1、专题六 书面表达 普通高中英语课程标准对语言技能目标(八级)“写”的要求如下：(1)能根据所读文章进行转述或写摘要；(2)能根据文字及图表提供的信息写短文或报告；(3)能写出语意连贯且结构完整的短文，叙述事情或表达观点和态度；(4)能在写作中做到文体规范、语句通顺。从要求来看，书面表达是综合性很强的题目，目的是考查学生的英语表达能力，看其 考纲解读 是否能够运用所学的英语知识和掌握的技能进行思想交流。因此，考生在写作时应做到：(1)主题明确；(2)内容充实；(3)结构合理；(4)逻辑性强；(5)语言准确得体。考点统计与考情分析 问题与对策 模板与范文 123分类突破 4 考情分析 考点统计与考
2、情分析考点统计(略)通过对近三年高考新课标全国卷英语书面表达的分析发现，考查内容在从传统的单纯知识型向现代创新能力型转变，写作文体以应用文为主(多以书信和电子邮件的形式出现)，半开放类占主流。这充分体现了现代高考旨在考查考生能否在体验现代生活发展节奏、把握时代脉搏的同时，将所学知识与具体实践结合起来并灵活运用的能力。考查特点归纳如下：1.写作体裁与知识的实际运用密切结合 近三年的新课标全国卷绝大部分为书信或电子邮件。这一应用文体，在日常生活中使用较多，考生十分熟悉。写作话题贴近实际生活，突出了对考生处理现实生活实际问题的能力的考查。如：2015年新课标全国卷就美国的节日风俗和中学生生活约稿(贴
3、近生活)。2.突出考查考生的想象力和创新能力 近三年的书面表达的写作内容都是来自于生活的真实情景。需要考生根据自身的生活阅历展开合理想象，创设合情合理的语境。如：2015年新课标全国卷()以“去敬老院陪老人们过重阳节”为话题写作，与考生自身生活联系密切。3.半开放式已成主流 近几年来，新课标全国卷书面表达全部为半开放式写作。这种考查形式使考生不完全受“提示形式”和“内容要点”的限制，可以适当发挥。但这同时也对考生的写作能力提出了更高的要求。4.从高考书面表达的发展趋势看，2016年的高考在体裁和题材上应该保持相对稳定，写作类型及提示形式也不会有太大的变化。从2015年新课标全国卷()以及部分省
4、份的考情来看，考查考生的创新意识、思维拓展能力和文化素养的试题比重会有所增加。一、13类常见失分 1.主谓不一致(1)Three years have passed before we knew it.误 Three years has passed before we knew it.正(2)Every man and every woman like surfing the Internet here.误 Every man and every woman likes surfing the Internet here.正(3)Many a student have chatted onl
5、ine.误 Many a student has chatted online.正 问题与对策2.时态不一致(1)They talked and talked and soon the bus comes.误 They talked and talked and soon the bus came.正(2)He said that he will come to see me soon.误 He said that he would come to see me soon.正(3)Ifyouhadcomeearlier，youwouldseetheactressyesterday.误 If y
6、ou had come earlier，you would have seen the actress yesterday.正 3.词类误用(1)She seated herself in the sofa and went sleep.误 She seated herself in the sofa and went asleep.正(2)After the work，we went home，tiredly and hungry.误 After the work，we went home，tired and hungry.正(3)Her kind and generosity made m
7、e feel at home.误 Her kindness and generosity made me feel at home.正 4.逻辑不一致(1)Im eager to show you around some places of interest，butsome culture centers.误 Im eager to show you around some places of interest，orsome culture centers.正(2)He went to her and gave her the present he had bought，andshe refu
8、sed to take it and went away.误 He went to her and gave her the present he had bought，butshe refused to take it and went away.正(3)Next time you look at a person，see if his or her faceis red and pale.误 Next time you look at a person，see if his or her face isred or pale.正 5.代词替代不一致(1)There are so many
9、flowers in the flowershop that I dontknow what to buy.误 There are so many flowers in the flowershop that I dontknow which to buy.正(2)It is us that are to blame for the result because we are toocareless.误 It is we that are to blame for the result because we are toocareless.正(3)She took many photos du
10、ring her stay in Beijing andshowed it to me.误 She took many photos during her stay in Beijing andshowed them to me.正 6.介词多余(1)Work hard，and you will make it at some time.误 Work hard，and you will make it some time.正(2)At the first time she came to see me，I was doing somereading.误 The first time she c
11、ame to see me，I was doing some reading.正(3)Considering about everything，the plan is quite practical.误 Considering everything，the plan is quite practical.正 7.连词多余(1)She sent me an email，asking whether how I was getting alongwith my classmates.误 She sent me an email，asking how I was getting along with
12、 myclassmates.正(2)If one more minute，and we can do it easily.误 One more minute，and we can do it easily.正(3)Because you gave us timely help，so we finished it on time.误 Because you gave us timely help，we finished it on time.正 8.冠词多余(1)As we know，the Sunday is the first day of a week.误 As we know，Sunda
13、y is the first day of a week.正(2)I prefer this kind of a fruit.误 I prefer this kind of fruit.正(3)Our teacher usually tells us to behave well in the publicplaces.误 Our teacher usually tells us to behave well in public places.正 9.句子成分短缺(1)We all strongly against the suggestion put forward at themeetin
14、g.误 We are all strongly against the suggestion put forward at themeeting.正(2)What known to all is that cars have become a popular meansof transport.误 What is known to all is that cars have become a popularmeans of transport.正(3)What puzzles you actually a puzzle for many parents inChina.误 What puzzl
15、es you is actually a puzzle for many parentsin China.正 10.及物与不及物动词误用(1)All flights this morning have put off because of the thickfog.误 All flights this morning have been put off because of thethick fog.正(2)The teacher caught me cheating in the exam，but hedidnt punish for it.误 The teacher caught me c
16、heating in the exam，but hedidnt punish me for it.正(3)It is known that everything depends the sunlight forgrowth.误 It is known that everything depends on the sunlight forgrowth.正 11.非谓语动词误用(1)He admitted to make a mistake.误 He admitted making a mistake.正(2)She objects to be treated like a child.误 She
17、 objects to being treated like a child.正(3)I regret saying that I cant help you for I have manythings to do.误 I regret to say that I cant help you for I have many thingsto do.正(4)The desk needs to repair.误 Thedeskneedsrepairing./Thedeskneedstoberepaired.正(5)My parents expect me to study science and
