1、命题分析及突破方法体 验 高 考高考命题视角考场失分防范命题分析及突破方法防范三防范二防范一只看表象，忽略内涵图画作文是一种变“画”为文的作文方式，要求考生在看懂图画的意思后写作文,主要训练和考查考生的观察能力、思考能力、创造能力和表达能力,因此,在写作时应首先看懂图画的表层意义,更主要的是明白图画的内在意义,尤其是漫画类，要挖掘图画作者的意图,像批判什么,褒贬什么,有什么哲理等,切忌只表达表层意思,忽略内涵意义。考场失分防范关系不一致或重复累赘In the bedroom there are a bed，a desk and a chair【误】In the bedroom there is
2、 a bed，a desk and a chair.【正】The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry it.【误】The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry.【正】We hope to improve our work better.【误】We hope to improve our work.【正】有些英语单词本身自带某个意思,或由于语法需要不能再出现某一单词,如果基本功不够扎实,就常常出现造句累赘现象。汉式英语或句式结构混乱Good good study，day day up.【误】Stud
3、y hard and youll make progress every day.【正】There were 40 foreigners came to visit our school.【误】There were 40 foreigners who came to visit our school.【正】40 foreigners came to visit our school.【正】一个句子至少包括主语和谓语两部分,如果把句子的某一部分当成一个句子,就会导致句子不完整。要减少汉式英语必须做到:养成用英语思维进行写作的习惯,注意中西文化差异所带来的不同表达;平时多归纳总结、纠正汉式英语;多
4、读原汁原味的英语。体 验 高 考思 路 点 拨范 文 赏 读孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题,现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。内容要求：1.描述漫画内容；2.分析漫画揭示的问题；3.提出你的看法。注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；3.词数120左右。参考词汇：铺路pave the wayFrom the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet._Passage1(2013福建卷)漫画反映了当今家庭“以
5、孩子为中心,父母是臣仆”这一社会现象,发人深省。文章应分为三段,一是描述图画内容,二是揭示本质，三是提出自己的看法并提出合理建议。体 验 高 考【范文赏读】From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.The son,well dressed,waves proudly in the middle while the fatherbehind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carp
6、et，sweating.It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families,shouldering the hope of their parents.Parents arrange everyt-hing for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success.As a consequence,children become so reliant on their parents that theyh
7、ave no independent thought or creative ideas.Such a situation is of great concern.In my opinion，overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for childrens development.Instead of doing everything for them，parents should encourage their children to ov-ercome difficulties and inspire them to deve
8、lop by themselves.Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.亮点揭示 显/隐本文覆盖全部写作要点,语言规范,论证有力,是难得的佳作。写作亮点:一是段落清晰,首段描述漫画内容,第二段深入分析其社会、家庭原因,第三段提出针对性很强的建议。二是高级词汇和短语俯拾皆是,如proudly,sweating,nowa-days,shouldering,independent,overprotection,extremely,reliant on,spare noeffor
9、t以及 of great concern等。三是复杂句式应用得当，如第一段中的sweating和第二段中的shouldering the hope的非谓语作伴随状语,so reliant on their par-ents that引导结果状语从句,Only in this way构成的倒装句式等。四是衔接自然:第一段while表示前后对比，第二段的as a consequence,第三段的in my opinion,instead of 都为本文增色不少。体 验 高 考Passage2(2012湖南卷)假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者,以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻,请根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。
10、内容要求：1.描述漫画内容；2.发表个人感想。注意:1.短文标题与开头已给出,不计入总词数；2.考生可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯。Mind Your Behavior in Public PlacesLast Sunday,I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy LakePark._思 路 点 拨范 文 赏 读本篇书面表达属于看图作文之议论文类写作。通过看漫画,先对事实进行适当描述,然后说出你对此的看法,后者是写作重点。根据构思,文章可以分为两段:第一段描写情景;第二段表明观点。人称以第一人称为主，时态以两大时态为主;描述图画内容用一
11、般过去时,发表感想、评论用一般现在时。体 验 高 考【范文赏读】Mind Your Behavior in Public Places Last Sunday,I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring,with the sun shining and birds singing.When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around,something unpleasant c
12、aught my eye.A young couple in a boat were eating，talking and laughing loudly as if they were the onlypeople in the world.Whats worse,they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake,totally ignoring the noticeable sign“No Littering”nearby.What a shame!Such behavior left me deep in thought.If all visi
13、tors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did,the lake will be severely polluted andsoon turned into a huge dustbin.I think all of us should mind our beh-avior in public places.Only in this way can we live in more comfortableand beautiful surroundings.体 验 高 考思 路 点 拨范 文 赏 读Passage3(2011.江苏卷)右面这幅照片
