1、如何写建议信(2)建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告的一种文体。建议信有可能是写给个人就遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法，也可能是写给某个组织或机构就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。建议信要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由，提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要和缓。基本结构1首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。2主体段落：提出具体建议。同时用事实来证明建议的正确性和必要性。3尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，表达希望建议得以采纳，问题得以解决的愿望。1开头：Im sorry to know that you have some trouble/difficulty/problems
2、 in.after reading your letter.You asked me for my advice on .and its my great pleasure to give you some suggestions/advice/tips.Thanks for trusting me.Id like to give you some advice.I am writing to express my views concerning.I am writing to share some advice on.with you.However，the situation is ea
3、sy to change if you take my advice.Here are a few suggestions/tips which I think may be helpful to you.2给出建议：I feel that it would be more beneficial/helpful if you could .I would like to suggest that.In my opinion，you should.It is better to.I strongly recommend that you.It does help if you.It is a g
4、ood idea for you to.If I were you，I would.Youd better .3建议的理由：The reason why.is that.It not only can.but also can.It is because.The reason for it is that .4结尾：These are personal suggestions，but I do hope that they will be of some help.I hope you will make great progress in.as time goes by.I will be
5、more than happy to see improvements you can make in.I am looking forward to your good news.I hope you will find these suggestions/this advice of some use/help.I will be ready to discuss this matter in more detail.If you have more problems，please dont hesitate to contact me.5常用衔接词：(1) firstly/first，s
6、econdly/second，last but not least，to start with，finally，in the end；(2) on the one hand，on the other (hand)；not only.but also；(3)whats more，in addition (to)，besides假如你是李华，请根据下表内容给中国野生动物保护协会CWCA(China Wildlife Conservation Association)的会长写一封建议信。问题1990年藏羚羊(antelope)的数量大约为100万只，现在只剩不到10万只，数量急剧减少原因为了获取藏羚
7、羊的皮毛，牟取暴利，非法捕杀藏羚羊的现象仍然时有发生建议利用贵协会的影响力加大对藏羚羊保护的宣传力度；增加用于藏羚羊保护的资金；建议贵协会派出一些志愿者来协助保护藏羚羊注意：词数80左右。体裁建议信时态一般现在时主题建议保护藏羚羊人称第一、三人称结构第一步：表明写作意图，陈述事由。第二步：提出具体建议。同时用事实来证明建议的正确性和必要性。第三步：对提出的建议进行总结。.对接单元词汇1wool n(羊等的)绒，毛2by_means_of 凭借3obtain 获得4illegal adj. 非法的5as_a_result 结果6make_a_great_difference 产生大的影响.巧用单
8、元句式、语法(一)完成句子1据报道，为了羊毛，大量的藏羚羊正被非法猎杀。It_is_reported_that too many Tibetan antelopes are being hunted and killed illegally for their wool.2显而易见，那些非法捕猎者可以获得大量利润。Clearly，the illegal hunters can_obtain_great_profits.3我建议一些志愿者被派往那里帮助保护藏羚羊。I suggest that some volunteers should_be_sent_there_to_help protect
9、 the Tibetan antelopes.4但愿我的建议对藏羚羊更好的未来会有重大影响。 If only my_suggestions_could_make_a_big_difference to the better future of the Tibetan antelopes.(二)句式升级5用It is clear that.结构改写句2It_is_clear_that_the_illegal_hunters_can_obtain_great_profits.6用that引导表语从句改写句3My_suggestions_is_that_some_volunteers_(should