18、becoming ascientist.误 My parents expect me to study science and become ascientist.正(6)They were made work hard all day long.误 They were made to work hard all day long.正(7)I find it easy to be done.误 I find it easy to do.正(8)Comparing with you，I still have a long way to go.误 Compared with you，I still
19、 have a long way to go.正(9)Everything taking into consideration，it is a goodplan.误 Everything taken into consideration，it is a goodplan.正 12.搭配错误(1)As time going by，more and more people prefer a healthydiet.误 With time going by，more and more people prefer a healthydiet.正(2)The bridge is in construct
20、ion.误 The bridge is under construction.正(3)So far as I am concerned，riding bicycles is a good solution.误 As far as I am concerned，riding bicycles is a good solution.正(4)The thief ran to the direction of the hill.误 The thief ran in the direction of the hill.正(5)It is no doubt that drinking too much i
21、s harmful to health.误 There is no doubt that drinking too much is harmful to health.正(6)It wasnt long when we got to the cinema.误 It wasnt long before we got to the cinema.正 13.汉语式表达(1)This is my first time visit to Beijing.误 This is my first visit to Beijing.正(2)I like Taiji and it is my most favor
22、ite sport.误 I like Taiji and it is my favorite sport.正(3)Our school is two miles far away from here，so youd bettertake a taxi.误 Our school is two miles away from here，so youd bettertake a taxi.正(4)After he returned back，he began to work at once.误After he returned，he began to work at once.正(5)Of the
23、two objects，I prefer the blue one better.误 Of the two objects，I prefer the blue one.正 二、高分技巧1.恰当使用连词、连接副词等连接句子，可使文章逻辑性强，结构紧凑，层次清晰，意义贯通。Last Sunday，when my parents went out shopping，Isuddenly got an idea:why not give the rooms a thoroughcleaning？Firstly I collected all the books，newspapers andother t
24、hings scattered in the rooms and put them in place.ThenI wiped the dust off all the furniture.After that，I swept andmopped the floors.(2013陕西)2.恰当选用“贴切、地道的高级词汇”。从书面表达的评分标准可知，运用高级词汇对提高书面表达的“档次”和得分至关重要。通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词来代替常见的词语是选用恰当词汇的有效途径。如下表所列近义词，用高级词汇代替普通词汇，会取得比较好的效果。普通词汇 高级词汇 普通词汇 高级词汇 thin
25、k of come up with，occur to，have an idea explain account for thank appreciate most the majority of should be supposed to look after attend to beadj.be ofn.least the minority of like be crazy about，be absorbed in，be addicted to as long as on condition that different various，a variety of tired be worn
26、out busy be engaged in during in the course of tell inform sb.of，inform sb.that sometimes occasionally，once in a while 3.适当使用含有“较为丰富的语法结构”的高级句式。感叹句、独立主格结构、特殊句式、名词性从句、定语从句、状语从句、非谓语动词等都属于较复杂的“语法结构”。这些结构的正确、交替使用，可以使文章的语言充满层次感，从而较好地反映作者的语言运用能力。此外，正确使用一些谚语也能给文章增色不少。(1)感叹句 What a meaningful day it was！(20
27、15北京，书面表达二)这是多么有意义的一天啊！How happy I will be！How I wish I could be younger thannow！(2015重庆，写作一)我太开心了！我多么希望能够比现在年轻一点！(2)独立主格结构 In the picture，a boy is fully absorbed in a book made ofbamboo，with several more scrolls lying on one end ofhis desk.(2015福建)图画中，一个男孩在全神贯注地读一本由竹子做成的书，桌子的一边放着很多卷书。(3)特殊句式 Can yo
28、u tell us when and where？(2015安徽)你能告诉我们什么时间以及在哪里吗？It shows that it is hard work and determination rather thanouter conditions that play a vital role in shaping a greatmind.(2015福建)这表明成为一个伟大人物的决定因素是艰苦的工作及毅力而不是外部条件。It is the people who obey the rules that matter.(2015江苏)重要的是遵守这些规则的人们。Not only do they
29、offer you joy and excitement，but alsothey encourage you to think critically.(2015天津)它们不仅可以让你们开心和兴奋，而且还激励你们进行批判性思考。(4)名词性从句 I wonder if youd like to go with me.(2015北京，书面表达一)我想知道你是否愿意和我一起去。With the development of medical technology，we can detectwhether people have major illnesses and predict whether
30、peoplehave a preference for food by using saliva sample，and remindpeople to take appropriate exercise.(2015广东，基础写作)随着医疗技术的发展，我们能诊断人们是否得了什么重要疾病并能通过唾液样本预测人们对食物的偏好，同时提醒人们进行适当的锻炼。It is just what I want.(2015四川)这正是我想要的。Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivememoreinformation.(2015重庆，写作二)如果你能提供更多的信息我将不胜感激。(5)定语从
31、句 If they often cheat in the exams，they will form a bad habit，which will have a bad effect on their life.(2015广东，读写任务)如果他们在考试中经常作弊，他们就会养成一个坏习惯，这将会对他们的生活产生坏的影响。From this experience I have learned that questioning can serve asa bridge that helps us to seek the truth.(2015湖北)这次经历使我明白了质疑是帮助我们探寻真理的桥梁。My
32、teacher may think I am excellent and that I can do well inmy study，which can make me more confident.(2015湖南)我的老师可能认为我优秀并能学好习，这样能使我更加自信。Last but not least，everyone will be happy if praised，which isthecommonpositiveemotionthateverybodylikestoshare.(2015湖南)最后但同样重要的一点，被表扬大家都会开心，这是人人都愿意分享的最常见的正能量。The Dou
33、ble Ninth Festival，which is the day set aside for theelderly in our culture，is drawing near.(2015全国)重阳节即将到来，它是在我们的文化里专门为老年人设置的节日。Besides，I often teach my English teacher who comes fromAmerica Mandarin in my spare time.(2015四川)另外，在我的业余时间里我经常教我的英语老师普通话，他来自美国。Our school will donate 5,000 copies of diff
34、erent valuable books toyour class，which include popular science books，classic works andso on.(2015天津)我们学校将向你们班级捐献5 000册有价值的不同书籍，包括科普书、经典著作等。This is the reason why I want to interview her，not only becauseof her fame，but also because of her kindness and honest.(2015安徽)这是我想采访她的理由，不仅仅是因为她的名声，还是因为她的友善和诚实
