1、返回目录 Which English Module 4 返回目录 Section Writing 观点对比类议论文返回目录 写作技法指导佳作构建示例目录Contents 返回目录 写作技法指导一、基本结构对比类议论文一般可分为今昔对比和正反观点对比两种。1今昔对比类的文章一般是首先通过主题句表明被比较的两个物体或被比较方面，然后进行扩展。行文方式一是逐点比较，即 AB 交错，逐条说明两者的异同；二是整块比较，即先 A 后 B。返回目录 2正反观点比较类的文章结构完整，条理清楚，逻辑性强。此类文章结构一般是：首先提出问题正方观点及论据(理由)反方观点及论据(理由)最后是结论或说出自己的观点。返回
2、目录 二、增分佳句1常用的开头方式Opinions vary on this topic.Different men usually see the same subject in different lights.Different people hold different opinions/views.Opinions are divided on this topic.Opinions fall mainly into two groups.People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards返回目录 2表达不同观点of them
3、hold the opinion thatof them are in favor of the idea thatPeople who are for/against the idea thinkSome people believe thatOthers argue that返回目录 3不同观点之间的衔接However，of them hold a different view./of them hold the opposite opinion.People who are against it dont think so.However,each coin has two sides.
4、Different from those，people thinkOn the other hand，people object that返回目录 4谈论自己的看法When it comes to me，As the saying goes,every coin has two sides.And the same is true for this topic.As far as I am concerned，返回目录 佳作构建示例【题目要求】假如你是王涛，最近，你班同学就“世界上人人都说英语是不是会更容易些”展开了一次讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇 100 词左右的短文，并表明自己的观
5、点。返回目录 ForAgainstCommunication would be easier.Business would be smoother.There would be no misunder-standings.International meetings would be cheaper no need for translators and interpreters.Countries would lose their own identity.Everything would be just the same.The world would be more boring.The
6、re would be less individual cultural differences.返回目录 第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为一篇_；2确定中心人称：本文主要人称为_；3确定主体时态：_。二、构思第一部分：点明讨论主题最近，我班同学就“世界上人人都说英语是不是会更容易些”展开了一次讨论。第二部分：阐述支持者和反对者的观点。第三部分：表明自己的看法。议论文第一、三人称一般现在时返回目录 第二步：核心词汇想周全1_ 讨论2_支持3_迷人的；极美的；极好的4_元素5_单调的6_多样性debate in favour of fascinating element dull
7、 diversity 返回目录 第三步：由词扩句雏形现1最近，我们就“世界上人人都说英语是不是会更容易些”展开了一次讨论。(if 条件状语从句；whether 宾语从句)2由于不需要书面翻译人员和口译者，它们将更快而且更便宜。(There would be no need for)Recently weve had a debate.Its about whether it would be much easier if everyone in the world just spoke English.There would be no need for translators and int
8、erpreters.They would be faster and cheaper.返回目录 3此外，商业和政治会更容易，因为所有的通信和谈判可以直接做，他们会更快，更便宜，因为没有翻译和口译的必要。(furthermore;as 原因状语从句)Furthermore,business and politics would be easier,as all communications and negotiations could be done directly,and they would be faster and cheaper because there would be no n
9、eed for translators and interpreters.返回目录 4然而，其他人认为，如果世界上的每个人都说英语，世界将是一个不那么有趣的地方。(however;if 宾语从句)5我们将失去许多迷人的文化元素和我们的国家身份。(简单句)However,other people think if everyone in the world spoke English,the world would be a less interesting place.We would lose many fascinating elements of culture,and our nati
10、onal identity.返回目录 6尽管它肯定会使生活的许多方面诸如旅游、做生意和政治便捷得多，它也将使世界成为一个更加乏味单调的地方。(make宾语形容词作宾补)It would certainly make many areas of life such as travel,business and politics much easier.It would also make the world a more boring and duller place to live in.返回目录 第四步：句式升级造亮点1用宾语从句改写句 12用 because 原因状语从句改写句 2Rece
11、ntly weve had a debate about whether it would be much easier if everyone in the world just spoke English.They would be faster and cheaper because there would be no need for translators and interpreters.返回目录 3用 although 让步状语从句改写句 6Although it would certainly make many areas of life such as travel,bus
12、iness and politics much easier,it would also make the world a more boring and duller place to live in.返回目录 第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Recently weve had a debate about whether it would be much easier if everyone in the world just spoke English.Different people hold different opinions.Some people are in favor of the
13、idea.Firstly,life would be much easier.Furthermore,business and politics would be easier,as all communications and negotiations could be done directly,and they would be faster and cheaper because there would be no need for translators and interpreters.返回目录 However,other people think if everyone in t
14、he world spoke English,the world would be a less interesting place.We would lose many fascinating elements of culture,and our national identity.Personally,I feel that although it would certainly make many areas of life such as travel,business and politics much easier,it would also make the world a more boring and duller place to live in.We need cultural diversityit makes us richer.
