1、Section_Writing_投诉信一、基本结构投诉信一般分为三个部分：第一段：点明写作意图。第二段：表述投诉的原因。第三段：提出具体要求。二、增分佳句(一)投诉信的开头常用句式点明意图1I am writing to you to complain about .我给你写信是为了投诉2I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with .我写此信以表达我对的不满。(二)投诉信的主体常用句式表述原因1. There are some problems with my flat that I wish to bring your attention
2、to.我的房间有些问题，希望能引起你的注意。2I can hardly bear/tolerate/put up with it any more.我几乎不能再忍受它了。3. Im afraid I have a complaint to make.恐怕我要提点意见。4Thats not what I had in mind.我想要的可不是这个。5Its not what I hoped for.我期待的可不是这样的。6That leaves a lot to be desired.太不让人满意了。7That doesnt quite suit me.这个对我来说不是很合适。8Im not a
3、t all satisfied with the surrounding here.我一点也不满意这儿的环境。9Im really very annoyed about it.我对此事真是很生气。(三)投诉信的结尾常用句式具体要求1. I hope that you will consider my suggestions and improve the situation as best as you can.我希望你能考虑我的建议并尽你所能改善这种局面。2. I hope that you will take this matter seriously and make an effort
4、 to prevent the recurrence of this kind.我希望你能认真对待此事并努力防止此类事件的再次发生。3I hope you can give me a satisfying reply and deal with this matter reasonably.我希望你能给我一个满意的答复并合理处理此事。4I must warn you that unless you do something about the situation, or I will be forced to take legal action.我必须警告你，除非你尽力改善这种局面，否则迫不得
5、已我会采取法律行动。5I will appreciate your willingness to make up for the loss.如果你愿意弥补损失，我将不胜感激。题目要求假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示向国际野生动物组织写一封投诉信，反映非法捕猎海洋生物的现象。1非法捕猎越来越严重；2由于在全世界鲸鱼成为非法捕猎的对象，五年来它的数目在急剧减少；3我们曾经毁掉森林，带来了干旱和洪水；如果非法捕猎海洋生物得不到阻止，我们将失掉家园。注意：可根据要求，适当拓展，使情节连贯。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为投诉信；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第一、二人称；3确定时态：主要
6、使用一般现在时。 二、构思第一部分，点明意图海洋非法捕猎严重，鲸鱼数目锐减。第二部分，表述原因保护海洋的重要性。第三部分，具体要求认真对待，防止再次发生。第二步：核心词汇想周全1complain 抱怨2the_illegal_hunt 非法捕猎3creature 生物4witness 见证；目睹5target 目标；靶子6be/become_aware_of 意识到的7consider 考虑8stop/prevent 阻止；防止 第三步：由词扩句雏形现1在过去的五年中鲸鱼的数目急剧减少。The number of the whale has_sharply_decreased in the p
7、ast five years.2在全世界鲸鱼成为非法捕猎的主要目标。The whale has_been_the_main_target_of_the_illegal_hunt_in the whole world.(target n)The whale has_been_targeted_by_the_illegal_hunt in the whole world.(target v)3一旦生态平衡遭到破坏，我们将遭受很多灾难。Once the balance of nature is_destroyed,_we will suffer a lot.4曾经有段时间我们没有意识到植物的重要性。
8、It_was_a_time_when_we_were_not_aware_of the importance of plants.5干旱和洪水同时到来。Drought and flood went_hand_in_hand. 6如果我们不阻止非法海洋捕捞，我们将失去我们的家园。If we did_not_stop the illegal hunt in the ocean, we would_lose_our_home. 第四步：句式升级造亮点1用witness改写句1The_past_five_years_has_witnessed_the_sharp_decrease_of_the_wha
9、le.2用独立主格结构改写句3The_balance_of_nature_destroyed,_we_will_suffer_a_lot.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Dear_Sir_or_Madam，I_am_writing_to_complain_that_the_illegal_hunt_for_ocean_creatures_is_becoming_bad_to_worse,_as_a_result,_the_past_five_years_has_witnessed_the_sharp_decrease_of_the_whale_because_it_has_been_the_main_t
10、arget_of_the_illegal_hunt_in_the_whole_world.The_balance_of_nature_destroyed,_we_will_suffer_a_lot._It_was_a_time_when_we_were_not_aware_of_the_importance_of_plants,_and_then_drought_and_flood_went_hand_in_hand._If_we_did_not_stop_the_illegal_hunt_in_the_ocean,_we_would_lose_our_home.We_trust_that_you_will_now_consider_this_matter_seriously_and_make_an_effort_to_prevent_the_recurrence_of_this_kind.Yours，Li_Hua
