1、2011年高考英语考点预测冲刺书面表达捷进英语系列整理“2011高考英语书面表达预测及范文”供广大考生冲刺使用。熟悉话题，积累常用结构，迁移运用，力争拿到更多分数。预祝大家取得好成绩！最新热点预测对比议论型高考英语书面表达最新热点预测一：【无车日与环保】 9月22日你所在的城市和另外107个城市开展了无车日活动，倡议人们选用公共汽车、自行车或步行等绿色交通方式来代替开私家车。该活动得到了全国人民的支持，提高了人们节约能源与保护环境的意识，活动很成功。 下面请你用英语写一篇短文介绍该活动，并谈谈开展该活动的必要性，号召更多的城市和居民参与到该活动中来。 注意： 1. 不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥，以
2、使行文连贯； 2. 词数：100左右。 3. 参考词汇： 无车日Car-free Day； 开展launch【参考范文】One possible version： Car-free Day was launched in our city and 107 other cities on September 22， to encourage people to take public transport， ride bicycles or walk instead of driving private cars. The campaign has gained much support all
3、over the country and has raised awareness among all people of energy saving and environmental protection. Its a real success.With the development of the economy, more and more families have bought private cars, thus leading to much heavier traffic problems and more serious air pollution. Therefore,
4、I think its necessary to launch such campaigns. And I hope more and more cities and their residents will take part in this type of activity. 高考英语书面表达最新热点预测二：【网上交友】假设你是李华，在互联网上看到英国高中生David登的一则启事 ：希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学校中国的语言、文化。请你以李华的名义用英文给David发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：(1)你怎样得知David的愿望;(2) 你愿意成为他的朋友;(3)你打算如何帮助他;(4)你盼望
5、他的回复。注意：(1)电子邮件的格 式以为你写好，不计入总词数;(2)词数：100左右。【猜题理由】交友话题为学生熟知，也符合当前对学生的情感教育方向。利用此话题加强学生英语交际能力的培养，较好地体现了语境生活化、任务真实性、行为个性化的设计特点。【构思点拨】该命题属于应用文，需符合电子邮件的格式要求。在写作过程中要抓住要点提示，做到不遗漏、不重复，并注意保持书信语言的简洁性和精炼性。【参考范文】Dear David,Ive learned it from the Inter net that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to learn t
6、he Chinese language and culture. Im glad that you show such great interest in China and I world like to be your friend.I will try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the Chinese culture. When you have an opportunity to come to China, Ill teach you how to speak Chinese and s
7、how you around some famous historical places of interest. Anyway, I am going to help you as much as I can. How do you think?Im looking forward to your reply .Yours sincerely,Li Hua高考英语书面表达最新热点预测三：【对高三生活的看法】假如你是武汉大学附中高三(1)的李华，今年即将高中毕业。请根据以下要点给某英文报写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对高三生活的看法。(1)对获得的帮助表示感谢;(2)消除与 同学之间的误会;(3)努力
8、学习，实现人生梦想;(4)对学弟、学妹的建议。注意：(1)可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯;(2)词数：100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数) 。【猜题理由】本篇书面表达能比较真实地反映学生的生活实际，话题内容关注学生的社交生活和树立健康的人生观，具有考查的现实意义和指导意义;在语言表达上，能够让学生充分运用所学知识，毫无词汇障碍地表达自己的思想;此外，在语言表达的设置上也有一定的伸展性，能有效地激发学生个 性观点的创建。【构思点拨】本篇书面表达是常见 的提纲类型的写作，要点明确清楚，便于学生组织文章，理清脉络。行文时要注意处理好语言表达的控制性和伸展性之间的关系。【参考范文】High schoo
9、l is regarded as the best time in a persons life. As a senior three student, it wont take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their
10、 help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, its high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, Ive made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as t
11、he old saying goes, no pains, no gains.Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men.高考英语书面表达最新热点预测四：开通博客很多中学生都纷纷开起了自己的博客。一方面，博客可以作为展示自己的窗口，可以释放学习压力，因此已经被越来越多的中学生所接受。但是，另一方面，很多家长和老师认为管理个人博客要花相当多的时间和精力，会耽误学习。请对此现象进行介绍，并发表自己的看法。Nowadays, i
12、t is a common phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet. There are advantages and disadvantages about this matter.For one thing, it provides them a colorful window to show their ideas and also a way for them to relax, which makes it more popular among hi
13、gh school students.But many parents and teachers are worried about it. They fear that managing a blog will take a lot of time and energy, which will have a bad effect on their lessons.In my opinion, I do prefer this activity because the Internet is playing a more important and necessary part in our
