1、二 高考必须掌握的3类写作体裁分类推进 各有妙招1.高考应用文写作高分技巧型一 邀请信【典例研析】假定你是李华,你校将举办外国人汉语演讲比赛。请给你的英国朋友George写一封邮件邀请他参加,内容包括:1.比赛时间和地点;2.演讲主题;3.报名方式。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。练考场审题Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局人称第一人称(I)为主,第二人称(you)为辅时态一般现在时,一般将来时段落布局开头:点明写信目的、比赛时间和地点主体段落:此次活动的主题并邀请他参加此次活动结尾:再一次真诚地邀请Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉(1)美词:privilege,part
2、icipate in,undoubtedly,profound,more than,stunning(2)佳句:The theme of the upcoming speech contest is British Culture which we sincerely expect to listen to from a native of Britain.Undoubtedly,your fluent Chinese,excellent public speaking skills,and especially profound knowledge will not fail to impr
3、ess and inspire the audience.Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花要点1:很高兴邀请你参加2021年3月1日在我校举办的外国人汉语演讲比赛。一般表达:I am glad to invite you to take part in the Chinese Speech Contest for foreigners at my school on March 1st,2021.词汇或句式升级:(高级词汇)It is a great _ for me to invite you to _ in the Chinese Speech Contest for foreigners
4、 at my school on March 1st,2021.privilegeparticipate要点2:你的演讲肯定会给观众留下深刻的印象。一般表达:Your speech will leave a deep impression on the listeners.升级表达:(丰富内容,双重否定)无疑,你流利的汉语,精湛的演讲技能,以及广博的知识肯定会给听众留下很深的印象并激励他们。_,your fluent Chinese,excellent public speaking skills,and _will not fail to impress and inspire the au
5、dience.Undoubtedlyespecially profound knowledgeStep 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇Dear George,It is a great privilege for me to invite you to participate in the Chinese Speech Contest for foreigners at my school on March 1st,2021.The theme of the upcoming speech contest is British Culture which we sincerely expect to
6、listen to from a native of Britain.Undoubtedly,your fluent Chinese,excellent public speaking skills,and especially profound knowledge will not fail to impress and inspire the audience.If you accept our invitation,we will be more than pleased to welcome you to register at the Student Organization Off
7、ice.We are looking forward to your stunning performance.Yours,Li Hua【仿写再借鉴】(2021临沂模拟)假定你是李华,下周你的家乡将举办一场红色旅游文化展,你打算邀请留学生Alex参加,请根据以下提示写一封邀请信。1.文化展的时间:下周六、周日;2.文化展的地点:人民广场;3.文化展的活动。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:红色旅游red tourism_【参考范文】Dear Alex,Next Saturday and Sunday,a red tourism culture exhibit
8、ion will be held at the Peoples Square.Knowing you are interested in it,Im writing to invite you to attend with us.This exhibition will show you some revolutionary tourist attractions of our hometown,which can help you learn about some Chinese revolutionary history and culture.Not only can you appre
9、ciate the fantastic pictures but also youll be moved by the spirits of the Chinese historical heroes.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua型二 建议信【典例研析】(2018全国卷改编)假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件。内容包括:1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。练考场审题Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局类型建议信人
10、称第二人称(you)时态一般现在时要点欢迎到中国做客,愿意提供建议到访(朋友家)时间合适的礼物餐桌礼仪Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉(1)美词:the time to arrive,the appointed time,the suitable presents,table manners.(2)佳句:I am very glad to hear that you will come to China for a visit.Its my pleasure to offer you some advice on the Chinese customs about visiting.Step
11、3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花要点1:得知你要来中国朋友家做客,真是太好了。一般表达:_.很高兴得知你要来中国朋友家做客,并且想了解有关访友的中国习俗。(增加细节)Its so great to hear youre invited to a Chinese friends home and _.Its great to hear youre invited to a Chinese friends homewant to know theChinese customs about visiting很荣幸可以与你分享我的经历和介绍相关的中国风俗与传统。(高级句型)_ and introduce the
12、 relevant Chinese customs and tradition to you.It is a great honor to share my experience要点2:首先,到达时间要准时或稍微早一点。一般表达:_.首先,比约定时间早到5至10分钟比较好,准时到达也可以。(高级句型)_but it is fine on time.Firstly,make sure to arrive on time,or a bit earlierFirstly,it is better to arrive 5 or 10 minutes earlier before the appoint
13、ed time要点3:希望你在中国玩得愉快。I hope you can _.enjoy your stay in ChinaStep 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇Dear Terry,Its so great to hear youre invited to a Chinese friends home and want to know something about Chinese customs.Firstly,it is better to arrive 5 or 10 minutes earlier before the appointed time but it is fine on t
14、ime.If youd like to bring a gift,fruit is usually a good choice.At the dinner table,it is appropriate to wait for the elderly people in the family to start eating.But if they insist that you start first,just go ahead.Sometimes the host offers guests more food than they need.In that case,its OK to le
15、t them know you are full.I hope you can enjoy your stay in China.Yours,Li Hua【仿写再借鉴】假定你是李华,你们学校负责英语角的外教老师要为学生们购买一些英语方面的书籍,现在征集学生们的意见。请写一封信提出自己的建议,内容主要包括:1.写信的目的;2.个人建议及理由;3.希望建议被采纳。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.信的开头已为你写好。Dear teachers,Im Li Hua,a student in our school.Knowing that the teacher in c
16、harge of our school English corner wants to buy us some books about English,_【参考范文】Dear teachers,Im Li Hua,a student in our school.Knowing that the teacher in charge of our school English corner wants to buy us some books about English,I am writing to express my opinions about what books you should
17、buy.First of all,interest is most important for learning English,so the books should be interesting.Second,many students English is poor so you should buy some English books including simple English words and sentences.Last,you should buy some classic English novels so that the students can enjoy th
18、e beauty of real English.I hope you can take my suggestions into consideration.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua型三 道歉信【典例研析】(2016全国卷改编)假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.表示歉意;2.说明原因;3.另约时间。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。练考场审题Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局人称I(Li Hua),You(Bob)
19、时态一般现在时,一般将来时段落布局开头点题:点明写作目的,并表达歉意主体段落:说明致歉的原因结尾:再次致歉,并另约时间Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉(1)美词:express my heartfelt apology;represent our school to do;available;as a result(2)佳句:I cant go with you as planned.Im writing to express my heartfelt apology to you.How about going to the bookstore this Sunday.Step 3:斟酌词句
20、 妙笔生花要点1:我很抱歉无法跟你一起去书店。一般表达:_ 句式升级(高级词汇,名词性从句,分词作状语)我诚挚地向你道歉,这周五不能按计划和你去书店了。I have to express my heartfelt apology to you _.Im sorry that I cant go with you to the bookstore.that I cant go with you to thebookstore this Friday as planned要点2:我入选代表我校参加英语辩论赛。一般表达:Im chosen to _ to take part in the Engli
21、sh debate competition.句式升级(定语从句,for引导的并列句)我入选代表我校参加英语辩论赛,这对我非常重要,因为我一直梦想有这样的机会代表我校参赛,展示我们的实力。Im chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition,_,for I have been dreaming of having such a chance to show our strength _.represent our schoolwhich is of great importance to
22、meon behalf of my school要点3:这个周日去书店如何?那时你是否有时间呢?一般表达:How about _this Sunday?Will you be available then?句式升级(高级词汇,意趣盎然)Would _if we _this Sunday?going to the bookstoreit be convenient for yougo to the bookstoreStep 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇Dear Bob,How are you doing?Im indeed very sorry that I cant go to the books
23、tore with you this Friday as planned.How I wish I could go with you!However,Im chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition,which is of great importance to me,for I have been dreaming of having such a chance to show our strength on behalf of my school.As a result,I h
24、ave to miss our appointment.Please accept my sincere apology from the bottom of my heart.Would it be convenient for you if we go to the bookstore this Sunday?Yours,Li Hua【仿写再借鉴】假定你是李华,因故不能参加外教Mr Thomson明天下午开设的关于“英国文学简史”的讲座,请给他写一封邮件。要点如下:1.表达歉意;2.解释原因;3.询问能否提供相关资料。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】
25、Dear Mr Thomson,Im writing to apologize to you for not being able to attend your lecture tomorrow afternoon,which is on the brief history of English literature.Due to a sudden illness falling upon me a few days ago,I have been in hospital with a continuous fever so far,preventing me from any activit
