1、Section_WRITING_WORKSHOP_&_READING_CLUB学范文背佳句它山之石,可以攻玉范文诠释教材原文名师论道From:Wang Yingwangying*.comTo:Fang Lanfanglan*.comSubject:Hello from an old friendHi Fang Lan, Hows your life in Canada? I hope you have adapted well to the new situation and are enjoying your new school.I love my new senior secondary
2、 school. Its much bigger than my junior secondary school and theres a huge gym! Do you remember Xie Zijun? Guess what we are in the same school! Its always good to have a friend, right?Life in senior secondary school is very different from junior secondary school! You know, we dont have a fixed clas
3、sroom! We go to different classes for different subjects and also for different levels. Im in the same class with Zijun for English and physics but in different classes for Chinese and maths. We also have many different clubs after class. You know, I like dancing, so Im in the Dancing Club. At the m
4、oment, we meet twice a week and were preparing to attend a competition. I think my new school gives me a chance to become a different person and I like the “new me”Well, I must go now. Ive got a presentation tomorrow and I need to finish my slides. I look forward to hearing all about whats happening
5、 with you soon.All the best!Wang Ying学语言句式: Hows your life in Canada?(问候语)I hope/love/think .(表达希望/爱好/看法)Do you remember Xie Zijun? Guess what we are in the same school!Its always good to have a friend, right? You know/Well, . (口语化的表达,适合私人信件)词汇: adapt to sth,at the moment,prepare to do sth,give sb a
6、 chance to .,presentation,look forward to (doing) sth时态: 本文以现在时态为主学结构*开头问候并引出话题。Hows your life in Canada?问候I hope you have adapted well to the new situation and are enjoying your new school.引出话题*中间详细介绍在新的高中的情况。a bigger schoola huge gymdifferent lifedifferent classesdifferent subjectsdifferent clubsa
7、 “new” me*结束并期盼回复。I must go now结束I look forward to .期盼回复佳句背诵1.How nice to hear from you again!很高兴再次收到你的来信!2.Let me tell you something about the activity.让我告诉你一些关于这次活动的情况。3.I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely.我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些困难,你也可能经常感到孤独。 4.At sc
8、hool, all the teachers work very hard. They encourage us to build up our confidence and inspire us to improve our study.在学校,所有的老师工作都非常努力。他们鼓励我们树立信心并且激励我们提高学习成绩。5.Id appreciate it if you could reply earlier.如果您能尽早回复我会万分感激。仿佳作找差距巧借外力,事半功倍 题目要求假如你是李华,进入新学校已经有一段时间了。你的美国朋友Mary想了解你的校园生活,现在请你给她写一封电子邮件。要点包括
9、:1校园环境;2人际交流;3学习生活。注意:1.词数80左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 仿写步骤Step 1一仿结构布局合理 第一段:问候并引出话题(分享学校生活);第二段:详细介绍学校环境、人际交往和学习生活;第三段:结束并祝福。Step 2二仿语言规范美观 1近来好吗?How_is_everything_going?2现在我想和你分享一些关于我的新学校的情况。Now_I_would_like_to_share_something_with_you_about_my_new_school.3因为它配备了各种设施,我们的学校既漂亮又现代化!Because_it_is_equipped
10、_with_all_kinds_of_facilities,our_school_is_beautiful_as_well_as_modern!4最吸引我的是图书馆,在那里我可以很容易地和小组成员接触到很多知识,自己解决问题。What_attracts_me_most_is_the_library,_where_I_can_easily_get_access_to_much_knowledge_with_group_members_and_solve_problems_by_myself.5我很喜欢我的新学校。I_do_enjoy_my_new_school.Step 3三仿句间过渡自然 1说
11、实话,最吸引我的是图书馆,在那里我可以很容易地和小组成员接触到很多知识,并自己解决问题。To be honest, what attracts me most is the library,where I can easily get access to much knowledge with group members and solve problems by myself.2就我个人而言,我很喜欢我的新学校。Personally,_I_do_enjoy_my_new_school.Step 4誊写Dear_Mary,How_is_everything_going?Now_I_would_
