1、卷别年份命题形式信息提示形式体裁写作内容新高考全国卷2020提纲式文字提示报道越野赛跑活动浙江卷2020提纲式文字提示电子邮件慰问外教浙江卷2019提纲式文字提示电子邮件感谢朋友的帮助浙江卷2018提纲式文字提示求职信应聘做志愿者命题规律1体裁以书信/电子邮件为主，报道、发言稿、日记、书面或口头通知和网络发帖都属于应用文。2命题形式主要是提纲式，有文字提示，但开放性在增大，有些也可归类为半开放式。3话题贴近考生的日常生活，常涉及中学生的学习、生活以及他们所熟悉和关注的话题，特别是弘扬中国传统文化，突出中国传统价值观。命题趋势1预计2021年高考对应用文写作的考查仍将是文字提示类作文，以书信类和
2、记叙文为主，但为了使考生发挥出写作水平，试题将保持较大的开放性，给出的提纲会高度简洁、概括，为考生留有较大的发挥空间。2话题选材与考生的学习、生活、价值观等密切相关，包括学校生活、人际交往、社会活动、传统文化等，重在考查实际生活中的书面表达能力。应用文写作解题四步骤第一步：认真审题(1)审体裁，避免格式错误；(2)审时间，避免时态错误；(3)审语气，避免直白生硬。第二步：拟全要点研读题目要求中的关键词，用汉语将其写在稿纸上并作为扩展句子或段落的根据，拟要点时要求考生仔细审题，对题目要求中的文章提示要仔细研读，确保要点全面。第三步：适当补充由于高考作文的文字提示比较简单，为了行文连贯和满足词数要
3、求，必须适当补充细节，需注意的是在增加细节时一定要适当，切忌任意发挥，画蛇添足。第四步：成文合理使用过渡词和关联词，使作文条理清晰、结构层次分明、语言自然流畅。A篇 (2020新高考全国卷)假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1参加人员；2跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；3活动反响。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2请按如下格式作答。A CrossCountry Running Race【参考范文】A CrossCountry Running RaceIn order to enrich our campus life，our school or
4、ganized a 5 km crosscountry running race last Sunday.Ninety students from twenty classes participated in the race，among whom thirty were girls.Participants set out at 9 am. from the gate of the school，through the Renmin Park，and finally arrived at the foot of Nanshan Mountain.After the race，we felt
5、that not only did the event improve our physical and psychological quality，but it also helped us build a positive attitude towards life.We do hope that more schools will carry out more similar activities in the future.B篇 (2019浙江卷)假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1表示感谢；2回顾Alex对你的帮助；3临别祝
6、愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Alex，Im sorry to hear that you are going to return to your country very soon and Im writing this email to express my gratitude for your help.First of all，thank you for helping me learn English.Without your help，I would not have made so great progress in Engl
7、ishlearning.Besides，what you told me about your country broadened my horizons and aroused my interest in foreign culture.I wish you all the best in the future and have a good journey.Yours，Li HuaC篇 (2018浙江卷)假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：1口语能力；2相关经验；3应聘目的。注意：1.词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考
8、范文】Dear Sir/Madam，Ive learned that the English Association of our school is now in need of some volunteers to receive foreign students visiting our school.Im writing to apply to join it，thinking that Im well qualified for the job.For one thing，I have developed fluency in spoken English.I have no dif
9、ficulty communicating with them.Whats more，I have accumulated related experience by working parttime in a travel agency，accompanying some foreign tourists.And I treasure this as a good chance to broaden my perspective as well as improve my spoken English.Looking forward to your reply at your conveni
10、ence.Yours，Li Hua题型一记叙文1always has a twinkle in her eyes 总是闪烁着她的大眼睛2on the top of the world 心满意足、非常幸福3like to make friends with him 乐意与他交朋友4a man with a sense of responsibility 有责任感的人5a man so ready to help a friend in trouble 一位那么愿意帮助处于困境中的朋友的人6make great contributions to our society 为我们的社会做出了巨大贡献精
11、彩开头 1Mr. Zhang played an important role in promoting my studies, which left a deep impression on me.张老师在我提升学习成绩的过程中起了重要作用，这给我留下了深刻的印象。2Whenever I talk about the Dragon Boat Festival, I cant help thinking of Qu Yuan, a great patriotic poet in Chinese history.每当谈论起端午节，我都不禁想起屈原，中国历史上一位伟大的爱国诗人。3Martin,
12、whose Chinese name is Ma Lin, is our oral English teacher this term.Martin是我们这学期的英语口语老师，他的中文名是马林。正文佳句 1He is honest and always ready to help others. Thats why we elected him our monitor.他诚实且乐于助人，那就是为什么我们选他当班长的原因。2The longer we get along with him, the more popular with us he will be.我们跟他相处的时间越长，他就会越受
13、我们的欢迎。3Thanks to his help, I have made much progress and caught up with others.多亏他的帮助，我取得了很大的进步并赶上了其他同学。余味结尾 1He is such a learned teacher that all of us respect him.他是如此博学的老师，我们大家都很尊敬他。2Such is Mr. Li, a kindhearted, humorous and responsible teacher.这就是李老师，一位心地善良、幽默、有责任心的老师。3Looking at my grandmas
14、pale face and white hair, tears came to my eyes, I sank into deep thought.看着奶奶苍白的面庞和满头的白发，我热泪盈眶、思绪万千。某英文刊物正在进行“孝道传播”活动。请根据以下内容，以“My Respectable Mother”为题写一篇短文。内容要点：140多岁，工程师；2懂得知识的重要并关心你的学习；3善良、勤劳，值得尊敬。注意：1.词数80左右。2可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。My Respectable Mother_【参考范文】My Respectable MotherThere is one person wh
15、o plays an important role in my life. She is my beloved mother.My mother, over 40 years old, is an engineer in a factory. Through her work, she finds that its so important for people to equip themselves with more knowledge. As a result, she always asks me how I am getting along with my studies. She
16、tries her best to take care of me in order that I can have more time to study. She works hard without complaining. Whenever people around get into trouble, they are willing to turn to her for help, which makes her respected by all our neighbors.Such is my mother, a kind and hardworking woman. 1gathe
17、r at the school gate in the early morning 清晨在学校大门口集合2enjoy the wonderful scenery of green trees and white clouds 欣赏绿树、白云组成的美丽景色3see satisfaction in her eyes 从她的眼睛中看到了满足感4do a thorough/general cleaning 进行大扫除5do more for a better world 为更加美好的世界而更努力工作6return home, tired but happy 回到了家，很累但很高兴精彩开头 1Yeste
18、rday afternoon I went to the park, where I happened to witness a touching story.昨天下午我去了公园，在那里碰巧目睹了一个动人的故事。2Last night I was busy preparing for my test when I heard a loud voice.昨晚当我正忙着为我的考试做准备时，我听到一声巨响。3Today is a weekend and it is the traditional Chinese festivalthe Midautumn Festival.今天是周末，也是中国的传统
19、佳节中秋节。正文佳句 1A blind man was walking slowly and carefully with a walking stick in his hand.一个盲人手里拿着一根拐杖，小心地挪动着脚步。2The sea was blue and the beach was golden, so we enjoyed ourselves in the sea.大海是蓝色的，海滩是金色的，我们玩得很愉快。3Before we knew it, we had to say goodbye and get back home.不知不觉到了我们该说再见返回家的时候了。余味结尾 1I
20、 think that the unforgettable and unusual experience will be fresh in my mind forever.我想这难忘而不寻常的经历会永远留在我的脑海中。2If the thing flaring in my mothers eyes was tears, it must be happy tears.如果妈妈眼中闪烁的是泪光，那一定是幸福的眼泪。3Through this meaningful activity, I learned something that can not be learned in class.通过这次有
21、意义的活动，我学到了一些课堂上学不到的东西。假定你是李华，近期你校举办了主题为“美丽中国”的现场国画(traditional Chinese painting)比赛。请为校报英文专栏写一篇活动报道。内容包括：1活动时间、地点；2活动概况；3活动意义。注意：1.词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Beautiful China in Traditional Chinese PaintingsLast Friday witnessed a traditional Chinese painting competition “Beautiful China” on campu
22、s, which has sparked a growing love for traditional art.Over one hundred students participated in the competition. As the competition began, participants laid out the paper, picked up the paintbrush and gave full play to their talent, displaying the beauty of our motherland. Two hours later, the com
23、petition came to an end. The results will be announced in two days, and the winning entries will be on show in the exhibition hall.The competition provides a platform to explore the beauty of China and experience the charm of Chinese art，thus highly thought of by the students.题型二书信、电子邮件1be extremely
24、 grateful to you for your unselfish assistance 非常感谢您给予我无私的帮助2express my gratitude for your generous help 感谢您对我慷慨的帮助3take this opportunity to express my great appreciation 借此机会表达对您的感谢4appreciate it more than I can say 感激之情溢于言表5expect to have the opportunity to repay your kindness 期望有机会报答你的善举6can neve
25、r thank you too much 怎样感激你都不为过精彩开头 1I am writing to express my thanks/convey my gratitude to you for doing .我写信来表达我的谢意，感谢您2I am writing to convey my heartfelt gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in your country, without which I wouldnt have enjoyed it so much.我写信是为了感谢您在我待在您的国家期间对我的帮
26、助和关心，如果没有您的帮助，我就不会玩得那么开心。3Thank you so much for the gift you sent me.Its one of the most wonderful gifts I ever got.非常感谢你给我寄来的礼物，这是我收到的最好的礼物之一。正文佳句 1You really added greatly to my convenience and pleasure of the whole trip.你真的给我的整个行程带来了极大的方便与快乐。2Thanks to your generous/selfless/kind help, without wh