26、y.However,I am keenly interested in what you will talk about.Accordingly,I would really appreciate it if you could offer me some relevant materials of the lecture.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and wish your lecture a great success.Yours,Li Hua型四 感谢信【典例研析】(2019浙江高考)假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语
27、的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请你写一封邮件,内容包括:1.表示感谢;2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;3.临别祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。练考场审题Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局人称I(Li Hua),You(Alex)时态一般过去时,一般现在时段落布局开头点题:点明写作目的,感谢对方帮助主体段落:具体指出曾经的帮助结尾:再次表达感谢,给出临别祝愿Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉(1)美词:have difficulty in,under your patient guidance,not only.but also.,generous(2)佳句:I can
28、 well remember there was a time when I had difficulty in learning English.It is you who taught me how to learn English well.Not only did you help improve my English,but also gave me more confidence in learning.Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花要点1:你教给我如何学英语。一般表达:You _to learn English.句式升级(强调句)是你教给我如何学英语。_taught me ho
29、w to learn English.taught me howIt is you who要点2:你帮助我提高了英语并且给了我更多学习的自信。一般表达:You _and gave me more confidence in learning.句式升级(倒装句)你不但帮助我提高了英语,并且给了我更多学习的自信。_,but also gave me more confidence in learning.helped improve my EnglishNot only did you help improve my EnglishStep 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇Dear Alex,Ive hea
30、rd that youre leaving China soon,so Im writing to express my sincere blessing and thanks.I can well remember there was a time when I had difficulty in learning English.It is you who taught me how to learn English.Under your patient guidance,I gradually made progress and began interested in English.N
31、ot only did you help improve my English,but also gave me more confidence in learning.Thanks again for your generous help.Wish you a pleasant journey home.Yours,Li Hua【仿写再借鉴】假设你是李华,梁教授去年六月推荐你去悉尼大学深造,现在你已经被悉尼大学化学学院录取,请写一封信向梁教授表示感谢。内容包括:1.表示感谢;2.感谢原因;3.如何回报。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Prof
32、essor Liang,I am writing to extend my gratitude to you because with your help I am now a student of Chemistry Department of Sydney University.Last June,when I applied to become a graduate student of Sydney University,you really gave me a lot of valuable help.Not only did you write commendation for m
33、e to Professor Wells who works in the Sydney University,but also gave me careful and patient instructions on how to fill the application forms and write the application letters.Thanks again for your generous help.For the following two years I will study hard to reciprocate your sincere help and expe
34、ctations with excellent grades.Yours,Li Hua型五 申请信【典例研析】(2019全国卷改编)假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。练考场审题Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局人称I(Li Hua),Sir/Madam时态一般现在时,一般将来时段落布局开头点题:问候并说明写信的原因及目的主体段落:分两点阐述为什么申请做志愿者:个人优势;能做的事情结尾:衷心的祝愿Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉(1)美
35、词:apply for position,be qualified for,as follows,specific introduction,furthermore,share.with.(2)佳句:Hearing the Chinese painting exhibition is to be held,Im writing this letter to apply for a volunteer position.The reasons why Im qualified for the job are as follows.Furthermore,I can speak fluent Ch
36、inese and English at the same time,making it no problem for me to help visitors from all over the world.If Im chosen to be a volunteer,I would be able to help the visitors understand the paintings and share the history behind those Chinese paintings with them.Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花要点1:我有一些胜任这份工作的原因。一般表达:I
37、 have some reasons _.句式升级(定语从句)我胜任这份工作的原因如下。_the job are as follows.to be qualified for the jobThe reasons why Im qualified for要点2:如果你们给我这份工作,我将尽最大努力去帮助参观者。一般表达:_,I will do my best to help the visitors.句式升级(被动语态,虚拟语气)如果我能当选成为一名志愿者,我有能力去帮助参观者理解绘画作品,并与他们分享那些中国画背后的历史。_ help the visitors understand the
38、paintings and share the history behind those Chinese paintings with them.If you give me this jobIf Im chosen to be a volunteer,I would be able toStep 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇Dear Sir/Madam,Im Li Hua,a Chinese student having education in London now.Hearing the Chinese painting exhibition is to be held,Im writing
39、this letter to apply for a volunteer position.The reasons why Im qualified for the job are as follows.Firstly,I have had an interest in Chinese painting ever since I was a child.Therefore,I am familiar with this art form and can give very specific introduction to the visitors.Furthermore,I can speak
40、 fluent Chinese and English at the same time,making it no problem for me to help visitors from all over the world.If Im chosen to be a volunteer,I would be able to help the visitors understand the paintings and share the history behind those Chinese paintings with them.Hope to hear from you soon!You
41、rs,Li Hua【仿写再借鉴】假定你是李华,得知加拿大“中国文化年”组委会正在中国招募志愿者,你对此很感兴趣。请写一封邮件应征,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.可以做的事情。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.信件的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。Dear Sir/Madam,Im Li Hua,a senior student from China._Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam,Im Li Hua,a senior student from
42、China.Knowing you are wanting some volunteers for“The Year of Chinese Culture”,Im writing to apply for the position.There are many reasons why I am fit for the position.First,Im familiar with Chinese culture,which is a must for this event.Besides I have been learning English for 9 years with a good
43、command of spoken and written English.Therefore,I am able to help foreigners learn about Chinese culture well.More importantly,I am outspoken and always ready to help others.In my spare time,I often offer my service to some events as a volunteer.If chosen,I would dedicate all my energy and wisdom to
44、 the event.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua型六 告知信【典例研析】(2020天津高考改编)假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动,你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件,介绍相关情况,内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像等);(2)对活动的感受;(3)对自己未来的展望。注意:(1)词数80左右;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:成人礼 the coming-of-age ceremo
45、ny新冠肺炎COVID-19Dear Chris,Im so glad to hear from you._Yours,Li Jin练考场审题Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局人称I(Li Jin),You(Chris)时态一般现在时,一般过去时段落布局开头点题:写信目的是介绍成人礼主体段落:成人礼活动内容及感受结尾:期待Chris回信Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉(1)美词:be scheduled on,review,accompany,are determined to do(2)佳句:We are all deeply moved by the ceremony,from which w
46、e realize that the sense of responsibility always accompanies the process of our growth.Such is my understanding about growing up.Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花要点1:这次的成人礼仪式深深地打动了我们,并且我们从中意识到了责任感始终伴随着我们的成长过程。一般表达:We are all deeply moved by the ceremony and we realize that the sense of responsibility always accompa
47、nies the process of our growth from it.句式升级(定语从句)We are all deeply moved by the ceremony,_.from which we realize that the sense ofresponsibility always accompanies the process of our growth要点2:我明白了成长的意义。一般表达:I have understood the meaning of growing up.句式升级(倒装句)这就是我对成长的理解。_ Such is my understanding a
48、bout growing up.Step 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇Dear Chris,Im so glad to hear from you.In your last letter,you showed great interest in the coming-of-age ceremony held in our school.The following is a brief introduction to the ceremony.The ceremony was scheduled on June 8,during which we reviewed the past events an
49、d watched some videos about the heroic deeds of our schoolmates in the battle against COVID-19.We are all deeply moved by the ceremony,from which we realize that the sense of responsibility always accompanies the process of our growth.We are determined to follow the examples of our excellent schoolm
