1、选修7 Under the seaUnit 3【写作任务】昨天你从报纸上读到了一篇有关海洋情况的报道。请根据以下信息写一篇英语短文。1.作文要包括如下要点:(1)报道的来源;(2)报道的内容;(3)你的呼吁;(4)你的希望。2.只能用5个句子表达全部信息。【写作要求】1.写作分析:本题列出了四个要点,要点之间具有很强的逻辑性。在本文的写作过程中,我们应注意如下几点:(1)合理使用简单句、并列句和复合句,长短结合;(2)在文章中恰到好处地使用所学到的词汇、短语、句型及语法知识;(3)根据句子间的逻辑关系,合理地使用关联词语和【写作分析与指导】过渡词语;(4)在陈述消息来源时,可与后面报道内容中的
2、第一个信息结合起来,以节约句子数量;报道内容的第二、三两个要点由于逻辑关系非常紧密,可放在一个句子中表达。另外,由于陈述的是一种事实,因此文章的时态应以现在时态为主。【写作分析与指导】二、词句储备1.写作中可能使用的词语有:(1)近海地区 _ (2)海底生物 _ (3)下降,减少 _ (4)催促 _ (5)使某人意识到 _ (6)保护 _(7)生存环境 _(8)渔业资源 _ undersea creaturesoffshore areasdeclineurgemake sb.aware ofreserve/reservationliving environmentsfishing resour
3、ces(1)我从我市的一家晚报上读到了一篇报道称,近海地区的污染正变得越来越严重。I read a news report from an evening paper of our city,which says the pollution in the sea,especially in the offshore areas,is getting worse.(2)海底生物数量急剧减少,近海地区已无鱼可捕。Undersea creatures are declining greatly in number,so few fish can be caught in the offshore a
4、reas.(3)呼吁对公众进一步教育,让他们意识到保护环境的重要性。Further education is urged to be given to the public to make them aware of the importance of protecting the environment.(4)继续执行每年一度的禁渔措施,以保护渔业资源。The annual fishing ban should be carried on like before to keep fishing resources under good reservation.(5)只有消除了污染,我们才能给
5、海洋生物创造合适的生存环境。Only by getting rid of pollution can we create proper living environments for all undersea creatures.I read a news report from an evening paper of our city,which says the pollution in the sea,especially in the offshore areas,is getting worse.As a result,undersea creatures are declining
6、 greatly in number and few fish can be caught in the offshore areas.Therefore,further education is urged to be given to the public to make 三、下笔成文them aware of the importance of protecting the environment.Besides,the annual fishing ban should be carried on like before to keep fishing resources under good reservation.Only by getting rid of pollution can we create proper living environments for all undersea creatures.【点评】这篇范文较好地完成了规定的写作任务:使用的语言正确、规范;要点完整;行文连贯。此外,本文恰到好处地使用了复合句和简单句,使得文章的结构错落有致,表现形式丰富多彩。被动句的运用也是本文的一大特色。as a result,therefore,besides等过渡词语的使用,使句子的过渡非常地自然。