35、。(6)状语从句 If you are interested in it，let me know and Ill send you moreinformation.(2015北京，书面表达一)如果你感兴趣，告诉我，我会为你提供更多的信息。If youd like to join us，please let us know and well waitfor you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.(2015全国)如果你想加入我们，请告诉我们，我们将于上午9点在学校大门口等你。If you want to speak Mandarin well.Fir
36、st，you should readmore and watch more Chinese TV programmes.(2015四川)如果你想说好普通话，首先，你应该多读、多看中文电视节目。If you have more needs，please let me know as soon aspossible.(2015天津)如果你有更多的需求，请尽快告诉我。In a word，you can write anything relevant so long as itsinteresting and informative.(2015全国)总之，你可以写任何相关的内容，只要有趣味并能增长见识
37、。I hope you would be so kind as to send it to us before June28th，so that it can be published in time.(2015全国)我希望你能发善心在6月28日以前给我们寄过来，以便能够按时出版。When I have a different opinion，I may choose to give it up andrespect the opinion of the majority.(2015浙江)当我有不同意见时，我会选择放弃自己的意见并尊重大多数人的意见。Once we were left to d
38、ecide whether to have a picnic in a park orgo to a museum.I would love to go to a museum.(2015浙江)一旦让我们决定是在公园野餐还是去博物馆，我愿意去博物馆。If I learn English well，I can do what I love to.(2015重庆，写作一)如果我学好英语，我能做我喜欢做的事。I have a preference for wild release，because it is veryconvenient for the other persons who want
39、to readbooks.(2015重庆，写作二)我喜欢自由分享，因为这样对于那些想读书的其他人来说很方便。(7)非谓语动词 So careful were we that we quickly mastered the way of doing it，startingtomakeourown“artwork”usingapieceofdough.(2015北京，书面表达二)我们很细心，于是我们很快掌握了做这件事的方法，开始用面团制作我们自己的艺术品。From this experience，I learned that it is our responsibility as wellas o
40、ur joy to protect the tradition.(2015北京，书面表达二)从这次体验我感受到，保护传统的东西不仅是责任更是一种乐趣。The story tells us of a famous scholar named KuangHeng from Western Han Dynasty.(2015福建)这个故事给我们讲述的是西汉时期的著名学者匡衡。Its a waste of time playing games and it will have abad effect on their study.(2015广东，读写任务)玩游戏是一种时间的浪费，同时对他们的学习也有坏
41、的影响。As a student，I can tell you that there is nothing better thanbeing praised by my teacher before my classmates.(2015湖南)作为一名学生，我可以告诉你没有什么比在同学们面前受到老师的表扬更好的事情了。Whats worse，some drivers，cyclists and pedestrians donot think it vital to obey traffic rules.(2015江苏)更糟糕的是，一些机动车司机、骑自行车的人以及行人并不认为遵守交通规则很重要。I
42、t is everybodys duty to observe them to keep our society inorder and going on the right track.(2015江苏)维护社会秩序，在正确的路线上行驶是每个人应尽的义务。Well also spend some fun time together singing，dancingandplayinggames，whichwehopewillmakethemhappy.(2015全国)我们还将一起度过一段快乐时光，一起唱、跳、玩游戏，我们希望这会使他们开心。I am writing to apply for th
43、e volunteer position stated in yournotice.(2015陕西)我正在写信申请你们通知里陈述到的志愿者职位。(8)谚语 As the old saying goes，“An inch of time is worth an inch ofgold”.(2015广东，读写任务)俗话说，一寸光阴一寸金。Every coin has its two sides.(2015湖南)事物是一分为二的。4.此外还要注意以下几个方面：(1)要有高分句意识。高分句可以用复合句、特殊句式(尤其是使用倒装句、强调句等)，还可以使用谚语。高分句最好放在每一段的首句，这样给人耳目一新
44、的感觉。还可以放在文章的结尾，给人以厚重的感觉。(2)要有段落意识。这样使作文层次分明，条理清晰。每一段的段首或段尾有一个高分句，能为文章增色不少。(3)要书写优美。一篇优秀的作文犹如一件艺术品，书写清楚，字母大小写匀称，单词间距适 当，给人以美的享受，这样的作文怎么能不得高分呢！一、6种常用写作模板(一)观点对比类写作 1.一般情况下先陈述两个对立的观点，最后给出自己的看法。(1)有人认为(2)而有的人则认为(3)在我看来 模版与范文The theme of(主题)is becoming increasingly popularnowadays.There are two opposite
45、opinions about it.Some peoplesay they are in favor of A.Their view is that(支持A的理由一).What is more，(理由二).Moreover，(理由三).While some others prefer B.The reasons are as follows.First(Tobegin with)，(支持B的理由一).Second(Besides)，(理由二).Lastly(Finally)，(理由三).Personally，I think(我的观点).The reason is that(原因).Actual
46、ly，reasons are various.For me，theformer is surely a wise choice.2.有时候先给出一个观点，然后要求考生反驳这一观点。Some people hold the belief that(观点一).For example，they think(理由陈述).And(为他们带来的好处).Based on my own opinion，I never think this reason can bethe point.For one thing，(我反对该看法的理由一).Foranother thing，(理由二).To be short，I
47、 agree to the opinion that(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).(二)主题阐述类写作 一般是从一句话或一个主题出发，然后根据所给提示中的要求进行论述。1.先阐述这句话或主题所蕴涵的意义；2.分析、举例并使其内容更充实。As we know，the old famous saying(名言或谚语)reminds us that(释义).Indeed，we can learn a lot from it.Firstly，(理由一).For example，(举例说明).Secondly，(理由二)Another case is that(举例说明)Furthermore，(理由三
48、)But I think，(我的观点)In a word，whatever you do，please remember what the saying tells us.If youdo as it tells you to，youll surely benefit a lot from it.(三)问题解决方法类写作 一般情况下要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径。1.先陈述问题现状；2.然后探讨怎样解决。Recently，we have to face the problem(第一个问题)，which is becoming increasingly serious.Firstly，(第一个
49、问题的概况).Secondly，(进一步列举说明现状).Confronted with it，a series of effective measures should be taken to deal with the situation.For one thing，(解决方法一).For another，(解决方法二).Finally，(解决方法三).In my opinion，I do believe that(我的解决方法).As a consequence，Im confident that a bright futureis ahead of us because(带来的好处).(
50、四)利弊对比类写作 一般情况下先说明一下现状，然后对比事物本身的利弊，但有时候往往先从一个角度(利或弊)作为切入点，最后要求考生表明自己的观点(或对事物前景提出预测)。1.陈述事物目前状况；2.事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)；3.你对现状(或前景)的看法。At present，many people prefer A because it has asignificant role in our daily life.Generally，its advantages canbe seen as follows.First，(A的优点之一).Besides，(A的优点之二).However，eac
51、h coin has its two sides.Apparently，one ofits important disadvantages is that(A的缺点之一).Worse still/To make matters worse，(A的缺点之二).Judging from the analysis mentioned above，I am surethat the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Soits obvious that I would like to(我的看法).Therefore，we should take
