1、第二部分 题型应对策略 第1讲 应用文(一)(建议信&求助信&告知信)【典例】(2018浙江11月高考)技法探究素养提升【要点盘点】1.第一段点题:说明写信目的,告诉对方自己寻求帮助Im writing _(以寻求帮助).2.第二段主体段落展开:航班信息、钱包特征和里面物品乘坐从中国到伦敦的FL753航班的商务舱I flew business class _.到达伦敦后发现钱包丢失_on arrival of London.钱包特征和里面物品It is a black leather one and _in it.to seek your helpon your FL753 from Chin
2、a to LondonI found my purse was gonemy ID card,two credit cards as well as somemoney are3.第三段告知具体联系方式If _(任何人找到它,请发 电子邮件到告诉我).anybody finds it,please tell me at xxx 词句靓化1.句增加个人相关信息_and Im writing to seek your help.2.合理利用多种句式,升级句子结构 用现在分词的完成式作状语连接句和句,航班信息具体化_Im Li Hua,a would-be college student from
3、ChinaHaving flown business class on your FL753 from China to London on November1st,2018,I found my purse was gone on arrival of London.【我来升级】用完全倒装改写句It is a black leather one and _.3.调整表达语气,拓展表达希望得到帮助If anybody happens to find it,_?I would _.in it are my ID card,two credit cards as well assome money
4、would you be kind enough to tell me at xxx be grateful for your help【五档满分范文】Dear Sir/Madam,Im Li Hua,a would-be college student from China and Im writing to seek yourhelp.Having flown business class on your FL753 from China to London on November 1st,2018,I found my purse was gone on arrival of Londo
5、n.It is a black leather one and in itare my ID card,two credit cards as well as some money.All these things are vital andurgent for me to register and start my college study.If anybody happens to find it,would you be kind enough to tell me at xxx ?I would be grateful for your help.Yours sincerely,Li
6、 Hua【阅卷老师点评】1.该题目写作时容易犯的错误(1)审题不清楚,时态容易混乱(2)行程信息不能具体化,钱包特征不明显,不能适当增加细节2.该范文运用了较多的高级词汇和复杂句式,以及各种衔接词,如seek,vital,urgent,grateful,as well as,非谓语动词Having flown,条件状语从句等。Passage1 (2020温州三模)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友 Peter 的家乡 Florida 新冠肺炎疫情严重,他很担忧自己和家人会被感染,向你咨询如何做才能更好地保护自己和家人。请你给他回复一封邮件,内容包括:1.表达担忧;2.提出合理建议(至少两条);3.祝福
7、。新题精练素养应用注意:1.词数 80 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:新冠病毒:the 2019-nCoV_ _ _【参考范文】Dear Peter,Sorry to hear Florida severely affected by the pneumonia caused by the 2019-nCoV.Im writing to offer suggestions on the self-protection from being infected.Initially,the 2019-nCoV has proved highly infectious,so mi
8、nimizing outdoor activities to avoid unnecessary contacts with others is of vital importance.Besides,do remember to correctly wear a mask,preferably asurgical mask,if you have to go out.It is also wise to keep good hygiene by washing your hands often either at home or when returning from the outside
9、.Sincerely hoping these are of help and wish you a healthy and safe life!Yours,Li HuaPassage 2 假定你是李华,你校学生会创办的你最喜爱的英语月报(English Monthly)向读者征集意见。请你给主编写封邮件,内容包括:1.自我介绍;2.说明该报优点:内容丰富,指导英语学习;3.提出建议:多介绍中国传统文化及励志故事。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_ _ _【参考范文】Dear editor,Im so glad to give my personal opinion
10、s on my favorite newspaper EnglishMonthly set up by the Student Union.Im a high school student who is enthusiastic about reading newspapers and I want to learn something from them,I think English Monthly has many advantages,For one thing,its rich in content,ranging from economy to civilization.For a
11、nother,its a guide toEnglish learning.Through it,I can have a good knowledge of whats going on at home and abroad and Ive improved my English reading skills.If only you could introduce some more about Chinese traditional culture and inspirational stories in the culture column.Here I really hope English Monthly will attract more readers.Yours sincerely,Li Hua
