the cacao tree, a native plant of the Amazon region of South America.(要点1) Drinkin
65、g chocolate has a long history and is good for health.(要点2)Columbus discovered the value of cocoa beans, and then chocolate began to spread across Europe and the rest of the world.(要点3)With the demand for chocolate growing fast, cultivation started in Africa, which has now become the largest cacao p
66、roducer worldwide.(要点4)Writing 3【写作指导】(1)抓住主要论点,理清论证关系。材料为议论文,第一段就提出了文章的论点,即人们要放慢生活节奏;第二、三、四段分析了要放慢节奏的原因;第五段总结全文,再次强调论点。(2)研读核心信息,合理处理论据。论据是让论点更易被人接受的支持性事实材料。所给材料中的第二、三、四段举了一些例子,分析了放慢节奏的好处。因而,在进行概要写作的时候,我们需要对论据进行适当的安排与处理。(3)确立语篇主题,合理重组结构。材料第一段首先表明了文章的中心论点,即Despite being accustomed to the fast pace i
67、n modern society, people are recommended to lead a slower life(要点1);第二段论述了要放慢节奏的原因之一,即Slowing down lowers the possibility of committing errors by comprehensive thinking (要点2);第三段论述了要放慢节奏的原因之二,即More opportunities to enjoy life are allowed by a slower pace (要点3);第四段论述了要放慢节奏的原因之三,即Better health conditi
68、on is also what a slower life brings (要点4);第五段总结全篇,即Live a slower life from now on(要点5)。通过以上分析,我们可以发现材料的论述结构:提出论点(要点1)论据论证(要点24)总结全篇(要点5)。在概要写作的时候,我们必须首先确定采取何种表达顺序来完成对材料中心的表述。【参考范文】Despite being accustomed to the fast pace in modern society, people are recommended to lead a slower life.(要点1) Firstly
69、, slowing down lowers the possibility of committing errors by comprehensive thinking.(要点2)Secondly, more opportunities to enjoy life are allowed by a slower pace.(要点3) Lastly, better health condition is also what a slower life brings.(要点4) Therefore, lets live a slower life from now on.(要点5)Writing
70、4【文章大意】Paragraph 1:人工智能教师可以通过分析数据和深度学习为学生提供个性化教学以满足他们的独特需求。未来它们可能会取代人类教师来完成基本的教学任务。Paragraph 2:近几年,中国的人工智能教育发展得很快,现在人工智能教师已经能够帮助学生学习发音、分析学生的(学习)状态、引导学生自主学习,甚至能够给学生批改作业。有些国外的人工智能教育体制已经被引进国内的一些学校,并在试用中表现出色。Paragraph 3:然而,人工智能教学的推广仍面临着许多困难,如技术水平低、数据不足、资金匮乏等。此外,人工智能教学很大程度上依然依靠人类教师。最重要的是,人工智能教学与我国现行教育模式有
71、所冲突。在普及人工智能教学之前,这些问题亟待解决。Paragraph 4:随着人工智能教师的出现,之前的以教师为主导的课堂将转变为以学生为主导的课堂,教师只起组织和指导的作用。人工智能教师不会取代人类教师,反而对人类教学提出了更高的要求。人类教师和人工智能教师的结合将会为人工智能教育创造一个最好的未来。【参考范文】AI teachers catering for students personalities can provide students with personalized teaching to meet their needs and may serve as an approp
72、riate alternative to implement basic teaching tasks.(要点1) China has seen rapid development in AI education in the past years.(要点2) But many problems like poor technology, inadequate data and a shortage of funds should be solved before the wide application of AI education.(要点3) Despite the advantages
73、 of AI teachers, human ones will never be replaced; instead, both will play their joint roles in the future teaching.(要点4)Writing 1【文章大意】Paragraph 1:作为人类,我们完全不同。因此,就如何成为最健康的人,没有一个万能的答案。这取决于对你个人有影响的事物以及你选择的生活方式。Paragraph 2:影响健康最重要的因素是你的日常饮食。奶制品和肉类中存在少量的天然的反式脂肪,而这些食物是维生素的重要来源,因此无须把它们排除在你的饮食计划之外。Paragr
74、aph 3:保持健康的另一种方式是让你的身体更加活跃一些。锻炼对我们有好处,但其好处很容易被低估。许多人会因不能忍受锻炼的困难而半途而废。事实上,有意进行锻炼很容易,但要坚持锻炼直到看到锻炼带来的积极影响很困难。Paragraph 4:血液中高半胱氨酸的水平表明了你的健康程度。保持低水平的高半胱氨酸意味着你可以快速适应生活压力并作出反应,并且可以降低一些疾病发生的风险。【参考范文】Theres no fixed answer to being the healthiest things affecting you personally and your life choices both ma
75、tter. (要点1) Therefore, to stay healthy, you must pay attention to your daily diet but neednt exclude foods containing natural trans fats.(要点2) Additionally, taking exercise isnecessary but you must stick to it to enjoy the benefits.(要点3) Moreover, keeping a low homocysteine level is also a good way,
76、 which can help you deal with stresses and reduce the risk of health problems.(要点4)Writing 2【文章大意】Paragraph 1:科学家已经表明,基因工程可以在一个物种中迅速传播自我毁灭性的基因改造。研究人员已经准备在蚊子中测试这一点。如果被证明是成功的,这项新技术可能会导致蚊子这一物种灭绝。一个问题被提出来:人类有权对其他物种进行基因灭绝吗?Paragraph 2:对于蚊子,似乎有足够的理由让一些人说是。根据世界卫生组织的数据,蚊子每年通过传播致命疾病导致至少72.5万人死亡。因此很多人认为,我们有权报
