1、Greeting and Introducing写作任务: 假设你是某外语学校学生会主席周晓,你校为迎接英国交换生将举办一场欢迎会。请你根据以下要点提示,准备一篇英文欢迎词。要点提示:1. 对英国交换生表示欢迎；2. 介绍你校；3. 说明交换生项目的意义。写作要求:1. 内容完整充实,语言连贯通顺；2. 词数:不少于100。 写作分析:第一步,认真审题,提炼要点 一审体裁:本次写作任务要求写一篇欢迎词,属于应用文体裁。在正式的场合迎接客人时,主人要讲一些热情友好的话向客人表示欢迎,使客人感到宾至如归,这就是欢迎词。 二审结构:英文欢迎词需包括称呼、正文和结束语。最常用的称呼是Ladies an
2、d gentlemen,也可根据听众的不同,使用Dear friends及Fellow students等。正文是文章的主体。具体到本次写作,可根据要点提示,分两部分展开。首先,作为发言者,要代表学校向交换生表示欢迎。接下来,向英国交换生介绍学校概况、阐述交换生项目的意义,也可预祝交换生在你校学习、生活顺利,只要添加的内容与话题相符就行。结束语可以用Thank you一句带过。 三审要点:用英语思维,理出写作要点1. welcome party2. president of the StudentsUnion3. introduce our school4. a foreign languag
3、e school5. exchange programme6. various courses7. understand Chinese culture第二步,紧扣主题,扩点成句1. Welcome to our welcome party.2. I am president of the StudentsUnion.3. I am delighted to introduce our school to you.4. Our school is a foreign language school.5. Our school is famous for the exchange program
4、me.6. The exchange programme offers various courses. 7. You can better understand Chinese culture.第三步,补充修改,连句成篇 范文1:Hello everyone, Welcome to our school and welcome to our welcome party! My name is Zhou Xiao. As president of the Students Union, I am delighted to introduce our school to you on behal
5、f of all my fellow students. Our school is a foreign language school and has a long history. Besides this, our school is famous for the exchange programme which includes various courses ranging from Chinese to maths. The Chinese Language and Literature is a top-rated course provided especially for e
6、xchange students. I believe all of you can benefit from this exchange programme greatly in terms of under standing Chinese culture. I hope you will enjoy your time at our school. Thanks for listening.亮点展示:1. 细节添加合理,使文章饱满充实:Besides this, our school is famous for . which includes various courses rangi
7、ng from Chinese to maths. The Chinese Language and Literature is a top-rated course .2. 词汇表达丰富多样,给文章锦上添花:on behalf of / be famous for / range from / benefit from等。3. 对交换生项目的积极意义给予充分肯定,具有说服力:I believe all of you can benefit from this exchange programme greatly .范文2:Boys and girls, My name is Zhou Xia
8、o, president of the Students Union. I am happy to welcome all of you to our school at this welcome party. First of all, please allow me to introduce our school to you. Our school is a foreign language school with a long history. There are many teachers with years of teaching experience. Furthermore,
9、 I consider our exchange programme to be very important. By participating in this programme, you can further deepen your understanding of Chinese culture and traditions. At the same time, you can learn how to live in dependently. I hope you accept my warmest welcome and have a good time here. Thank
10、you.亮点展示:1. 文章首段言简意赅,既交代了致辞人的姓名和身份,又点出了致词的目的,信息全面:My name is Zhou Xiao, president of the StudentsUnion. I am happy to welcome all of you to our school at this welcome party. 2.文章层次鲜明:First of all, please allow me to introduce our school . Furthermore, I consider our exchange programme . At the same
11、time, you can learn .3. I hope you accept my warmest welcome and have a good time here.一句与首段I am happy to welcome all of you to our school at this welcome party. 首尾呼应,语气诚恳。 Powerful Sentences:1. It is a great pleasure for me to welcome you all to our school.2. I stand here on behalf of all the stude
12、nts to offer my hearty welcome to you.3. Our school is an outstanding foreign language school, with 20 years of history.4. Students can better understand Chinese culture through the exchange programme.5. Enhancing students independent living ability is the primary goal we strive for.巩固练习: 假设你是某国际学校英
13、语社团负责人王晨,英语杂志English的主编王先生应邀来你校做演讲。请你根据以下要点提示,为这次演讲活动写一篇英文欢迎词。词数:100左右。要点提示:1. 介绍王先生和English杂志；2. 建议同学们订阅(subscribe to)；3. 让同学们就英语学习问题向王先生提问。 参考范文:Dear everyone,My name is Wang Chen. It is a great honour for me to welcome Mr. Wang to give a speech at our school. Mr. Wang is the editor-in-chief of th
14、e famous magazine, English, and he is paying a visit to our school to promote the magazine. As is well known, English is a coaching magazine for middle school students. Since it is beneficial to our English learning, students who want to improve English skills can subscribe to the magazine. Now lets move into the next part. Students who have questions or difficulties in learning English can ask Mr. Wang for solutions and suggestions. Thank you.
