1、写作园地幻想故事写作 感悟范文最近，某英文报社正在举行英文幻想故事大赛，请你根据所给出的故事的开头，续写一篇幻想小故事参赛。A young man was walking through a wood when he saw a shining ring lying on the ground. He just stood and wondered and then the ring said, “Young man, a kind girl is trapped by a witch in the castle ahead. If you are brave enough to rescue
2、 her, you will gain happiness. Put me on and I will help you.”. 注意：词数120左右。_精彩范文A young man was walking through a wood when he saw a shining ring lying on the ground. He just stood and wondered and then the ring said, “Young man, a kind girl is trapped by a witch in the castle ahead. If you are brav
3、e enough to rescue her, you will gain happiness. Put me on and I will help you.”The young man didnt hesitate and put the ring on his finger. Much to his surprise, he discovered that he disappeared and was invisible to any other people. Only when he took it off could people see him. He felt more conf
4、ident and headed for the castle. On approaching the castle, he put the ring on and entered the castle. He eventually found the crying girl, on whom the witch had put a spell, learning that the girl couldnt move unless someone destroyed the witchs magical club, removing the spell. Having learned abou
5、t this, the young man put the ring on, looking around for the witchs magical club. Finally, he found it in a golden box; he destroyed it, removing the spell on the girl and saving the girl. The young man, together with the girl, defeated the witch.The girl saved by the young man turned out to be a p
6、rincess, and the king married her off to the young man, the young man and the princess living a happy life.亮点分析：1文中only位于句首的倒装句，on doing sth.结构以及独立主格结构的使用，使文章内容表述清晰，句子结构更加复杂高级。2文中非限制性定语从句和现在分词短语的使用，丰富了所在句子的相关信息，使句子更有层次感。技法讨论本模块要求写一篇幻想故事，幻想故事一般有环境、人物、情节以及文学的艺术性，在体裁上属于记叙文，情节的发展多以时间、地点的转移为线索。虚幻故事的写作步骤：
7、1仔细审题，确定文章结构虚幻故事的写作一般可分为三部分：第一部分为故事的开始，第二部分为故事发展的过程及结果，最后一部分提出故事的教育意义。2根据需要确定时态虚幻故事通常是发生在过去，因此应以一般过去时为主。3筛选词汇虚幻故事一般为虚构的故事，要求语言比较夸张。为了吸引读者，故事的语言要生动，富于虚幻性。 类文演练假设你要给参观你校的外籍人员，讲解中国的传统文化。一名外国朋友对中国成语“自相矛盾”发生了兴趣。请你根据图片，把这个古代的寓言故事讲给他们听。词数130左右。参考词汇：矛spear；盾shield；刺pierce联想词汇1_ 自相矛盾的答案：selfcontradictory2_ a
8、dj. 锋利的答案：sharp3_ v. 吹嘘，夸大答案：boast4_ 在古代中国答案：in ancient China5_ 众所周知答案：be known to all单句写作1中国成语“自相矛盾”众所周知。_ “Zi Xiang Mao Dun” is _ all.答案：The Chinese idiom; known to2世界上没有东西能刺穿他们。_ can pierce them.答案：Nothing in the world3世上没有完美的东西。_ in the world.答案：There are not perfect things连句成章_ 精彩范文The Chinese
9、idiom “Zi Xiang Mao Dun” is known to all, which is used to laugh at someone whose words or behaviors are selfcontradictory.It tells us a story that happens in the State of Chu in ancient China. We see a man selling spears and shields in the marketplace in the center of the picture.A lot of people ga
10、ther around him. “My spears are the sharpest，” he boasts, “that there is nothing they cannot pierce. My shields are also the strongest, so nothing in the world can pierce them.” One of the people in the crowd then laughs, “So what if the spear pierces the shield？”The man can not answer a word.From t
11、he story we can know that there are not perfect things in the world. We shouldnt say anything in the world is good to the limit.课外拓展阅读中国优秀传统文化专题练对应学生用书P034阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。These days, modern buildings are everywhere. But if you want to see _1_ life was back in the old days, China stil
12、l has many beautiful water _2_ (town) to visit. CNN has chosen four of the countrys most beautiful ones.The village of Zhouzhuang in Jiangsu calls _3_ (it) “the oldest water town in China”. The village, which _4_ (build) in 1086, is crossed with canals. Taking a boat ride through town, the red lante
13、rns might make you think of Chinas romantic past.Hongcun, _5_ (fill) with lakes and beautiful Anhuistyle buildings, is 900 years old. It was built to look like a big ox. Huangshan Mountain is the head; the town is the body and the bridges are legs.Fenghuang in Hunan doesnt look like a bird, _6_ its
14、name means “phoenix (凤凰)” in Chinese. The town is as beautiful as the _7_ (magic) bird. The stilted (吊脚的) buildings on each side of the Tuojiang River make the area look like a scene from _8_ postcard.While most water towns are in the south, Shandongs Taierzhuang stands out in the north. The town _9_ (be) on the bank of the BeijingHangzhou Grand Canal. In the town, there are ancient bridges, a canal and temples, _10_ (make) you think of its past glory.1_2._3._4._5_6._7._8._9_10._答案：1.how2.towns3.itself4.was built5.filled6but7.magical8.a9.is10.making