52、it and do it reasonably andpractically.Only in this way，(对未来情况的预测).(五)答题性议论文写作 Currently，there is a widespread concern over(theissue that)(作文题目)，which is really important toevery one of us.Consequently，immediate measures mustbe taken to solve this problem.Its known to all that many steps can be take
53、n to solvethis problem.First of all，(途径一).Additionally，another way of dealing with the problem is(途径二).Above all，there are various ways.But as far as I amconcerned，I would prefer to solve the problem in thisway，that is to say，(方法).(六)谚语警句性议论文 What is known to us is that the proverb(谚语)has a profound
54、 significance and value not only in our jobbut also in our study.It means(谚语的含义).Thesaying can be illustrated through a series of examples asfollows(举例说明).二、12篇不同类型的经典范文(一)给报社等的讨论稿(携带手机的利弊)Dear Editor，开门见山 Im a senior school student.Im writing totell you my opinion on whether senior high schoolstude
55、nts should go to school with mobile phones.个人观点 I think they can do that.Because it is quiteconvenient for the students to keep in touch with theirfriends and family wherever they are.Whats more，astudent can also use it for fun.利弊对比 However，each coin has its two sides.Thereexist some problems，such a
56、s，the ring of phones maydisturb teachers teaching and students study.(二)根据柱状图表写调查报告 The ideas about future jobs have changed a lot in highschool students.What is the most striking contrast is teaching：40percent of the girls would prefer to become teachers whilethe boys only make up 15 percent.45 per
57、cent of the boyswould like to do business and another 30 percent want to belawyers，while only 10 percent of the girls want to do so.To the boys，they would like to become managers most andnext to it，scientists.Besides teaching，girls also want tobe scientists and managers.They just expect to show thei
58、rabilities in these two fields.(三)过去与现在对比的信件 Dear Editor，Im a middle school student.I once had a very activeandoutgoingfriend，buteverything haschangedbecause of his recent addiction to computer games.He used to be a very good student and was oftenpraised by his teachers.He studied hard and did well
59、in everysubject.Besides，he often helped others with their study.However，he is now quite a different person.Heplays games all day and all night and often runs awayfrom school.I just cant stop him playing gamesagain.Im very much worried and Im afraid it willdestroy his future as well as himself.Could
60、you tell me what I can do？Im lookingforward to your reply.Thank you very much.Yours，Li Hua(四)图画与个人观点 The other day during the summer holidays，Icame across my classmate Li Hua，who is my bestfriend.We talked while walking.When I asked him whereto go during the holidays，he replied that he had to stayat
61、 home studying.Then I asked why.Much to my surprise，he told me that it was just because he failed in the collegeentrance examinations.Personally，not only does traveling increase astudentsknowledgebutalsomakeslifemeaningful.Whats more，at the present time，westudents are suffering a lot both at home an
62、d school.Whynot go out to get relaxed?(五)三段式作文解读幽默画 阐明主题 Our schoolbags need lightening badly 图画内容 The picture is about a schoolboy and a bigwoman.The boy with a pair of glasses is carrying a heavyschoolbag，while the woman is taking some exercise.Theboy is saying to the woman jokingly，“Mum，if youcar
63、ry the schoolbag for me，Im sure you will easily loseweight.”社 会 实 际 Obviously，we Chinese students areoverburdened with everyday lessons and homework.Everyday what we have to do is to listen to the teachers，takenotes and do our homework endlessly.个人想法 Surely we hope to get more knowledge withfewer le
64、ctures，exercises and less homework.Only by thismeans can we spare some time to do sports everyday.Then we will be healthy mentally and physically.(六)叙事类图画作文 Yesterday afternoon I walking in the park whensuddenly I saw a touching event.At that time some peoplewere boating on the lake.Meanwhile a girl
65、 and her parentswere taking photos.All of a sudden，the little girl fell intothe lake as a result of carelessness.Its obvious that shecouldnt swim and was struggling in the water.Her parents criedforhelp.Hearingthecry，ayoungmanimmediately dashed to the bank and dived into the waterbefore he could tak
66、e off his clothes.He swam to thedrowning girl and pushed her to the bank.The girl wassaved and her parents felt quite grateful to the youngman，whose deeds moved the people present.What a nice and brave young man!(七)请求笔友帮忙的信 Dear Peter，How are you doing?写信目的 Im writing to tell you that my uncle LiMin
67、g is going to your city for a conference，and Iveasked him to bring you the Chinese painting youveasked for before.提出请求 Also，Id like you to do me a favor.Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and takehim to the hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.？Thank you in advance!具体细节 His flig