12、like_to_share_something_with_you_about_my_ new_school.Located_in_the_center_of_our_city,our_school_is_a_key_school_with_a_history_of_70_ years.Because_it_is_equipped_with_all_kinds_of_facilities,_our_school_is_beautiful_as_well_as_modern.In_fact,_I_get_along_well_with_my_classmates_and_my_study.To_b
13、e_honest,what_ attracts_me_most_is_the_library,where_I_can_easily_get_access_to_much_knowledge_with _group_members_and_solve_problems_by_myself.Personally,I_do_enjoy_my_new_school.How_about_your_school_life?_Looking_forward_to_your_early_reply.Yours,Li_Hua自我评价EvaluationABCD1.(final copy) Be well org
14、anized.2.(every sentence) Have correct tense and voice.3.(final copy) Use what we have learned in the reading beautifully.4.(writing) Be neat and beautiful.5.(passage) Use proper conjunction (连接词)6.(passage) Use transitional sentences (过渡句)7.(spelling, punctuation andcapitalization) Be correct.8.(fi
15、nal copy)Be worthy of being shared.重点单词1a huge gym一个大体育馆2junior secondary school 初级中学3at the moment 此刻;目前;眼下4finish my slides 完成我的幻灯片5look forward to 期待;盼望6in a rural area 在乡村1present v. 描述ationpresentation n. 报告,陈述,说明例如: organisation n组织,机构,团体recreation n. 娱乐,消遣 graduation n. 毕业;毕业典礼appreciation n.
16、 欣赏;感激;感谢celebration n. 庆祝;庆典consideration n. 考虑expectation n. 期望adaptation n. 适应,改编本 2entertain v. 娱乐mententertainment n. 娱乐例如: agreement n同意,协议achievement n. 成就appointment n. 约定arrangement n. 安排,布置.重点短语1The new teacher was very slow to adapt_to (适应) the unusual rules of the school.2At_the_moment (
17、此刻), no one is talking to me.3Im looking_forward_to (盼望) your visit next week.4I hope you can come_up_with (想出) a better plan than this.5They had been cut_off (隔绝) from all contact with their homeland.6They wanted to connect_with (和联系) a community of likeminded people. 7By_the_end_of (到末) the holida
18、y I had spent all my money.8He made one big mistake, and, as_a_result (结果), lost his job.典型句式教材原句In the 18th and 19th centuries,most English people ate only two main meals each day breakfast in the morning and a large supper which wasnt usually served until seven oclock in the evening.句式分析not .until
19、表示“直到才”佳句仿写直到她开口说话我才知道她不是英格兰人。I hadnt realized she wasnt English until_she_spoke. 1junior adj.较年幼的;资历较浅的;地位较低的;低年级的 n年少者;晚辈;等级较低者(教材p.18)You are going to write an email to a junior secondary school classmate about your new school.你要给你的一个初中同学写一封关于你的新学校的电子邮件。(1)be junior to比低级;比年少be junior to sb by .y
20、earsbe .years sbs juniorbe sbs junior (by .) 比某人小岁(2)senior adj. 资深的;(级别、地位等)较高的;年长的be senior to 比年长;比高级佳句I spent my junior secondary school in France.我在法国度过了我的初中。练透补全句子My brother is senior_to_me_by two years.我哥哥比我大两岁。He is my manager, though he is_junior_to_me.他是我的经理,尽管他资历比我浅。写美一句多译她比他小四岁。She _is_j
21、unior_to_him_by four years.She is_four_years_his_junior.She is_his_junior_by four years.2adapt vi.& vt.(使)适应 vt.改编,改写(教材p.18)I hope you have adapted well to the new situation and are enjoying your new school.我希望你已经很好地适应了新环境,并且喜欢你的新学校。(1)adapt oneself to 使自己适应或习惯于adapt sth to 使某物适应或适合于adapt to 适应(2)a
22、dapt .from 根据改编或改写adapt .for 为改编/改写佳句He tried hard to adapt himself to the new environment.他努力使自己适应新的环境。名师点津adapt和adopt词形相近,但词义不同。adapt指“适应;改编”;adopt指“采用;采取;收养”。练透单句语法填空He found some difficulty adapting (adapt) to local culture.The famous film adapted (adapt) from a novel by a young writer is going
23、to be on soon.The TV play The journey of flower (花千骨) is an adaptation (adapt) of a novel.He is well adapted (adapt) to the climate there.写美补全句子The children find it hard to adapt_to_the_new_school.孩子们发现很难适应新学校。3at the moment此刻,目前,眼下(教材p.18)At the moment,we meet twice a week and were preparing to att
