1、Section Writing 人物描写写作技法指导本单元的写作任务是描写人物。人物描写主要是介绍人物的外貌、生平、成就等。人物描写的体裁一般是记叙文,有时也以看图作文、表格、书信、新闻的形式出现。(1)人物描写的一般顺序开头(the beginning):对该人物进行简要地介绍,如身份、职业等。主体(the main body):可以按照时间的顺序或在事件中的主次地位进行描述。结尾(conclusion):对此人的评价或感想。(2)人物描写所涉及的方面总体描写:年龄、性别、出生地、家庭及教育背景等。外表、性格特点和特长爱好等。详细介绍所描述人的特色及生平大事(成就)。评价。积“黄金”词句,写
2、高分文章一、常用词汇1naughty 淘气的2smart 聪明的3confident 自信的4independent 独立的5spend his childhood in.在度过了他的童年6a man with strong will 意志力坚强的人7be interested in 对感兴趣8be fond of 喜欢9be crazy about.痴迷于10have a gift for.有做的天赋11be delighted in doing.高兴做12be strict with 对严格13make up ones mind 下定决心14be honoured as.被授予荣誉15th
3、ink highly of 高度评价二、常用句式1.was one of the greatest.in the 20th century.是 20 世纪最伟大的之一。2He/She studied at.and graduated.他/她就读于毕业于3.is the one who impresses me most.是我印象最深的一个。4 .is such a learned/strong-willed person that we all admire/respect him/her.是如此一个博学/意志坚强的人,我们都很钦佩/尊敬他/她。5He/She devoted all his/
4、her life to.他/她把毕生都致力于6He/She was highly thought of.他/她受到高度评价7In my opinion.在我看来8He/She will live in the hearts of.forever.他/她会永远活在心中。三步写作规范题目要求请写一篇关于钱学森的介绍。要求包含下文中的所有内容。词数 100 左右。钱学森自小就受到家庭和学校良好的教育,立志长大后献身于祖国的科学事业。大学毕业后,赴美留学,获得航空博士学位,成为美国知名的火箭专家。新中国成立后,他急切地盼望回到祖国,但是受到美国当局的百般阻挠。经过他不屈不挠的斗争,终于回到了祖国并一心
5、扑在中国的科学事业中。他所从事的火箭、导弹研制获得巨大成功,被誉为中国的“航天之父”。参考词汇:航天 aerospace;航天学 cosmonautics;学位 degree;不屈不挠的 unyielding;导弹 missile第一步:搜索词汇1培养;养育 2对做某事有很强的欲望3致力于;奉献于4科学事业5博士学位6把看作7关心,在乎8渴望做某事9不屈的努力10在方面bring uphave a great desire to do sth.devote oneself to;apply oneself tothe science causedoctors degreerefer to.as
6、.;look on.as;regard.as.care about;be concerned aboutbe eager to do sth./for sth.unyielding strugglein terms of第二步:由词造句1钱学森自小受到良好教育且在科学方面极有天赋,立志长大后献身于祖国科学事业。Qian Xuesen was and had a gift for science since his childhood.And he of his motherland.since his childhood,Qian Xuesen of his motherland.well b
7、rought updecided to devote himself to the science causeWell brought up and having a gift for sciencemade up his mind/had a great desireto devote himself to the science cause2新中国成立后,他关心祖国的发展,急切地盼望回到祖国,但受到美国当局的百般阻挠。After New China,he the development of China and returning home,but he the American gove
8、rnment.New China,he the development of China and return home,the American government.was foundedcared aboutwas looking forward towas prevented byWith the founding ofcared aboutwas eager tothough prevented by3鉴于他的成就和能力,他被誉为中国的“航天之父”。his achievement and ability,he Chinas“Father of Aerospace”his achiev
9、ement and ability makes him the honor of Chinas“Father of Aerospace”In terms ofwas referred to asIt isthatdeserve第三步:连句成篇Well brought up and having a gift for science since his childhood,Qian Xuesen had a great desire to devote himself to the science cause of his motherland.After graduation from col
10、lege,he went to study in America,got a doctors degree for cosmonautics,and was referred to as a great rocket expert in the USA.With the founding of New China,he cared about the development of China and was eager to return home,though prevented by the American government,which made him upset.Through his unyielding struggle,he finally came back,and had been working on scientific work in China.His research on rockets and missiles was a great success,and in terms of his achievement and ability,he was referred to as Chinas“Father of Aerospace”“单元质量检测”见“单元质量检测(一)”(单击进入电子文档)谢谢 观 看