50、ates and make ourselves useful to the whole society.Such is my understanding about growing up.What about yours?Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin【仿写再借鉴】假定你是李华,你的加拿大朋友Peter打算来你校做交换生,发来信件询问有关情况。请给他回一封邮件,内容包括:1.师生情况;2.校园情况;3.课余活动。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Peter,Im so pleased to
51、learn that you intend to come to our school as an exchange student.There is something you may be interested in.First of all,our school is staffed by excellent teachers.They do what they can to make lessons lively and interesting.The students take an active part in the debates in class.Second,the sch
52、ool is like a beautiful garden where every student has the consciousness of keeping it clean and tidy.As for after-class activities,there are various kinds of them,such as drawing and playing basketball.Im looking forward to seeing you soon.Yours,Li Hua型七 咨询信【典例研析】假定你是李华,打算今年暑假去美国旅游。请你给Travel Americ
53、a国际旅行社写一封电子邮件进行咨询,内容如下:1.请其推荐合适的旅游路线;2.请其告知相关的旅游费用。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Sir/Madam,_Yours,Li Hua练考场审题Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局人称第一人称(I),第二人称(you)时态一般现在时段落布局开头点题:说明写信目的主体段落:说明需要咨询的内容结尾:期待对方的回信Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉(1)美词:inquire,recommend,in addition,intend,appreciate(2)佳句:I intend to stay in America for
54、about 10 days,during which I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs.In addition,Id like to know the prices of the routes,covering all the traveling expenses.Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花要点1:我打算在美国住10天左右,希望能看一看那些独特的自然风景,品味一下当地的风俗。一般表达:I _,and I hope to have a look at
55、some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs.句式升级(定语从句)I intend to stay in America for about 10 days,_I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs.intend to stay in America for about 10 daysduring which要点2:除此之外,我想了解包括所有旅行费用的路线的价格。一般表达:In add
56、ition,Id like to know the prices of the routes,and all the traveling expenses.句式升级(分词短语作定语)In addition,Id like to know the prices of the routes,_.covering all the travelingexpensesStep 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇Dear Sir/Madam,Im planning to travel to the USA in the coming July.Therefore,Im writing to inquire about
57、 travel routes of your agency.I intend to stay in America for about 10 days,during which I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs.So,could you please recommend some suitable travel routes?In addition,Id like to know the prices of the routes,covering all
58、the traveling expenses.A reply at your earliest convenience is highly appreciated.Yours,Li Hua【仿写再借鉴】假设你叫李华,高考过后计划暑假期间到美国去参加中美学生交流活动。请写一封咨询信,询问相关事宜。内容包括:1.对申请者的相关要求;2.课程的相关事宜;3.住宿和吃饭的条件;4.需要做的相关准备。注意:1.词数80个左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Sir or Madam,_Thanks again for your time,and Im l
59、ooking forward to your early reply.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Sir or Madam,I am very interested in the exchange program you offered.I am writing to obtain some more detailed information about it.Firstly,just graduated from an ordinary high school and I wonder what qualifications are required
60、 for applicants.Secondly,if admitted,what courses am I going to take,and do I need to buy any books ahead of time?In addition,would you be so kind to introduce to me the conditions of board and accommodations?By the way,if I need to make any other preparations,let me know,will you?Thanks again for y
61、our time and Im looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua型八 通知类【典例研析】假如你是李华,“全国中学生英语演讲大赛”将在你校举行,请你根据以下要点,以校学生会的名义写一则通知:1.主题:未来生活;2.时间和地点:3月5日上午8:3012:00;体育场;3.选手:全国各地的20名高中生;4.评委:中国和美国的英语教授;5.要求:欢迎参与,积极交流。练考场审题Step 1 精准审题谋篇布局人称we 时态一般现在时,一般将来时段落布局开头点题:点明演讲比赛的时间和地点主体段落:演讲的参加者和评委及其他
62、要求结尾:表达希望大家积极参与的愿望Step 2头脑风暴 字字珠玉(1)美词:gather,deliver,make remarks on,a valuable experience(2)佳句:We are glad to inform you that the National English Speech Competition for Middle School Students is to be held in the stadium of our school from 8:30 am to 12:00 am on March 5th.Some famous English prof
63、essors from the USA and China will be invited to be judges and make remarks on the performances of the competitors.Step 3 斟酌词句 妙笔生花要点1:我们很高兴地通知你“全国中学生英语演讲大赛”将于3月5日在学校的体育场举行。We are glad to inform you that we will hold the National English Speech Competition for Middle School Students in the stadium o
64、f our school on March 5th.句式升级(被动句式)We are glad to inform you that _ in the stadium of our school on March 5th.the National English Speech Competition forMiddle School Students is to be held要点2:通过和一些评委及优秀的学习者交流,你会学到很多。You will learn a lot by talking with some judges and excellent English learners.句式
65、升级(it作形式主语以及高级词汇)和一些评委及优秀的英语学习者交换想法将会是一次珍贵的经历。_ exchange ideas with some judges and excellent English learners.It would be a valuable experience toStep 4衔接过渡 斐然成篇AnnouncementWe are glad to inform you that the National English Speech Competition for Middle School Students is to be held in the stadium
66、 of our school from 8:30 am to 12:00 am on March 5th.Twenty high school students from all parts of China will gather in the stadium and deliver their speeches on the given topicFuture Life.Some famous English professors from the USA and China will be invited to be judges and make remarks on the perf
67、ormances of the competitors.Welcome to attend this competition if you have any interest in English speeches or this topic.It would be a valuable experience to exchange ideas with some judges and excellent English learners.Dont miss it.The Students Union【仿写再借鉴】假如你叫李华,是某外语特色高中的学生会主席。下周,你校将举办以“保护传统文化”为
68、主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下内容代表学生会写一则英语通知。时间:12月16日周三下午4:306:00事件:举办英语演讲比赛地点:学校礼堂(auditorium)通知内容:1.每班推荐两名选手;2.选手提前20分钟到场抽签;3.演讲时间3分钟;4.英语老师和外教做评委,当场公布获胜者。注意事项:按时到场,不要迟到。选手:contestant,抽签:draw lots _【参考范文】In order to arouse the students awareness of protecting the traditional Chinese culture and improve their sp
69、eaking ability,an English speech contest is to be held on Wednesday afternoon,December 16th.It lasts from 4:30 p.m.to 6:00 p.m.in the school auditorium.Two contestants will be chosen from each class and deliver a speech on how to keep traditional Chinese culture alive within three minutes.The contes
70、tants must arrive before 4:10 p.m.to draw lots,which will decide on the order of their speech.All English teachers and foreign teachers will act as judges.The winner will be announced on the spot.Please come on time.The Students Union 型九 发言稿【典例研析】假定你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在,他们即将回
71、国,你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。1.回顾双方的交流活动;2.谈谈收获或感想;3.表达祝愿与期望。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。练考场审题Step 1 精准审题 谋篇布局人称I 时态一般现在时,一般过去时,一般将来时段落布局开头点题:回顾双方的交流活动主体段落:细数收获或感想结尾:表达祝愿与期望Step 2头脑风暴 字字珠玉(1)美词:privilege,highlight,compare with,witness,enthusiasm,have a better understanding of,a whole new level(2)佳句:It
72、s my great privilege to be here,sharing my moment with our fellow friends from the Great Britain.The past two weeks witnessed our growth and friendship.Step 3 斟酌词句 妙笔生花要点1:我很荣幸地站在这里。I am honored to be here.句式升级(it作形式主语)_ Its my great privilege to be here.要点2:我们在成长,友谊在增进。We are growing and our friend
73、ship is improving.句式升级(高级词汇)过去的两周见证了我们的成长和友谊。_our growth and friendship.The past two weeks witnessedStep 4衔接过渡 斐然成篇Dear friends,How time flies!I am Li Jin,President of Student Union of Chenguang High School.Its my great privilege to be here,sharing my moment with our fellow friends from the Great Br
74、itain.During the two-week activities,we surely exchanged our ideas on learning,ways of life,PE and cultures.One of the highlights was the sports meeting where we competed with each other in the basketball match.The past two weeks witnessed our growth and friendship.It is not only your enthusiasm but
75、 also your teamwork and good spirits that impress us.After the two-week exchange activities,we now have a better understanding of each other on a whole new level.And I sincerely hope our friendship lasts forever.Wish you all the best!Thank you.【仿写再借鉴】假设你是李华,一个英国中学生交流团要来你校访问,学校让你介绍一下中国取得的成就。请你写一篇演讲稿,