27、ich I wouldnt have made such great progress.多亏您慷慨的/无私的/友好的帮助，没有您的帮助，我就不会取得这么大的进步。3So happy a time did we have that it was not until we went back to the hotel where we stayed that we realized that .我们玩得非常高兴，以至于直到返回居住的宾馆时我们才意识到余味结尾 1I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your k
28、indness.I will show you around in Beijing.I am looking forward to your coming.如果我有机会报答您的善举，我将非常高兴。我会带您参观北京。期待您早日到来。2Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I sincerely invite you to my hometown.再次感谢您的盛情款待，并诚挚地邀请您到我的家乡。3I wish there were a better word than “thanks” to express my appreciati
29、on for your generous help.任何语言都不能表达您对我慷慨帮助的真挚谢意。假定你是高三学生李华，将于今年六月份毕业。请你给你的英语老师Miss Wang写一封感谢信。内容包括：1写信目的；2老师对你的帮助；3表达祝愿。注意：1.词数 80 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3称呼和落款已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Miss Wang, _Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【参考范文】Dear Miss Wang，As our graduation is drawing near, Im afraid that we have to say goodb
30、ye to each other soon.Here Im writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your support and guidance during the past three years.I still remember there was a time when I was struggling with my English learning and even thought of giving it up.However, it was you who selflessly sacrificed your spare
31、 time to guide me, cheer me up and help me with my English.Without your help, I couldnt have made such great progress.Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you and I wish you good health and a happy mood every day.Yours sincerely, Li Hua1on behalf of all the students 代表所有学生2invite you to
32、participate in our family gettogether 邀请你参加我们的家庭聚会3confirm your participation at your early convenience 方便的话尽早确认参加4with the Midautumn Festival around the corner 随着中秋节的临近5have a better understanding of the true meaning of success 更好地理解成功的真正含义6arouse our enthusiasm for the traditional Chinese culture
33、唤起人们对中国传统文化的热情精彩开头 1Id like to invite you to go for a visit with us to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.我想邀请你下周六重阳节与我们一起去拜访附近的敬老院。2A Chinese Classics Reciting Contest will be hosted in my school. Knowing that you are really into Chinese culture, Im writing to invit
34、e you to participate in it.我校将要主办“中华经典文学诵读比赛”，知道你对中国文化很感兴趣，我写信邀请你参加。3Im writing to share with you the news about the charity party to be held by our Students Union next Wednesday. On behalf of the Union, I sincerely invite you to come. 我写信是想和你分享下星期三我们学生会举行的慈善聚会的消息，我代表学生会诚挚地邀请你的到来。正文佳句 1Here are some
35、 details about this activity, which are listed as follows.下面是关于本次活动的一些细节，列举如下。2On April 21st, an old craftsman will be invited to our class to teach us how to do papercutting, which is a traditional Chinese folk art form with a long history. 4月21日，我们将邀请一位老手艺人来我们班教我们做剪纸，剪纸是一种历史悠久的中国传统民间艺术形式。3The exhi
36、bition will take place in our school art gallery on April 26th, aimed to encourage students to respect knowledge and advocate science.展览将于4月26日在我们学校美术馆举行，目的是鼓励学生尊重知识，倡导科学。4I think it is a good chance to appreciate local operas, which will surely help you learn more about Chinese culture.我认为这是欣赏当地歌剧的
37、好机会，这无疑有助于你更多地了解中国文化。5By participating in the activity, not only can we gain much confidence in learning English, but also we can broaden our horizons.通过参加这次活动，我们不仅可以增强学英语的信心，还可以拓宽视野。6Im fully convinced that it will help you have a better understanding of traditional Chinese culture.我完全相信它将有助于你更好地了解
38、中国传统文化。余味结尾 1I really hope you can come and have fun with us. I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply.我真希望你能来和我们一起玩。如能尽早答复，我将不胜感激。2I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. Best wishes for a happy Spring Festival in China!如你能接受我的邀请，我将不胜感激。祝你在中国春节愉快！3I sincerely hope
39、you can come and have a good time. Looking forward to your reply.我真诚地希望你能来度过一段愉快的时光。期待你的答复。(2020济南五校高三教学质量检测)假定你是李华，元旦在即，你们班要举行元旦晚会，特邀你们的外教老师Paul参加。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1时间和地点；2节目介绍；3希望他表演节目。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Mr. Paul，As New Year is coming，Im honored to invite you to attend our N
40、ew Years party on behalf of my class，which will be held at 7：30 next Friday night in our classroom.At the party，we students will display talents for singing，dancing，magic shows，etc.You can enjoy beautiful songs both in Chinese and English，cross talk，as well as Chinese folk dances，which are your favo
41、rite.Knowing youre good at singing，were all looking forward to your wonderful performance then.We cant wait to see you!Yours，Li Hua1have a strong team spirit 有较强的团队精神2have a good command of English 精通英语3have a good relationship with others 与他人保持良好的关系4have a gift for communicating with others 有与别人沟通的
42、天赋5apply for the position as a student volunteer 申请做学生志愿者6have no difficulty communicating with others in English 用英语和别人交流起来毫不费力精彩开头 1I am happy to know you are advertising for some volunteers, so Im writing to apply for this job.很高兴知道你们在招聘志愿者，我写信是想申请这份工作。2Im writing in the hope that I can obtain an
43、 opportunity to further my study in Computer Science in your university.我写信是希望能获得在贵校计算机专业深造的机会。 3Having heard that you are recruiting volunteers to teach in the countryside, I am writing to apply for a chance to become a volunteer.听说你们在招募下乡支教的志愿者，我想申请做志愿者。 正文佳句 1Here are my qualifications, which are
44、 listed as follows.下面是我的优势，列举如下。 2Not only am I qualified for the job, but I have the right personality for it.我不仅具备做好这项工作的资格，而且还具备相应的人格魅力。3In addition, I also participate in various social activities in my spare time to seize every opportunity to enhance my personal ability as well as to enrich my
45、business experiences.此外，为了抓住每一个提升我个人能力和丰富我的工作经历的机会，在业余时间里，我也参加了各种社会活动。余味结尾 1I would be grateful if you could give me an opportunity and I am sure I can perfectly live up to your expectations. Looking forward to your early reply.如果您能给我一个机会，我将感激不尽，我坚信我一定不辜负您的厚望。期待您的早日答复。2I would appreciate it if you c
46、ould take the trouble to provide me with some information and necessary application materials. 如果您能给我提供一些信息和必要的申请材料，我将不胜感激。3Should you offer me an interview，I would be most grateful. Looking forward to your early reply.如果你能给我机会去面试，我将感激不尽。期盼着你的早日回复。(2020山东新高考命题研究专家原创卷)假定你是李华，在澳大利亚悉尼的一所高中做交换生，得知当地一家中文
47、培训中心正在招募志愿者。请你根据以下要点提示，写一封申请信，内容包括：1写信目的；2自身优势；3表达期望。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam，I know from the Internet that your center is looking for volunteers.Im writing to apply to be a volunteer.I have the following advantages.First of all，Im an exchange student from China，so Chin
48、ese is my mother tongue.Second，Im friendly and helpful，which allows me to get along well with others.More importantly，I have worked as a volunteer before，so I know what is expected of a volunteer.I would appreciate it if you could give me a chance.Please take my application into consideration.Yours，
49、Li Hua1give rise to the traffic problems 引发交通问题2keep a positive attitude towards life 对生活保持乐观态度3live up to my parents expectations 不辜负我父母的期望4pass our love and friendship to others 把我们的爱和友谊传递给他人5get actively involved in class activities 积极参与课堂活动6make a contribution to protecting the environment 为保护环境
50、做贡献精彩开头 1I know from your letter that you have trouble in learning English. I am writing to offer you some advice.从你的来信中得知你在学习英语方面遇到了困难。我写信给你提供一些建议。2I have received your letter saying that you plan to pay a visit to China next month and stay for ten days. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpfu
51、l to you.我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来中国旅游，并在这儿待十天。下面的建议可能会对你有所帮助。3Im more than pleased to have received your email. Now Im writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。正文佳句 1The contest will begin at 2：00 pm. and last two hours, during whi
52、ch time 15 wellprepared contestants will deliver their speeches.比赛将于下午两点开始，四点结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。2In my humble opinion, it makes good sense to take the following action.依我的拙见，采取下列行动是明智的。3By the way, you may take Bus No.322，which will take you directly to the club.顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部
