1、Section Writing青少年问题1写作任务假定你是光华学校学生会主席李华,负责接洽本校国外交换生。最近你收到来自英国的高一新生Lucy的邮件,诉说自己和父母远程交流时,在学习问题上经常容易发生争吵。请给她回一封邮件,内容包括:1表示理解;2给出建议;3安慰对方。注意:1.词数80左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_2写作思路(1)一审:确定写作体裁和主题体裁:应用文建议信(邮件)主题:亲子关系(2)二定:确定时态和人称时态:一般现在时为主人称:第一人称(I)和第二人称(you)(3)三明确:明确写作要点:表示理解给出建议安慰对方(4)四分段:结合写作要点分三个段落3素材整理(1)
2、关键词语受困扰be troubled by/be upset by因为某事和某人争吵argue with sb. over sth.发脾气lose temper经历go through身心变化physical and mental changes和某人交流have communication with sb.解决某人的担忧address ones concerns让某人冷静下来calm sb. down结果变好turn out better(2)完成句子我很理解你因为学习问题和父母争吵而感到烦恼。I quite understand that you _.你可能会经历一些生理和心理上的变化。Y
3、ou may_.为什么不试试这些建议,看看它们是否有用呢?_ these pieces of advice and see if they help?你可以与父母坦诚沟通,了解他们的担忧,分享你的想法以便解决他们的担忧。You can _, figure out their worries and share your thoughts in order to _.尽量让自己冷静下来,从他们的角度去理解情况。Try to _ and understand the situation from their point of view.最终一切都会好起来的。Everything will _ in
4、 the end.4满分作文(连句成篇)请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。参考范文:Dear Lucy,I quite understand that you are troubled by arguing with your parents over your studies. Actually, it is quite normal for you to lose temper since you may go through some physical and mental changes.Why not try these pieces of advice and
5、 see if they help? First, have an honest communication with your parents, figure out their worries and share your thoughts in order to address their concerns. Second, try to calm yourself down and understand the situation from their point of view.I believe this stormy period will not last for long.
6、Everything will turn out better in the end.Yours,Li Hua5佳作背诵(1)佳作一假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Tom刚上高中,感觉学习生活一团糟,他写信向你求助,请你用英文回信,给予他帮助。内容包括:提高学习效率;保证充足睡眠;加强锻炼身体。要求:词数80左右;可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_(2)佳作二假定你是晨光中学学生会主席李华,最近你收到了你校国际交换生Peter的信件,信中表明自己学习中国文学有困难,请你给Peter就如何学习中国文学回一封建议信。要点如下:概述Peter的问题;你的具体建议。注意:词数80左右;可以适当增加细节,以使
7、行文连贯。_Section Writing青少年问题3答案:are troubled by arguing with your parents over studiesgo through some physical and mental changesWhy not try/How about tryinghave an honest communication with your parentsaddress their concernscalm yourself downturn out better5(1)参考范文:Dear Tom,Im sorry to hear that you
8、have trouble adapting to your senior high school life. Looking back on my experience, Im no exception. However, the situation is easy to change. Here are some tips for you.First, you should attach great importance to the efficiency of your study whether you are at home or school because it is no use
9、 studying with your mind absent. Besides, a good nights sleep contributes to your physical and mental wellbeing. Do remember to put away your mobile phone before going to bed. Undoubtedly, nothing is more important than health. Its vital for you to take exercise regularly.All in all, I sincerely hop
10、e you can make a difference.Yours,Li Hua(2)参考范文:Dear Peter,From your letter, I know that you have difficulty in learning Chinese literature. Its challenging for you to grasp the background of the classical novels and the deep meaning of the poems. You feel confused when you read the novels and recit
11、e the poems.I really understand your feeling as theres a long history for Chinese literature. Actually, learning history is indeed a good solution to solving your problem. Besides, I recommend that you watch films adapted from the novels, which can help you become expert gradually. Lastly, focusing on The Chinese Poetry Competition is also suitable for your study.I hope these suggestions can be helpful for you.Yours,Li Hua