76、内容包括:1.欢迎来访;2.取得的成就(生活、住宅、交通等)。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.演讲稿的开头已为你写好。Dear guests,Welcome to our school!_【参考范文】Dear guests,Welcome to our school!Im very honored to have the chance to introduce the great achievements made in China.China is a developing country,which has made much progress in rec
77、ent years.We take pride in living a better life,having enough fresh water and food.Our living conditions have greatly improved,as most families have moved into new houses.Cars are entering families quickly,making travel much convenient.Besides,our high speed railway is world-famous,and you can exper
78、ience it by yourself.Thank you for your listening!型十 报道类【典例研析】假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5千米越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.参加人员;2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下;3.活动反响。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式作答。A Cross-Country Running Race练考场审题Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局人称we时态一般现在时,现在完成时段落布局开头点题:点明越野赛的时间、参与人员和目的主体段落:越野赛的过程结尾:表达参加越野赛的收获Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉(1)美词:i
79、nspire sb.to do sth.,on the way,fall behind,keep running,build up,be of great importance(2)佳句:It was all the students in Senior 3 who participated in it.Not only have we realized that building up our body is of great importance,but we have also learned more about“persistence leads to success”.Step 3
80、:斟酌词句 妙笔生花要点1:参赛者是我们高三全体学生。一般表达:All the students in Senior 3 _.句式升级(强调句式,高级词汇)It was all the students in Senior 3 _.took part in itwho participated in it要点2:我们不仅意识到了锻炼身体很重要,还对“坚持就是胜利”体会更深了。一般表达:We have realized that building up our body is of great importance,_ more about“persistence leads to succes
81、s”.句式升级(倒装结构)_have we realized that building up our body is of great importance,_more about“persistence leads to success”.and we havealso learnedNot onlybut wehave also learnedStep 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇A Cross-Country Running RaceLast Sunday,our school held a five-kilometer cross-country running race.It was a
82、ll the students in Senior 3 who participated in it.The purpose of this race was to inspire us students to pay more attention to physical exercise.At 7 a.m.we set off at the school gate.And then we ran all the way to the foot of South Hill.On the way,although some students fell behind,they kept runni
83、ng until the finishing line.From this activity,not only have we realized that building up our body is of great importance,but we have also learned more about“persistence leads to success”.【仿写再借鉴】假定你是李华,是校英语报的小记者。近期你校组织开展了为期一周的“劳动最光荣”(Labor Is the Most Glorious)活动。请你写一篇报道介绍一下这次活动,内容包括:1.活动目的;2.活动内容;3
84、.收获。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】In order to raise the students awareness of the significance of labor and arouse their passion for labor,our school has recently carried out an activity Labor Is the Most Glorious.Firstly,our school organized us students to plant trees in and around the campu
85、s and in the suburbs.Whats more,we were asked to participate in some voluntary work after class,such as helping the elder do the cleaning.Besides,we shared housework with our parents,relieving their burden.Through this activity,we have not only realized the value of labor but also learned to respect
86、 all laborers.型一 推荐信【典例研析】假定你是李华。你的美国网友David看完电影哪吒之魔童降世海外版后非常喜欢,写信想请你再推荐一部中国电影。请你根据以下要点给他回信:1.表示高兴;2.推荐一部电影;3.推荐的理由(至少两条)。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。练考场审题Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局人称第一人称(I),第二人称(you)时态一般现在时;一般将来时段落布局开头点题:说明写信目的主体段落:推荐的电影和推荐的理由结尾:表达希望Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉(1)美词:delighted,fascinated,have much in co
87、mmon with,appeal to sb.,additionally,perfectly(2)佳句:Im delighted to know youre fascinated by the Chinese film,Ne Zha.This animated film,which is also based on classic Chinese fairy tales,has much in common with Ne Zha.Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花要点1:我很高兴知道你对中国电影哪吒之魔童降世感兴趣。一般表达:I am glad to know youre interested
88、 in the Chinese film,Ne Zha.句式升级(高级词汇,被动语态)Im delighted to know youre _ by the Chinese film,Ne Zha.fascinated要点2:这部电影也是以神话故事为基础,和哪吒有许多相似之处。一般表达:This animated film _classic Chinese fairy tales,and _ _Ne Zha.句式升级(定语从句)This animated film,_,has much in common with Ne Zha.is also based onhasmuch in commo
89、n withwhich is also based on classic Chinese fairy talesStep 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇Dear David,Im delighted to know youre fascinated by the Chinese film,Ne Zha.And Im perfectly willing to recommend another impressive Chinese movie at your request.Since I know animated films are your favorites,you cant miss Monk
90、ey King:Hero Is Back.This animated film,which is also based on classic Chinese fairy tales,has much in common with Ne Zha,so I think itll appeal to you.Additionally,Monkey King and Nezha are both regarded as heroes by Chinese people.Through movies,you will get a better understanding of Chinese cultu
91、re.I hope youll find the movie well worth seeing.Yours,Li Hua【仿写再借鉴】假如你是高中生李华,你的美国笔友Jack热爱中国传统文化,最近打算来中国工作生活一段时间,但是不确定应该去往哪个城市,写信向你咨询。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:1.你推荐的城市;2.推荐的理由(不少于两条);3.美好祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Jack,I am so pleased to learn that you are to spend some time in China.I recom
92、mend you stay in Beijing,the capital and cultural center of China.The city enjoys a high reputation for its abundance of ancient architecture,which represents the traditional local lifestyles.And there are also plenty of museums where precious relics of historical interest are waiting for you to exp
93、lore.Besides,the exceptional Peking Opera performances there are also what you cant miss.I wish you a very happy and meaningful time in China!Yours sincerely,Li Hua型二 祝贺信【典例研析】假定你是李华,得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲,并给他写一封祝贺信,要点如下:1.天天练习讲汉语,从不会到流利,终于成功;2.继续努力,有机会来中国留学;3.希望见面和交流。注意:1.词数80左右。2.可
94、以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:“汉语桥”中文演讲比赛“Chinese Bridge”Chinese speech contest练考场审题Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局人称第一人称(I),第二人称(you)时态一般现在时;一般过去时段落布局:开头点题:表达祝贺主体段落:成功的原因并进行鼓励结尾:再次表达祝贺Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉(1)美词:express my congratulations,opportunity,communicate(2)佳句:As the saying goes,“Everything comes to him who waits”.Going on
95、 studying Chinese harder,you will have the opportunity to study in China.Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花要点1:正如谚语所说:“成功属于有准备的人”。一般表达:There is a saying going like this,“Everything comes to him who waits”.句式升级(定语从句)_,“Everything comes to him who waits”.As the saying goes要点2:如果你继续努力学习汉语,你就会有机会来中国学习。一般表达:If you go on s
96、tudying Chinese harder,you will have the opportunity to study in China.句式升级(分词短语作状语)_,you will have the opportunity to study in China.Going on studying Chinese harderStep 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇Dear Peter,I would like to express my congratulations to you on your receiving the first prize of“Chinese Bridge”Chine
97、se speech contest.I know that you were not good at Chinese at first.However,you practiced speaking Chinese every day.As the saying goes,“Everything comes to him who waits”.Finally,you succeeded!In my mind,this match is very difficult for a foreign student.So Im so surprised that you become champion
98、of this competition.Going on studying Chinese harder,you will have the opportunity to study in China.At last,I hope to see you and communicate with you.Sincere congratulations to you again!Yours,Li Hua【仿写再借鉴】假定你是李华,你班的澳大利亚交流生Catherine在你市举办的“外国人写汉字”书法大赛中荣获一等奖,请你给她写一封邮件。内容包括:1.祝贺她获奖;2.请她分享经验;3.希望她明年也参
99、加。注意:1.词数80左右。2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Catherine,Ive learned with delight that you have won the first prize in the handwriting competition.Im writing to offer my congratulations from the bottom of my heart.For months,not only have you read many books about Chinese calligraphy,but youve kept on
100、practicing it every day.Now your efforts have paid off.In the meantime,I really wish to improve my handwriting,so could you please share your experience and unique ideas on handwriting?I do hope youll also participate in next years competition.Im certain that youll make greater achievements.Yours,Li