68、ht number is CA985，and it willarrive at 11：30 am，August 6.My uncle is tall and in ablue jacket with glasses.Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua(八)书面通知 Sept.14th,2015 NOTICE In order to help students know more aboutcomputers，we have invited Professor Zhang from theDepartment of Computer from B
69、eijing University to giveus a lecture on Monday，December 14th.Professor Zhangwill give us a talk on the use of computer and how to learnthrough the Internet.The lecture begins at 3：00 pm in Room 207 of thelibrary Building.Whoever loves it is welcome to attendit.Pleasecomewithyourquestionsoncomputerl
70、earning.Professor Zhang will leave you time for questions.Dont forget to be on time.Students Union(九)学校生活中的常见欢迎词 Ladies and gentlemen，Warmly welcome to our school！Now I have the greathonor to introduce something about the changes that havetaken place in our class.We used to be busy listening and tak
71、ing notes in class，and had no time to think for ourselves.Because we had nointerest in the lessons，we often felt bored，tired and sleepywhile listening.After school we had to do endless homework，unable to have time for some sports.However，things have changed greatly now.With thehelp of computers，the
72、lessons are so lively and interestingthat the students become active and interested.As a result，we have made greater progress than before with lesstime.And we have enough time to enjoy ourselves after class.Such good teaching method is popular with all of us.We willtry our best to study even harder.
73、Thats all.Thank you!(十)填写求职表格 Family name：Li First name：Hua Sex：Male Date of birth：March 25,1991 Place of birth：Xian，Shaanxi Nationality：Chinese Address：No.1 High School of Xian Telephone number：0292081777 Education：Graduated from Xian University Explain why you think you are qualified for the job：I
74、enjoy communicatingwith people.Imyoung，healthy，delightful and helpful.I can speak standard Chineseand Im also good at English.I once won the first prize ofEnglishcompetitioninourcollege.Imveryfondoftraveling and know many places of interest in China.(十一)求职信 Dear Sir，I learn that a travel guide is ne
75、eded in yourcompany from China Daily the other day，so Imwriting to apply for the position.Im Chinese，male.I was born on March 25,1991 inXian，ShaanxiProvince.IgraduatedfromXianUniversitylastmonth.Ienjoycommunicatingwithpeople.Im young，healthy，delightful and helpful.I can speak standard Chinese and Im
76、 also good at English.Ionce won the first prize of English competition in ourcollege.Im very fond of traveling and know many placesof interest in China.I think Im qualified for the job.If you can offerme this chance I will do my best to do it well.Lookingforwardtoyouranswer.Youcanconnect me by posti
77、ng a letter to No.1 High School ofXian or dial this number：0292081777.Yours sincerely，Li Hua(十二)回复公司关于面试的信件 No.1 High School of Xian，Shaanxi Oct.28,2015 Dear Mr.Lively，Thank you for your letter of Oct.26 asking me tocome to the interview on Friday，Nov.6 at 2：30 pm.Unfortunately，I shall not be in tha
78、t day，as I haveanother appointment.May I suggest another date for the interview？I could come to the interview on Tuesday，Nov.10，or the morning of Nov.12.I hope one of these dates will be possible for you，as Iam extremely interested in the post.Expecting your reply.Yours sincerely，Li Hua 一、提纲类作文 分类突破
79、 写作要求 提纲类作文是近年高考书面表达的热点题型。它往往以列要点或用表格的形式呈现给考生相关信息，通常有较多的文字说明，对考生需要表达的内容有明确的要求和一 分类突破定的限制。考查形式有书信、报道、通知、日记、发言稿、对某人或某物的介绍、欢迎词等。这就要求考生在动笔之前，应该认真审题，弄清楚题目与提纲之间的关系及文章内容与提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的中心思想及各个段落的中心思想，提炼出完美的段落主题句，保证段落中的内容能够充分展开并且符合题意。分类突破1.仔细审题，明确要求。审读所给信息，弄清楚所要表达的内容要点，然后对所给的信息进行梳理，可根据内容要点适当调整写作顺序，使文章行文连贯。2
80、.列全要点，即提纲要点化，然后写作成文。此时我们就必须在大脑中将各种信息点补充完整，适时使用高级词汇和复杂句式。要根据提示将要点表达清楚，写作步骤 分类突破使文章的内容完整、饱满、要点齐全，注意适当增加细节。同时注意句子与句子之间，段落与段落之间要有合理的过渡衔接。3.检查核实，确保无误。分类突破(一)(2015重庆，写作二)B是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式：一是自由分享(wild release)，即把书放在指定地点，由其他参与者自由获取；二是定向分享(controlled release)，即直接传递给另一位参与者。真题体验 分类突破假设你是李华，请用英文
81、写信申请参加。内容应包括：表明写信目的 选择一种分享方式 简述做出该选择的理由 希望了解更多信息 注意：词数不少于80。分类突破参考范文 Dear Mr or Mrs，Having learned that you are holding an activity，inwhich we can share more books.So I want to join it.I have also learned you have two ways to share thebooks.I have a preference for wild release，because it isvery conv
82、enient for the other persons who want to readbooks.Besides，other persons can get the books they wantand they have more free time to get them.分类突破But there is something unclear for me，so I wouldappreciate it if you could give me more information.Looking forward to your reply at your convenience.Yours
83、，Li Hua 分类突破(二)(2015四川)假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发帖，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿；2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由；3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议；4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。分类突破注意：1.词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Hi，Sharon，This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.L
84、i Xia 分类突破参考范文 Hi，Sharon，This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you wantto improve your Mandarin.I think I can help you with Mandarin.In my class myMandarin is the best，and I won the first prize in a contestlast month.Besides，I often teach my English teacher whocomes from America Mandarin in m