77、复蚊子,保护自己。Paragraph 3:然而,进化的一个基本规则是每一个现存的生物都有存在的理由,并且是地球生态系统的一部分。终结一个物种可能会导致超出每个人预期的连锁反应。如果蚊子在人类的基因攻击下灭绝,某些青蛙、蜘蛛以及鸟类也有可能灭绝,因为它们捕食蚊子。然后,以这些动物为食的物种也可能灭绝,按食物链以此往上类推。即使是出于最大的善意,基因攻击也可能改变食物链,在被用到生态环境中时,不仅消灭目标害虫,而且有可能消灭有益生物。此外,如果人们决定他们有权终结蚊子,他们可能会选择终结他们认为有害的其他物种。谁来决定下一个灭绝的物种?Paragraph 4:联合国生物多样性会议在否决暂时禁止释放
78、基因驱动生物的提案的同时,确实要求基因驱动蚊子的研究人员评估其研究的可能影响,避免不必要的伤害。虽然基因攻击被认为是一种快速的解决方法,但在干涉自然这件事上我们越谨慎越好。【参考范文】Scientists have been ready to test a self-destructive genetic modification in mosquitoes, which may end the species, but it arouses doubts.(要点1)Some believe we should do so, because mosquitoes spread deadly d
79、iseases yearly.(要点2)But others think it will damage the ecosystem and related species might become extinct.(要点3)In a word, we should be careful about gene drives, considering their likely effects.(要点4)Writing 3【文章大意】Paragraph 1:塑料垃圾已经到达地球的每一个角落,包括海洋的最深处、珠穆朗玛峰及南北极海域。Paragraph 2:自1907年塑料专利注册以来,大量塑料制品被
80、生产出来,且大多数的塑料垃圾最终都流入了海洋。据估计,到2050年塑料垃圾的总重量将达到120亿吨,超过了海洋鱼类的总重量。Paragraph 3:塑料垃圾杀死了海洋和陆地生物,污染了地球,而且塑料微颗粒在动物甚至人类体内积聚。Paragraph 4:要改变这种现状,我们应该使用可重复使用的袋子,不点外卖而是自己做饭或外出就餐,并养成垃圾分类的习惯。尽管这说起来容易做起来难,但是我们必须改变我们的行为来减少塑料的使用。【参考范文】Plastic waste has reached every corner of the Earth, including the deepest point in
81、 the ocean, the highest mountain and polar regions.(要点1)And it will continue to grow rapidly, most of which eventually flows into the oceans.(要点2)Plastic waste kills sea life and land life. It poisons the ground, and its micro-particles accumulate in the bodies of animals, even humans.(要点3)In spite
82、of difficulty, changes in action must be made to cut down plastic use.(要点4)Writing 4【写作指导】本文是议论文。文章提出好奇心和智力同样重要,它影响学生的成绩而且还可以使我们有一些意想不到的发现,然而,科技对好奇心有很多的负面影响,因此作者提出要减少对科技工具的依赖来培养好奇心。第一段的主要点是research has shown that curiosity is just as important as intelligence in determining how well students do in s
83、chool,表达的意思是研究表明好奇心与智力同样重要,决定着学生在学校的表现,可以概括为:研究表明,好奇心对学生的成绩至关重要,即Curiosity, as is revealed in research, is vital to students academic performance.。第二段的主要点是Curiosity can also lead us to make unexpected discoveries,表达的意思是好奇心也带来许多意想不到的发现,可以概括为It also brings many unexpected discoveries.。第三段的主要点是curiosit
84、y is currently under the biggest threat coming from technology,次要点是technology has become so advanced that many of us are unable to think too deeply about how exactly things work any more。综合主、次要点可知,最新的技术正在扼杀好奇心,阻碍了我们进一步探索事物发展的能力,即Up-to-date technology is now killing curiosity, hindering our capabilit
85、y to further explore how things go on. 。第四段的主要点是All too often we accept the images.to engage further with him,即我们常常接受社交媒体提供给我们的人们的形象,然后我们就会觉得我们对一个人有了足够的了解,不需要和他进一步接触。再结合次要点connect so deeply with technology可知:我们接触技术过深,特别是手机,将误导我们接受人们在社交媒体上的形象,而不是深刻地理解他们。本句可以概括为Close exposure to technology, phones in
86、particular, will mislead us into accepting peoples virtual images online rather than have a deep insight into them.。第五段的主要点是developing curiosity in the 21st century, then, is to rely less on the tech tools of our age,即为了培养好奇心,应该少依赖科技工具。换句话说,为了培养好奇心,不要过分依赖科技。本句可以概括为To develop curiosity, we shouldnt d
87、epend on technology excessively。本文前两段讲好奇心的重要性,第三、四段讲技术对好奇心的不利影响,故第二、三句之间可加表转折的词but/however/nevertheless等;第三、四句之间是递进关系,故可加表示递进关系的词语in addition/besides/whats more/additionally等;最后一句是总结句,前面可加so/therefore等连接词。【参考范文】 Curiosity, as is revealed in research, is vital to students academic performance. It als
88、o brings many unexpected discoveries.(要点1)However, up-to-date technology is now killing curiosity, hindering our capability to further explore how things go on.(要点2)Additionally, close exposure to technology, phones in particular, will mislead us into accepting peoples virtual images online rather than have a deep insight into them.(要点3)Therefore, to develop curiosity, we shouldnt depend on technology excessively.(要点4)