101、 Hua2.高考读后续写高分技巧考场写作注意事项:1.面对长篇文章,许多学生第一想法是直接下手阅读,但是,我们在分析叙事篇章时,应该先追本溯源,明确其写作六要素。再根据情节逻辑的发展,在合情合理的范围内发散故事情节,用短句或关键词写下故事剩余部分的大事件:转折点、高潮、结局。这样一来,故事的骨架就设立起来了,在之后的写作过程中,大家就可以避免写偏写怪。2.写作坚持信、达、雅“信、达、雅”分别指逻辑准确、词句正确、语言优美。逻辑方面,我们已经在上文深入分析过。那么如何做到词句正确、语言优美?(1)词句正确:词性词形不可乱 典型的词性词形错误有:动词与名词混用、形容词与副词混用、动词单数形式错用、
102、动词时态错用、名词单复数形式错用。(2)语言优美:大词用对、小词用活也就是不要一味追求大词、难词,只要用活小词也是非常好的。3.复查:语言、逻辑、规范 写后复查是作文的保险杠,复查主要应关注时态、句型、逻辑、标点等问题。检查句型时,一定要分析句子主干是否完整。逻辑的检查也是必不可少的环节。要注意在上下文中选用合适的逻辑连词。标点的正确书写也很容易被忽视。逗号与句号的清晰书写也需要我们关注。另外,需要仔细检查其他的一致性,如人称的一致性、单复数的一致性。4.最后,考生需要注意词数控制和卷面整洁。附:12种高分表达1.An adverbPara.1:But no more helicopters
103、came and it was getting dark again._(时间副词衔接+环境描写)Immediately,an absolute darkness ruled the forest.2.An adj.phrasePara.1:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again._,Jane knelt down,tears streaming down her face.(并列情绪形容词)Para.2:It was daybreak when Jane woke up._,she struggled to her
104、 feet,continuing searching for assistance.(状态形容词+as/though 引导的倒装句)Desperate andhopelessWeak as/though she was3.A participle(-ing or-ed)Para.1:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again._ _,Jane had to stay alone for another night.(现在分词+情绪形容词)Para.2:It was daybreak when Jane woke up._
105、,she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.(现在分词+状态形容词)FeelingdisappointedFeeling refreshed4.A conjunction_,he whistled._,he jumped right in.5.A prepositional phrase_,he suddenly stopped._,the little girl screamed at the top of her voice.As he walkedAlthough he was afraidAt the end
106、of the laneAt the sight of the snake6.A dialogue or a monologue_Rachel shouted,as she pedalled fast and zoomed past Jenny.“_!”my father yelled.(2017.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para.1:The car abruptly stopped in front of him._“Lets see who gets there first!”Hold on tight“Get into the car.”Paul shouted at Mac.7.A
107、 character_One afternoon,while studying at home.8.An emotionThe moment she saw how she did for her Science test,_Mark is a studious boy who loves reading.His classmates often tease him forbeing too hardworking and they call him Mr Smart.tears started welling up inTinas eyes and falling down her chee
108、ks.9.A settingI _._a relaxing stroll along the beach._I knew this adventure was going to be something that I would never forget.closed my eyes to enjoy the gentle breeze and the sounds of the clashing wavesGently opening my eyes,I saw my parents takingThe cave was dark and everything was silent.I co
109、uldnt even see my hand infront of my face.(2017.11浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para.2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way._(视觉+环境描写+拟人)I looked out of the car window,winding rivers,lofty mountains,sunny beaches and deep valleys holding meentirely in their fascination.10.An act
110、ionFurry _when he saw his master taking a leash out from the drawer.Furry was all ready for his evening walk.(2017.11浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para.1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us._(动作描写+问句衔接)started wagging his tail and running around in circlesDad exchanged a glance with
111、me.Whynot camp to satisfy Mom?11.Sound effects_The wind was howling outside of my house.We were having a terrible thunderstorm.I was very scared.12.A question_Let me tell you an exciting trip my family took this summer._ BOOM,CRASH!Have you ever been on a self-driving trip?Why does trouble always fo
112、llow me around?Do I have a“kick me”sign on myback or something?【典例研析】1(2020新高考全国卷)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。The Meredith family lived in a small community.As the economy was in decline,some people in the town had lost their jobs.Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet.Peo
113、ple were trying to help each other meet the challenges.Mrs Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman.She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor.She knew they had problems,and they needed all kinds of help.When she had time,she would bring food and medicine to them.One morning she told her
114、children about a family she had visited the day before.There was a man sick in bed,his wife,who took care of him and could not go out to work,and their little boy.The little boy his name was Bernard had interested her very much.“I wish you could see him,”she said to her own children,John,Harry,and C
115、lara.“He is such a help to his mother.He wants very much to earn some money,but I dont see what he can do.”After their mother left the room,the children sat thinking about Bernard.“I wish we could help him to earn money,”said Clara.“His family is suffering so much.”“So do I,”said Harry.“We really sh
116、ould do something to assist them.”For some moments,John said nothing,but,suddenly,he sprang to his feet and cried,“I have a great idea!I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成).”The other children also jumped up all attention.When John had an idea,it was sure to be a good one.“I tell you
117、 what we can do,”said John.“You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us?Well,we can make popcorn(爆米花),and put it into paper bags,and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”注意:续写词数应为150左右。When Mrs Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too._With everything read
118、y,Bernard started out on his new business._练考场审题Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局文体记叙文时态一般过去时原文分析 原文讲述了一户善良人家的三个孩子在母亲的影响下,开始想办法帮助一个贫困家庭的孩子挣钱。其中一个孩子John想出了制作爆米花让那个孩子去卖的“好主意”。原文中的人和事都是积极向上、充满正能量的,在思想和行动上树立了榜样。续写应围绕John 的“好主意”展开。续写提示 第一段的开头语是:When Mrs Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too.说明MrsM
119、eredith赞同John的“好主意”。本段应着重描写MrsMeredith对孩子们的建议和鼓励,以及John和其他孩子具体是如何做的。第二段的开头语是:With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.据此提示可知,本段应着重描写Bernard这个穷苦孩子是如何去卖爆米花的,以及他的收入情况,更要表达出他的喜悦和对Mrs Meredith一家的感激之情。Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉(1)美词:praise.for.,offer sb.sth.,be filled with,because of 等。(2)佳句:Th
120、e basket was full of paper bags which were filled with popcorn.Never before had he earned so much money in his life.Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花要点1:篮子里装满了纸袋,纸袋里装满了爆米花。一般表达:The basket was full of paper bags and the paper bags were filled with popcorn.句式升级(定语从句):The basket was full of paper bags _.which were fill
121、ed with popcorn要点2:他以前从没挣过这么多钱。一般表达:He had never earned so much money before in his life.句式升级(倒装句):_ Never before had he earned so much money in his life.Step 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇When Mrs Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too.So she praised John for his proposal,and offered him some
122、advice.Very soon the children were busy popping corn,while their mother went out to buy paper bags.When she came back,she brought Bernard with her.All the children came surrounding Bernard and they gave a basket to Bernard.The basket was full of paper bags which were filled with popcorn.With everyth
123、ing ready,Bernard started out on his new business.And much sooner than could be expected,Bernard returned with an empty basket.Never before had he earned so much money in his life.When he found that it was all to be his,he was so happy that he could hardly speak,but his bright smiling face spoke for
124、 him.People began to watch for the“little popcorn boy”,who earned some money to take home every week.All this was because of Johns bright idea.2(2018浙江高考改编)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was summer,and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip
125、 to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque,a big city in the state of New Mexico.We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle Paul,my dads friend,picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan
126、 and Kyle.My dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby.Very early in the morning,Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.“The day starts at dawn on my farm,”he said.After breakfast,I went to help Aunt Tina feed the ch
