1、 高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家2020届高中英语二轮复习 短文改错（2）1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 The time we have is usual limited. However, even an hour is of muc
2、h valuable. We should make full use of your time to do useful things. As students, we mustnt study hard so as to serve for our society and our nation in the future. But it is pity that there are a lot of people who didnt know the importance of time. They spend their valuable time smoke and drinking.
3、 They dont realize that wasting time is the same as wasting a part of their life. Remember, dont put off which you can do today until tomorrow.2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处 语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.
4、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Travelling abroad, you should follow the customs of the country you were visiting. When you are invited, that is good manners to refuse or accept the invitation either by writing and by telephoning. If you go to a party, it is polite to arrive on the time. It
5、is good manners to shake hands with our host. You can take a present if you like, possible a bottle of wine, a box of chocolates or any flowers. However, it is not bad manners to take nothing. It is not polite stay too late after the other guests have gone. Also, it has suggested to write or telepho
6、ne a day or two late to thank your host.3、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Our school sports meeting finally came to end last Friday. Tiri
7、ng but cheerful, we made it a success. I can say its the best one I have ever been taken part in. The opening ceremony was a feast for the eyes. To begin with, the headmaster makes a speech. Then came various performance, including singing, dancing and kung fu. Besides, some students dressed up as d
8、olls, and that they wanted to show was confident and talent. When the teachers shows began, the audience went crazily. As a class photographer, I took pictures of such many brilliant moments, which, with doubt, meant a lot to all of us.4、假定英语课上老师要求同桌修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单
9、词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1. 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。3. In my childhood, my parent sent me to learn Chinese calligraphy, believed that it could benefit me a lot. Therefore, things were quite contrary to their expectation
10、s. Not only do I get bored with hours of practice but also I doubted the value of it. Nevertheless, when I entered into high school, it became a fantasy way for me to relax.4. Judging from my own experience, I want to say a little words to those who have the same trouble like I did. Do not refuse le
11、arn a skill when they are young, as in the long run you will find it helpful.5、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear Laura,Thanks for lettin
12、g us to stay at your seaside house. Now, you might have heard from your neighbors about which happened on Saturday evening. When I was out a walk, my younger son, Tom, played football before your house. He made so many noise that the neighbors got quite angrily. Even worse, Tom broke one of the wind
13、ow of Mr. Wilsons house. Tom and I apologized to all the neighbors for the unhappy happenings, but promised to have the broken window repair soon. Tom said that we would not do such silly things any more. I am glad that your neighbors had forgiven us. They are really nice people.Yours,Betty6、假定英语课上老
14、师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分 It was a still and quiet morning on the lake. There was no human voices or cars to break the silent. It was a perf
15、ect day for fishing.We sat at there, afraid to talk, thinking fish would hear us and flee. My father, hold our lunch begin one hand, passed me a sandwich. It was terrible hot and clouds of mosquito were feasting on my blood. With my legs covering with bite marks, I complained,“When will the fish com
16、e?Suddenly I felt a fish bite. My father became so excited as I was, and together we pulled in the fish that would be part of us dinner that night.7、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜钱()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意
17、:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。One day last year when I was busy prepare for an important exam, I got a phone call from my aunt. I used to quite nervous when I talked with her, because of her dialect spoken in her loud voice somehow aroused my fear of her. So the other day after a long t
18、alk, surprisingly, I feel warmth and was touched. I sudden realized that I used to put so much emphasis on her dialect that I didnt even notice his love for me. Like my parents and my other relative, my aunt showed her love, encouragement and expectation for me. The dialect may sound unfamiliar with
19、 me, but our family relationship shortens the distance between us causing by the difference in our languages.8、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
20、。 Attention, swimmer! Please listen carefully to the followed information. All guests must sign out and leave a photo ID at the front desk. It is required which all swimmers should shower with soap before entering the pool. In addition to, all swimmers must wear proper bathing suits. If our staffs d
21、etermined that your clothes are not appropriate, you will be forbidden to enter the pool. If you are sick and have signs of illness, dont use the pool. Please remind your children to use the bathroom. If they have “accidents”, report them to the gym staff immediate. Children under 10 years old must