85、y spare time.分类突破If you want to speak Mandarin well.First，you should readmore and watch more Chinese TV programmes.Second，youshould often talk with Chinese so that you can improve your oralChinese.In this way I think you can make great progress in yourMandarin.Im glad that you can also help me with
86、my English.It is 分类突破just what I want.We can communicate in both English and Chinese.Im free on weekends，so we can contact at that time.Im eager to improve my oral English.I think I can improve it with your help.Looking forward to your early reply.Li Xia 分类突破(三)(2015安徽)某 英 文 杂 志 正 在 举 办 以 “Fancy you
87、rself as aninterviewer”为主题的征文活动，请你以“A FamousChinese I Would Like to Interview”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：1.采访的对象；2.采访的原因；3.想提的问题。分类突破注意：1.词数120左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4.短文的标题已给出，不计入总词数。A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview 分类突破参考范文 A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview The person I wou
88、ld like to interview is Yang Liwei.I would really like to interview him because he is not onlythe first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatestastronauts in the world.I have long been interested in spaceexploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from himabout it.分类突破If I could
89、interview him，I would ask him what made himan astronaut and how he was trained.I would also like to knowhow he felt in space and whether space travel is such great funas I have read.Finally，I would like to ask a few questionsabout his personal life，which must be very interesting.二、图表、图画类作文 写作要求 图表、图
90、画类作文是高考书面表达较常见的考查形式之一，它不仅考查考生的文字表达能力，而且也考查考生审读图表、图画的能力。此类试题往往要求考生先用英语对所提供的信息做客观的描述，然后提出自己的观点或发表评论。图表、图画类作文主要有以下几种形式：数据表格、饼形图、条形图、曲线图和看图作文。其中看图作文中图画既可以是漫画，也可以是其他图片、照片等情景材料。从写作体裁看，主要有说明文、议论文和应用文，时态一般用一般现在时。分类突破以图画评论型作文为例说明这类作文的写作步骤，基本上可以按照以下三个步骤，分三段书写。1.研究图画，准确描述。第一段首先要将图片中的情景进行描述，要言简意赅，不漏要点。2.陈述现象，指明
91、原因。第二段要说明图画中这一现象存在的社会原因，并揭示它所反映的主题，然后紧扣主题分析原因，一般列举两到三条即可。多使用第三人称。写作步骤 分类突破3.联系实际，表达观点。结合自己的亲身经历对解决类似问题提出自己的观点和看法。多使用第一人称。分类突破(一)(2015北京，书面表达二)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍在“传统文化进校园”活动中，向面人艺术家学习捏面人的过程，并以“A Day with a Craftsman”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英语稿件。真题体验 分类突破注意：词数不少于60。提示词：一个面团a piece of dough 面人 dough
92、 figurine 分类突破参考范文 Last Tuesday，our class invited an old craftsman toteach us how to make dough figurines.When the craftsman came into the classroom，we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box.First，he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines.We stood a
93、round him and watched attentively.Then we started to have a try ourselves.The old man walked around and helped us 分类突破patiently.Finally，we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman.Looking at the figurines，we were all very excited.We hope we can have more activi
94、ties of this kind!分类突破(二)(2015福建)请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。凿壁偷光 内容要求：1.描述画面；2.概述其含义；3.谈谈个人感想。分类突破注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、行文连贯。参考词汇：凿，钻bore In the picture，分类突破参考范文 In the picture，we can see a boy in worn clothes，sittingat a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak rayof li
95、ght came in through a small hole in the wall and he wasabsorbed in his reading.This is a wellknown story from an ancient Chineseidiom.The boy，being poor，couldnt afford even a candle，so he bored a hole in the wall to“steal”light from his 分类突破neighbors house to read at night.The moral of the story is：
96、sparenoefforttoacquireknowledgeandnevergetdiscouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation maybe.Of course，things are totally different today.It is not thestory itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hardwork pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselvesthrough learning a
97、nd get prepared for the future.三、应用类作文 写作要求 应用类作文是高考英语书面表达最常见的一种考查形式。此类作文接近考生的生活实际，考生有话可说，能充分考查考生的真实写作水平。常见的应用文有书信、电子邮件、通知、日记、便条、启示、演讲稿等。尤其以书信、电子邮件所占比例最大。一般情况下作文的开头及结尾部分已经给出，只要求考生写主题部分。在应用文的写作中应注意以下两个方面：1.作文内容力求语言平实、简洁、准确，句子不宜过长，让读者(或听众)很容易明白文章表达的基本信息。2.不同的文体使用不同的人称和时态，在写作中人称时态要把握好。分类突破下面就书信、日记、演讲稿为
98、例简单介绍一下它们的写作步骤：1.书信/电子邮件 此类作文一般开头结尾都已给出，正文可根据作文要求分段把内容表达清楚即可。2.日记/周记 在写作时，一般先介绍活动的时间、地点、目的和内容，最后谈个人感受。写作步骤 分类突破3.演讲稿 演讲稿通常包括三部分：呼语(Greeting)、正文(Body)和结束语(Closing)。写作时按这三部分的顺序表达即可。分类突破(一)(2015全国)假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：1.栏目介绍；2.稿件内容；真题体验 3.稿件长度：约400词；4.交稿日期：6月28日前。注
99、意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。Dear Peter，Id like to ask you to write an article for our schoolsEnglish newspaper.分类突破参考范文 Dear Peter，Id like to ask you to write an article for our schoolsEnglish newspaper.The“Foreign Cultures”section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It c
100、arries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States?And we would especially welcome articles 分类突破about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals，andthe life of American high
101、school students.You can writeanythingrelevantsolongasitsinterestingandinformative.400 words would be fine.Could we have yourarticle before June 28?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours，Li Hua 分类突破(二)(2015全国)假定你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容