127、ickens,while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草).I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses.They looked really cool.In the afternoon,I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride,and he said yes,as long as my dad went with me.I wasnt going to take a horse
128、 ride by myself anyway.So,my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats,got on our horses,and headed slowly towards the mountains.“Dont be late for supper,”Uncle Paul cried,“and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!”“OK!”my dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sigh
129、t.It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks,the deep green pine trees,and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意:续写词数应为150左右。Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my ho
130、rse._We had no idea where we were and it got dark._练考场审题Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局文体记叙文时态一般过去时原文分析第一段:交代故事的背景。介绍了度假的原因和地点第二段:简单地介绍了旅途第三段:对在农场的日常活动的简单介绍第四段和续写故事的展开有很大的关系。这一段讲到了如何发生了我和爸爸去骑马的故事。而续写的内容就是在此基础上展开写作思路 根据第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.这一句是故事发展的转折点,可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开,可
131、以写马的反应,也可以写人的反应,但要注意与第二段首句相呼应 第二段首句是We had no idea where we were and it got dark.这一句呼应前文Uncle Paul的叮嘱不要误了吃晚饭,可从如何寻路返回农场去写Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉(1)美词:previous;in vain;at the point of desperation;a faint voice(2)佳句:Frightened as I was,I tried to keep my balance to prevent me from falling off.Fortunately,min
132、utes later,the horse stopped before a river,out of breath,and so did I.What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly.Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花要点1:这个出其不意的出场让我的马疯狂地跑起来。一般表达:This unexpected appearance made my horse run wildly.句式升级(定语从句)This unexpected appearance frightened my horse,_.which mad
133、e it run wildly要点2:尽管我很害怕,我努力不(让自己)掉下马来。一般表达:Although I was frightened,I tried not to fall off the horse.句式升级(倒装句)_,I tried to keep my balance to prevent me from falling off.Frightened as I was要点3:我们只能沿着之前的路慢慢走回去。一般表达:We could only go back along the previous track slowly.句式升级(主语从句)我们所能做的只有沿着之前的路慢慢走回
134、去。_was to go back along the previous _ slowly.What we could dotrackStep 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.This unexpected appearance frightened my horse,which made it run wildly.I tried my best to control it,but in vain.Frightened as I was,I tried to keep my balance
135、 to prevent me from falling off.Fortunately,minutes later,the horse stopped before a river,out of breath,and so did I.At that moment,my dad also came up.Seeing I was OK,he was quite relieved.But it was clear that we got lost.We had no idea where we were and it got dark.We didnt know where the farm h
136、ouse was.What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly.But it was really difficult for us in such a dark situation.Just as we were at the point of desperation,we heard a faint voice from the distance.“It must be Uncle Paul,”I said.So we cried back with excitement.Finally,Uncle Paul
137、 safely brought us back home.What an amazing ride!【仿写再借鉴】1阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。A few years ago,I had taken a part-time holiday season job in a video store at the local shopping mall.From inside the store,Id begun to see the people rushing by outside.Then an elderly woman caught my ey
138、e.Although slow and unsure of step,she moved with deliberation(从容),and there was no hesitation in her gestures.The elderly woman had come into the store along with a younger woman who I guessed was her daughter.The daughter was clearly impatient,rolling her eyes,huffing(怒气冲冲)and sighing,checking her
139、 watch every few seconds.The older woman then separated from the younger one and began to look at the DVDs on the nearest shelf,obviously expecting someone else to help.After the slightest hesitation,I walked over and asked if I could help her find something.The woman smiled up at me and showed me a
140、 title on a piece of paper.It was a bit unclear to make out.Clearly a person looking for it knew a little about movies and quality.Rather than rushing off to locate the DVD for the woman,I asked her to walk with me so I could show her where she could find it.Looking back,I think I wanted to enjoy he
141、r company for a moment.Something about her deliberate movements reminded me of my own mother,whod passed away the previous Christmas.As we walked along the back of the store,I introduced her to the different sections:old television shows,action movies,cartoons,science fiction films.The woman seemed
142、glad of the unrushed company and casual conversation.We found the movie,and I complimented her on her choice.She smiled and told me it was one shed enjoyed when she was her daughters age and that she hoped she would enjoy it as much as she had.Maybe,she said with a hint of wistfulness(一丝伤感),her daug
143、hter could enjoy it with her own young children.Then,when the older womans turn in line came,she paid in cash,counting out the dollars and coins with the same sureness shed displayed earlier.注意:续写词数应为150左右。As the cashier put the DVD into a plastic bag,I walked over to the younger woman._The elderly
144、woman moved with her deliberate slowness back to her daughter._【参考范文】As the cashier put the DVD into a plastic bag,I walked over to the younger woman.“Is that your mom?”I asked,halfway expecting her to tell me it was none of my business.But she rolled her eyes and said,“Yeah.”I smiled to show her I
145、wasnt criticizing.“Cherish her,”I said.And then I answered her curious expression by saying,“When shes gone,its the little moments like this that will come back to you.”It was true.I missed my mother still and remembered the moments when I was so impatient as to make her life miserable.The elderly w
146、oman moved with her deliberate slowness back to her daughter.Together they made their way toward the exit of the video store.They stood there for a moment,side by side,waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their place in it.Then the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded her mother
147、.And slowly,almost reluctantly,she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mothers shoulders and gently guided her back into the crowds.2阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。A Vacation with My Mother I had an interesting childhood.It was filled with surprises and amusements,
148、all because of my motherloving,sweet,yet absent-minded and forgetful.One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota,and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights al
149、ong the way.As the first day of our trip approached,David,my eight-year-old brother,and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends.Who knew if wed ever see them again?Finally,the moment of our departure arrived,and we loaded suitcases,books,games,camping equipment,and a tent into the car and
150、bravely drove off.We bravely drove off again two hours later after wed returned home to get the purse and travelers checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept:“You stand outside the door and play lookout(放哨)wh
151、ile I go,and Ill stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.”I had terrible pictures in my mind:“Honey,where are the kids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh.I thought they were being awfully quiet.”We were never actually left behind in a strange city,but we werent about to take any chances.On the fourth or f
152、ifth night,we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy.After driving in vain for some time,Mom suddenly got a great idea:Why didnt we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there?David and I became nervous.To our great relief,Dad turned down the idea.Mom never
153、could understand our objections(反对).If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep,Mom would have been delighted.She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is.We finally found a vacancy in the next town.注意:续写词数应为150左右。The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.