14、life. In an age of information, we high school students have to learn and make the most of this useful tool to communicate and show ourselves.【议论评价题型】议论题型的解决方法：要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径问题现状 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)模式A ： In recent days, we have to face the problem-A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, -(说明
15、的现状). Second, -(举例进一步说明现状) Faced with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, -(解决方法一). For another -(解决方法二). Finally, -(解决方法三). Personally, I believe that -(我的解决方法). Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because -(带来的好处).模
16、式B ：With the development of modern industry, more and more people are concerned about the problem(点题). It isbecause Firstly,Secondlythirdly(原因或现象1 2 3) Personally, I believe that（结论，前景，解决方式）Man is now facing with a big problem of , which is becoming more and more serious. (点题，重要性或严重性) The reasons fo
17、r this are listed as follows: Firstly,SecondlyThirdly(原因或理由1 2 3)In brief, (结论或措施). Very often you come across an empty classroom with the light on. Its not difficult to find evidence of Wasting water, a very serious problem. Additionally, Students do not recycle enough, throwing away the Soft drink
18、 bottles, used exercise papers and books. Worse still, many students still use the non-Environmentally friendly lunch boxes, causing the White pollution. These things show that many students lack the sense of environmental awareness. Its important to educate Students to be more environmentally frien
19、dly. At the Same time, students can do small things, such as Collecting used item for recycling, turning off the lights and saving water. Always remember that its everyones Responsibility to protect the environment.生活情境热点预测高考英语书面表达生活情境热点预测一：描述公共汽车上让座的情形。写作思路：1体裁：故事 2时态：一般过去时态为主。3写作要点：（1）一位老年人上车（2）老人
20、驼背，拄着拐杖（3）让座给奶奶（4）小孩子让座 （5）大家表扬这个可爱的孩子。4单词、短语和句型的选择：offer a seat; was full of /was crowded; take a seat; led sb. to ; praised sb. for sth .5注意事项：（1）可能有图片，图片内容阐述要详略得当 （2）描写要形象生动、得体运用词汇【参考范文】 Offering seatsOne day, a granny with grey hair got on the bus at a bus stop. She was in her seventies with a w
21、alking stick in her right hand. The bus was full of passengers and there was no empty seat. Suddenly in the front of the bus, a voice came form a little boy. He said “Granny, take my seat”.Following the voice, people saw a lovely boy of about 4 years old. He came and led the old woman to his seat an
22、d asked her to sit down.Beside the boy was his mother .She smiled at her child and all the passengers were happy and praised the boy for his good manners. What a good boy he is!高考英语书面表达生活情境热点预测二：野餐等聚会活动地点描述。范文背诵（一封短信或便条）June lst, 2005Dear Peter,Were so glad youre coming to join us on Sunday. Here is
23、 how you can find us. Well have our picnic in the Peoples Park. You know where that is, dont you? After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight on till you come to a stream. Cross the stream and turn right. After walking for a while youll come to a hill. Walk around to the other side of t
24、he hill. There youll see a lake. Well have our picnic there in the small woods by the lake. Im sure youll have no trouble finding us. Do come!YoursLi Hua高考英语书面表达生活情境热点预测三：创新预测:应用文提纲式/安排好友来访假设你是李华，是成都育才中学的高三学生。你的英国网友Jim发来电子邮件，告诉你他将于今年暑假来中国旅游，并决定来成都和你呆一周。但他有些情况不清楚。请你给他回一封电子邮件。注意：1、词数：60左右； 2、文中应包括方框内所
25、有的提示内容，可以适当发挥。Subject: visit to China From Jim从6月18日你就有时间陪他了。Dear Li Hua,乘飞机到成都，到成都机场去接他。然后一块乘汽车来学校。I feel very excited about my visit to China and meeting you for the first time! But Im still not sure about the following:成都夏天气温高，不用带太多衣服。1. When will you be free?2. How can I get to your place?3. Wha