10、)_be_sent_there_to_help_protect_the_Tibetan_antelopes.7用I hope that.改写句4I_hope_my_suggestions_could_make_a_big_difference_to_the_better_future_of_the_Tibetan_antelopes._参考范文Dear President，Im writing to give some suggestions to further protect the Tibetan antelopes.It is reported that too many Tibeta
11、n antelopes are being hunted and killed illegally for their wool.It is clear that the illegal hunters can obtain great profits by means of selling the wool.As a result，the number of the Tibetan antelopes is decreasing rapidly from about 1,000,000 in 1990 to less than 100,000 at present.Immediate mea
12、sures must be taken to solve the present problem.First，the importance of protecting the Tibetan antelopes should be publicized through your association.Second，would you provide more money for the conservation of the Tibetan antelopes？Last but not least，my suggestion is that some volunteers (should)
13、be sent there to help protect the Tibetan antelopes.These are my suggestions and I hope they could make a big difference to the better future of the Tibetan antelopes.Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely，Li Hua【导读】世界名著呼啸山庄是19世纪英国文学的代表作之一。小说全篇充满强烈的反压迫、争幸福的斗争精神，又始终笼罩着离奇、紧张的浪漫气氛。阅读下面的节选，对比中外文化
14、中对收养弃儿态度的异同。Wuthering Heights (excerpt)Ellen Deans storyCatherine and Heathcliff as children 1770When I was a child，I was always at Wuthering Heights，because my mother was a servant of the Earnshaw family.They are a very old family who have lived in that house for centuries，as you can see from their
15、 names on the stone over the front door.I grew up with Catherine and Hindley Earnshaw，and we three played together as children.One day，their father Mr.Earnshaw came back from a long journey.He had travelled sixty miles to Liverpool and back on business，and was very tired.“Look what Ive brought you！”
16、 he told us all，unwrapping something he was holding carefully in his arms.Catherine and Hindley were expecting presents，and they rushed eagerly to see what it was.They were very disappointed to see only a dirty，blackhaired gipsy child.“I found him all alone in the busy streets of Liverpool，”Mr.Earns
17、haw explained to them，“and I couldnt leave him to die.He can sleep in your room.” But Hindley and Catherine were angry because they had not received any presents，and refused to let the strange child share their room.However Mr.Earnshaw insisted，and little by little the boy became accepted by the fam
18、ily.He was called Heathcliff，as a first and last name.No one ever discovered who his parents had been.Catherine and he became great friends，but Hindley hated him，and was often cruel to him.Old Mr.Earnshaw was strangely fond of this gipsy child，and frequently punished his son for behaving badly to He
19、athcliff.Hindley began to be jealous of his fathers feelings for Heathcliff，and saw them both as enemies.This situation could not last.As Mr.Earnshaw grew old and ill，Heathcliff became even more his favourite，and Hindley often quarrelled with his father.When Hindley was sent away to study，I hoped th
20、at we would have peace in the house.But then it was that old servant Joseph who caused trouble.He tried to persuade his master to be stricter with the children，and was always complaining that Heathcliff and Catherine did not spend enough time studying the Bible or attending church services.Catherine