53、。余味结尾 1I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不会说“不可能”。2I hope that my suggestions are helpful to you anyway. I would be more than happy to see your improvement.无论如何，我希望这些建议能对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴
54、看到你的进步。3If you have any questions or requests, please do not hesitate to tell me.如果你还有任何问题或要求，请及时告诉我。(2020山东省胶东示范校高三下学期联考)假定你是李华，正在伦敦某学校做交换生。你校要成立一些有关中国文化的社团，于是向同学们征求建议。请你给负责人写一封建议信，内容如下：1说明目的；2提出建议；3解释原因。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam，Im Li Hua，an exchange student of our sch
55、ool.Knowing youre planning to start some school clubs about Chinese culture，Im writing and trying to make a suggestion.My suggestion is that a Chinese painting club should be established.For one reason，Chinese painting is a form of art with a long history，standing for the civilization of ancient Chi
56、na.For another，the club may appeal to not only Chinese students but other students，because there is no language barrier to appreciating art.I would be grateful for your taking my advice into consideration. Looking forward to hearing from you.Sincerely，Li Hua1be of vital importance to us human being
57、对我们人类很重要2recommend you a website on English writing 向你们推荐一个英语写作网站3enrich the afterschool lives of foreign students 丰富留学生的课余生活4enrich our knowledge and broaden our horizons 丰富我们的知识，拓宽我们的视野5be great fun and beneficial to your language learning 非常有趣而且有益于你们的语言学习6sign up for the individual oral English t
58、raining program 报名参加英语口语个人培训精彩开头 1Learning that you are coming to Beijing for a vacation, Im writing this letter to offer my recommendation.得知你将来北京度假，我写这封信给出我的推荐。2Im more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. Id like to recommend a website to you, one for nonChinese speakers who are le
59、arning Chinese, especially for beginners.得知你在学汉语，我非常高兴。我想向你推荐一个供母语非汉语的人学习汉语的网站，尤其适合初学者。3Ive received your letter which says youre going to take part in the Beauty of China Exhibition. Now it affords me much pleasure to recommend a special job to you.我已收到你的来信，知道你将参加“美丽中国”艺术展。现在我很高兴向你推荐一项特别的工作。正文佳句 1T
60、he website possesses a number of advantages. Firstly, it provides you with a variety of online courses, such as Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs. 这个网站有很多好处。首先，它为你提供各种在线课程，如汉语成语、对话和习俗。2I am convinced that the program will help you gain a better understanding of Chinese culture.我相信这个节目会帮助你更好地了解中国
61、文化。3Therefore I think not only will it be a good opportunity for you to show your talent but also you can offer us guidance.因此，我认为它不仅是你展示才能的好机会，而且你还能给我们提供指导。余味结尾 1I hope you will find this website attractive and helpful. Wish you a happy learning time.希望这个网站对你有吸引力并且有所帮助。祝你学习愉快。2In a word, he would b
62、e a good choice. I would be grateful if you would like to take my recommendation into consideration.总之，他是个不错的选择。如果您愿意考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。3Only in this way can we live in comfortable and beautiful surroundings.只有这样我们才能生活在舒适、美丽的环境中。(2020山东新高考命题研究专家原创卷)假定你是李华，在英国做交换生，你所在的中学要举办国际文化周活动，需要各国的传统艺术展品。请你给负责人Mr.Jef
63、ferson写一封信，推荐一种中国传统艺术品。内容包括：1艺术品名称(如书法、国画、剪纸等)；2推荐原因；3表示期待。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Mr.Jefferson，Im so glad to learn the International Culture Week will be held in the school.Id like to recommend traditional art of China.As we all know，Chinese papercutting is one of the most popu
64、lar folk art forms.Traditional paper cuttings are also called window blossoms，which are put on the windows for decoration to create the festive atmosphere.Nowadays，the art has evolved uniquely to adapt to different cultural styles and presented multiple social values.I will be honored if my recommen
65、ded form of art is on show.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua题型三书面通知或告示1gather at the school gate 在学校大门口集合2be expected to attend on time 期待按时参加3be put off because of the heavy rain 由于大雨而被推迟4raise our awareness of environmental protection 提高我们的环保意识5to satisfy your thirst for the knowled
66、ge of the Silk Road 为了满足你们对于丝绸之路知识的渴求6encourage students to take part in some outdoor activities 鼓励学生参加一些户外活动精彩开头 1A report will be given on English literature by Professor Yang from Hong Kong University.来自香港大学的杨教授将做英语文学报告。2In order to deepen our understanding of campus culture and stimulate the cre
67、ativity and imagination of the students, our school will hold a thrilling event.为了加深我们对校园文化的理解并激发学生们的创造力和想象力，我们学校将举办一个激动人心的活动。3An exciting event Learning English from Films is around the corner, with the intention of making our school life more colorful and meaningful.“通过电影学英语”这一激动人心的活动即将到来，目的是使我们的校
68、园生活更加丰富多彩且有意义。正文佳句 1Those who are interested in it are warmly welcome.我们将热烈欢迎那些对此感兴趣的人。2As scheduled, the lecture will be held in our lecture hall, at 3：00 next Tuesday afternoon.按照安排，演讲将于下周二下午三点在我们的演讲大厅举行。3Any foreign student who is studying at our school and interested in Chinese poems is welcome
69、to take this optional course.任何在我们学校学习并对中国诗歌感兴趣的外国留学生都欢迎选修这门课程。余味结尾 1Please take your notebook with you and turn up on time.请带着笔记本按时到场。2If you are interested in it, please go there on time.如果你们对此感兴趣，请按时到那里去。3Be sure to attend it on time, I dare say you will gain a lot from it.一定按时参加，保证你们受益匪浅。(2020青岛
70、市高三年级统一质量检测)假定你是某校学生会主席李华，学校将于下个月12号举办运动会。请你给校国际部的留学生拟一个参赛通知，内容包括：1运动会比赛项目介绍；2报名方式和截止时间；3注意事项。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】NoticeAttention，please！A school sports meeting will be held on the 12th next month.The events include the 100m race，500m race，3，000m race，high jump and long jump.In a
71、ddition，there will be a basketball match in the afternoon.Anyone who is willing to take part in it is welcome.You should sign up online by the end of this month.Do remember the deadline and wait for the reply from the school.The Students Union技法一认真审题，拟全要点1审体裁，避免格式错误无论记叙文、书信还是通知都有各自的格式，写对格式是考生写作成功的第一
72、步。(1)记叙文的格式：无论写人记叙文还是叙事类记叙文通常都有题目(有时题目已给出)。(2)书信的格式：Dear ，_Yours，Li Hua(3)通知的格式：书面通知：在正文之前的正中间位置写Notice字样。结尾要写明通知发布单位。口头通知：固定的开场白：Ladies and gentlemen/Boys and girls, may I have your attention please?结尾要有结束语：Thats all. Thank you等。2审时间，避免时态错误要正确判断谓语动词的时态，这是句子的核心。例如2020年新高考全国卷报道类记叙文的文体时态为一般过去时，2020全国卷
73、写人记叙文的主体时态为一般现在时，2020全国卷叙事类记叙文的整体时态为一般过去时，2019全国卷申请信的主体时态是一般现在时；2018全国卷通知的时态以一般将来时和一般现在时为主。3审内容，避免要点缺失遗漏要点是写作大忌。如果要点不全，即使语言正确，结构合理，连贯通顺，也不可能得高分。(2020全国卷)上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：1农场情况；2采摘过程；3个人感受。注意：1.词数100左右；2题目已为你写好。My Weekend_ 考生作文名师点评作文提升My WeekendLast weekend, I and my classm
74、ates went to Xingxing Farm to pick some oranges. The activity left a deep impression on me.When we arrived at the farm, there were many oranges on the trees. They hang from the branches. A farmer told us how to pick oranges. Then we were divided into two groups and began to work. We were very happy
75、when we picked oranges. After we paid for the oranges we picked, we prepared to return back to school. The activity was very good and we had a wonderful time. The activity gives us relaxation and got us close to nature. (1)该篇文章在词数、格式和体裁上都符合要求，时态上出现了两处错误，hang应改为hung；gives应改为gave。(2)表达上I and my classm
76、ates应为my classmates and I；return后的 back应去掉；第二段第一句到达农场应是看到了树上有很多橘子。(3)有些地方还可进行优化，例如第一段的两句话可以改成一个含有定语从句的复合句；另外，倒装、省略、感叹句等的应用可以给文章增光添彩。My WeekendIn order to release the studying pressure, I went to Xingxing Farm to pick some oranges together with my classmates last weekend, which left me a deep impress
77、ion.Hardly had we arrived at the farm when we saw many oranges hanging from the branches. A farmer told us how to pick oranges. Then each of us carried a basket and a pair of scissors, quickly climbed up the ladder and started to pick oranges. Bathed in sunshine, we sang and laughed while picking or
78、anges. After we paid for the oranges we picked, we decided to go back to school.What a wonderful time we had! The activity gives us relaxation as well as getting us closer to nature.结合下列写作要求，完成谋篇及拟点任务假设你是李华，你的外国网友Peter因迷恋手机游戏而被父母批评，他为此写信向你抱怨。请给他写一封回信，要点包括：1对Peter受到批评表示遗憾；2指出Peter的错误；3给出建议。 注意：1.词数80
