1、第二部分 2013届高考英语 书面表达专题练评 专题三 图表式作文练评 (一)江苏省苏北四市徐州、淮安、连云港、宿迁联考 右面的图表和漫画反映了世界上野生动物种类的变化情况和原因，请根据你对图表和漫画的理解，用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容：1.描述野生动物种类的变化趋势；2.分析导致野生动物种类变化的原因；3.谈谈你对保护野生动物的看法和建议。注意：1.可参照图表中文字及下面文章开头所给的提示，作必要的发挥想象。2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。Many animals are in danger of dyingout.一、图
2、表信息概述 审图表抓要点 题目中已经明确给我们以提示“描述野生动物种类的变化趋势”。通过柱形图四年（1980、1990、2000、2010）柱形的高度变化，我们由此得出事物发展趋势：在过去的三十年野生动物种类激趋下降。从柱形图中找出支撑结论的典型数据。从1980年的野生动物种类大约有2.5百万，到2010年只剩下1.5百万这些数据的变化，我们可以计算出：平均每年大约减少了30,000。由以上分析，我们可以得出以下要点：1.在过去的三十年野生动物种类激趋下降 2.平均每年大约减少了30,000 3.2010年只剩下1.5百万 化要点为句子（注意多重表达）(注意动词应该使用什么时态)1.在过去的三
3、十年野生动物种类激趋下降 The number of animal species has sharplydecreased in the past thirty years.A number of animal species have quicklydisappeared in the past thirty years.The kinds of wild animals have decreasedsharply in the past thirty years.2.平均每年大约减少了30,000 There are about 30,000 kinds of animals disap
4、pearing on average each year.About 30,000 kinds of animals havedecreased on average each year.About 30,000 kinds of animals havereduced on average each year.3.2010年只剩下1.5百万 Until 2010,only 1.5 million kinds of animals was left.There were only 1.5 million kinds of animals remaining until 2010.There w
5、ere only 1.5 million kinds ofanimals left till 2010.二、分析原因 1.参考右边的漫画来分析原因 从“Fashion victims，No buying，No killing”追问下去：人类穿动物毛皮做的衣服来追求时尚；有买卖就有非法杀戮；有买卖就有利润。2.根据常识来分析原因根据常识，我们知道野生动物种类激趋下降不能都归咎于漫画中所反映的原因，还有其它原因。如环境的污染以及灾难等等。化要点为句子（注意多重表达）1.Many people would like to wear clothes made of animal fur to seek
6、 fashion.Many people would like to wear clothes made of animal fur for fashion.In order to show off,many people would like to wear clothes made of animal fur.2.Human beings often hunt wild animals illegally to sell them for a big profit.Human beings often hunt wild animals illegally to sell them to
7、earn large amount of money.Human beings are making attempts to hunt wild animals for fashion and a big profit.讲述原因，连句成篇(加上适当的过渡句和以及调整表达的顺序)There are several reasons accounting for this problem.Apart from the polluted environment and natural disasters,illegal killing is an important reason.In order t
8、o show off,many people would like to wear clothes made of animal fur,so human beings often hunt wild animals illegally to sell them for a big profit.which can be seen vividly from the right picture.This has caused a sharp decrease in the number of animals.三、发表自己的看法 围绕原因来自拟自己的看法 1.是我们人类采取措施来保护野生动物的时候
9、了 2.给动物一个良好的生存环境 3.政府应该制定法律来禁止滥杀动物 4.人类与动物要和谐相处 化要点为句子（注意多重表达）1.是我们人类采取措施来保护野生动物的时候了It is high time for us human beings to take quick actionto protect wild animals.It is time that we human beings take important measuresto protect wild animals.2.给动物一个良好的生存环境We human beings should try our best to impr
10、ove wildanimals living environment.We human beings should spare no effort to give animalsa good living environment.3.政府应该制定法律来禁止滥杀动物The government should make some laws to preventhuman being from abuse killing wild animals.The government should pass some firm laws to forbid abuse killing.4.人类与动物要和谐相
11、处 Human beings and animals should get along well witheach other.Human beings should live in harmony with wild animals.发表看法，连句成篇(加上适当的过渡句)In my opinion,it is time that we human beings take important measures to protect wild animals.We should spare no effort to improve wild animals living environment.
12、In addition,the government should make some laws to prevent human being from abuse killing wild animals.Only in this way can we live in harmony with wild animals.参考答案 Many animals are in danger of dying out.As is clearly shown in the bar chart,the kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the
13、past decades.With about 30,000 kinds of animals reduced on average each year,as a result,there were only 1.5 million left till 2010.There are several reasons accounting for this problem.Apart from the polluted environment and natural disasters,illegal killing is an important reason.Human beings are
14、making attempts to hunt wild animals for fashion and a big profit,which can be seen vividly from the right picture.This has resulted in a sharp decrease in the number of animals.In my opinion,it is high time for us to take quick action to protect them.A national public campaign should be launched to give animals a good living environment.In addition,the government should pass some firm laws to forbid abuse killing.Only in this way can we live in harmony with wild animals.See you later!Post card:226531 E-mail:（谢谢您的下载）特别拜托：请您下载后自用，不要上传至其他网站！请您尊重作者的劳动成果！
