1、原则5 吃透八大应用文写作题型 之道歉信&求助信&电子邮件 专家说考情高考新考法学霸好声音 全国卷 3 套卷 3 年来考查过道歉信、求助信和电子邮件；2020 年全国卷考查求助信。2020 年全国卷求助外教 Miss Evans 帮忙指导改编一个短剧，体现对文艺的重视。1.会运用道歉信、求助信、电子邮件等的表达；2一定要言之有艺秀文采。学写考场满分作文2020全国卷假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教 Miss Evans 写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：1剧情简介；2指导内容；3商定时间地点。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2结束语已为你写好。_Im looking
2、forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua满分作文第一步：“五定”审题“三段”谋篇定体裁定人称 定时态定要点、定结构 第 一 段 开篇点题点 明 写 信 目 的请求帮助根据英语课文改编一个短剧第二段(3个 要 点 缺 一不可)1.剧情简介；2.指导内容；3.商定时间地点求助信第一人称一般现在时三段谋篇第三段(巧妙收尾)表达期待满分作文第二步：斟酌词句 设计亮点1我写信是想请您指导一部根据我们的一篇文章改编短剧。(高频词汇定语从句被动语态)_2它讲述了一个名叫黛西的女孩的故事，她和一些野生动物交谈，并下定决心帮助保护环境。(非谓语动词作定语定语从句)_Im writin
3、g to ask for your guidance on a short play,which is adapted from one of our texts.It tells a story about a girl named Daisy,who talks with some wild animals and makes up her mind to help protect the environment.3如果您方便的话，我们可以在本周日早上 8 点在我们学校的艺术大厅见面吗？高频词汇：Could we meet in our school art hall at 8：00 am
4、 this Sunday _高级句式(if 条件状语从句)Could we meet in our school art hall at 8：00 am this Sunday _4我们真诚地希望你们能帮我们这个忙，帮助我们提高成绩。(词 汇 不 重，彰 显 水 准)We sincerely hope you can _at your earliest convenience？if it is convenient for you?do us a favor and help improve our performance.满分作文第三步：巧妙过渡 完美成篇_ Dear Miss Evans，
5、Im writing to ask for your guidance on a short play,which is adapted from one of our texts.The text we have chosen is titled“Wildlife Protection”.It tells a story about a girl named Daisy,who talks with some wild animals and makes up her mind to help protect the environment.We need you to give us so
6、me expert guidance on dialogue between characters,body-action,plot,setting,and so on.Could we meet in our school art hall at 8：00 am this Sunday if it is convenient for you?We sincerely hope you can do us this favor and help improve our performance.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua3 组不可不
7、记的书信类万用句式道歉信一、写作架构要规范道歉信通常包括以下三个部分：1.向对方表示歉意；2.说明道歉的原因，对失误或错误进行解释(一般要求考生自由发挥)；3.提出补救措施，请求原谅。其结构通常为：二、亮点句式背一番1吸引阅卷人开头句(1)Im writing to apologize to you because Im unable to go to the bookstore with you as planned/at the appointed time.我写信是为了向你道歉，因为我不能按约定/在约定时间和你一起去书店。(2)I really want to accept your i
8、nvitation and take this opportunity to introduce the traditional Chinese painting to foreign friends,but Im sorry to tell you that I cant because I am occupied preparing a performance for the coming National Day.我真的很想接受您的邀请，并借此机会向外国朋友介绍中国传统绘画，但我很遗憾地告诉您，我不能参加，因为我忙于为即将到来的国庆节准备表演节目。(3)I would like to o
9、ffer my apology for not being able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday.非常抱歉本周六不能教你制作中国结了。2吸引阅卷人篇中句(1)The reason why I wont be available at that time is that my grandfather fell ill suddenly yesterday and my family are taking turns to take care of him in the hospital.So I have to stay wi
10、th him that day.我那时没空的原因是我爷爷昨天突然生病了，我的家人正在医院轮流照顾他。所以那天我不得不陪着他。(2)I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon.I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.我刚发现那天下午我要参加一个重要的班会。我希望这次更换不会给您带来太多麻烦。3吸引阅卷人结尾句(1)Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my ab
11、sence.对于我的缺席给您带来的不便，我再次表示歉意。(2)Im awfully sorry for the sudden change of the plan.And Im wondering whether it is OK if we go to the exhibition next Saturdaymorning.计划突然改变，我感到非常抱歉。我想知道我们下周六上午去看展览是否可以。求助信一、写作架构要规范求助信是针对自己目前遇到的困难写信请求对方给予帮助的信件类型，因此整篇文章应用一般现在时，其结构通常为：二、亮点句式背一番1吸引阅卷人开头句(1)The reason why I
12、 am writing to you is that I quarreled with my friend Lucy and I need your help now.我给你写信的原因是我和我的朋友露西吵架了，我现在需要你的帮助。(2)Would you please do me a favour?你能帮我一个忙吗？2吸引阅卷人篇中句(1)I have just completed my application letter and resume.However,Im not quite sure of the language and the format Ive used.Im wonde
13、ring if you could spare some precious time to go through them and make necessary changes.我刚刚完成了我的求职信和个人简历。然而，我不太确定我使用的语言和格式。我想知道你是否能抽出一些宝贵的时间来看看，并做出必要的修改。(2)Would you please pick up my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the US?Thank you in advance.你能到机场接我
