1、2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（2） 含答案 (201*石家庄质检)I am a very active girl in my class. I have many hobby，1._such as writing stories, playing piano and singing English2._songs. My most favorite subject is English. I became3._interested in it when I was very young. My dream is 4._to study abroad. But now I need
2、 to improve my English5._and learn more about west culture as well. I will be6._able to improving the friendship between China and7._the rest of the world. I hoped my dream will come true.8._And I believe in nobody can change my mind. I will work9._harder and follow my heart, no matter how happens！1
3、0._答案与解析：1hobbyhobbiesmany后接复数名词，下文such as后列举的内容也是提示。2piano前加theplay the piano表示“弹钢琴”，是固定搭配。西洋乐器类名词前常用定冠词the。3去掉mostfavorite本身就是“最喜爱的”，因此原句语义重复。45ButSo前后逻辑上是因果而不是转折关系。6westwestern依据语境这里表示“西方文化”，应用形容词western作定语。7improvingimprovebe able to do sth.表示“能够做某事”。8hopedhope这里表示说话人现在的愿望，故应用一般现在时。9去掉inI believ
4、e that.我相信。believe in表示“信任，信仰”，其后不能接从句。10howwhatno matter what happens无论发生什么，what充当从句的主语。*结束如何展开你的文章是英文写作必不可少的一步。如果不了解展开文章的技巧和方法，你的写作可能会是一篇糟糕透顶的、令读者大跌胃口的、不能称之为文章的文章。读完下面的tips，也许你会有所感悟。 I. Writing down ideas As you begin to plan your writing, you may already have some ideas concerned with points you
5、wish to write. Write them down on a sheet of paper or card as they come to you. As you continue to study your subject, be sure to add further ideas and information. Your finished list might look something like this: Topic: The School Library Ideas: 1. a very well designed modern building 2. a large
6、number of useful books 3. bright and quiet reading rooms 4. patient and helpful librarians. II. Building a thesis sentence Having completed your list of ideas, your next step is to build a thesis sentence by organizing those ideas in relation to each other, because while planning writing, you must m
7、ake certain that you have a central idea in your mind. Such a central idea is called a thesis sentence. As a thesis sentence indicates the central idea that you will develop in your paper, you should use only one in the writing. You need not always express a thesis sentence in the paper itself, alth
8、ough you should clearly control the development of any writing that requires one. If you do use such a statement, it had better appear in the very first paragraph. Why? Because it works for the entire writing in the way a topic sentence does in a paragraph. It tells the readers of your paper what th
9、e big idea is-and also helps you keep on track in developing that idea. Take your writing with the topic The School Library for example. From our study of the school library we have got two possible thesis sentences: 1. The library is a nice place to study in. 2. The library plays an important part
10、in both teaching and students study and life. III. Making an outline One useful way of planning a piece of writing is a formal outline. An outline is an organized list of related items of ideas. Some people object to outlining. They believe that preparing a formal outline steals valuable time from a
11、ctual writing and that an outline acts as a brake on the free flow of their ideas. Both objections make some sense. But time spent on an outline will be more than repaid when one begins to write. Also, few of us always think logically. So the final step in organizing your ideas is to make an outline
12、. Take your writing with the topic The School Library for example. Topic: The School Library Thesis: The school library plays an important part in both teaching and students study and life. Outline: 1. There are bright and quiet reading rooms in the library, so students can study and read in them. 2
13、. Students borrow books from the library when they need reference books for their studies. 3. The library provides students with a large number of useful books*结束短文改错（满分10分）下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限
14、一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。例如： It was very nice to get your invitation to spend / weekend with you. Luckily I was the amcompletely free then, so Ill to say “yes”. Ill arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday onevening.In March 1984, Dr John Fellows, who lived in England, and decided to visit hi
15、s married daughterin the USA. He bought a return air ticket to New York and flew Kennedy Airport. When he reached, however, he realized that he had forgotten his daughters address. Worse even, he discovered he cant remember her family name too! Dr Fellows spent several hours at the airport tried to
16、think what his daughters name was and where it was which she lived, but with much luck. Eventually, he decided that he would have to give up his plan to visit her and he caught a next plane back to England. 参考答案 短文改错（满分10分）In March 1984, Dr John Fellows, who lived in England, and decided to visit hi
17、s married daughterin the USA. He bought a return air ticket to New York and flew/ Kennedy Airport. When he toreached, however, he realized that he had forgotten his daughters address. Worse even, he arrived stilldiscovered he cant remember her family name too! Dr Fellows spent several hours at the c
18、ouldnt eitherairport tried to think what his daughters name was and where it was which she lived, but trying thatwith much luck. Eventually, he decided that he would have to give up his plan to visit her and he nocaught a next plane back to England. The*结束高考英语书面表达讲义：教育校园话题作文例3：假如你是李华，是华文中学的学生会主席，为了丰
19、富同学们的业余生活，提高同学们的英语水平，学生会组织了一个English club，请你写封邀请信，邀请同学们参加，内容应包括：1. English club设立的目的2. English club 要开展的活动3. 邀请大家参加 English club注意：开头、结尾已给出;字数80-120; auditorium 礼堂Boys and girls,Im the chairman of Student Union, Li Hua, and I have big news for you. To enrich our life on campus and improve our Englis
20、h, we, Student Union, set up an English club. Obviously, besides study, there are also other things beneficial to us. It is believed that the club can make our campus life colorful and rewarding. There goes the plan.It is arranged that we will see English films in the auditorium on Tuesday evening.
21、Apart from that, there is going to be an English debate or discussion on Saturday evening; yet, the specific topics havent been settled. If you have wonderful ideas and suggestions, please let us know.Ill highly appreciate it if you are actively involved in the club. You will never regret joining us
22、. So, just do it.Student Union*结束 (201*河北部分重点联考)Dear Anish，Here are the information about Manchester University.1._It is about 200 miles far away from London, and it 2._has a very big schoolyard. You can live in the school3._or near the school. They have all sorts of course.4._Im sure you will find
23、one you like it. I know you5._are particular interested in human rights. So I will 6._see that there is anything on their website(网址).7._Ill send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport8._when you arrived. You met him a few years ago, but he 9._has changed a lot since then. Both your aunt or I loo
24、k10._forward to seeing you again.See you soon.Peter答案与解析：1areisinformation是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式。2去掉farfar通常不与表示具体距离的数词连用。34coursecourses根据句中的all sorts of可知，这里要表示的是各种各样的课程，因此应用复数形式。5去掉it“(that) you like”是定语从句，修饰先行词one。在从句中，关系代词that作like的宾语，所以it多余。6particularparticularlyinterested是形容词，应使用副词修饰。7thatif/whether根据上一句中的内容可知这里的意思是看网络上“是否”有相关信息。8meet前加to此处是不定式表示目的。9arrivedarrive如果主句是一般将来时，时间状语从句通常用一般现在时。10orand此处是“both.and.”结构，表示“两者都”。*结束
