1、专 题 微 练考前6周 提分组合练第1周第3练 规范写作组合练 短文改错书面表达(建议信)限时30分钟短文改错(2019日照二模)I would like to have a smart robot that can do plenty of the things for me.For example,it can clean my room and make the bed,keep everything in order.I hope it will be programmed to do homeworks without making mistakes.In that way,I ca
2、n turn to it wherever I need help with my study.Beside,it can take care of my little brother,who often bothered me much.Then I can have more free time to do what Im fond.It doesnt matter much whether it is shaped like,but it must be able to communicate with me and understand its feelings.How wonderf
3、ully life will become with such a magic robot!答案与解析 去掉the things中的the 考查冠词。plenty of后面跟名词复数，表示泛指，故把the去掉。keepkeeping 考查非谓语动词。句意：它可以打扫我的房间，整理床铺，让一切都井井有条。此处是现在分词作结果状语，故把keeps改为keeping。homeworkshomework 考查不可数名词。homework是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故homeworks改为homework。whereverwhenever 考查状语从句。句意：这样，我就可以在我学习需要帮助的时候求助于它
4、。根据句意可知此处表“无论何时”，应用whenever引导时间状语从句，故wherever改为whenever。BesideBesides 考查副词。句意：此外，它可以照顾我的弟弟，他经常困扰我很多。结合句意，此处表对上文的补充说明，应用Besides。beside是介词，意为“在旁边”，其后应接名词或代词作宾语。故Beside改为Besides。botheredbothers 考查动词的时态。全文整体时态是一般现在时，故该句用一般现在时，故bothered改为bothers。fond后加of 考查固定短语。句意：然后我可以有更多的自由时间做我喜欢的事情。根据句意可知此处是固定短语：be fo
5、nd of“喜爱”。故在fond后加of。whetherwhat 考查名词性从句。此处it作形式主语，what引导的主语从句作真正的主语，且what在主语从句中既起引导作用同时又作介词like的宾语。故whether改为what。itsmy 考查代词。句意：它的形状并不重要，但它必须能够与我沟通，理解我的感受。根据语境可知，此处指的是理解我的感受，应用代词my。wonderfullywonderful 考查形容词。连系动词become后面用形容词作表语，故wonderfully改为wonderful。书面表达(建议信)假如你是高中学生李华。最近，你得知你的外国朋友Tom每天都用快餐作为午餐，你
6、觉得这不是个好习惯，请你给他写一封信，建议他尽量少吃快餐。文中应包括：1.常吃快餐的危害；2.提出建议。注意：1.词 数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。参考词汇：营养nutrition范文 Dear Tom，Im worried to know you often eat fast food for lunch these days,but I dont think its a wise choice.Though fast food is convenient and delicious,it can neither provide us with adequate
7、nutrition nor it is usually a balanced diet.To keep healthy and get enough energy from lunch，youd better take some home-cooking for lunch or buy some fresh food from the school canteen.I dont mean fast food should be refused,but just choose it when you are really in a hurry，or it will surely take some side effects to you.I hope you can take my advice seriously and enjoy all kinds of delicious and healthy Chinese food.Yours，Li Hua