26、ts the weather like there?参观当地著名风景名胜并一起游泳。4. What shall we do together?Please let me know!Your friend,JimDear Jim, I am so excited that youll come to China and stay with me for a week during the summer vacation.Ill be free since June 18th and will have plenty of time to be with you.When you come, pl
27、ease take a plane to Chengdu. Ill meet you at Chengdu Airport and then well catch a bus to our school. The weather here in summer is very hot, so you neednt take many clothes. During your stay here, Ill take you to some places of interest. We are going to swim there. Im sure well have a very good ti
28、me together. Looking forward to meeting you soon. Yours,Li Hua高考英语书面表达生活情境热点预测四：创新预测:应用文提纲式/留言条假设你是李华，星期天你要和你的同班同学李明一起去敬老院参加义务劳动，你去找他，但他没有在家，你给他留言说明要求，内容如下：（1）9：30在学校门口集合；（2）带劳动工具（洗衣粉、理发工具、除草（weeding）工具等）；（3）自带午饭，骑自行车前往。注意：（1）词数100左右；（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文 连贯。【猜题理由】2010年高考写作题应该是学生较为熟悉的、身边的与他们生活、学习密切相关的话题。
29、因为高考有一定的连续性，2011年有些省份仍可能采用应用文进行考查。【构思点拨】本题属于提纲式要点作文，要求学生就所给内容写一张留言条，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活化的原则。应注意下面几点：（1）注意人称，应该用第一人称的形式给同学李明（第二人称）写便条：（2）注意时态的正确使用：从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点上应用将来时；（3）注意恰当使用逻辑词语，是各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开门见山。【参考范文】Dear Li
30、Ming,This Sunday well go to the nursing home and do some voluntary labor. You were out, when I dropped in on you. Therefore, I had to leave a message to you. According to what monitor said, well meet at the gate of our school at 9:30 tomorrow morning and start out together by bike. So you should tak
31、e your bike and dont forget to take some washing powder, barber tools and weeding tools so that we can help them with washing clothes, cutting their hair and get rid of some weed in the garden. At last, you should remember to take some food for lunch because well stay the re for chatting with them a
32、t noon. If you come back, youll phone me at once. Li Hua 数字、方位说明热点预测高考英语书面表达数字、方位说明热点预测一：应用文便条路线图你叫李明，你住友谊宾馆的英国朋友Mike明天想到你校（第一中学）参观。你提前到其住处告诉行走路线，但他不在，你便随手在一张纸上画上路线图，并在图下简短附言提示。请按图写一便条。友谊宾馆 十字路口 红绿灯 公园 银行 大约100米 第一中学 May 11 , 2003 Dear Mike,Welcome to my school. Ive come here in person to tell you h
33、ow to go to my school, but you are out. So I have to leave this diagraph to remind you of the course. You should turn left when you get out of the railway station. Go down the road and you will see the first crossing. Go straight ahead till you see the traffic lights. Next, you should turn right at
34、the traffic lights. Then youll pass by a park which is on your left. Go straight ahead till you get to a bank, and youll find that there is a street opposite the bank. Now walk down the street about 100 meters, and you will see No. 1 Middle School on your left. You cant miss it. I look forward to se
35、eing you soon. Li Ming 高考英语书面表达数字、方位说明热点预测二：参观学校解说词。Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school. Im very glad to say that something about our school to you.Our school was founded in 1959. Now there are 2,300 students in 44 classes. There are two hundred and ninety teachers and staff. The school has f
36、our science laboratories/labs, one language laboratory, one computer room and a big library.Its a key school here and very beautiful. It also has a new library and a large playground. Besides, a new arts building is under construction. Hope you will enjoy them and have a good time. 身边生活热点预测高考英语书面表达网
37、络热点预测一：随着网络的发展，目前很多人给亲朋好友发电子贺卡，请根据提示阐述电子贺卡的优越性。1）可播放动画和声音。2）传播速度快。3）形式多样。4）有利于环境保护，节省资源。文章包括以上要点，可适当发挥，不要逐条翻译。提示词：电子贺卡：electronic card 动画animationWith the development of Internet , more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones at New Years time. Compared with the tradition