21、 was a wild，wicked girl in those days.We had to watch her every moment of the day，to stop her playing her tricks on us.She was proud，and liked giving orders.But she had the prettiest face and the sweetest smile youve ever seen.I could forgive her anything when she came to say she was sorry.She was m
22、uch too fond of Heathcliff，and the worst punishment we could invent was to keep her separate from him.Her father could no longer understand her or her behaviour，and Catherine did not realize that his illness made him less patient with her.At last Mr.Earnshaw found peace.He died quietly in his chair
23、by the fire one October evening in 1775.The night was wild and stormy，and we were all sitting together in the big kitchen.Joseph was reading his Bible at the table，while Catherine had her head on her fathers knee.He was pleased to see her so gentle for once，and she was singing him to sleep.I was gla
24、d the old gentleman was sleeping so well.But when it was time to go to bed，Catherine put her arms round her fathers neck to say goodnight，and immediately screamed，“Oh，hes dead，Heathcliff! Hes dead！”Heathcliff and I started crying loudly and bitterly too.Joseph told me to fetch the doctor，so I ran to
25、 the village，although I knew it was too late.When I came back，I went to the childrens room，to see if they needed me，and I listened for a moment at their door.They were imagining the dead man in a beautiful distant place，far from the troubles of this world.And as I listened，crying silently，I could no
26、t help wishing we were all there safe together.呼啸山庄(节选)艾伦迪恩讲述的故事凯瑟琳和希斯克利夫的童年 1770年，我小时候一直在呼啸山庄，因为我母亲在欧肖家做佣人。欧肖家是一个很古老的家族，在那幢宅子住了好几百年，你能从门前石头上刻着的名字看出来。我是同凯瑟琳和亨德雷欧肖一起长大的，小时候我们仨都在一起玩儿。一天，他们的父亲欧肖先生出远门回来。他走了六十英里去利物浦办事后又赶回来， 非常疲倦。“看我给你们带来了什么！”他对我们大家说，一边打开了怀里小心抱着的东西。凯瑟琳和亨德雷正盼望着是礼物呢，兴冲冲地围上来看到底是什么东西。当他们只看到一个
27、脏兮兮、黑头发的吉普赛孩子时，大失所望。“我看到他孤零零地待在利物浦繁忙的街头，”欧肖先生对他们解释说，“我总不能让他就那么死了吧。他可以睡在你们的房里。”但亨德雷和凯瑟琳气恼没有得到礼物， 不肯让这个野孩子睡在他们的房间。在欧肖先生的坚持下，一家人还是渐渐地接受了这个孩子。大家叫他希斯克利夫，既是名， 也是姓。始终没人搞清楚他的父母是谁。凯瑟琳和他成了好朋友，但亨德雷不喜欢他，对他常常很粗暴。老欧肖先生异乎寻常地喜欢这个吉普赛孩子，时常因为自己的儿子对希斯克利夫不友善而惩罚他。亨德雷开始嫉妒他父亲对希斯克利夫的感情，视他俩为敌。这种情况不可能持续下去。随着欧肖先生变得年迈多病， 他越发地偏爱
28、希斯克利夫了， 而亨德雷则常同他父亲吵架。当亨德雷被送到外头上学后，我本指望我们能在家里过上安稳日子。但又轮到老仆人约瑟夫招惹是非。他试图怂恿他的主人对孩子们再严厉些，总是抱怨希斯克利夫和凯瑟琳不下功夫研读圣经和参加教堂的礼拜。凯瑟琳当时是个任性、淘气的姑娘。我们一天到晚都得盯着她，一不留意就捉弄我们。她自大，好发号施令。但您从没看到过她那可爱的小脸和甜甜的微笑。只要她过来说抱歉时，我就什么都原谅她了。她太喜欢希斯克利夫了，不让她和希斯克利夫在一起是我们所能采取的最严厉的惩罚。她的父亲已无法理解她和她的所作所为，而凯瑟琳也没有意识到父亲的病情已使他对自己不像以前那样惯着了。欧肖先生最终安息了。
29、1775年10月的一个晚上，他安祥地死在火炉旁他的椅子上。那天晚上狂风肆虐，我们都一起坐在大厨房里。约瑟夫伏案读着他的圣经，凯瑟琳把头枕在她父亲的膝头。好不容易看到她这么乖，欧肖先生很高兴，她唱着歌儿催他入眠。老先生睡得这么好，我很欣慰。但该上床睡觉，凯瑟琳用胳膊搂着她父亲的脖子道晚安时，她突然尖叫起来，“啊，他死了，希斯克利夫！他死了！”希斯克利夫和我也都开始嚎啕痛哭。约瑟夫叫我去喊大夫，虽然我知道太晚了，但还是跑去了村子。回来后，我到孩子们的房间去看看他们是否需要我，我在门前站着听了一会儿。他们正在那儿想象死去的人如何在一个遥远、美丽的地方远离凡世的烦恼。我边听边默默地哭着，不禁开始祈祷我们都能在天堂相安无事地相处。知识积累1gipsy n. 吉普赛人2jealous adj. 妒忌的3wicked adj. 邪恶的；淘气的4bitterly adv. 痛苦地5distant adj. 遥远的文化链接呼啸山庄之角色解读吉普赛弃儿希斯克利夫被山庄老主人收养后，因受辱和恋爱不遂，外出致富，回来后对与其女友凯瑟琳结婚的地主林顿及其子女进行报复，但并不感到高兴。最终希斯克利夫放弃了对小凯瑟琳和哈顿的复仇，说明其本性还是善良的。
