1、高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家单元写作写作五步成文(应用文)2019曲阜师大附中期中假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom在春节期间要到曲阜游玩，同时约你一起去逛三孔(即孔府、孔庙和孔林)。请根据下列要点给他写封电子邮件。要点：1表示欢迎；2接受邀请；3行程安排。注意：1词数80左右；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：孔府the Confucius Mansion；孔庙the Confucius Temple；孔林the Confucius CemeteryDear Tom，_Looking forward to seeing you!Yours，Li H
2、ua步骤一：审题构思分析透彻是前提一、审题1确定体裁：本文为应用文，要求写电子邮件(旅行计划)。2确定人称：本文的主要人称为第一、二人称。3确定时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。二、构思第一段：表示欢迎，接受邀请。第二段：旅行安排(第一天参观孔府和孔庙，然后参观孔林、品尝小吃)。第三段：表达愿望。步骤二：精挑细选核心词汇想周全1more_than_glad非常高兴2express_a_warm_welcome_to. 对表示热烈欢迎3on_the_first_day 第一天4take_pictures 照相5pay_a_visit_to. 参观6far_away_from 离远7enjoy_
3、delicious_local_food 品尝当地美食8have_a_good_time 玩得愉快步骤三：遣词造句由词扩句雏形现1我非常高兴你打算来曲阜参观。(主系表其他成分)Im_very_glad_to_learn_that_you_plan_to_come_to_Qufu_for_a_visit.2我对你表示热烈的欢迎。(主谓宾)I_will_express_a_warm_welcome_to_you.3第一天我们要参观孔府和孔庙。(主谓宾状)Well_visit_the_Confucius_Mansion_and_the_Confucius_Temple_on_the_first_da
4、y.4我们可以拍照并购买礼物。(主谓宾)We_can_take_some_pictures_and_buy_some_gifts.5我们可以乘公共汽车参观孔林。(主谓宾状)We_can_pay_a_visit_to_the_Confucius_Cemetery_by_bus.6它离市中心很远。(主系表其他成分)Its_far_away_from_the_center_of_the_city.7你可以品尝当地的美食。(主谓宾)You_can_enjoy_the_delicious_local_food.步骤四：斟酌打磨句式升级造亮点1用more than升级第1句Im_more_than_gla
5、d_to_learn_that_you_plan_to_come_to_Qufu_for_a_visit.2用where把第3、4句升级为含定语从句的复合句Well_visit_the_Confucius_Mansion_and_the_Confucius_Temple_on_the_first_day,_where_we_can_take_some_pictures_and_buy_some_gifts.3用because把第5、6句升级为含原因状语从句的复合句We_can_pay_a_visit_to_the_Confucius_Cemetery_by_bus_because_its_fa
6、r_away_from_the_center_of_the_city.4用such as丰富第7句You can enjoy the delicious local food, such as jiaozi and smoked tofu.步骤五：连句成文逻辑衔接连成篇(可能会用到for the following days, at the same time等词语)Dear Tom，Im more than glad to learn that you plan to come to Qufu for a visit this Spring Festival. So first I will
7、 express a warm welcome to you and I am willing to be with you.Well visit the Confucius Mansion and the Confucius Temple on the first day, where we can take some pictures and buy some gifts. For the following days, we can pay a visit to the Confucius Cemetery by bus because its far away from the center of the city. At the same time, you can enjoy the delicious local food, such as jiaozi and smoked tofu and do some shopping. I hope you can have a good time in Qufu.Looking forward to seeing you!Yours，Li Hua- 3 - 版权所有高考资源网
