1、模块二专题二第3讲A假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10 处，多者(从11处起)不计分。(2021江西省南昌市高三下学期第三次模拟测试)This morning my friends and me got up early to visit the Great Wall.Once we
2、got there we began our climb.It started out pretty smooth.By the time we made it to the top we were sweaty and exhausting.But when the Great Wall appeared in front of us, we couldnt help cry, “Oh, my god! What wonderful sight it is! It looked like a huge snake which spreads through half of the city！
3、” We walked along the Wall for a while after heading back down and making our way back to home.We felt very proud so its the longest wall and one of the most famous tourist attraction in the world.【答案】This morning my friends and got up early to visit the Great Wall.Once we got there we began our cli
4、mb.It started out pretty .By the time we made it to the top we were sweaty and .But when the Great Wall appeared in front of us, we couldnt help ， “Oh, my god! What wonderful sight it is! It like a huge snake which spreads through half of the city！” We walked along the Wall for a while heading back
5、down and making our way back to home.We felt very proud its the longest wall and one of the most famous tourist in the world.【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了“我”和朋友们一起参观长城的经历。1考查代词。句意：今天早上我和我的朋友们起得很早去参观长城。此处作主语应用主格I。故将me改为I。2考查副词。句意：一开始很顺利。修饰动词started应用副词。故将smooth改为smoothly。3考查形容词。句意：当我们到达山顶时，我们已经大汗淋漓，精疲力竭了。此处是指“我
6、”们精疲力竭，表示“人的感受”，应用形容词exhausted表示“疲劳的”。故将exhausting改为exhausted。4考查固定搭配。句意：但当长城出现在我们面前，我们忍不住哭了。cant help doing意为“忍不住做某事”，为固定搭配。故将cry改为crying。5考查冠词。句意：这是多么美妙的景象啊！sight意为“景象”，为可数名词，此处表示泛指，且wonderful发音以辅音音素开头，所以应用不定冠词a。故在wonderful前加a。6考查时态。句意：它看起来像一条巨大的蛇蔓延了半个城市！此处为直接引语，所以应用一般现在时，主语为it，谓语动词使用第三人称单数形式。故将lo
7、oked改为looks。7考查介词。句意：我们沿着长城走了一会儿，然后下山回家。根据heading back down and making our way back to home可知，此处是指在回家之前沿着长城走了一会儿。故将after改为before。8考查副词和固定搭配。句意：我们沿着长城走了一会儿，然后下山回家。home在此处为副词，前面不能用介词，back home意为“回家”，为固定搭配。故将to去掉。9考查连词。句意：我们感到非常自豪，因为它是最长的长城，也是世界上最著名的旅游景点之一。(我们感到非常自豪，它是最长的长城和世界上最著名的旅游景点之一。)We felt very
8、proud的原因是its the longest wall and one of the most famous tourist attraction in the world，所以应用because或as。也可以理解为我们感到自豪的是它是最长的长城，也是世界上最著名的旅游景点之一，所以可用that引导表语从句。故将so改为because/that/as。10考查名词。句意：我们感到非常自豪，因为它是最长的长城，也是世界上最著名的旅游景点之一。(我们感到非常自豪，它是最长的长城和世界上最著名的旅游景点之一。)attraction意为“景点”，为可数名词，在one of后应用可数名词复数。故将a
9、ttraction改为attractions。B假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10 处，多者(从11处起)不计分。(2021四川省凉山州高三第三次诊断考试)Today，my English teacher gave us a horrible job what we would hav
10、e to prepare a ten-minute speech for Tuesday.I cant stand speak in front of the class.Anyway, I asked my teacher if I could do something differentlike a writing report.I told her how nervously I would get to when speaking before the class.My teacher explained me that she couldnt change that.While sh
11、e did give me some advices.She encouraged me to get to work right away.She said if I practice my speech ahead of time, I would feel more comfortable.Thanks to his warm words, I decided to have a try.【答案】Today，my English teacher gave us a horrible job we would have to prepare a ten-minute speech for
12、Tuesday.I cant stand in front of the class.Anyway, I asked my teacher if I could do something differentlike a report.I told her how I would get to when speaking before the class.My teacher explained me that she couldnt change that. she did give me some .She encouraged me to get to work right away.Sh