14、叔叔并把他送到旅馆吗？因为这是他第一次来美国。提前谢谢你。(3)Im wondering if you could give me some practical advice as I know youve organized similar activities.我想知道你是否能给我一些实用的建议，因为我知道你也组织过类似的活动。3吸引阅卷人结尾句(1)I would appreciate it if you could do me a favour and spare some time to polish my application letter and resume.如果您能帮我一个
15、忙，抽出时间来润色我的求职信和简历，我将不胜感激。(2)Im eager for your timely help./Im eager to get your timely help.我渴望得到你及时的帮助。电子邮件一、写作架构要规范英文电子邮件和普通书信的写法和格式大体相同，具体写作结构为：二、亮点句式背一番1吸引阅卷人开头句(1)I am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two days ago.我很高兴收到你两天前寄给我的信。(2)Im glad to hear from you and Id like to share
16、 my experience of helping my parents do housework.很高兴收到你的来信，我想和你分享我帮助父母做家务的经验。2吸引阅卷人篇中句(1)If necessary,we can arrange a face-to-face discussion sometime this week.如果有必要，本周我们可以找个时间安排一次面谈。(2)Of all the courses,I like Chinese Painting best because it helps us experience the inner harmony of man and nat
17、ure and taste the beauty of Chinese culture.在所有的课程中，我最喜欢国画，因为它让我们体会到人与自然的内在和谐，品味中国文化之美。3吸引阅卷人结尾句(1)Id appreciate it if you could make a response at your earliest convenience.如果您能在方便时尽早回信，我将非常感激。(2)Looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.盼望能尽快收到你的回信。考场练兵 检验考试能力Writing 1 道歉信2020佛山市教学质量
18、检测(二)假定你是李华，原定今年 6 月去纽约旅游并约定探访朋友 Taylor，现因故推迟。请你给 Taylor 写信，包含以下要点：1写信目的；2推迟的原因；3告知新计划。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_参考范文：Dear Taylor，How are things going with you these days?Im sorry to tell you that I cant make it to New York and visit you in June as previously scheduled.I suppose everybody aro
19、und the world has been somehow affected by Covid-19,and Im no exception.The greatest influence on me is that the college entrance exam this year in China has been postponed to July.As a result,my summer vacation wont begin until mid-July and I have to reschedule my trip to your city.If the virus is
20、under control soon,I will go and see you in January,during my first college winter vocation.I wish it would be convenient for you to meet me then.Please stay safe and stay in contact.Yours，Li HuaWriting 2 求助信2020江淮十校高三第三次联考假定你是李华，你正在为高考紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题以至学习低效。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师 Charlie 写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：1写信
21、意图；2存在问题；3希望得到帮助。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。_参考范文：Dear Charlie，I am Li Hua,a Senior 3 student.Lately,Ive been busy preparing for my College Entrance Exam,but unluckily I find it quite hard to be concentrated.So Im writing to you for guidance.Im faced with some problems which trouble me a lot.Fi
22、rst,I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports.Moreover,the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressful because I dont want to let them down，What troubles me most is that its difficult for me to enjoy a sound sleep every nigh
23、t.I wonder if you can help me with those difficulties.Your precious advice will be much appreciated.Yours sincerely，Li HuaWriting 3 电子邮件2020河北衡水中学模拟假定你是李华，你市将举办留学生汉语演讲比赛，主题为“我眼中的中国”(China in my eyes)。请给在你校留学的 Jonah 写一封电子邮件。内容包括：1演讲主题；2比赛时间和地点；3邀请他代表你校参加。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_参考范文：Dear Jona
24、h，Knowing that you show interest in Chinese culture,I am glad to share with you a piece of good news,which is related to a Chinese speech contest designed for exchange students in our city.The contest,whose theme is“China in my eyes”，will be beld in the City Library on May 18th,2020.Whats known to u
25、s is that you have made great progress in learning Chinese，so could you take part in this activity as a repre-sentative of our school?Not only will you learn more about China and its culture from the contest,but you can make your life more interesting and colorful.Looking forward to your early reply!Yours，Li Hua