22、be accompanied by a adult at all times. Remind children that spitting not allowed. 答案以及解析1答案及解析：答案： The time we have is limited. , even an hour is of much . We should make full use of time to do useful things. As students, we study hard so as to serve for our society and our nation in the future. Bu
23、t it is pity that there are a lot of people who know the importance of time. They spend their valuable time and drinking. They dont realize that wasting time is the same as wasting a part of their life. Remember, dont put off you can do today until tomorrow.解析：1.句意:我们拥有的时间通常是有限的。修饰形容词limited用副词,故把us
24、ual改为usually。2.上下文之间是因果关系,故把However改为Therefore。3.be of value 有价值,故把valuable改为value。4.与前文的We保持人称一致,故把your改为our。5.我们必须要努力学习是常识,故把mustnt改为must。6.serve是及物动词,不需要介词,故#除for。7.It is a pity that.是很可惜的。”,pity是可数名词,故在前面加a。8.本文使用现在时态,先行词是people,故把didnt改为dont。9.spend time doing sth.花时间做某事,故把smoke改为smoking。10.句意:
25、记住,不要把今天能做的拖延到明天。此处表示 “的东西或事情”,而且在宾语从句中作宾语,故把which改为what。 2答案及解析：答案： Travelling abroad, you should follow the customs of the country you visiting. When you are invited, is good manners to refuse or accept the invitation either by writing by telephoning. If you go to a party, it is polite to arrive o
26、n the time. It is good manners to shake hands with host. You can take a present if you like, a bottle of wine, a box of chocolates or flowers. However, it is not bad manners to take nothing. It is not polite stay too late after the other guests have gone. Also, it suggested to write or telephone a d
27、ay or two to thank your host.解析： 3答案及解析：答案：Our school sports meeting finally came to end last Friday. but cheerful, we made it a success. I can say its the best one I have ever taken part in. The opening ceremony was a feast for the eyes. To begin with, the headmaster a speech. Then came various, in
28、cluding singing, dancing and kung fu. Besides, some students dressed up as dolls, and they wanted to show was and talent. When the teachers shows began, the audience went . As a class photographer, I took pictures of many brilliant moments, which, doubt, meant a lot to all of us.解析： 4答案及解析：答案： In my
29、 childhood, my sent me to learn Chinese calligraphy, that it could benefit me a lot. , things were quite contrary to their expectations. Not only I get bored with hours of practice but also I doubted the value of it. Nevertheless, when I entered high school, it became a way for me to relax. Judging
30、from my own experience, I want to say a words to those who have the same trouble I did. Do not refuse learn a skill when are young, as in the long run you will find it helpful.解析： 5答案及解析：答案：Dear Laura, Thanks for letting us to stay at your seaside house. Now, you might have heard from your neighbors
31、 about happened on Saturday evening. When I was out a walk, my younger son, Tom, played football before your house. He made so noise that the neighbors got quite . Even worse, Tom broke one of the of Mr. Wilsons house. Tom and I apologized to all the neighbors for the unhappy happenings, promised to
32、 have the broken window soon. Tom said that would not do such silly things any more. I am glad that your neighbors forgiven us. They are really nice people. Yours, Betty解析： 6答案及解析：答案： It was a still and quiet morning on the lake. There no human voices or cars to break the . It was a perfect day for
33、fishing.We sat at there, afraid to talk, thinking fish would hear us and flee. My father, our lunch begin one hand, passed me a sandwich. It was hot and clouds of were feasting on my blood. With my legs with bite marks, I complained,“When will the fish come?Suddenly I felt a fish bite. My father bec
34、ame excited as I was, and together we pulled in the fish that would be part of dinner that night.解析： 7答案及解析：答案：One day last year when I was busy for an important exam, I got a phone call from my aunt. I used to quite nervous when I talked with her, because of her dialect spoken in her loud voice som
35、ehow aroused my fear of her. the other day after a long talk, surprisingly, I warmth and was touched. I realized that I used to put so much emphasis on her dialect that I didnt even notice love for me. Like my parents and my other , my aunt showed her love, encouragement and expectation for me. The
36、dialect may sound unfamiliar me, but our family relationship shortens the distance between us by the difference in our languages.解析： 8答案及解析：答案： Attention,! Please listen carefully to the information. All guests must sign and leave a photo ID at the front desk. It is required all swimmers should show
37、er with soap before entering the pool. In addition to, all swimmers must wear proper bathing suits. If our staffs that your clothes are not appropriate, you will be forbidden to enter the pool. If you are sick have signs of illness, dont use the pool. Please remind your children to use the bathroom.
38、 If they have “accidents”, report them to the gym staff. Children under 10 years old must be accompanied by adult at all times. Remind children that spitting not allowed.解析：1.根据文章可知,是告知所有的游泳者,故要用复数,因此把swimmer改为swimmers2.following为形容词,意为“下面的,以下的”,而followed意为“跟随的;服从的”,本句意为“请仔细听以下的信息”。故把followed改为 foll
39、owing。3.sign out签退;sign in签到;注册;登记;签收。本句指所有客人必须在前台签到并留下照片身份证。故把out改为in。4. 分析句子,It is required which all swimmers should shower .可知,本句中it是形式主语,真正的主句是which all swimmers should shower.而从句是一完整的句子,不缺少主语或宾语或表语等,这种情况用that引导,在从句中不作成分,故把which改为that。5.in addition意为“另外,加之,此外如果表达“除之外”时,要用in addition to+宾语。而本句中后
40、面没有宾语, 故把to去掉。6.如果我们的员工认为你的衣服不合适,将禁止你进入游泳池。分析本句可知从句要用一般现在时,要把determined改为determine。7.句意:如果你生病或有疾病的迹象,不要使用游泳池。分析句子可知,生病或(or)有病的迹象,而非生病和有病的迹象,故把and改为or。8.分析句子可知,如果,立即向健身房员工报告。本句应用immediately作状语修饰动词report。故把immediate改为immediately。9.名词adult是以元音开头的,要用冠词an。10.句意:提醒孩子不要随地吐痰(即禁止吐痰)。allow doing sth的被动形式即doing sth is allowed。分析句子从句应该是spitting is not allowed,宾语从句的主语是spitting,所以缺少谓语动词is,not allowed意为“提醒孩子们禁止吐痰”,即吐痰(spitting)是被禁止的。故在not前添加is。 高考资源网版权所有，侵权必究！