13、e said if I my speech ahead of time, I would feel more comfortable.Thanks to warm words, I decided to have a try.【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。老师布置了一个演讲任务，但是“我”无法忍受在全班面前讲话。在老师的鼓励和建议下，“我”决定试一试。1考查名词性从句。句意：今天，我的英语老师给了我们一个可怕的工作，我们要为星期二准备10分钟的演讲。此处为同位语从句，we would have to prepare a ten-minute speech for Tuesday解释说明job，引导
14、词在从句中不作任何成分，也没有实际意义，所以应用that引导。故将what改为that。2考查非谓语动词。句意：我无法忍受在全班面前讲话。stand意为“忍受”，为及物动词，后面常接动名词作宾语，构成stand doing sth.。故将speak改为speaking。3考查非谓语动词。句意：总之，我问我的老师我是否可以做一些不同的事情比如写一份书面报告。动词write和逻辑主语report构成被动关系，所以应用过去分词作定语。故将writing改为written。4考查形容词。句意：我跟她讲当在全班面前讲话时我会有多紧张。在系动词get后应用形容词作表语。故将nervously改为nervo
15、us。5考查系动词。句意：我跟她讲当在全班面前讲话时我会有多紧张。此处get为系动词，表示“变得”，不需要用介词to。故将get后的to去掉。6考查介词和固定搭配。句意：我的老师解释说她改变不了这一点。explain sth. to sb.意为“向某人解释某事”，为固定搭配。故在me前加to。7考查连词。句意：但是她给了我一些建议。My teacher explained to me that she couldnt change that和she did give me some advices构成转折关系，且此处无逗号，所以应用转折词but。故将While改为But。8考查名词。句意：但是
16、她给了我一些建议。advice为不可数名词，没有复数形式。故将advices改为advice。9考查时态。句意：她说如果我提前练习我的演讲，我会感觉更舒服。此处讲述过去的事情，应用一般过去时。故将practice改为practiced。10考查代词。句意：多亏了她温暖的话语，我决定试一试。根据She encouraged me to get to work right away.(她鼓励我马上开始工作。)可知，这是一个女老师，所以应用her。故将his改为her。C假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个
17、单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10 处，多者(从11处起)不计分。(2021江西重点中学盟校高三第一次联考)Last winter, I made a trip to Nan Chang.It was the first time that I have visited Nan Chang, where Wan Da amusement park is being located.With my cousins
18、warmly invitation, I decided to go with him.After taking the train for 3 hours, we got the destination in the afternoon.The room had been booked previously so it was no need to deal with this problem.The next day, we set out to enjoying this holiday.The tickets were quite expensive.Therefore, its wo
19、rth it.We were engaged in various activity and gained pleasure.Its really a unforgettable day.This visit not only broadened my horizons, but also relieved myself from stressful study.【答案】Last winter，I made a trip to Nan Chang.It was the first time that I visited Nan Chang, where Wan Da amusement par
20、k is being located.With my cousins invitation, I decided to go with him.After taking the train for 3 hours, we got the destination in the afternoon.The room had been booked previously so was no need to deal with this problem.The next day, we set out to this holiday.The tickets were quite expensive.
21、， its worth it.We were engaged in various and gained pleasure.Its really unforgettable day.This visit not only broadened my horizons, but also relieved from stressful study.【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。是一篇南昌万达主题乐园游记。1考查时态。It was the first time that sb.had done sth.是固定句型，表示“某人第一次做某事”。故将have改为had。2考查时态和语态。“be located
22、”表状态，“Wan Da amusement park”一直在那，不用进行时的被动语态。故去掉being。3考查形容词。句意：应我表兄的热情邀请，我决定和他一起去。invitation为名词，应用形容词修饰。故将warmly改为warm。4考查介词。get表示“到达”是不及物动词，后接名词作宾语，需要加介词to。故在got后加to。5考查固定句型。句意：房间之前已经订好了，所以没有必要处理这个问题。there is no need to do sth.“没必要做某事”是固定句型。故将it改为there。6考查非谓语动词。set out to do sth.，意为“着手做某事”。用不定式作目的状语。故将enjoying改为enjoy。7考查副词。句意：票价很贵，然而值得。“票价很贵”和“值得”之间是转折关系，用副词however表示转折。故将Therefore改为However。8考查名词。activity是可数名词，various 后接名词复数。故将activity改为activities。9考查冠词。冠词后的 unforgettable 是元音音素开头，应用 an。故将a改为an。10考查代词。句意：这次旅行不仅开阔了我的视野，而且使我从紧张的学习中解脱出来。此次旅行减轻了我紧张学习的压力，故应用me，不用反身代词作宾语。故将myself改为me。
