1、高三英语第一轮复习Book 5 Module 3-4 书面表达 命题人：郝梦影I.书面表达(共25分)手机本来是方便联系的，但是很多年轻人却将手机当成消磨时间的娱乐工具。他们整天低头发微信、玩游戏，被人们称为“低头族”。请为学校专刊写一篇投稿，对这种情况进行分析，并发表你的看法，文字中需包括下面的要点：1 人们对手机产生依赖，疏远家人和亲友；2 低头玩手机甚至引发交通事故，给家人带来痛苦。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。 3. 参考词汇：低头族 Smartphone AddictsStep1审题，首先同学们逐字逐句地审题，确定：1. 写作意图 2.内容要
2、点 3.人称，时态 4.分段 5.书写Step2:草稿：_ _ _ _ _ _ _Step3定稿：_ _ _ _ _ _ _II.短文改错：（10分，每题1分）Dear Bob,Im glad to hear from you. Id like tell you something about my voluntary work in the city library.I got to the library earlier every day. When new books arrived, I helped the librarians move it in, and put them o
3、nto different catalogues. After that, each of the books were numbered and put in the right place on the bookshelf.Although it was hard work and sometimes boring, I had learned a lot. For an example, I have got the idea of how the whole library runs but how to find out the books I need in the shortes
4、t time. However, by offering this service in the library, I have made some new friends, that is a very valuable experience for me.Yours,Li HuaBook5 Module 3-4 writing1. WritingOne possible version:It is a common sight to see many young people engaged in emailing, twittering or chatting using their s
5、martpones. It might be the best choice to kill time when they are on dull journey.They are called Smartphone Addicts, who are buried in using their smartphones or laptops without raising their heads. This is very harmful. On the one hand, they keep away from their friends or family. On the other han
6、d, being busy with their smartphones can cause accidents, which brings them more pains than pleasure.As a matter of fact, they can take up reading to kill time during their trips. Reading books or newspapers can also enrich their knowledge. The pleasure from reading is a pleasant experience they cant have from using smartphones.2. 改错
