1、亮点专题（二）如何写咨询信咨询信是指写信人就某一个问题向收信人征求或征询建议，希望收信人就写信人提出的问题给出针对性的解决方法或提出合理的建议。一、 基本框架1. 开头简单叙述写咨询信的目的或意图，清楚表明要寻求什么样的帮助。2. 主题言明要咨询的具体问题和存在的困难，并请求对方给出一些建议。3. 结尾诚恳地提出希望，表达需要得到帮助的迫切心情并表示感谢。二、 增分必备佳句1.必背模版句型I wonder if you could tell me the information aboutWould you be so kind to tell me the following questio
2、ns:I am writing for the information aboutI am writing to inquire about some details.I would be highly appreciated if you would provide me with detailed information.Would you be so kind to tell me？Id also like to knowBesides,( One more question: ) could you please tell me ifMy last question is whethe
3、rIm writing to tell you some advice on how to form a music band.Nowadays,both traditional and modern music are enjoyed by people in China.For a long time,traditional music has played an important part in people”life.I was at a loss what to do with this situation.I find it really hard to learn Englis
4、h well and I almost lost heart.I would appreciate it if you could give me some precious advice.Im sorry to trouble you,but I feel that I must write you this letter.Would you like to give me some advice on it so that I can make rapid progress?2.必背经典范文以Walker中学三年级学生Will 的名义给总统写一封咨询信内容：这个学期我们班在学习有关白宫的情
5、况，对此我很感兴趣。现想了解以下内容：1.白宫有多少房间2.多少位总统在白宫居住过3. 总统最喜欢的房间4.白宫是否曾经发生过紧急事件5.你的联系方式是（will2011；phone: 12345678）Dear president,（自我介绍）Im Will, a Grade Four student in Walker High School in USA. （写信原因）As we all know,the White House is a famous place in the world. And this semester we are learning something abou
6、t the White House in class and Im interested in it. （写信目的）Im writing to ask for some information about the White House.Would you be so kind to tell methe following questions:how many rooms are there in the White House? How many presidents once lived in the White House?Id also like to knowwhich one i
7、s your favorite room?Besides,(One more question) could you please tell me if any emergencies or accidents have taken place in the White House?Id be grateful if you may email me atwill2011or call me at 12345678, thanks.Looking forward to your early reply.三、实战演练【题目要求】 假如你是李华，你打算与你的朋友组建一个乐队。门基乐队的成功给你了很
8、大的鼓舞。但你和朋友对乐队的名字、主唱、乐器的选择及乐队的类型存在分歧，这让你不知所措，你决定给门基乐队写一封电子邮件，告诉他们你的想法，并征求他们的建议，如何才能使乐队更加成功。注意：可以根据内容要点就某一方面或几个方面的问题征求他们的建议。第一步：审题构思很关键一、 审题1. 确定题材：本文为咨询信2. 确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第一人称3. 确定时态：本文的主要时态应用一般现在时二、 构思开头：自我介绍并提出问题主体：具体描述自己遇到的问题、困难等结尾：再次提出希望，希望对方给自己提出建议第二步：核心词汇想周全1. form a band 组建一个乐队2. Inspire 鼓舞；激励3
9、. Instrument 乐器4. Lead singer 主唱5. Type of music 音乐类型第三步：由词扩句雏形现开头：自我介绍并提出问题1. 我叫李华，我打算与我的另外三个朋友组建一个乐队My name is Li Hua.Im going to/planning to form a band with my other three friends.2. 你们门基乐队的成功给了我们很大的鼓舞，可是，我们以前没有在乐队里待过。Your bands success inspired us greatly. However,we have never been in a band b
10、efore.3. 你能给我们一些建议吗？Can you please give us some advice /suggestions?主体：具体描述自己遇到的问题、困难等。4. 我们都喜欢流行音乐，但是我和我的三个朋友无法决定给乐队取什么名字，谁是主唱以及选择什么样是乐器。My three friends and I like pop music. We cant decide the bands name, the leader singer as well as what instruments we choose.5. 此外，我们该演奏什么样的音乐？我们是该只演奏一种音乐还是各种音乐都
11、尝试一下呢？In addition/Besides,What type of music should we play? Should we only play one kind or try every type of music?6. 你们乐队是如何决定演奏什么的呢？How did your band decide what to play?结尾：再次提出希望，希望对方给自己提出建议。7. 我们真的希望你们能给我们一些建议。We really hope you can give us some advice.第四步：过渡衔接连成篇Dear Monkees,My name is Li Hua
12、.Im going to/planning to form a band with my other three friends. Your bands success inspired us greatly. However,we have never been in a band before.Can you please give us some suggestions?My three friends and I like pop music. We cant decide the bands name, the leader singer as well as what instruments we choose.In addition/Besides,What type of music should we play? Should we only play one kind or try every type of music? How did your band decide what to play?We do hope you can give us some advice. Yours,Li Hua
