1、读后续写 做人做事 课堂学案 精读原文然后补全以下细节描写的好句式，并背诵一、人物动作细节描写女窃贼的动作细节描写1.她没有四处寻找，而是径直走进储藏室，偷了奶酪、巧克力、黄油和其他做蛋糕的原料，然后沿路跑走了。Instead of searching around, she _ into the storage room, _ cheese, chocolate, butter and other ingredients for a cake, and then _ down the road.2.她双手掩面坐到了地板上。She _ and sat down on the floor.3.门
2、打开出来一个瘦弱的女人。 The door opened and _. 两个警察的动作细节描写4. 两名警察迅速赶到商店，却发现现场根本没有犯罪迹象。The two policemen quickly arrived at the shop, _ that the scene showed no sign of crimes at all.5. 另一名警官鲍勃掏出了一把枪，准备破门而入。艾伦却让他把枪收起来，轻轻地敲了敲门。Bob, another officer, _. But Alan told him to put the gun away and _.二、人物的语言细节描写1. 就在那
3、时，一个孩子的声音打破了沉默:“妈妈，有人来参加我的生日吗? 请把他们请进来。”At that very moment, _, “Mom, is anyone coming for my birthday? Invite them in, please.”2. 克拉拉听了男孩的话后，站起来低声哀求道:“警官，我确实偷了东西，但我没办法。今天是孩子生日，而我既没工作也没钱。请不要把这些东西拿走。我刚用它们给他做了个蛋糕。”After hearing the boys words, Clara _, “Officer, I did steal those things, but theres no
4、thing else I could do. Its my babys birthday, and Ive got neither job nor money. Please dont take those things away. Ive just used them to make him a cake.”续写部分的语言应与原文特点保持一致一、人物的动作和情感细节描写1.在他眼前是一个营养不良的男孩，他忙着拿面粉，眉开眼笑。 A undernourished boy was in front of his eyes. _ while working busily with flour at
5、 hand. （神态+动作描写）_, _while working busily with flour at hand. （倒装句+非谓语动词）2.听了这话，鲍勃感到很尴尬，他不停地搓搓双手，似乎想在这寒冷的十二月里暖和起来。At this, Bob felt embarrassed, _seemingly to get warm in this freezing December. （三连动词，情感+动作+环境描写）At this, Bob felt embarrassed, _seemingly to get warm in this freezing December. （非谓语动词）二
6、、人物的动作和语言细节描写1.他抬头看到了艾伦，艾伦立刻解释道:“嘿，我是艾伦。我在这附近巡逻，是来祝你生日快乐的。”He looked up and saw Alan，_, “Hey, I am Alan. I come to say Happy Birthday to you as I am patrolling this neighborhood.” 2.Alan走出来，递给Clara一张20美元的钞票，微笑着说:“既然我还在值勤，你能帮我给你儿子买一份漂亮的生日礼物吗?”Alan _, _Clara a twenty dollar bill, and _,“Would you help
7、 me buy a nice birthday gift to your son now since I am still on duty?” (三连动词构成动作链+对话描写）Alan _, and _Clara a twenty dollar bill, _,“Would you help me buy a nice birthday gift to your son now since I am still on duty?” （非谓语动词）3.看着Clara那消瘦的身影渐渐远去， Alan坚定地说:“我会帮助弥补店铺的损失。”As Alan saw Claras bean-pole fi
8、gure gone into the distance, _,“I will help cover the loss of the shop.” （时间状语从句）_, _,“I will help cover the loss of the shop.” （非谓语动词）4.最后，他鼓起勇气说:“兄弟，我也可以帮忙。我付钱把它们作为我送给这位母亲和她的孩子的圣诞礼物。”Finally, _,“Buddy, I can also help. Let me pay for them as my Christmas gift to the mother and her child. 三、满分结尾句1.
9、神态+场景描写阿兰凝视着鲍勃的眼睛，看到了一种真诚的善良，天空中飘下小小的雪花，白而纯净。_, Alan saw the genuine kindness glistening with little soft snowflakes falling down from the sky, white and pure. （非谓语动词）2.自然式结尾Clara承诺她将通过自己的努力改善她的生活，不再做任何非法的事情。_and would no longer do anything illegal again.尝试续写Looking into the womans teary eyes, Alan
10、understood and walked into the house._Bob nodded thoughtfully and asked, What about the things she stole?” _答案一、人物动作细节描写女窃贼的动作细节描写1.walked straight ; stole ; ran away 2.buried her face in her hands 3. out came a very thin woman 4. only to find 5. pulled out a gun and was about to break in; knocked g
11、ently二、1. a childs voice broke the silence 2. stood up and begged in a low voice续写部分的语言应与原文特点保持一致一、1. He was beaming from ear to ear In front of his eyes was a undernourished boy, beaming from ear to ear 2. twisted and rubbed his hands over and over again twisting and rubbing his hands over and over
12、 again 二、人物的动作和语言细节描写1. who immediately explained 2. stepped out；handed ； smiled stepped out； handed ； smiling3. he answered in a firm voice Seeing Claras bean-pole figure gone into the distance； Alan answered in a firm voice 4.he gathered his courage三、满分结尾句1.Staring into the Bobs eyes 2. Clara promised that she would improve her life by her own efforts
