1、浙江宁波市2016高考英语（二轮）短文改错能力训练（1）及答案 短文改错I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned fr
2、om black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. 【参考答案】6
3、.1.holding-hold此处used to意为：过去常常，to是不定式符号，故用动词原形。2.passes-passed根据前面was可知为一般过去时态。3.much-well/ clearly根据句意可知，我很清楚记得我的爷爷。此处very much是多的意思，不合题意。4.shoulder-shoulders根据常理，人有两个肩膀，故用复数。5.toward-to/ into根据句意，这里指：黑胡子变成白胡子。所以用短语turn to或turn into。6.himself-him句意：他的深沉的声音把他和别人区别开来。故用him。7.he前加and根据句中结构可知He had a
4、deep voice和he was strong and powerful是并列关系，故用and连接。8.去掉fact前a固定短语：in fact。9.during-whenduring为介词，后不能接句子；应用when这个连词引导时间状语从句。10.never-ever语义错误。根据句意：他是我认识的最温柔的人。可知将never改为ever。短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删减或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改
5、后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you. Luckily I was the amcompletely free then, so Ill to say “yes”. Ill arrive in Bristol at around 8 p.m. in Friday evening. onLast Sunday afternoon, I went to the zoo with Lily. There
6、was lots of people there. I found a girl cry in the zoo. She was lost and she cant find her mother. We decided to help her. I try my best find the broadcasting station in the zoo. On the same time Lily played with her and looked after her careful there. The little girl stopped crying and played with
7、 Lily. At last his mother came. That made me feel very happily. I thought I really did a good thing. If everyone helps with each other, the world will become more beautiful.【答案】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）66. there was 改成there are67. cry改成crying， find sb. doing sth.意思是“看见某人正在做某事”68. cant改为couldnt. 短文上下文都
8、是一般过去时69. try改为tried70. find前加 to。try ones best to do sth.71. on the same time改成at the same time.72. careful改成carefully，副词修饰动词looked after.73. his mother 改成her mother.74. happily改成happy,是系表结构。75. with划掉。help each other意思是“互相帮助”短文改错A persons age no longer tells you something about 76. _his social pos
9、ition, marriage or healthy. Theres no longer 77. _a particular year which one goes to school or goes to 78. _work or gets married or start a family. The social clock 79. _that kept us on time and told us when go to school, get 80. _a job, or stop working isnt as strong as it was used to be. 81. _It
10、doesnt surprise us to hear a 28-year-old university 82. _president or a 35-year-old grandmother, or 70-year-old 83. _man who has become a father for the first time. What we 84. _ all know, publics ideas are changing nowadays. 85. _ 【参考答案】76. something anything 77. healthy health 78. which when（或 yea
11、r in） 79. start starts 80. when to 81. was 82 83.or a 84. What As 85. publics public短文改错I am a very active girl in my class. I have many hobby，1._ such as writing stories, playing piano and singing English2._songs. My most favorite subject is English. I became3._interested in it when I was very youn
12、g. My dream is 4._to study abroad. But now I need to improve my English5._and learn more about west culture as well. I will be6._able to improving the friendship between China and7._the rest of the world. I hoped my dream will come true.8._And I believe in nobody can change my mind. I will work9._ha
13、rder and follow my heart, no matter how happens！10._答案与解析：1hobbyhobbiesmany后接复数名词，下文such as后列举的内容也是提示。2piano前加theplay the piano表示“弹钢琴”，是固定搭配。西洋乐器类名词前常用定冠词the。3去掉mostfavorite本身就是“最喜爱的”，因此原句语义重复。45ButSo前后逻辑上是因果而不是转折关系。6westwestern依据语境这里表示“西方文化”，应用形容词western作定语。7improvingimprovebe able to do sth.表示“能够做
14、某事”。8hopedhope这里表示说话人现在的愿望，故应用一般现在时。9去掉inI believe that.我相信。believe in表示“信任，信仰”，其后不能接从句。10howwhatno matter what happens无论发生什么，what充当从句的主语。短文改错 Mr. Turner turned over in bed from time to time in last night, for he wasvery excited that he could not fall asleep. Yesterday morning, he went to a big gard
15、ening company, knowing as Green Fingers, for the interview. Mr. Turner, that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden, looking forward to the job offered by the company. When he got to the company, he found there were many people waiting there and he had no ideas whether he could get
16、 the job. While waited, he helped the workers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road. Unluckily, he was the only one who finally got the job, so the manager decided to give the job to whoever he believed was helpful.参考答案：Mr. Turner turned over in bed from time to time in last night, for
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