154、_We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way._【参考范文】The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.We decided to camp along the river.The views there were surprisingly beautifulthe warm sunshine,the fresh air,the clean water.We sat on the grass,en
155、joying the splendid nature.However,when Dad was about to put up our tent,he was disappointed to find that it had been left in the hotel.Well,Dad had to go back to fetch it to continue our camping.We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.Every time we got to a new pl
156、ace,Mom would cheer up like a child.She would get off the car excitedly,laughing and dancing around.Together we enjoyed the modern sights in the big cities,the historical buildings in the small towns and the amazing scenery in nature.When we came back to the hotel after the tiring but excellent visi
157、t,Mom would hug us and kiss us on our faces.How sweet she was!Absent-minded and forgetful as she was,she never forgot to express her love to us.3.高考概要写作高分技巧【技能提升】概要写作六步写作法(1)抓取主旨大意,寻找支持信息 主旨大意是文章或段落主题的主要内容或作者在该主题上的观点或主张。把握主旨大意有助于把握语篇或段落要义,为下一步区分主次信息、提出细节信息做好铺垫。(2)立足文章结构,筛选主要信息 把握文章结构有助于迅速抓住文章主要信息。说明
158、文和议论文常采用总分式、递进式或并列式的结构。(3)分析句子关系,提炼关键词 关键词是与文章主旨关系最密切的词语,它们通常为实词,包括名词(短语)、动词(短语)和形容词(短语)。提取关键词时,必须理清句子间的关系,避免在意思表达相同或相近的句子里重复提取关键词。(4)依据逻辑关系,合并相关信息 合并信息前首先对信息进行分类、整合,理清它们之间的逻辑关系,再将联系密切的信息合并到一块。(5)忠于原文思想,变换表达句式认真阅读原文,准确理解文本,用自己所熟悉的词汇、句型等表达手段简要表达原文的意思,做到化繁为简。(6)运用衔接手段,确保行文连贯为了使上下文表达连贯,我们可以合理地运用一些有效的衔接
159、手段:词汇衔接、逻辑衔接和语法衔接。【典例研析】(2019浙江高考)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Parents everywhere praise their kids.Jenn Berman,author of The A to Z Guide toRaising Happy and Confident Kids,says,“Weve gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict.”By giving kids a lot of prais
160、e,parents think theyre building their childrens confidence,when,in fact,it may be just the opposite.Too much praise can backfire and,when given in a way thats insincere,make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents praise has put them
161、.Still,dont go too far in the other direction.Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much.Kids will feel like theyre not good enough or that you dont care and,as a result,may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.So what is the right amount of praise?Experts s
162、ay that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity.If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome,you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward.“We should especially recognize our childrens efforts to push themselves and work hard
163、to achieve a goal,”says Donahue,author of Parenting Without Fear:Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters.“One thing to remember is that its the process not the end product that matters.”Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team.But if hes out there every day and play
164、ing hard,you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses.Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard,cook dinner,or finish a book report.But whatever it is,praise should be given on a case-by-case b
165、asis and be proportionate(相称的)to the amount of effort your child has put into it.练考场审题Step 1:精准审题谋篇布局文体议论文时态一般现在时原文分析第一段:指出父母过多表扬孩子的弊端第二段:指出表扬得太少也不好第三、四段:给出建议,要根据孩子实际付出的努力而非最终的结果来表扬孩子Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉(1)美词:extreme,enthusiasm,insufficient praise,an appropriate amount of,base on,rather than(2)佳句:Expert
166、s warn about two extremes when it comes to parents praise for their children.Therefore,the given advice is that an appropriate amount of praise should be given based on the process rather than the result.Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花要点1:专家警告家长们不要过多或过少表扬孩子。一般表达:Experts warn parents not to praise their children to
167、o much or too little.句式升级(时间状语从句)专家警告说,父母对孩子的表扬存有两个极端。Experts warn about two extremes _.when it comes to parents praise for theirchildren要点2:因此,家长们应该基于过程而不是结果表扬孩子。一般表达:Therefore,parents should praise children based on the process rather than the result.句式升级(表语从句、被动语态)因此,给出的建议是,适当的表扬应该基于过程而不是结果。There
168、fore,the given advice is _.that an appropriate amount of praise should begiven based on the process rather than the resultStep 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇Experts warn about two extremes when it comes to parents praise for their children.On the one hand,too much praise might lead to childrens lack of enthusiasm to e
169、xplore new things,for theyre afraid they wont meet parents expectations.On the other hand,insufficient praise might let children consider efforts pointless.Therefore,the given advice is that an appropriate amount of praise should be given based on the process rather than the result.【仿写再借鉴】1阅读下面短文,根据
170、其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Smoking a whole packet of cigarettes in a day once or twice a year would certainly make someone feel ill,but probably would not kill him.Smoking even one cigarette every day for decades,though,might do so.That is the difference between the acute exposure and the chronic(慢性的)one,and
171、it is a difference that most people understand.What they may not understand is that the same thing applies to air pollution.On a day-to-day basis,the forecasts most European cities offer turn red only when pollution levels rise to a point where they will cause immediate discomfort.That makes sense,b
172、ut it might also make the badly-informed citizens think that if most days in the place where they live are green,the air theyre breathing is basically safe.This may not be the case.For example,in London where the national data said air quality was“good”or“very good”four days out of five,a study foun
173、d that levels of NO2 were always higher than the WHOs limit of a long-term danger.Official data also fail to notice patterns of difference within a day.These can be important,because people might be able to change their behavior if they understood them.Our study suggests,for example,that Parisians w
174、ho head out for work at 9 a.m.and return at 6 p.m.could reduce their average daily intake of NO2 by 16%by traveling both ways an hour earlier.Going two hours earlier would cut the intake by 28%.The best advice of all to people in these cities,though,is to move to America.In New York,levels of NO2 we
175、re 20%below the WHO limit,and that is pretty typical of places in the United States,where diesel(柴油)is less common than that in Europe.As the words on the Statue of Liberty say,“Give me your tired,your poor,your huddled(蜷缩的)masses yearning to breathe free.”_【参考范文】Like cigarettes,air pollution can be
176、 mild,but it is also harmful to human health in the long term.(要点 1)The forecasts saying days are green dont mean the air is absolutely safe to breathe.(要点 2)Most European citizens are not informed of the different patterns of pollution within a day.(要点 3)These people are advised to move to America,
177、where the air is quite clean.(要点4)2阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。If youve heard people say they are having“high tea”in some exclusive,smart hotel lobby,you can smile to yourself,knowing that“high tea”is seldom served to tourists with fancy lodging.“High tea”doesnt refer to the“fancy”fixings,the elegant
