1、Section Guided Writing文体指导电子邮件(electronic mail，常缩写为Email，email或email)指通过互联网传递的邮件，即用户之间通过互联网发出或收到的信息，是目前互联网上应用最广泛的一种服务。1“邮件头”信息栏的填写一般情况下，表头需要填写的地方有两个：“收件人”(如：Tom 198201 )和“主题”(如：Questions on the English evening class)。2正文电子邮件的正文部分通常由称呼、正文、结束语及署名四部分构成。(1)称呼：一般在收件人姓氏前加上Dear。(2)正文：正文是邮件的主体部分，是写信人要谈论或陈述的
2、内容。正文内容要求简洁达意，层次分明。(3)结束语：常见的结束语有：I am looking forward to your reply/answer.With best regards.I wish you good luck/every success in.等。有时这部分也可省略。(4)署名：写在正文右下角的位置。亮点句式1常用的开头语表示高兴：I was so glad/pleased/happy to receive your email.表示感谢：Thank you for your wonderful gift/interesting email.表示关心与询问：How are
3、you doing these days?How are you getting on these days?How are you getting on with your work/studies?表示抱歉：I am sorry that I did not write to you soon because I have been very busy these days.表示遗憾：I am sorry to learn that you did not pass the examination.I am so upset to hear that you are ill these d
4、ays.I do hope you are feeling better.2常用的结束语I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Please give your family my regards.Take good care of yourself and keep in touch.假设你是王阳，你的网友李明给你发来电子邮件，告诉你今年寒假他要去国外旅行，想让你给他一些有关国外旅行的建议。请根据下面的提示给他回一封电子邮件。1建议：事先了解该国语言、历史、文化及风俗习惯；保管好身份证、护照、钱及其他贵重物品；遵守当地法律，尊重当地风俗习惯
5、；遇到麻烦，向警察或中国大使馆求助。2祝李明旅途愉快。注意：1.词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：大使馆embassy_第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为应用文(电子邮件)；2确定人称：以第一人称和第二人称为主；3确定时态：主要用一般将来时和一般现在时。二、构思第一段：点明写电子邮件的目的；第二段：具体介绍国外旅行的建议；第三段：祝愿。第二步：核心词汇想周全1culture and customs文化和风俗2keep an eye on注意3obey 遵守4turn to a policeman求助于警察5be in trouble有困难6ID card身
6、份证第三步：由词扩句雏形现1知道你寒假要到国外旅行，我很高兴。Im very glad to know that you will travel abroad to spend your winter vacation.2我愿意给你一些建议。Id like to give you some tips3这些建议将有助于你安全快乐地旅行。The tips will help you travel safely and happily4为了旅途愉快，你应该了解该国语言、历史、文化及风俗习惯。In order to enjoy your trip，you should learn about the
7、language，history，culture and customs of the country.5当你旅行的时候保管好你的物品，例如身份证、护照、钱及其他贵重物品。When travelling，keep an eye on the things you take, such as your ID card，passport，money and other valuable things.6除此之外，不同的国家有不同的法律和风俗。In addition，different countries may have different laws and customs7你必须尊重和遵守当地法
8、律和风俗习惯。You must obey local laws and customs8你处境困难。You are in trouble9你应向警察或中国大使馆求助。You should turn to a policeman or go to the Chinese embassy.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用定语从句合并句2、3Id like to give you some tips that will help you travel safely and happily.2用状语从句合并句8、9If/When you are in trouble，turn to a policeman
9、or go to the Chinese embassy.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇(注意使用first of all，second，finally等衔接过渡词)_【参考范文】Dear Li Ming，Im very glad to know that you will travel abroad to spend your winter vacation.Id like to give you some tips that will help you travel safely and happily.First of all，in order to enjoy your trip，you sh
10、ould learn about the language，history，culture and customs of the country.Second，when travelling，keep an eye on the things you take，such as your ID card，passport，money and other valuable things.In addition，different countries may have different laws and customs，and you must obey local laws and customs.Finally，if you are in trouble，turn to a policeman or go to the Chinese embassy. Have a good journey! Sincerely， Wang Yang