102、包括：1.出发及返回时间；2.活动：包饺子、表演节目等。分类突破注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结语已为你写好。Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua 分类突破(三)(2015北京，书面表达一)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封邮件，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加。邮件的内容包括：1.介绍训练营的相关内容(例如：时间、地点、参加者等)；2.说明你打算参加的原因；3.询问对方的意向。注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：龙舟训练营Dragon Boa
103、t Training Camp Dear Jim，Yours，Li Hua 分类突破参考范文 Dear Jim，Im writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summerholiday.I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp.I wonderif youd like to go with me.This camp will open on July 20th.It offers teenagers，like you and me，a chance to enjoy sports and learn
104、about 分类突破Chinese culture.If you are interested in it，let meknow and Ill send you more information.Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.Yours，Li Hua 分类突破(四)(2015天津)假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示，写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系，并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。1.自我介绍；2.拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等；3.询问对方的
105、其他需求。分类突破注意：1.词数不少于100；2.请适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：学生会 the Student Union Dear Chris，Yours，Li Jin 分类突破参考范文 Dear Chris，Im Li Jin，Chairman of the Student Union in ChenguangMiddle School.Now I have a piece of good news to tell you.Our school will donate 5,000 copies of different valuable
106、 books to your class，which include popular science books，classic works and so on.Popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way and they can help you 分类突破understand science subjects better and arouse your curiosity aboutscientific discoveries.Classic works p
107、resent great thoughts throughfascinating stories and language.They not only offer you joy andexcitement，but also encourage you to think critically.We will take these books to your school to take part in thesummer camp in July this year.If you have more needs，please let me know as soon as possible.Yo
108、urs，Li Jin 分类突破(五)(2015陕西)假定你是李华，在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。分类突破Volunteers Wanted Our annual English Festival，which will be held on June1517,2015，is now looking for 20 student volunteers toprovide service for Talent Show，Speech Contest，andEnglish Debate.If you are intereste
109、d，please send anapplication email at your earliest convenience to Ms Chen .分类突破写作要点：1.表达写作意图；2.陈述应征目的；3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。写作要求：1.邮件词数不少于100；2.开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；3.可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯。分类突破Dear Ms Chen，Im Li Hua，a student from Class 2，Grade 3.Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly，Li Hua 分类突破参考范文 Dear Ms C
110、hen，Im Li Hua，a student from Class 2，Grade 3.I am writingto apply for the volunteer position stated in your notice.I think its a perfect opportunity for me to further developmy abilities.For the past two years，I have been an activeparticipant of our national annual English festival and played animpo
111、rtant role in it.As a diligent student in my class，I have agood knowledge of English and can express my thoughts andopinions clearly and fluently with foreigners.分类突破In addition，I am an outgoing girl who has rich experience inorganizing school activities.Once，I took part in a national hostessspeakin
112、g contest on behalf of our school and won the first place.Iwould appreciate it if I am offered with an opportunity to displaymy talent.Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly，Li Hua 四、开放、半开放类作文 写作要求 开放、半开放类作文往往给考生呈现有限的提示，留给考生更多思考的空间和自由发挥的余地。考生应仔细审题、确定文体，然后选择恰当的句式来准确表达题目要求的相关内容。这种题型旨在考查考生用英语思考的能力和在
113、具体的语境中用英语表达的能力。分类突破1.开放类作文表达时通常先描述显性的部分，按一定的顺序，如时间的先后或空间的转移，来组织材料。然后是隐性的部分，要紧扣主题或按照作文要求去表达，即揭示寓意，突出主题。隐性部分和显性部分一定有其必然的联系。2.半开放类作文通常先描述材料的叙述部分。然后按材料要求对所给的要点自由发挥即可，但要符合生活实际，真实可信。写作步骤 分类突破(一)(2015重庆，写作一)请就以下话题，按要求用英文写作。If you could give your younger self one piece of advice，whatwould you say?要求：1.做出回答并
114、说明理由；2.词数不少于60。真题体验 分类突破参考范文 Were I three years younger than I am now，I wouldstrongly recommend that I set more practical and specificgoals.As an old saying goes，“living without a clear andachievable aim is like sailing without a compass”.Comparedwith many abstract objectives，practical ones can brin
115、g usmore courage and confidence whenever we make one stepforward.If only I could go back and reset my goals.分类突破(二)(2015浙江)在班级活动中，当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时，你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人，还是尊重大多数同学的意见？请你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”为题，用英语写一篇100120个词的短文。要求如下：分类突破1.从以上两种做法中选择一种；2.以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。When I Have a Different Opini
116、on 分类突破参考范文1 When I Have a Different Opinion We may have different opinions in organizing classactivities.We may have various ways to deal with such asituation.When I have a better idea，I would choose to stickto it.By doing so，I can not only share good ideas withothers but also learn to express myse