178、silver,the pure-white table linens,or the luxury surroundings of a high-class salon.It is actually the main meal of the day,served between 6:00 and 7:00 p.m.The“high”in the phrase comes from the time of the day,meaning“late”or“high”in the afternoon.For a long time,the lower and middle classes could
179、afford only one meal per day.In order to make it through to the next day,the main meal would be taken after work and would consist of anything from the remnants of lunch to the very basic food staples of the time:a slice of bread,a hunk of cheese,a piece of sausage,all of which were eaten while drin
180、king their evening tea.However,as the country advanced,the common people got wealthier,and evening meals began to be supplemented with heavier foods like roast beef,fish,eggs,vegetables,and potatoes.Sometimes referred to as a“meat tea”,or a“ham tea”,the term“high tea”has been replaced with the moder
181、n equivalent of dinner.In contrast,“low tea”,or“afternoon tea”is served earlier in the afternoon,usually between 4:00 and 5:00.Originally started by Anna,the Duchess of Bedford,the tradition began when Anna needed a little sustenance to tide her over.Tidbits were served with tea,and Anna invited fri
182、ends to share conversation over these small snacks before the affair of the evening meal.In reality,people who have beautiful“teas”with fancy pastries and cakes nowadays,are partaking of the“low tea”or“light tea”that began so many years ago in Annas time.While the refreshments are pretty,they are“li
183、ght”and the emphasis of the“afternoon tea”is on the presentation of the tea,and the conversation of the guests._【参考范文】As the filling between two days by the poor historically,high tea is now the main meal,served between 6:00 and 7:00 p.m.(要点 1)In contrast,afternoon tea was once served by Anna,the Du
184、chess of Bedford,before the big meal to her guests with snacks.(要点 2)Gradually,with the improvement of peoples living standards,dinner grew out of high tea,and people are focusing on conversation over afternoon tea.(要点 3)1阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。The U.S.Fish and Wildlife Service(FWS)has issued a m
185、ajor update to the nations policy on elephant ivory.The measure bans almost all ivory sales and trade in the U.S.It was already illegal to import elephant ivory from other countries.The new restrictions cover ivory that has already been imported.Officials hope the move will help stop poaching of ele
186、phants.African elephants are a threatened species,in large part because of illegal hunting.Conservation groups estimate that between 30,000 and 50,000 wild elephants have been killed by poachers each year since 2008.The main reason why poachers target elephants is for their ivory,which is very valua
187、ble.The U.S.is the second-largest market for ivory,behind China.Anti-poaching groups say the new ban makes an important statement.The new ivory ban includes very few exceptions.Some antiques and objects that contain a relatively small amount of ivory,can still be bought and sold.The new restrictions
188、 replace a complex set of rules that made it both difficult to know what ivory was legal to sell and easy to cheat the system.For example,it was legal to trade ivory objects that had been made before elephants became endangered.Unfortunately,some ivory dealers got around this rule by deliberately ma
189、king new items appear older.These and other strategies meant it was relatively easy to sell illegal ivory in the U.S.The FWSs new restrictions close such loopholes.Conservationists agree that one of the most important ways to protect elephant populations is to give poachers fewer ways of making mone
190、y from their kill.The less demand for ivory there is,the less appealing it will be to poach elephants.Some people are worried that the new ban will turn people who currently own antique items containing ivory,like musical instruments and trinkets,into lawbreakers.Conservationists applaud the restric
191、tions,however.The U.S.is also hoping other nations will follow in its footsteps with more restrictive ivory rules.As it becomes more challenging to sell ivory products,the hope is that poaching will slow and elephant populations will grow._【参考范文】Ivory products benefit dealers so much that poachers s
192、pare no effort to kill elephants without mercy,leaving them dying out.(要 点 1)To protect the endangered species,FWS bans any ivory sale and trade,including those imported long ago.(要点2)Though there are concerns from some,conservationists stand by the ban strongly.(要点3)Also,America is expecting other
193、nations to follow suit to make the elephants multiply quickly.(要点4)2阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Hunger is a result of poverty,but it also causes poverty.In many countries women,although they do much of the farming,lack access to training,credit or land.Conflict,poor or corrupt management of natural re
194、sources,displacement of small farmers by natural disasters,and financial and economic crises that eliminate jobs at the lowest levels,all contribute to creating conditions that push the poorest into hunger.To break this vicious cycle,the United States launched,in 2010,Feed the Future Initiative,whic
195、h aims to reduce global hunger,poverty,and undernutritionby focusing on smallholders,increasing investments in agriculture and supporting country-owned plans for improving food security and nutrition while generating opportunities for economic growth and trade.Back then,the U.S.government selected 1
196、9 countries in Africa,Asia and Latin America to participate in the initiative,based on 5 criteria.Since 2010,Feed the Future has helped 9 million people living in the participating countries pull themselves out of poverty.The passage of the U.S.Global Food Security Act of 2016 endorsed Feed the Futu
197、res approach and ushered in a new era of the U.S.government global food security investment.A new,corresponding global food security strategy developed by the U.S.government is guiding Feed the Futures work as the initiative into its second phase.On August 31st,USAID Administrator Mark Green announc
198、ed that Bangladesh,Ethiopia,Ghana,Guatemala,Honduras,Kenya,Mali,Nepal,Niger,Nigeria,Senegal,and Uganda were selected to participate in this new phase of Feed the Future.“With the selection of these 12 countries,the second phase of Feed the Future will be focusing its efforts on promoting long-term,s
199、ustainable development that brings partners together to help people harness the power of smart agriculture to jump-start their local economies and lift themselves out of poverty,”said Administrator Green.“By equipping people with the tools to feed themselves over the long term,Feed the Future is add
200、ressing the root causes of hunger and poverty.This long-term investment builds communities that are more resilient to drought,famine and other natural disasters,and less dependent on emergency food assistance.”_【参考范文】To break the hunger-poverty vicious cycle,America carried out Feed the Future Initiative in 2010 investing to guarantee food in its selected 19 countries.(要点 1)And now comes the next phase of long-term,sustainable development to solve the root causes of hunger and poverty.(要点 2)The long-term investment helps the countries defend against disasters coming their way.(要点 3)