79、左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_(一)认真审题1本文为信件，属于应用文，应注意书信的格式。2时态以一般现在时为主。3人称以第一和第二人称为主。(二)拟全要点1听到你受到父母的批评我感到很遗憾。2老实说，你确实该受责备。3作为学生，我们的首要任务是努力学习而不是沉迷于手机游戏。4你父母的所作所为都是因为他们关心你。5你非常有必要合理安排学习和休闲时间。6你绝不该再沉迷于手机游戏从而让你的父母失望。(三)范文填充Dear Peter，Im sorry to hear that you were scolded by your parents.But to be honest，1.it i
80、s indeed you that are to blameTo start with，it is the primary task 2.to study hard rather than stay addicted to phone gamesIn addition，the reason why your parents criticised you is 3.that they care about youHow I wish you could put yourself in their shoes! Whats more，it is necessary that 4.you arran
81、ge your time for study and leisure wiselyAt no time should you let phone games absorb you again and disappoint your parents.Hope what I say will cheer you up.Yours sincerely，Li Hua.书面表达(邀请信)(2020青岛市高三诊断检测)假定你是李华，你校近期成立了“孔子思想”网上俱乐部(Confucianism online club)。你的朋友Tom对中国文化很感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件，邀请他加入该俱乐部。注意：1.写
82、作词数应为80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Tom，Learning that you take great interest in traditional Chinese culture，Im writing to invite you to join the Confucianism online club.Set up by our school recently，the club is a platform where Chinese culture lovers and learners can have a better knowledge of
83、the culture and share their own views with each other.Therefore，I think its a good chance for you to explore the charm of Confucianism.Otherwise，the club will provide free materials about Confucianism.Looking forward to your active participation.Yours，Li Hua技法二引人入胜的开篇语1如何写好开头开头一般来说要做到开门见山，使读者了解文章要谈什
84、么，最好能立刻引起读者的兴趣。(1)背景法说明事件发生的时间、地点、背景等。典例Last week I took part in a farm work programme in the suburbs.(2019北京卷书面表达)(2)数据法引用已经被证实的某些统计数字来引出话题。典例The boxoffice income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. (2017江苏高考书面表达)(3)主题句法提出一个
85、观点或论据作为文章要阐明和论述的主题。典例When it comes to the season I like best，summer will always occur to me in no time.(2016四川卷书面表达)(4)实例法通过一个实例或现象引出话题。典例Online voting becomes increasingly popular，and many competitions get people involved in it.(2016江苏卷书面表达)(5)问题法用提出问题的方法来引出文章的内容，以吸引读者的注意力。典例Why do we go to univers
86、ity? Different people have different opinions.(6)引语法摘录或引用某些名人的名言或常见的习语、谚语作为文章的开端。典例There is an old English saying, “Gain time, gain life”. Then what is time? Time is something that we cant see or touch, but we can feel it passes by.2书信的开头英语书信的特点是开门见山，在写作中我们常用Im writing to do sth.来表达目的；用Id like to do
87、 sth.来表示打算。求职信可说：Im writing to apply for the position . 或Learning from ., Id like to apply for the.咨询信可说：Im writing to inquire/ask for some information about . 感谢信可说：Im writing to express my thanks for . 或Id like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you for .建议信可说：Im writing to express my view concernin
88、g .投诉信可说：Im writing to complain about .道歉信可说：Im writing to make an apology to you for .邀请信可说：Im writing to tell you something about . Would you like to .?3通知的开头直接说明通知内容，常用there be句式或被动语态。典例1An English Club will be set up on September 16, 2021 in our school. 典例2There will be a lecture on American cul
89、ture in our school on Friday evening. 典例3A fiveday outdoor survival training will be organized by our school during the summer vacation yet to come.典例4An exciting event “Innovations on Campus”is around the corner.Each of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and giv
90、es full play to your DIY skills. (2019全国卷)假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：1时间；2活动安排；3欢迎他表演节目。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_ 考生作文名师点评作文提升My school will hold a music festival.I know you are really interested in it.So Im writing to invite you to join it.(1)词汇方面：join后面应加in，若用participate in则更高
91、级；另外hold以及短语be interested in也可提升文章档次。(2)句式方面：第一句的主动语态可变为被动语态；第二、三两句可以用分词短语合成一个句子。A music festival will be hosted in my school.Knowing that you are really into music, Im writing to invite you to participate in it.请用上述开头法翻译下列句子1上周日，我和同学们去了香山公园。Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to Xiangshan Park. (
92、以背景开篇)2眼下，街谈巷议，人们的热门话题总离不开“三贵”：买房贵、上学贵、看病贵。Nowadays it is often talked about that there are three things that people cant afford. It is expensive to buy houses, to pay for the childrens education and to see the doctor.(以主题句开篇)3当有那么多方式可以与学生家长沟通时，家访还有必要吗？Are home visits necessary when there are so man
93、y ways to communicate with students parents？(以问题开篇)4正如谚语所说的那样“时间就是金钱”，是的，情况确实就是这样。As the saying goes, “Time is money.” Yes, its indeed the case.(以引语开篇)5最近的研究表明，有50%的学生不吃早饭。A recent study shows that 50% of the school kids dont have breakfast.(以数据开篇)6当今，很多大城市的人们在抱怨交通拥挤，这已经严重影响了人们的日常生活和经济发展。Nowadays, p
94、eople in many big cities are complaining about heavy traffic. It has seriously influenced peoples daily life and economic development.(以实例开篇).书面表达(申请信)假如你是李华，你校英语协会正招聘志愿者，接待来访的英国中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：1自我介绍；2个人优势；3相关经验。注意：1.词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sir/Madam，_Yours sincerely，Li Hua【参考范文
95、】Dear Sir/Madam，I am Li Hua, a senior three student applying to be a volunteer for receiving the exchange students from Britain.To begin with, I have the qualifications for the work. I have a good knowledge of spoken and written English, which enables me to communicate with English speakers freely.B
96、esides, Im outgoing and can get along well with people easily.Whats more, I have much experience in receiving exchange students, since my family volunteered to host Australian students last year.Thus, I am convinced that I am capable of this work.Thank you for considering my application and I am loo
97、king forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely，Li Hua技法三丰富充实的细节信息高考书面表达多为开放性作文，题目要求中的提示很少。如果只是简单翻译提示内容，词数肯定不够，因此在写作时需要适当充实一些与提示内容相关联的细节信息内容。1列举具体的实例进行补充说明典例1我要花一些时间和父母在一起。Ill spend some time staying with my parents.Ill spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some hous
98、ework.典例2我是一个充满活力的健康男孩，我非常喜欢体育运动。I am a healthy boy full of energy and I like sports very much.I am a healthy boy full of energy and I like sports very much, especially outdoor activities. Whenever I have time, Ill go hiking or mountainclimbing with my classmates.2增添相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容典例1旅行了一周后，他
99、回到了家。After a weeks trip, he returned home.After a weeks trip, he returned home, tired but happy.典例2我有时去村西的小河里游泳。I went swimming in the river in the west of the village now and then.I went swimming in the river in the west of the village now and then, in which the water was very clear.3增添相关信息的时间、地点等内
100、容典例1我要去超市购物。Im going to do some shopping in the supermarket.Im going to do some shopping in the supermarket and wont be back until 5：00 oclock in the afternoon.典例2我已经带来了你让我归还的那两本书。I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return.I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to t
101、he City Library.4增添相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容典例1我将参加一些社会活动。I will take part in some social activities.If possible, I will take part in some social activities so that I can know more about the society.典例2我需要好好休息。我要做些阅读。I need a good rest. Ill do some reading.I need a good rest because I do feel tired af
102、ter the hard work of all these years. Ill do some reading for fun, as well as for knowledge.5结尾适当发挥，写出个人感受、评价、愿望、倡议等典例1尽管我这个暑假很累，但是我为我做的感到高兴。Although I was very tired this summer holiday, I felt very happy for what I had done.(个人感受)典例2我认为这样的活动很有必要也很有意义。I think such activities are necessary and meani
103、ngful.(评价)典例3我衷心希望我的建议能够对你有所帮助，你能够享受你在新学校的生活。I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life. (愿望)典例4作为一名学生，保护我们校园的环境并使之干净是我们的职责。As a student, its our duty to protect our school environment and make it clean.(倡议)(2017全国卷)假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(papercut
104、ting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1展览时间、地点；2展览内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_ 考生作文名师点评作文提升Dear Henry，I am Li Hua.There will be a Chinese papercutting exhibition.It will be held in the art gallery in our city center.The time is from 8：00 am. to 5：00 pm.Im writing to invite you to see the Chinese papercutting