117、lf clearly.分类突破Once we were discussing where to go for anouting.Most of my classmates wanted to go to a parkwhile I had an idea of going to a nicer place.I managedto persuade my classmates into accepting my idea.Wedid have a good time that day.Good opinions are worthsticking to because they can bene
118、fit us all.分类突破参考范文2 When I Have a Different Opinion We may have different opinions in organizing classactivities.When I have a different opinion，I may choose togive it up and respect the opinion of the majority.The main reason for my choice is that being brought upin a culture emphasizing collectiv
119、ism，I tend to sacrifice my分类突破own interest for the group benefit.Once we were leftto decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to amuseum.I would love to go to a museum，but most of myclassmates wanted to go for a picnic.Without hesitation，Idecided to follow them and we did have lots of fun tha
120、tday.Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.分类突破As a student，I can tell you that there is nothing betterthan being praised by my teacher before my classmates.(三)(2015湖南)请以老师当众表扬你为话题，用下面所给句子开头，续写一篇英语短文。注意：1.续写词数不少于120个；2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。分类突破参考范文 As a student，I can tell you that there is not
121、hing better thanbeing praised by my teacher before my classmates.The reasons areas follows：firstly，it is an obvious sign that what I have done isappreciated by the teacher especially in public.My teacher maythink I am excellent and I can do well in my study，which canmakememoreconfident.Secondly，Iwil
122、lhaveenoughmotivation to make more progress in my study and many 分类突破other things.Last but not least，everyone will be happyif praised，which is the common positive emotion thateverybody likes to share.Every coin has its two sides.Praiseisnt always good for us，and we might become much tooproud of ours
123、elves.In conclusion，I like being praised，but I knowsometimes its not always good.Praise should be carriedout in a proper way.分类突破(四)(2015湖北)请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。Questioning is a bridge to learning.When you begin to doubtsomething and search for an answer，you will learn.注意：1.无须写标题；2.除诗歌外，文体不限；3.内
124、容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；4.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；5.词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。分类突破参考范文 Questioning can lead to searching for an answer.If we are inthe habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true，we can find the correct answer and learn more.Two years ago，our teacher offered us an answer to a difficul
125、t math problem in class.Although the answer seemed a little strange，nobody but I doubted it.Thinking that his solution mmight be wrong，I carefully analyzed the problem and tried分类突破to work it out in a different way.Half an hour later，Imanaged to find the correct answer.When I showed myanswer to him，
126、the teacher praised me for my independentthinking.From this experience I have learned that questioningcan serve as a bridge that helps us to seek the truth.分类突破(五)(2015江苏)请阅读下面文字及图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。分类突破1.The other day，a netizen(网民)shared a photo on SinaWeibo.It was about an old lady standing in
127、 front of a car thatwas on a bicycle lane，and insisting that it leave the track.Thephoto drew about 7，000 comments on the social mediaplatform.Despite the thumbsup(点赞)given to the old lady，some argued that attention should be paid to our heavy roadtraffic.分类突破2.Some riders of ebikes and bicycles com
128、e and go inall directions，ignoringtraffic lights andothervehicles.Such rude riding contributes to the disorder oftraffic.Thus the avoidable road accidents becomeunavoidable.分类突破3.From 2005 to 2014，the total number of private cars in China rose sharply from 32 million to 154 million.Currently，China h
129、ad 15%of the worlds total vehicles.分类突破写作内容 1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；2.结合上述信息，简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因；3.根据你的分析，从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。分类突破写作要求 1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。评分标准 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。分类突破参考范文 The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack.It not only affects
130、oureveryday life，but may also threaten peoples lives.The threeselections presented above are typical examples.Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem.In spite ofthe largescale construction of roads and highways，there is stillmuch room for improvement，because of the ever increasingnumber
131、of cars these years.Whats worse，some drivers，cyclistsand pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.分类突破In fact，traffic rules are part of the rules and regulationsclosely related to public order.Without them，people could notenjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos.But rules alonedont secure an orderly society.It is the people who obey therules that matter.It is everybodys duty to observe them to keepour society in order and going on the right track.
