1、江苏省常熟市2014高考英语书面表达训练（1）及参考范文【浙江省2014模拟冲刺试题】书面表达 (满分30分) 请你以“My Best Friend”为题，写一篇短文介绍你的好朋友王佳。要点如下：1、你的好朋友王佳是英语课代表（English representative），英语成绩好, 课堂表现出色。2、她高一时英语演讲比赛获奖，还代表学校参加了在上海举办的英语辩论赛（the English Debating Competition），英语交际能力强。3、她生活态度乐观向上,充满热情注意：1词数：120个词左右。2.不可逐条翻译，可适当扩展。 My Best Friend_【参考范文】One
2、 possible version:Wang Jia is my best friend who is the English representative in our class. In my mind, she is outstanding in the English class with a great sense of reflection and always willing to share.In Senior One, Wang Jia successfully got the prize at the final English speaking contest. What
3、s more, she represented the school to attend the English Debating Competition in Shanghai. She is the girl who has great English communicating ability. Besides, she always puts her enthusiasm into her study and homework. She has an optimism attitude to life, and never gives up. I am glad to have suc
4、h a nice friend and have the opportunity to study together with her. I fully believe Wang Jia has the potential to be successful and I hope our friendship will last forever.【参考范文】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分） Li Yong, once a good student, became a very disappointing one. Having realized that, he carved some enco
5、uraging words on the desk to show his determination, which gave Li Hua a mixed feeling. Li Hua, a good friend of Li Yongs, was moved by his words, for the words showed he has realized his fault and decided to change. It also shows he is responsible and can face his mistakes bravely. However, curving
6、 on a desk is not right at all. If I were the desk, I would tell him: the knife carving hurts me and makes me look ugly. As the public property of our school, you should love me. You said action speaks louder than words. Why not keep the words in mind and take actions to behave well? As teenage stud
7、ents, we must remember that study comes first. So I often help my classmates with difficulty so that we can make progress together. Also we should encourage each other so as to make our class a better one. Only in this way, can we be good students in school, and make great contribution to the countr
8、y in the future. 第二节：一、读写任务评分原则1、本试题总分为25分，分两部分给分 短文概括5分 主题写作 20分。2、强调内容健康，观点鲜明，说服力强，表述清晰。可参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。3、评分时，选根据文章语言的规范、内容的合适及篇章的连贯性初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。4、语言规范：拼写与标点符号是语言规范的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点 1. 以约30个词概括以上博文的主要内容。2. 然后以约1
9、20个词就李勇的做法发表你的看法，内容包括： (1) 李华为何因李勇的行为而感动，并说明其理由； (2) 假如你是“课桌”，你想对李勇说什么，为什么？ (3) 作为学生，你是如何为班级做出自己的贡献的？三、各档次的给分范围和要求：项目分值评分标准概括5按照要求概括了原文的全部主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。4基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。3基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，但包含一些不相关的信息，有个别句子抄自原文。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。2不能按照要求概括原文的主
10、要信息，包含较多不相关的信息，有较多的抄袭。语言结构不够准确，行文不够规范。0-1没有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相关的信息，大多数句子都抄自原文。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。写作18-20包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或极少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。14-17包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。11-13包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容
11、不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。7-10包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性一般。4-6只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄源文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。1-3只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确，文章基本照抄原文。词汇极其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。0以下几种情况，给0分：1）完全
12、抄袭原文（或其它文章）2）文不对题3）只写一些零散的单词，完全没有表达完整的内容【山东省2014仿真模拟冲刺卷】写作（满分30分）近年来，随着私家车的增加，城市交通越来越拥挤。在中、小学生上学或放学时，校门口以及学校附近拥挤问题更加严重。这给学生、教师、家长和其他市民带来许多不便。尤其值得注意的是，学校附近的交通堵塞也存在不可忽略的隐患。为此，这引起了不少民众的担忧。你作为一名在校学生，署名张小明，根据以下要点写一封英语信，向本校英语报投稿。1为什么要写这封英语信。2你们学校门口及附近交通拥挤的原因。3提出二至三条建议。注意：词数120-150左右。Dear Editor,_Yours, Zh
13、ang Xiaoming【参考范文】Dear Editor,Im Zhang Xiaoming, a student from Grade 3I am writing to discuss the traffic problem near our school gate.With so many parents coming to pick up their children, traffic jams are frequent near the school gate, causing much inconvenience to us students as well as our teac
14、hers and passers-byMany people have been worrying about the hidden traffic problemsSo I strongly recommend some effective and urgent measures be takenFirst, we should encourage students to ride their bicycles or walk to school by themselves instead of taking cars, which will not only help reduce the
15、 jam but benefit students health as wellIt is also a good idea to allow junior students to leave school 10 minutes earlier than othersBesides, cars should not be allowed to park near the school gate.I do hope my suggestions can be considered and the problem can be solved soon. Yours, Zhang Xiaoming
16、【广东省三模】书面表达（满分25分）就学生该不该带手机的问题有许多不同的看法。现在许多学生用手机，他们认为使用手机是一种时尚；另外用手机和家人、朋友联系方便；但是一些学生违反学校规则把手机带到班里，在班里就能听到手机铃声。一些学生甚至在班里发短信。最后请谈谈你的看法。根据上面的汉语提示写一篇120词左右的短文。_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 作文：本文属于给出汉语提示的半开放性的写作。成文时应注意以下几点：1. 内容表达要条理要清晰。正反对比分明；2. 内容要点要齐全；3. 注意人称和时态。时态用一般现在时，人称用一、三人称；4. 注意使用关联词，使文章顺畅、自然。5.
