1、返回目录 Sandstorms in Asia Module 4 返回目录 Section Writing环保类作文返回目录 写作技法指导佳作构建示例目录Contents 返回目录 写作技法指导环境污染已成为越来越受关注的社会问题，这方面的短文不仅是对现实的展现，也是呼吁人们对环境问题的关注；同时，也要求人们增强环境保护意识。一、基本结构第一部分：提出问题(现状)并分析问题(造成的原因)。第二部分：提出建议或分析对策，展望未来或发出号召。返回目录 二、增分佳句One of the major environmental problems isThere is a serious problem
2、 withThe pollution is caused by and it is becoming more and more severe.Many are damaged/harmed/destroyed byIn order to the government should and we citizens mustIn my opinion,we canIn a nutshell返回目录 佳作构建示例题目要求请根据下表提示，写一篇关于环境问题以及如何注意保护环境的作文。词数 100 左右。环境问题大气污染、水污染、沙尘暴等原因现代社会的迅速发展，人们对大自然的破坏结果有害人类的健康，使
3、动植物灭绝我的建议返回目录 审题谋篇第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文是关于环保话题的_类的、提示性的作文；2确定人称：本文的主要人称为_；3确定时态：主要以_为主，提出建议时，可以用一般将来时。夹叙夹议第三人称一般现在时返回目录 二、构思第一部分：描述存在的环境问题，并分析原因和危害。第二部分：提出建议。返回目录 第二步：核心词汇想周全1_ 环境2_ 污染3_ 被污染的4_ 对有害5_ 疾病6_ 灭绝7_ 对负责8_在我看来9_ 措施10_ 惩罚environmentpollutionpolluteddo harm todiseasedie outbe responsible f
4、orAs far as Im concernedmeasurepunish返回目录 第三步：由词扩句雏形现1现在，出现了很多环境问题，如大气污染、水污染、沙尘暴等。(there be 句型)2很多动植物因此而灭绝。(主谓结构)Nowadays,there are many environment problems such asair pollution,water pollution and sandstorms.Many animals and plants are dying out as a result of allkinds of environment problems.返回目录
5、 3人类应该对此负责。(主系表结构)4随着社会的发展，越来越多的车辆和垃圾被生产，更多的自然资源被利用。(被动语态)People should be responsible for the problems.With the development of society,more cars and waste areproduced and more natural resources are being used.返回目录 5这些都使得我们的环境越来越糟。(主谓宾宾语补足语结构)6只有这样我们才能拥有一个更好的环境。(主谓宾结构)These have made our environment
6、 worse and worse.We can have a good environment onlyin this way.返回目录 第四步：句式升级造亮点1用强调句改写句 32用非限制性定语从句合并句 4 和句 5 It is people who should be responsible for the problems.With the development of society,more cars and waste areproduced and more natural resources are being used,whichhave make our environm
7、ent worse and worse.3用倒装句改写句 6Only in this way can we have a good environment.返回目录 第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Nowadays,there are many environment problems such as air pollution,water pollution and sandstorms.The polluted air does harm to peoples health.The polluted water causes diseases and deaths.Whats more,many a
8、nimals and plants are dying out as a result of all kinds of environment problems.It is people who should be responsible for the problems.With the development of society,more cars and waste are produced and more natural resources are being used,which have made our environment worse and worse.返回目录 As far as Im concerned,to protect the environment,the government must take more effective measures.It should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection and those who destroy the environment should be severely punished.Only in this way can we have a good environment.