105、exhibition.Papercutting is a traditional art form in China.It has a long history.In the exhibition you can see many kinds of papercutting works.Some famous papercutting artists will perform how to cut paper on the spot.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua(1)作文的词数偏少，主要是由于对展览内容的描写没能适当增加细节所
106、致。例如悠久的历史可以具体到时间有多长，剪纸有什么用途，你会有什么收获等。另外，结尾处可以增加个人的愿望等。(2)第一段用了五个简单句，可用较复杂的句式进行优化。(3)第二段中的一些句子也可以进行优化。例如可以用复合句，there be结构等。Dear Henry，Im writing to invite you to attend the Chinese papercutting exhibition to be held in the art gallery from 8：00 am. to 5：00 pm. next Sunday in our city center.Papercutt
107、ing is a traditional art form in China，which has a history of more than 1，500 years.People often beautify their homes with papercutting during festivals and weddings. In the exhibition you can see papercutting works of various patterns.In addition，there are famous artists who will perform how to cut
108、 paper on the spot.Through the exhibition，you can not only enjoy the folk art works，but also learn a lot.I hope that you can grasp this opportunity to learn traditional Chinese culture further.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua.根据括号内的提示完成句子1However, it seems that people are not aware o
109、f the negative effects of mobile phones on communication. For example, many people begin to pay less attention to facetoface communication(例如，很多人越来越不重视面对面的交流)2At that moment, I became the focus of the whole class and was full of great pride and confidence(充满了自豪和自信)3Several minutes had gone by(几分钟过去了
110、), but the whole class was still in complete silence.4Besides, remember to speak slowly and clearly so that you can leave a good impression on the audience and judges(以便你能够给观众和裁判留下良好的印象)5Lets develop good habits of saving energy in our daily life and try to make more contributions to our environment
111、(尽力为我们的环境做出更多贡献).书面表达(建议信)(2020潍坊市高考模拟考试)假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Noah在给你的邮件中说他对中国古代建筑很感兴趣，并打算利用暑假参观一下。请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：1推荐要参观的建筑；2约定参观的时间；3提出其他建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Noah，Im really glad that you take great interest in ancient Chinese architecture.Millions of ancient buildings have surviv
112、ed in Chinas history.However，there is no better place to visit than the Forbidden City in Beijing.It served as a royal palace for centuries.Summer is a good time for travelling，so shall we go there on August 1? I believe youll have a better experience if you know its history.Youd better do some rese
113、arch online.Please let me know if you need further information.Yours，Li Hua技法四巧妙的过渡，连贯的衔接为使作文的上下文语义连贯，逻辑关系清晰，在句与句之间，段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的衔接(过渡)性词语是非常必要的。1表示起始关系的过渡性词语above all, first of all, to begin with, according to, as you know/as is known, as is shown in.，when it comes to等。典例1First of all, I think
114、it important to make more friends abroad.典例2As is shown in the picture, a tree is knocked down by the strong wind, while the grass stays as it is.2表示时间顺序的过渡性词语first(ly), second(ly), third(ly), then, later, in the end, finally, at last, after that, afterwards, since then, meanwhile等。典例1Secondly, we s
115、hould get up early to memorize idioms and useful expressions.典例2Meanwhile, we all enjoyed the beauty of nature.典例3I had a bad cold last week. First, I had a running nose, but I did not take it seriously.Then I began to cough. After that, I had a fever and felt weak. Finally, I was sent to hospital a
116、nd had to lie in bed for three days.3表示并列关系的过渡性词语and, or, also, as well as, neither . nor ., not only . but also ., either . or ., not . but .等。典例1Work hard, and you will be admitted to a key university.典例2Swimming not only benefits our health, but also helps us have a strong will.4表示转折关系的过渡性词语but,
117、yet, however, while, otherwise, on the contrary等。典例1However, not until the match was over did we realize that we became the loser.典例2On the contrary, smart phones not only take up our valuable time, but also do great harm to our health.5表示因果关系的过渡性词语because, as, since, for, thanks to, due to, so, the
118、refore, as a result/consequence等。典例1Thanks to the doctors timely treatment, he was saved.典例2Therefore, I suggest we should be given more time for sports and sleep.6表示条件关系的过渡性词语if, unless, in case (of), as/so long as, on condition that等。典例1I would be very grateful if you can meet him at the airport.典
119、例2As long as you dont lose heart, youre sure to succeed.7表示递进关系的过渡性词语besides, in addition, whats more, furthermore, moreover, whats worse, still less, to make matters worse, worse still, on (the) one hand . on the other (hand) ., for one thing . for another .等。典例1In addition, we shouldnt neglect the
120、 fact that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society.典例2On the other hand, online shopping also has many disadvantages.8表示列举事实的过渡性词语such as, for example/instance, take . for example, that is to say, as follows, in other words等。典例1Take Beijing for example, it is one of the oldest cities in the w
121、orld.典例2That is to say, if you want to succeed, you have to believe in yourself.9表示观点的过渡性词语in my opinion, in my view, in my point of view, as far as I am concerned, as for me, personally (speaking), I think .等。典例1As far as I am concerned, I love wealth, but I value health more.典例2In my opinion, peop
122、le shall not smoke in public places.10表示总结的过渡性词语in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a/one word, to sum up, all in all, on the whole, in general, generally speaking等。典例1In a word, success is important, and so is failure, because its the mother of success.典例2All in all, travelling is the best choice
123、 to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges.(2018全国卷)假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：1学校的体育场馆；2主要的运动项目；3你喜欢的项目。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_ 考生作文名师点评作文提升Dear Peter，I am delighted to hear from you.In your letter you asked me about the physical exercise in our school.Id
124、like to tell you about it.Our school has built a new stadium recently.There are many wellequipped facilities in the new stadium.The new stadium is behind the library and looks very beautiful.In the stadium we can hold many kinds of sports events，such as playing basketball and table tennis.My favouri
125、te is basketball.I think it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.I sincerely invite you to come to our school and join me in experiencing the physical exercise.Yours，Li Hua(1)本文的词数符合要求，而且还使用了delighted，wellequipped，favourite，confront，challenge等高级词汇，但给人感觉却像是一盘散沙，其原因是缺少衔接词，
126、段落不清晰。(2)可以采用英语作文最常用的“三段式”作文，加入适当的过渡衔接词语或句式，使其段落分明，层次清晰。(3)另外，我们可以用一些高级词汇或高级句式对句子进行提升。Dear Peter，I am delighted to hear from you.Since you asked me about the physical exercise in our school，Id like to tell you about it.Firstly, a new stadium has been built in our school recently，in which there are m
127、any wellequipped facilities.Located behind the library，the new stadium looks very beautiful.Besides，a wide range of sports events can be held there，such as playing basketball as well as table tennis.As far as Im concerned, basketball is my favourite，because it has been giving me strength to confront
128、 the challenges in my life.All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and join me in experiencing the physical exercise.Yours，Li Hua.请用过渡性词语完成句子1First of all/To begin with(首先), the most significant thing is to set a goal, work out a plan and carry out your plan step by step.2As is know
129、n to all/As we all know(众所周知), shoes play an important role in our life, for they can protect our feet from being hurt.3I lost my way in the forest and to make matters worse/whats worse still(更糟的是), it became dark.4Besides/In addition/Whats more/Moreover(况且), I can experience different cultures and
130、widen my knowledge.5In a word/In conclusion/In short/In brief(总之), changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.书面表达(推荐信)假设你是李华，你的美国网友David看完“哪吒之魔童降世”(Nezha)电影海外版之后非常喜欢，写信想请你再推荐一部中国电影，请你根据以下内容给他回信。内容包括：1表示高兴；2推荐一部电影(电影名字可用拼音表达)；3推荐的理由(至少2条)。注意：1.词数80左右；2可以适当增加