38、al cards, electronic cards are more interesting and lively, for you can get not only pictures but also sound and even animations. In addition, its faster to send an electronic card on internet, where different varieties of cards are available. More over, you can design cards of unique style using Fl
39、ash or other software if you arent interested in any of the given ones .More importantly, with the popularity of electronic cards, less paper is used for making cards, which contributes to the environment protection.高考英语书面表达网络热点预测二：近年来尽管政府在改善居住上花了大量资金，但是住房问题仍然是中国许多大城市所面临的最严重问题之一。对此话题你班举行了热烈的讨论。一部分人建
40、议：多造高层建筑(high-rise apartments)，一部分人认为：向地下发展。而你赞成前一种观点。你的理由： 1.建筑费用便宜；2.久住地下对身体不利；3.地上阳光充足，地下只有人造光源你的结论： 提示：人造光源（artificial lighting）现请你以How to Solve the Housing Problem in Big Cities为题写120字以上的短文。How to Solve the Housing Problem in Big CitiesIn recent years the government has spent a large sum of mon
41、ey in improving housing but the shortage of housing is one of the most serious problems facing many big cities in China. Weve discussed heatedly the topic “How to Solve the Housing Problem in Big Cities.”Some of us suggest building more high-rise apartments while others believe to develop undergroun
42、d housing areas. I am in favor of the former opinion. For one thing, it is cheaper to build above ground than below. For another, living underground for a long time will do harm to peoples health. Above all, people are unwilling to live underground with artificial lighting and they prefer to live ab
43、ove ground to enjoy the sunshine.Although there may be some other ways to solve the housing shortage problem, I believe to build more high-rise apartments is one of the promising solutions to the housing problem.高考英语书面表达网络热点预测三：请根据对某校这段时间学生中拥有QQ号人数的调查写一篇文章，要求描述变化并得出结论。【学生习作】With the development of t
44、he Internet, nowadays many students own QQs. According to the chart, in 2004, only 20% of the students had QQs, but in 2005, 40% had QQs. In 2006, about 50% of them owned QQs, and in 2007, 60% of them had QQs. So there is no doubt that QQ has been very popular among middle school students. There are
45、 many reasons for that. First, （-2分）they are very convenient to communicate with each other. Second, they can entertain （-1分）them through QQ, （-2分）such as they can play games, enjoy music and even watch TV. QQs functions are becoming more and more. As a result, it has even provided the latest news e
46、specially entertainment, so they neednt read newspapers. Personally, students should make proper use of and not be addicted to QQ, and then it can serve its purpose beautifully. （得分档次：第四档，18分）【习作评析】1. 总体评价：本文是一篇叙议结合的短文，要点基本齐全。作者首先简要描述了变化，并在第二段就QQ流行的原因做了说明，最后提出建议。此外，本文作者合理使用了一些关联词和过度词语，使文章前后连贯，内容紧凑，过
47、渡自然，提高了文章的得分档次。但是由于第一段过于单调，减去2分，加上出现一些明显的词语用法错误，使得文章失分不少。2. 误点点拨：改为its convenient for them, convenient的主语不可为人。them改为themselves。改为for example。注意后面应加上逗号，such as后面不能接句子。画龙点睛：文章的第一段由于数据的堆砌使得句式单调，如40% have QQs.可改为the rate doubled。可将In 2006, about 50% of them owned QQs, and in 2007, 60% of them had QQs. 整
48、合为一句，Likewise, it rose from about 50% in 2006 to 60% in 2007. 这样修改使句子更加简洁，避免了重复。【范文】 As is shown in the chart, the rate of students who owned QQs increased in the past four years from 2004 to 2007. Back in 2004, only 20% of them have QQs; one year later, the rate becomes twice larger; compared with
49、about 50% in 2006, the rate in 2007 rose to 60%. Clearly, it is tending to increase.In my opinion, the increase can be accounted for two factors. For one thing, the widespread use of the Internet makes it convenient for students to communicate with each other. For another, QQ provides all kinds of e
50、ntertainments, such as playing games and enjoying music. Whats more, QQ has gradually become the main means for the public to know the latest news. Personally, students should make proper use of and not be addicted to QQ, and only so can it serve its purpose beautifully.【通知】热点预测高考英语书面表达模板1. 口头通知(1)
