1、江苏省常熟市2014高考英语书面表达训练（8）及参考范文【陕西省咸阳市2014高考英语模拟试题】书面表达(满分30分)假定你是李华，当你看到公益广告片鼓励人们常回家看看，向父母表达“爱”时，你很有感触。请以Ways to express love to parents为题，写一篇英语演讲稿. 提示:1.在父母生日时，当面向他们说“我爱你们”; 2.经常关心父母的生活和身体健康状况; 3. 注意:1.总词数不少于100;2.开头部分已写好，不计入总词数; 3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 【参考范文】One possible version:Ways to express love to par
2、ents My dear fellows, Today Id like to talk about ways to express love to our parents. As everyone knows, recently people have been encouraged by public service advertising on TV to go home to see their parents and express their love to them. As a middle school student, I feel moved every time I see
3、 it. As far as I am concerned, there are various ways to express love to our parents. First, it is necessary to remember their birthdays, and expressing our wishes to them is a good way to let them know how we love them. Besides, we have the duty to care for the condition of their life and health. M
4、ost importantly, we should often help our parents as much housework as we can, particularly when they are tired. No matter what we do, remember showing respect for our parents is one of the Chinese traditional moral values. Thank you!【福建省漳州市2014高考英语第三次联考试题】书面表达（25分） 一项社会调查发现，目前许多在城市上班的子女因为工作等原因每年只能回
5、乡下老家或者甚至常年没回家，忽视了家里年迈的父母。老人常常盼着子女回家吃饭或者哪怕打个电话，可是经常希望落空。请用英语写一篇短文反应此情况，说说你的感想，并呼吁全社会来关心老年人。词数：120左右。_【参考范文】One possible version:Nowadays, many young people who work in big cities rarely return home to see their old parents, who, however, expect their children to be back to have dinners with them, or
6、just make a phone call every day, especially during festivals. As a result, their expects often become disappointments.In my opinion, the old dont ask for much. They simply hope their children can come back, talk with them and have a meal together. But the young fail to do so. They think the old are
7、 satisfied as long as they have enough to eat and drink. In fact, they can easily get lonely and they often miss their children. So the young should spend more time with their parents and also its time that our society took some measures to solve this problem and call on everyone to care about the o
8、ld. Only in this way can we make our society more beautiful.【广东深圳市第二次调研考试】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面微博上的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Designed by our monitor, we has a story telling contest at the class meeting. All of us were very active, and everybody said that the most touching story was the one told by Zhang
9、 Hua, which won the first prize and made the meeting more meaningful So, here, I would like to share:Not long ago, my friends encouraged me to try a 150-mile ride trip, an annual event that raised money for the poor children in the far-away mountains.When I registered, the idea seemed excellent-to s
10、upport a worthy cause while riding for a long distance. The ride began in the morning, and for the first few hours, I felt wonderful. But by the end of the day, I felt tired and bored.Every excuse my brain pushed out seemed to travel right down to my legs. “I cant handle this,” and “everyone else is
11、 a better rider” were translated into shortness of breath. I was sure Id have to quit.Then I noticed that the lone rider in front of me looked different in some way. But she was too far away for me to tell why. So I pushed my self to catch up. There she was, riding alone slowly but steadily, with a
12、slight and determined smile on her face-and she has only one leg.My focus changed at that moment, For a whole day Id been doubting my body, but now I knew it was the will that would help me reach my goal.写作内容1以约30个词概括以上博文的主要内容。2以约120个词就“班会课”发表你的看法，内容包括：（1）为什么张华的故事让此次班会课令人难忘？（2）举例说明班会课对你学习和成长的影响；（3）你
13、怎样看待班会课对学生的影响。写作要求1在作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能直接引用文中的内容。2作文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校的名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。【参考范文】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分） At a class meeting, Zhang Hua won the 1st prize in a story telling contest, which was so touching that the writer noted it down to share in his blog.In his story, he
