1、2014高考英语二轮书面表达基础训练题（1）及答案【天津市蓟县二中2014高考英语模拟试题】写作（满分30分）Michael是一名美国中学生，在学校里选修汉语。他利用暑假到中国进修，希望进一步了解中国文化。有一天，他看到下面有关成语的漫画，不大明白其中的意思。请你用英语把漫画所表达的故事和寓意写成一篇短文，向他解释。注意：1、词数：801202、参考词汇：撞上bump into;锄头 hoe 【参考范文】写作（满分30分）One possible version:Once upon a time there was a farmer who worked hard in the fields
2、every day.One day, while he was ploughing the fields, he heard a bumping sound. He saw a rabbit lying by the trunk. He picked it up and found that it was a fat rabbit. He thought to himself,Since it is so easy to get a rabbit like that, why should I work so hard all daylong?! He threw his hoe away a
3、nd lay by the tree every day, dreaming for more rabbits to come. When he finally realized his foolishness and returned to his fields, he found that all his crops were dead. The story tells us that we should not wait for unexpected gains by trusting chance and luck. Or, we should not hope to get rewa
4、rds without hard work.一、评分原则1本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。2评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3词数少于120和多于150的，从总分中减去2分。4评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点观点正确，态度积极向上，文体不限。三、各档次的给分范围和要求第一档：（2125分）很好地完成了
5、试题规定的任务。对题中所提供的信息进行了恰当的描述，清楚地表达了自己的观点并进行了充分合理的论证。语法结构和词汇选用恰当、丰富。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。第二档：（1620分）较好地完成了试题规定的任务。对题中所提供的信息进行了描述，表达了自己的观点并进行了论证。应用的语法结构和词汇能基本满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。第三档：（1115分）基本完成了试题规定的任务。能描述题目
6、中的信息，表达了自己的观点并尝试进行论证。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。第四档；（610分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。能涉及到题目所提供的信息，体现了对问题的看法及其原因。语法结构单调，词汇知识有限。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第五档：（15分）未完成试题规定的任务很少涉及题目中所提供的信息，个人观点表达不清，而且没有阐述原因。语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理
7、解。缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。0分信息未能传达给读者。未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；所写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法辨认。【2014高考英语马鞍山市质量检测】书面表达（满分25分） 假如你是某英文杂志负责“与读者对话”栏目的编辑。请根据下面这封读者来信写一封回信，帮助解决读者来信中提出的问题。注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数； 3. 可根据要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。Dear Editor,I am going to take the college entrance examination soon. I have to
8、work harder and harder to prepare for it so that I could enter a good college. However, its hard for me to understand what my teachers say in class. Though I tell myself again and again I should hold on, I have little confidence in myself. What should I do now?Best wishes, Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Li Hua,Th
9、ank you for your letter. As for the entrance exams, you have come too far and worked too hard to quit now. There are only a few months left until the exams so you can make a final push to get the best result you can. I have some tips for you and I hope they are helpful.The first thing you should do
10、is to make a good study plan. If you follow the plan and concentrate on what youre doing, it helps you study effectively. Besides, dont forget to include at least three hours of exercise each week to keep your mind sharp.Whats more, make the most out of class. Preview lessons before the class and it
11、 helps you follow the teachers in class and have a good knowledge of what is important but difficult. Do review what is done wrong and learn lessons from mistakes.Above all, building up confidence is essential to success. Only when you believe in yourself, can you keep up your spirits and be success
12、ful.Now, take some time to be with your family and enjoy yourself for Spring Festival, then get to work.Best wishes, Editor【2014高考英语南京市、盐城市一模】书面表达（满分25分）81.请阅读下面背景材料，并根据问题，用英文写一篇短文向学校英文报投稿。In China, an online shopping festival falls on November 11 when millions of Chinese shoppers go to T and T. In
13、2012, Tmall and Taobao together made 19.1 billion in sales on that day. However, in 2013, the shopping festival kicked off with an even stronger start sales hit 100 millionyuan55 seconds after midnight and reached 35 billion at the end of the day. This is just one of many companies that did business
14、 on that day.What does this material reflect？What is behind the phenomenon? And what is your comment or advice on it?注意：1.词数150左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。2.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。3.参考词汇：理性的rationalWith the swift development of the Internet, 【参考范文】A possible version:With the swift development of the Internet, we ca
15、n see online shopping has become a new trend in our daily life.There are several factors behind this phenomenon. First of all, it is very convenient for people to purchase what they want or like with the Internet easily accessible via computers or cellphones. Second, people shopping online have more
16、 choices of goods than they do in real shops and are able to save time as well. Third, the relatively low prices on the Internet also account for higher sales online.In my opinion, as the pace of life quickens, it is natural for people to choose online shopping to save time and energy. Butwhen we en
17、joy the convenience it brings us,we should be careful because sometimes the quality of goods cannot be guaranteed. Furthermore, wed better stay rational and just buy what we really need, otherwise it would cause a waste of money and resources. (150 words)【山东省济宁市重点中学高三上学期期中】书面表达假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方
18、举办，现在正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信，内容应包括：个人情况：年龄、性别、学历个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况承诺：提供最佳服务注意：词数120-150左右，开头语已为你写好；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。生词：申请apply (v.), application (n.)；志愿者volunteerDear Sir/Madam,My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. _【参考范文】Dear Sir/Ma
19、dam,My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.I am a girl of 18. As a college student, I have a keen interest in sports and I have always been looking forward to the Games to be held here.With the great fluency in English and the burning passion for sports, I
20、suppose I am qualified to be a volunteer for the Games. Besides, I have a good communicative competence and I am considered to be an outgoing, reliable and helpful person at college. Whats more, I am familiar with the local conditions. I promise I will offer the best service to whoever participates
21、in the Games. Now I formally apply for the job and I sincerely hope I can be accepted. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 【浙江省宁波市高三“十校联考”考试】书面表达（满分30分）据报道， 大量农民工骑摩托车回家乡过兔年。春节前十天经过广东肇庆境内的摩托车日流量在一万以上。请根据这一消息，以 “Peasant Workers Go to Hometown by Motorcycle”为题用英语按以下要点写一篇100120 字的短文。1. 描述以上有关农民工骑摩托车回家过年的信息。2. 分析原因
22、（如：火车票贵；日夜排队买票；）。 3. 简短评论。注意：短文的标题已给出（不计词数）。(提示： 肇庆 Zhaoqing) “Peasant Workers Go to Hometown by Motorcycle”_【参考范文】A possible version. Peasant Workers Go to Hometown by MotorcycleIt is reported that a large number of peasant workers choose to ride motorcycles a long way to spend the Rabbit Year at h
23、ome. During the ten days before the Spring Festival, more than ten thousand motorcycles pass Zhaoqing, Guangdong Province each day. There are reasons for this phenomenon. Firstly, the ticket prices are too high for the peasant workers with very low incomes. Secondly, to get the tickets they have to stand in line day and night. Another reason is that its more convenient. Riding motorbikes, its up to them to decide the time and the route of their journey. I hope the government should ensure the safety of the peasant workers and take measures to solve this problem. (120 words)