14、展现了女儿为回家的妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容：1.描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；2.结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；3.举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。注意:1.可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。The burden of students has been a hot topic for years，but the load of parents has received little attention,especial
15、ly from their own children._(1)本题命题形式新颖,把图片和文字信息提示相结合。(2)写作时应先描述画中内容,然后结合自身,发挥想象,加以议论。体 验 高 考【范文赏读】The burden of students has been a hot topic for years，but the load of parents has received little attention,especially from their own children.The picture shows a touching moment when a little girl com
16、es to gr-eet her working mom.Realizing her mom must be very tired after a days work,the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder.In response,the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever shecould do to let me have the
17、best.But totally engaged in my own study，Iseldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels，and always thinkstudying is the only thing I could do in return.Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing,bedroom cleaning,or at least prepare breakfast myself,so as to share mothers dail
18、y burden.The picture conv-inces me it is even more important to be a good daughter than a“good”student.高考命题视角角度 1记叙文【典例】(2012陕西卷)假定你是李华，下面的图画描述了教师节那天你们班组织的一次活动,请根据写作要点并参考图画内容,为校刊“英语角”版面写一篇短文。写作要点：1.活动的策划；2.教室的布置；3.活动的内容；4.你的感想。注意：1.短文词数不少于100；2.开头部分已写好,不计入总词数；3.可根据情况增减细节,详略得当；4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。第1步 审题谋
19、篇第2步 确定要点第3步 连句成篇思路点拨1.审题2.谋篇1.词汇2.句式范文赏读体裁：记叙文(校刊征文)时态：一般过去时人称：第一人称活动策划、教室布置为一自然段，在教师节给老师的惊喜为一自然段，最后作者的感受为一自然段。教师节 Teachers Day临近 approach/draw near/come庆祝 celebrate用装饰 decorate.with给某人献花 present sb.with flowers(1)教师节快到了,我们班决定举办一个派对来庆祝这一重要节日。(as.)As Teachers Day was approaching,our class decided to
20、 hold a partyto celebrate the important day.(2)我们再怎样感谢她的辛勤劳动和教导都不为过。(cannot.enough.)We cannot thank her enough for her hard work and guidance.高考命题视角【范文赏读】Ms.Li，our English teacher,must have found it strange on Teachers Day:she did not receive a single greeting card from us students.She wouldhave nev
21、er thought a complete surprise was waiting for her.As Teachers Day was approaching,our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day for a change this year.On the afternoon of September 10,some of us decorated our classroom with paper flowers and balloons,and others went to buy cakes，
22、drinks and fruits.The blackboardwas decorated with beautiful words，which read“Happy Teachers Day！”Entering the classroom,Ms.Li was surprised to find we were standing in line，clapping hands and saying loudly“Happy Teachers Day！”Wang Hua，our monitor,presented her with the prepared flowers.Some of the
23、girls sang songs for Ms.Li,and three boys showed their kung fu talent.Before we left,we enjoyed a new English song by Ms.Li.Ms.Li spent a wonderful time with us,but we know that we cannot thankher enough for all her hard work and guidance.高考命题视角角度 2议论文【典例】(2011湖南卷)假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛，请按如下要求完成一篇短文。1.简要描
24、述下图内容，并点明主题；2.联系实际，表达该图带给你的启示。注意:1.词数不少于120；2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称_思 路 点 拨范 文 赏 读知 识 链 接(1)本题是半开放式图画作文。难度适中，立意求新，通过三个等式揭示了一个大部分学生能得出的寓意。(2)结合图画对写作内容进行丰富和拓展，确定表达的要点。记叙文体裁的图画作文的写作模式1.可采用三段式写作,第一段总结描述,交代故事的时间、地点、人物,提出文章的主题句；第二段具体描述,介绍事件发生的原因、经过和结果;第三段对事件进行分析。2.叙述的人称可采用第一人称,也可用第三人称,依据具体情况而定。3.叙述的方法:可以以时间、地点、事件
25、发展的过程、事件的象征意义为线索来展开,也可以以人物的思想行为及认知过程为线索来展开。高考命题视角【范文赏读】The picture shows us a simple truth.If too many drops of water are put together,they will become a sea.Many trees standing toge-ther form a forest and many people make up a society.It conveys a message to us.A whole is made up of many small part
26、s that are closely related.Nothing or no one could exist alone.The picture sets us thinking deeply；our society is made up ofmany people who have different personalities and characters.If we want to create a harmonious society，we must live in harmony with others.On the other hand，since everybody is related to others,we should be responsible for what we say and what we do so that we can develop a pleasant relationship with others,which makes it po-ssible for us to enjoy our life to the fullest.