17、 适当使用一些高级词汇和句式。 【参考范文】One possible version:Im a senior high student. Now many students use mobile phones .They think its a fashion to use mobile phones .Besides, its very convenient to get in touch with their families and friends by using mobile phones. But some students break the rules in class. Th
18、ey bring their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear the ring of mobile phones in class. Some of them even waste precious time in class typing short messages on the mobile phones.In my opinion, the classroom is a place for students to gain knowledge .Therefore quietness is badly needed fo
19、r us to learn our lessons .Those with mobile phones shouldnt take mobile phones to the classroom . We are supposed to concentrate on our studies. The school should make a rule to forbid the students to use mobile phones in the classroom. 【江西省九江市2014二模】书面表达（满分25分） 距离高考剩下不到100天的时间了，紧张的备考已经拉开序幕，但是很多同学还
20、不知如何处理学习、健身、休息与高考备考之间的关系。请根据这一话题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对这一问题的看法和建议。注意：1.词数120字左右，开头语已为你写好； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。How to Get Prepared for the College Entrance Exams The College Entrance Examination is drawing near. _【参考范文】The College Entrance Examination is drawing near. However, most students of senior three dont
21、know how to connect rest, doing exercise with study. In their eyes they should sacrifice their rest time in order to get high scores, which results in poor health and low efficiency of learning. (48)Just as a famous saying goes: all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. we should be aware that not
22、hing is more valuable than health which is a foundation of success. Therefore, on the one hand, we should make preparations for the exam fully and systematically. On the other hand, we should relieve stress by means of relaxation and doing sports. (111)In conclusion, only when we have adequate rest
23、and doing some sports can we study more efficiently. (128)【2013界广东珠海市高三上期末质量监测】基本写作（共1小题；满分15分）高中学生特别是高三学生熬夜现象很广泛。某高中在200名学生中就睡觉时间做了一次抽样调查，结果如下：25名学生在晚上1点左右睡觉；150名学生在12点左右睡觉；25名学生在11点左右睡觉，高三学生没有一个人在11点之前睡觉。晚睡的结果就是晚起，早晨7：20学生就需要进课室开始一天的学习，可是很多学生直到7点才起床，没有时间吃早餐就匆忙进课室。不少学生因为疲劳在上课时睡着了。请根据以上内容写一篇短文，表述学生的
24、睡觉情况和晚睡的不良结果。参考词汇熬夜“stay up late写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。【参考范文】基础写作 （共1小题；满分15分）A survey, done among 200 senior school students, shows that it is very common for senior school students, especially Senior 3 students, to stay up late. *150 of the 200 students (surveyed) go to bed aroun
25、d 12 oclock at night, 25 students go to bed as late as 1 oclock early the next morning and only 25 rest as early as 11 oclock, none of whom was in Senior 3. *Staying up late leads to getting up late. *Though students are required to start a days work at 7:20, many of them get up as late as 7 oclock
26、in the morning, and then hurry into their classroom without breakfast. *As a result, some of them are so sleepy in the day as to fall asleep in class.【评卷建议】基础写作：要包括全部内容约10个信息点。因为内容充足，比较好写，难点只在如何把这些内容组合成5句话，因此句子的组织结构成为重点。1-5分：只写出极少内容或部分相关词汇。6-9分：写出大部分内容，语法错误很多。10-12分：写出几乎全部内容，有部分语法错误。13-15分：写出全部内容，很少或没有语法错误。