131、细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear David，I am delighted to know that you are fascinated by the Chinese film, Nezha.Here Im perfectly willing to recommend another impressive Chinese movie at your request.If animated films are your particular favorites, you cant miss Monkey King: Hero Is Back.This animated film, w
132、hich is based on classic Chinese fairy tales, has much in common with Nezha, so itll surely be appealing to you.In addition, Monkey King and Nezha are both regarded as heroes by Chinese people.Through comparison, you will get a better understanding of traditional Chinese values and beliefs.I hope yo
133、ull find the movie well worth seeing.Yours，Li Hua技法五高级的词汇，复杂的句式1使用高级词汇(1)标新立异写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的词汇，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。典例1We have too much homework to do at the weekend.We have endless homework to do at the weekend.典例2In the coming three years, our school life will be difficult. In the coming three y
134、ears, our school life will be challenging. 典例3I should be free any time after school next week.I should be available any time after school next week.(2)短语优先多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文章色彩。典例1Developing a good habit is also important.Developing a good habit is also of importance.典例2Whats more, we can pour ou
135、t the troubles we face, and release our pressure from different aspects.Whats more, we can pour out the troubles we are faced with, and release our pressure from different aspects.典例3As the number of English learners is increasing, its not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese cont
136、exts. As the number of English learners is on the increase/rise, its not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts. 2使用复杂句式(1)复合句复合句包括定语从句、名词性从句(主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句)和状语从句。典例1A sailor who has experienced no storm will never become an excellent sailor.(定语从句)典例2What impressed me
137、 most was that they had had professional training. (主语从句和表语从句)典例3I am wondering whether you can pick him up at the airport.(宾语从句)典例4I hold the opinion that we should go to help them overcome the present difficulty. (同位语从句)典例5Whatever the result is, we should accept it with a smile, because we have t
138、ried our best. (状语从句)(2)非谓语动词与with复合结构非谓语动词包括不定式、动名词和分词(现在分词和过去分词)，特别是with复合结构的应用更是写作中的一大亮点。典例1Many questions have to be settled and much remains to be done in our educational work.典例2Touched by the teachers words, we decided to work hard.典例3Knowing that our library is going to buy books, Id like to
139、 give some suggestions.典例4With the society developing rapidly, its necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer.(3)特殊句式与其他典例1It was when I entered senior high school that I realized the importance of English.(强调句型)典例2Only in this way can the children grow up mentally and physica
140、lly healthy.(倒装句)典例3Although faced with many problems, they didnt lose heart.(省略句)典例4It is high time that both children and parents took action to make small changes.(虚拟语气)典例5What a good time we had with the peasants that day！(感叹句)典例6There is no need to worry about it as the government is now making
141、 every effort to provide more jobs.(there be句式)(2017全国卷)假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：1时间和地点；2内容：学习唐诗；3课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_ 考生作文名师点评作文提升Dear Leslie，I am very glad to know you are interested in Tang poems.Im writing to tell you the plan for the next class.T
142、o start with，I want to stress that our next lesson will take place in Classroom 8 of the Teaching Building at 10 am.next Friday.Besides，in order to know more about Chinese culture，you will learn some Tang poems，which are popular among Chinese people.I dont doubt that you should know about the histor
143、y of Tang Dynasty in advance.I think it will make the class go smoothly.I hope to receive your early reply.Yours，Li Hua(1)本文的词数符合要求，但是由于缺少高级的表达而影响了文章的档次。(2)有些词汇可进行提升，例如glad可升级为delighted，tell可升级为inform .of .，want可升级为intend，should可升级为be supposed to等。(3)有些句式也可以提升，例如第二段第一句可以用主语从句和表语从句来表达，第三段可以用一个含有定语从句的
144、复合句来表达。(4)另外，非谓语动词以及there be句式的合理使用同样能提升文章的档次。Dear Leslie，I am very delighted to know you have a taste for Tang poems.Im writing to inform you of the plan for the next class.To start with，what I intend to stress is that our next lesson will take place in Classroom 8 of the Teaching Building at 10 am
145、.next Friday.Whats more, in order to have a better understanding of Chinese culture，you will learn some Tang poems，which are popular among Chinese people.There is no doubt that you are supposed to know about the history of Tang Dynasty in advance，which I think will make the class go smoothly.Looking
146、 forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua.请按要求进行词汇和句式的升级1The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.(用高级词汇替代黑体词)The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more challenging courses.2I met one of my classmates on my way to school yesterday.(用短语替代黑体词)I came ac
147、ross one of my classmates on my way to school yesterday.3During holiday seasons, I will live in the countryside. There air is fresh and people are friendly.(用定语从句合并句子)During holiday seasons, I will live in the countryside, where air is fresh and people are friendly.4After most of the problems had be
148、en solved, I felt a great weight taken off my mind.(用with复合结构改写句子)With most of the problems solved, I felt a great weight taken off my mind.5Our parents have devoted their unconditional love to us, which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward.(用强调句型改写句子)Its our parents who/that have devoted the
149、ir unconditional love to us, which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward. 6The local government didnt realize the problem until the river was seriously polluted.(用倒装句改写句子)Not until the river was seriously polluted did the local government realize the problem.书面表达(祝贺信)假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Michael在学校举办的
150、中国诗词大会比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封电子邮件向他表示祝贺。1祝贺他获奖；2肯定他付出的努力；3询问何时方便，一起交流一下中国古诗词学习心得。注意：1.词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：中国诗词大会 Chinese Poetry ContestDear Michael，_Yours，Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Michael，I am writing to offer my congratulations on your winning the first prize of your group in th
151、e Chinese Poetry Contest.As your friend, I just want you to know how delighted I am at your success.For these years, youve shown great interest in Chinese poetry and kept on reciting poems every day.Not only have you accumulated much knowledge about Chinese poetry, but also you have had a deep under
152、standing of it.Your appreciation towards those poems is sometimes beyond our expectation.You deserve to win this prize.I hope to have a talk with you and exchange our views about Chinese poetry.Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua技法六规避重复，使用多样化表达为了使表达更生动，更富有表现力，在写作时应尽量避免重复使用同一词语或句式来表达同一意思，使用多样化
153、的表达方式可以使文章更具可读性。1规避词汇的重复典例1I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches.I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches.典例2Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also built a library where the old playground used to be.Weve built a new ex
154、periment building beside the old one and weve also set up a library where the old playground used to be.典例3When going on trips, we should behave ourselves and obey the culture and customs there. Besides, the environment should be protected.When going on trips, we should behave ourselves and obey the
155、 culture and customs there. Besides, the environment is supposed to be protected.典例4Most of my classmates wanted to go to the park while I wanted to go to a nicer place.Most of my classmates wanted to go to the park while I had an idea of going to a nicer place.典例5Im writing to ask for your help.Id
156、appreciate it if you could help me.Im writing to ask for your help . Id appreciate it if you could do me a favour.2规避句式的重复典例1We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days.We can borrow five books at most, and they can be kept for ten days.典例2Im Li Hua, who is a student of Xinhu