14、experienced a volunteer ride trip to raise money for poor children. He had thought it was as easy as a cake, but then, tired and bored, he had a thousand reasons to give up when he noticed a one-legged lady before him. Seeing her determined smile, Zhang Hua reached his goal. What a great story and c
15、lass meeting! It is inspiring us how to face difficulties in our life.Once I was addicted to computer games, and I was so involved in it that it influenced my school work terribly. Then at a class meeting, my head teacher organized many activities to let us know the bad effects of being addictive. I
16、 was shocked and realized my danger! If it had not been because of that valuable class meeting, I would have been another person.So, class meetings are our expectations, because they are an effective form of school moral education and the important way to convert the students thought. Therefore, a g
17、ood head teacher often attaches great importance to a weekly class meeting.第二节：一、读写任务评分原则1、本试题总分为25分，分两部分给分 短文概括5分 主题写作 20分。2、强调内容健康，观点鲜明，说服力强，表述清晰。可参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。3、评分时，选根据文章语言的规范、内容的合适及篇章的连贯性初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。4、语言规范：拼写与标点符号是语言规范的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。5、如
18、书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点 1. 以约30个词概括以上博文的主要内容。2. 以约120个词就“班会课”发表你的看法，内容包括： (1) 为什么张华的故事让此次班会课令人难忘？ (2) 举例说明班会课对你学习和成长的影响; (3) 你怎样看待班会课对学生的影响。三、各档次的给分范围和要求：项目分值评分标准概括5按照要求概括了原文的全部主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。4基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。3基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，但包含一些不相
19、关的信息，有个别句子抄自原文。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。2不能按照要求概括原文的主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息，有较多的抄袭。语言结构不够准确，行文不够规范。0-1没有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相关的信息，大多数句子都抄自原文。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。写作18-20包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或极少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。14-17包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章
20、结构的连贯性较好。11-13包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。7-10包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性一般。4-6只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄源文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。1-3只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确，文章基本照抄原文。词汇极其贫
21、乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。0以下几种情况，给0分：1）完全抄袭原文（或其它文章）2）文不对题3）只写一些零散的单词，完全没有表达完整的内容【山东省日照市2014高考英语一模试卷】写作(满分30分) 外教Chris Pearson开设了一个英语辅导班(English Tutorial)，按照学生实际需要进行辅导。参加者须根据个人实际情况提出中请并选择辅导内容。假如你是李明，请你按照下面提示给外教写一个电子邮件。内容如下： 1介绍个人情况： 2说明辅导意向(如：口语、语法、写作、文化知识等其中的一项或几项)； 3表达愿望。 注意： 1词数：120-150；开头已经给出
22、，不计入总侧数； 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mr Pearson，I am writing you to apply for the membership of the English Tutorial_【参考的范围】One possible version:Dear Mr Pearson,I am writing you to apply for the membership of the English Tutorial. As a Senior Grade 3 student, I think Im doing well in English because I alwa
23、ys get good marks in written English tests. But still I think I am not a perfect learner because Im not so good at spoken English, and that is what troubles me most. And when I listen to native speakers, I find it hard to catch what they talk about. Whenever I speak English, I often make some mistak
24、es, which annoys me. So, I want to be a member in the speaking tutorial so that I can improve my spoken English and communicate better with others. Im sure Ill do much better in it with your help. Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming【宁夏银川市第九中学2014一模】 书面表达(25分)春节刚过，关于压岁钱众说纷纭，褒贬不一。对此，
25、网上做了一项调查。82%的网友认为，压岁钱是春节重要的传统习俗之一，代表着长辈对晚辈的美好祝愿，也是孩子们过年的盼望。18%的参与者认为这几年越给越多的压岁钱已成为负担，而且还成了某些人公然行贿的幌子，对构建和谐健康的社会不利。请你写一篇调查报告，阐述以上观点并说出自己的看法。开头已给出。字数100左右，可适当扩展。提示词：行贿 bribeLucky money, good or badAfter the Spring Festival, there arise some hot topics, and lucky money is included as well.【解析】考点：考查议论文的书面表达