24、end a competition.目前,我们每周见两次,而且我们正在准备参加一个比赛。for the momentfor the present 暂时 for a moment 片刻in a moment 不久,立刻,马上the momentthe minute/instant 一就佳句I know the address well enough,but I cant think of it at the moment.我清楚地记得这个地址,可是这会儿怎么也想不起来了。练透补全句子We arent going to make any change for_the_moment/present
25、.我们暂时不做任何改变。I really must be getting home in_a_moment.我真的必须立即回家。写美补全句子I want to see her the_moment_she_arrives.她一到我就想见她。4look forward to (doing) sth期待,盼望(教材p.18)I look forward to hearing all about whats happening with you soon.我期待着尽快听到关于你的一切。look about/around 环顾四周;到处看look after 照顾look back 回顾;回头看loo
26、k down 俯视look down on/upon 看不起look for 寻找look into 调查;窥视look out 当心,小心look up 仰望;查阅佳句He was looking forward to working with the new Prime Minister.他期待着与新首相合作。练透单句语法填空When all the facts have been looked up,_pass them on to me.The police are looking into the records of all those involved in the crime.
27、Looking back on it,one realizes that it was far from being a satisfactory conference.The day we had been looking forward to came (come) at last.写美补全句子Wed like you to look_around/about and tell us if anything is missing. 我们想请你四处看看,并且告诉我们是否缺少什么。名师点津look forward to短语中的to为介词,后面跟名词或动名词形式。1句型公式:not .until
28、结构(教材p.21)In the 18th and 19th centuries,most English people ate only two main meals each day breakfast in the morning and a large supper which wasnt usually served until seven oclock in the evening.在18世纪和19世纪,大部分英国人每天吃两顿饭早晨的早餐和直到晚上七点才吃的晚餐。 (1)until引导时间状语从句,如果主句的谓语动词是延续性的,那么这个主句需用肯定式;若主句的谓语动词是非延续性的,
29、则主句常用否定式,构成not .until结构。(2)在not .until句型结构中,可以把not until提到句首,句子用部分倒装语序。(3)not .until句型的强调句式为:It is/was not until .that .佳句I wont stop shouting until you let me go.你不放我走我就一直叫喊。练透补全句子He didnt_come_home_until midnight.他直到半夜才回家。Not until I have fulfilled my task shall_I_be_able_to_go_to_the_movies.直到完成任
30、务我才能去看电影。写美一句多译他几乎把我撞倒才看见我。He almost knocked me down before_he_saw_me.He didnt_see_me_until he almost knocked me down.Not_until_he_almost_knocked_me_down did he see me.It_was_not_until_he_almost_knocked_me_down that he saw me.维度一品句填词1Mary, a junior (低年级的) student, will graduate next year.2Could you
31、look through this report when you have a spare moment (时刻)?3He started up the engine and the car moved forward (向前)4He gave a fascinating slide (幻灯片) show on climbing in the Himalayas.5The school has recently built a new gym (体育馆)6These plants have a tendency to grow in the more rural (乡村的) areas.7S
32、aturday afternoon is for recreation (消遣) and outings. 8He wrote a very formal (正式的) letter of apology to Douglas.9These styles can be adapted to suit individual tastes.10No liquids are served with meals because they affect digestion. 维度二词形转换1Last week we went to the presentation (present) of a new p
33、lay.2Successful businesses are highly adaptable (adapt) to economic change.3She was always there at half past eight, chatting informally (informal) to the children. 4There will be live entertainment (entertain) at the party.5Keep your digestion(digest) working well by eating plenty of fibre. 维度三固定搭配
34、和句式根据括号内的汉语提示补全下面的句子(每空一词)。1The TV play Legend of Concubine Zhen Huan was adapted from (改编自) a historical novel.2If necessary (如有必要),the patient can then visit his doctor for further advice.3Motor traders are looking forward to (期待着) a further increase in vehicle sales.4Whoever comes up with (想出) the answer to the question in a few minutes is allowed to leave.5These days work plays an important part (扮演着重要的角色) in a single womans life.6The exiles have been cut off (被切断) from all contact with their homeland.