157、a Middle School. I happen to have a book, which I think might help you.Im Li Hua, a student of Xinhua Middle School. I happen to have a book, which I think might help you.典例3We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have different ways to deal with such a situation. We ma
158、y have different opinions in organizing class activities. There may be various ways to deal with such a situation.(2018全国卷)假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1到达时间；2合适的礼物；3餐桌礼仪。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_ 考生作文名师点评作文提升Dear Terry，I am delighted to know your Chinese friend has inv
159、ited you to a dinner party.It is a really good opportunity to experience Chinese culture.Here are some tips for you.First of all, you should arrive on time because it is polite to be on time in China.Secondly, you should bring some small gifts，such as a special food or drink from your country.Most i
160、mportantly, the elderly are usually the first to eat the food that are served on the table because they are well respected in China.Lastly, you should praise your friend for the delicious food he offers.I hope you will have a good time.Yours，Li Hua本文符合要求且使用了高级句式，总体来说还不错。下面主要从规避重复方面谈一下存在的问题。(1)文中在同一句
161、中用到了两次on time，我们可以用punctual来替代第二处的on time。(2)文章第二段用了三次you should，可用be supposed to替代一处。我们还可以寻求其他的表达方式。(3)第二段的后两句都使用了定语从句，而且距离太近，我们不妨换一种表达。(4)另外，其他词汇、句式也可以进行进一步提升。Dear Terry，I am delighted to know you are invited to a dinner party by your Chinese friend, which is a really good opportunity to experienc
162、e Chinese culture.Here are some tips for you.First of all, you should arrive on time because it is good manners to be punctual in China.Secondly, you are supposed to bring some small gifts，such as a special food or drink from your country.Most importantly, the elderly are usually the first to taste
163、the food served on the table because they are well respected in China.Lastly, dont forget to praise your friend for the delicious food he offers.I hope you will have a good time.Yours, Li Hua.为避免重复，请用不同的表达法替换第二处黑体部分1He likes playing football while his brother likes playing the piano.第二个likesenjoys/i
164、s fond of2We all know that when we need help, our friends will help us.help uslend us a (helping) hand/do us a favour330 percent of girls want to become teachers while only 5 percent of boys want to do that.第二个wantwould like4Firstly, you should know about your own interest and advantages. Secondly,
165、you should turn to your teachers and parents for help and consider their advice.第二个shouldare supposed to5The book is written in old Chinese, which is difficult to understand. It describes a tragedy about love and the decline about a big family, which exposes the social crisis.which exposesexposing.书
166、面表达(致歉信)假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Mark 希望向你了解国画的有关知识， 但原定见面时间因故需要推迟， 请给 Mark 写一封邮件， 说明情况。要点包括： 1表示歉意并说明原因； 2重约见面讨论的时间； 3推荐先参观国画展览。 注意： 1.词数 80 左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：国画 traditional Chinese paintings Dear Mark, _Yours，Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Mark, I hate to say sorry, but there is a change in my sch
167、ool arrangements. So I am afraid I wont be able to discuss traditional Chinese paintings with you as scheduled.I sincerely apologize to you for any inconvenience caused by the unexpected change.I suggest we put off the discussion until next Thursday.Will that be fine for you? Good news is that an ex
168、hibition of Chinese paintings is to be held this weekend.Works by some famous painters will be included in the exhibits.A visit there will definitely help you better understand Chinese paintings.Looking forward to your reply.Yours, Li Hua技法七使用地道英语，避免汉语式英语由于语言环境存在差异，中国学生学习英语会受到汉语的影响，一些考生容易按照汉语的思维进行写作
169、，从而出现了大量汉式英语。例如“好好学习，天天向上。”翻译为“Good good study, day day up.”然而这只是一个笑话而已！1避免词汇层面的汉语式表达典例1Its known that the cost in big cities is very expensive.Its known that the cost in big cities is very high.典例2We walked a far way before planting trees.We walked a long way before planting trees.典例3My grandfather
170、 very likes red tea and has it every day.My grandfather likes red tea very much and has it every day.典例4He returned back to his hometown after graduation.He returned to his hometown after graduation.典例5He opened the light after he entered the room.He turned on the light after he entered the room.典例6
171、Mother agreed me to see the film this evening.Mother allowed/permitted me to see the film this evening. 典例7We lost the game, but we didnt lose our heart.We lost the game, but we didnt lose heart.典例8Under the help of the teacher, I have made great progress in my English.With the help of the teacher,
172、I have made great progress in my English.2避免句子层面的汉语式表达典例1There will have a meeting tomorrow.There is going to be a meeting tomorrow.典例2We are impossible to finish the work in such a short time.It is impossible for us to finish the work in such a short time.典例3There are many students dont support the
173、 project.There are many students who dont support the project.典例4On the other hand, dogs are our best friends, bring us a lot of fun.On the other hand, dogs are our best friends, which/and bring us a lot of fun.典例5But now because my left foot was injured, so I cannot go with you as planned.But now b
174、ecause my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.典例6Although they tried hard, but they couldnt make her change her mind.Although they tried hard, they couldnt make her change her mind.典例7While having our dinner, the doorbell rang.While we are having our dinner, the doorbell rang./Whi
175、le having our dinner, we heard the doorbell ring.(2019全国卷)假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：1比赛信息；2赛前准备；3表达期待。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_ 考生作文名师点评作文提升Dear Chris，Im Li Hua, captain of our school volleyball team. Im writing to tell you that there is going to have a friendly volleyball ma
176、tch this weekend between us and Guangming Middle School. I think it is a close match.In the friendly match, we should remember the principle of friendship first. But who doesnt want to win them? Now our team is busy preparing the game, from living to daily training. We plan to practice together in t
177、he gym this Wednesday and Thursday, lasting from 4 pm. to 6 pm. We hope you to participate in it on time if you are convenient. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua本文格式符合要求，乍看起来还不错，但是文章中出现了较多的汉语式英语，从而影响了考生的得分档次。(1)本文出现的汉语式英语多达5处(黑体部分)，例如，汉语说“将会有”，英语的地道表达是there is going to be；汉语中的“赢”可以跟人，
178、但英语中的win后面不能跟人。(2)另外，作文中的某些词汇如tell、remember等以及某些句式还可以进一步优化。Dear Chris，Im Li Hua, captain of our school volleyball team. Im writing to inform you that there is going to be a friendly volleyball match this weekend between us and Guangming Middle School, which I think will be a close match.This is a fr
179、iendly match, so we should keep in mind that friendship comes first and competition second. Certainly, who doesnt want to win the game? These days our team have been busy getting prepared for the game, all members working very hard in the training. Practice takes place in the gym every afternoon，las
180、ting about two and a half hours. We hope you can participate in the match if it is convenient for you. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua.用地道英语替换汉语式表达。1Recently our village has taken place great changes. Recently great changes have taken place in our village2I havent heard from your le
181、tter for a long time and I miss you very much.I havent heard from you for a long time and I miss you very much.3Would you please meet my uncle at the airport because this is the first time visit to the US?Would you please meet my uncle at the airport because this is his first visit to the US?4If you
182、 are convenient, lets meet at 3 pm., this Sunday at the entrance to the Peoples Park.If it is convenient for you, lets meet at 3 pm., this Sunday at the entrance to the Peoples Park.5All the students had started reading English before I didnt get up.All the students had started reading English befor