51、口头通知通常是口头传达的消息，表达时要尽可能地口语化，做到言简意赅。口头通知一般不用写出通知的时间或发出通知的单位。(2) 口头通知的开头常要有称呼语，具体应根据通知的对象而定。常用的称呼语有：Boys and girls, Ladies and gentlemen, Comrades and friends, Teachers and fellow students 等。注意：写称呼语时，首行应顶格写。(3) 口头通知常用的开头有:May I have your attention, please !/ Attention, please! / Please be quiet. / List
52、en, please!等.结束语常: Thats all. Thank you (for listening)!等，以示礼貌。2. 书面通知写书面通知时，应明确写出发出通知的单位和日期。一般情况下，书面通知的首行中央写上Notice或An Announcement等。通知的发布单位常写在正文结束的右下角，也可以写在Notice 的上方或前面，发布通知的日期一般写在正文的左下角(在落款的下一行)或写在通知正文的右上角(在Notice的下一行)。口头通知和书面通知都是宣布即将发生的事情及其具体内容,因而多用将来时，一般用祈使句来强调。通知的语言要简洁明了,条理清晰,准确无误,特别是时间概念很重要，
53、必须写得十分明确，不容丝毫含糊。除了上面提到的称呼和开头语外，主题内容可参照以下模板：In order to_, _is to be held on _(day), _(date), at_(time) in_(place). Whoever is interested in it is welcome to attend _. Those who want to take part in _ please sign up at the Students Union.Please remember:_.书面表达之步步为赢策略一、变换句型结构（简单句、并列句和复合句）1. 使用各种从句：What
54、 surprised us most is.; As everyone knows, ; 2. 使用省略结构：You can turn to your teacher if necessary.3. 使用祈使句结构：Start at once, or youll catch the bus.4. 使用虚拟语气：It is time that measures were taken to prevent such a thing from happening again.5. 使用感叹句：What a wonderful and unforgettable experience!How impo
55、rtant it is to form a good habit!6. 使用there be 结构：There is no need for sb. to do sth.; There is no doubt that.二、变换句式结构（用不同的语法结构）1. Unable to get the work done before dark, they decide to do it tomorrow.（形容词或形容词短语开头）2. Not only does he enjoy playing football, but also he likes playing basketball.（倒装句
56、）3. Judging from his expression, he has not finished his homework.（分词作状语）4. An idea occurred to me. （以物做主语）三、善用、巧用过渡词或短语递进型：besides, also, whats more/worse 解释型：in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is转折型：however, but, instead列举型：firstly, secondly, on the one handon the other hand因果型：bec
57、ause(of), since, as, thus, as a result, sothat, so that让步型：though, although举例型：for example, such as, like, takefor example顺序型：first nextand thenfinally; first thenafter thatfinally并列型：and, bothand, or, eitheror, as well as 条件型：if, as long as, unless时间型：soon, later, the moment, immediately, hardly wh
58、en总结型：in a word, in short见解型：in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned, Im sure四、常用模板句型1. 开头：It is often said that/It is widely accepted that; The major reason is that; As a student, I am strongly in favor of the decision; It goes without saying that plays an important role in ; T
59、here is a widespread concern about/that; The reason for this may be listed as follows; The picture shows that2. 连接语句：Another special case is that ; This may be true, but we still have a ; No one can deny the fact that; Why does this happen? For one thing.For another;3. 结尾句：Only in this way can we.;
60、It is high time that measures should be taken to; Personally, the advantages overweight the disadvantages, so I support it.; , which will not only help us improve our daily living, but also help us shape our future in the long run.4. 图表式模板：As is shown in the table(or in the picture), _dropped from _
61、in 2005 to _in 2010. According to the figures given, _has increased in the past_ years, reaching _in 2010. From the table we can see that there has been a sharp rise in _. It is clear that.There are at least two reasons for_. For one thing, _. Lets see_. For another thing, _is due to the fact that_.
62、 In addition, _is responsible for_. Maybe there are some other reasons, but it is generally believed that the reasons mentioned above are commonly acceptable.As far as I am concerned, _. So my view is _. I am sure my opinion is both sound and reasonable. 耐心与信心，帮助我们赢得更多机会！ J坚持到最后一刻，我们就能笑对现实的馈赠！-Bobcai押题永久免费