183、e I got up.书面表达(介绍信)假如你是李华，为了庆祝建国70周年，你校成功举办了校园艺术节活动。请你写一篇报道介绍艺术节的相关情况，内容包括：1活动形式；2活动意义。注意：1.词数80左右；2标题已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：建国70周年the 70th anniversary of the founding of ChinaAn Art Festival_【参考范文】An Art FestivalWe hosted the Art Festival with the aim of celebrating the 70th anniversary of the founding o
184、f China.At the festival, a variety of activities were carried out among students, such as a speech competition and performances with singing and dancing.Besides, there was a grand exhibition on traditional Chinese culture.This art festival enables us to know more about traditional Chinese culture an
185、d the great achievements our country has accomplished during the past seven decades.In the meanwhile, it inspires us to work harder and make greater contributions to our motherland.技法八画龙点睛的结束语1如何写好结尾结尾有概括全文内容，进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想，升华主题的作用。(1)照应开头典例I think summer is certainly more fun than the other three
186、seasons.I like summer best.(2016四川卷书面表达)(2)复述中心典例We must protect the water as well as find ways to reuse it. If not, the last drop of water will be a teardrop.(3)总结式典例In sum, considering foreign viewers curiosity about China as well as BBCs fine production, the popularity of such films among foreign
187、ers is no coincidence.(2018江苏卷书面表达)(4)引用式典例I believe my dream will come true one day because “Where there is a will, there is a way.”(5)希望式典例We do hope that the school will carry out more similar activities in the future.(2020山东卷书面表达)(6)问题式典例Will you join us in the next century? How romantic and fan
188、tastic it will be!2如何写好书信结尾书信的结束语，我们见到最多的是Im looking forward to ./Looking forward to .。另外我们还可以使用一些功能句式，向对方表示友善的感谢或亲切的问候，表达愿望或期待等。求职信可说：I would be grateful if you would take my application into consideration.I hope to have the opportunity of an interview.咨询信可说：Im waiting for your early reply.感谢信可说：I
189、must thank you again for your generous help.Please accept my gratitude, now and always.建议信可说：In the end, I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful.I hope you will find these suggestions practical.Ill appreciate you taking my suggestions into account.投诉信可说：Id appreciate it if you . as soo
190、n as possible.邀请信可说：Im longing to hear from you.3如何写好通知结尾常常重申希望大家参加活动，或提出注意事项。典例1Please be there on time./Be sure to attend on time.典例2If you have any opinion about the film, please send an email to studentunion. (2018全国卷书面表达)典例3For any question, call Li Hua at 44876655.(2014辽宁卷书面表达)(2019全国卷)假定你是李华，
191、你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：1时间；2活动安排；3欢迎他表演节目。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_ 考生作文名师点评作文提升.It is a good chance to show your talent.I really hope you to give me a reply as early as possible.(1)hope you to give为汉语式英语，可改为hope you will，也可寻求更好的表达；as .as possible本来是一个很好的表达方式，但由于early(应为soon)的错用而大打
192、折扣。(2)第一句中的词汇good, chance以及在句式方面都可加以提升。.What a thrilling opportunity to show your talent! I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply.请用上述结尾法翻译下列句子1不同的旅行方式都能让人们愉快，但我还是最喜欢乘火车旅行。Different ways of travelling can make people happy, but I like travelling by train best.(照应开头)2爱是给予，爱是关注他人，我将尽
193、力把我所有的爱奉献给他人。Love is giving and love is paying attention to others. I will do my best to give all my love to others.(复述中心)3从这次经历中，我了解到细心非常重要，尤其在考试时，我们怎样细心都不为过。From this experience, I learned that being careful is very important and that we cant be too careful, especially in examinations.(总结式)4不管怎样，有
194、不同的文化，就有不同的习俗，如果你能“入乡随俗”，就会更好地享受这里的生活。Anyhow, different cultures, different customs. If you “Do as the Romans do when in Rome.”，you will enjoy more of your stay here.(引用式)5作为一名学生，我非常支持这项活动，因为它很有意义，对学生很有帮助，我希望此类活动在将来能继续开展下去。As a student, I am strongly for the activity because it is very meaningful an
195、d helpful. I hope that this kind of activity will continue in the future.(希望式)6找一个伙伴和我们一起去如何？这样我们可以互相帮助并且在旅途中保持愉快。How about finding a companion to be with us? So, we can help each other and be happy during the trip. (问题式).书面表达(通知)(2020山东新高考名校联考信息优化卷)假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，请你写一则通知，为学校近期要举行的排球比赛(the Studen
196、t Volleyball Match)招募志愿者。内容包括：1招募目的；2招募条件；3培训时间和地点。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】NoticeOur school is going to hold the Student Volleyball Match.In order to ensure the smooth running of the event，it is necessary to recruit volunteers to provide quality services such as guidance and support.
197、The volunteers are required not only to be healthy and organized，but to be able to respond to the emergencies.In addition，the ones with related experience are preferred.Once accepted，the volunteers will receive appropriate and efficient training in the gymnasium on 6th Dec.，beginning at 5 pm. and la
198、sting one and a half hours.Call 0106275 3588 for further information.A篇 (2020济南市高三模拟考试)假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike看到在杭州举办的亚洲美食节的消息，对其logo很感兴趣，故写信向你咨询它的寓意。请给对方写一封回信，内容包括：1logo的构成：碗筷、中国印(seal)、西湖桥水等。2logo的寓意。3邀请对方来中国品尝中国美食。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Mike，Knowing youre interested in the logo，I
199、cant wait to cast light on it for you.This logo combines a Chinese seal，chopsticks，a bowl，a bridge over Hangzhous West Lake and ripples.The bowl and chopsticks highlight the flavor of rich Chinese food.The bridge and ripples stand for Hangzhou，a beautiful city in east China.The whole work reflects C
200、hinese cultural heritage，interaction and a blend of Asian civilizations.By the way，now that you are so interested in Chinese cuisine，why not come and experience it in person？Ill be glad to be your guide.Yours，Li HuaB篇 (2020烟台市第一次高考诊断测试)假如你是校英文报主编，最近校报拟开设“我身边的英雄”栏目，请你根据如下提示写一则征稿启事(电子邮箱：Englishcolumn)
201、：1开设目的；2稿件要求；3投稿方式和截止日期。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】To share inspiring stories about heroes and let the whole school learn from them，were to launch a new column The Hero Around Me.Everyone is welcome to write articles about a hero，including the heros name，his/her great spirit and heroic
202、deeds that touch you.What you write should be accurate and real.Besides，your contributions are expected to be within 300 words.Please send your contributions to our editorial department or email them to Englishcolumn before April 28.C篇 (2020枣庄市高三模拟考试)假定你是李华。你的外籍教师John本打算春季开学时返回中国，现因英国的新冠肺炎(COVID19)疫
203、情待在伦敦家中。你在英语学习中遇到了一些困难，请给他写一封电子邮件寻求帮助。内容如下：1询问John的健康情况；2告知学习中的困难；3请求帮助。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Mr.John，Learning that you cant return to China on time due to the impact of COVID19 on your country，Im very concerned.Are you OK now？Do you have enough protective articles？Whats more，
204、Im puzzled about some problems recently.During my studying at home，I find it hard to remember English words so my vocabulary is more limited.Besides，English grammar is so difficult that I have trouble making out sentence structures.Therefore，many sentences are too complex for me to understand.I woul
205、d be grateful if you could give me some specific suggestions on these problems.Looking forward to your reply and early return.Yours，Li HuaD篇 (2020山东新高考名校联考信息优化卷)假定你是李华，你校近期将举办汉服表演秀(Hanfu clothing show)。请你给你校交换生Tina写一封电子邮件邀请她参加。要点如下：1活动目的；2演出时间、地点；3演出内容。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Ti
206、na，Our school is organizing a Hanfu clothing show.Knowing that you are a huge fan of traditional Chinese culture，Im writing to invite you to attend the event.The event is to be held to enrich students extracurricular activities and spread an excellent wealth of traditional Chinese culture.It will st
207、art at three oclock on Friday afternoon on the second floor of the Art Center at our school，which will last approximately two hours.Performers wearing traditional Hanfu clothing will present the unique styles and attractions combined with classical folk dance.It will make you feel as if you were in ancient times!Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua
