1、35分写作限时满分练(三).短文改错(2022江西南昌一模)One day in June,all of sudden,it rained heavily and the raindrops made a wonderful sound.We felt very hot in the classroom that we couldnt concentrate on schoolwork and instead of were eager to enjoy the cool rain.Sensed that,the teacher simple wrote “sitting and listen
2、ing” on the blackboard with a smile.I am sitting next to the window,listening to the rain.It seemed to calm me down but reminded me of ancient Chinese poems,who brought me a sense of peace.We should appreciate the small thing in life,like sunsets and rainbows after storms.In this way,we can develop
3、their inner world into an ideal state.书面表达(2022江西萍乡一模)一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“My First Try”,请根据下列要点写一篇短文。1.事情的经过;2.你的感受。注意:1.词数100左右;2.标题和开头语已为你写好。My First TryWhen it comes to the topic of “My First Try”,_35分写作限时满分练(三).第一句:在sudden前加a解析 考查固定短语。all of a sudden是固定短语,意为“突然”,故在sudden前加a。第二句:veryso解析 考查固定搭配。“so.
4、that.”是固定搭配,意为“如此以至于”,故将very改为so。第二句:去掉of解析 考查副词。instead of后跟名词或名词性短语,而instead是副词,修饰整个句子,故去掉of。第三句:SensedSensing解析 考查非谓语动词。the teacher和Sense之间是主谓关系,应用现在分词作状语,表主动,故将Sensed改为Sensing。第三句:simplesimply解析 考查副词。修饰动词wrote应用副词simply,故将simple改为simply。第四句:amwas解析 考查动词时态和主谓一致。通篇时态是一般过去时,主语I是单数,因此am应改为过去式was。第五句
5、:butand解析 考查连词。“seemed to calm me down”和“reminded me of ancient Chinese poems”是并列关系,因此用表并列的连词and连接,故将but改为and。第五句:whowhich解析 考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知此处是非限制性定语从句,先行词poems是物,因此关系代词用which,故将who改为which。第六句:thingthings解析 考查名词的复数。thing是可数名词,根据后面的sunsets and rainbows可知,此处用复数,故将thing改为things。第七句:theirour解析 考查代词。主语是w
6、e,因此句子表示“我们就可以把我们的内心世界发展成一种理想的状态”,“我们的”是our,是形容词性物主代词,修饰名词inner world,故将their改为our。.My First TryWhen it comes to the topic of “My First Try”, my first attempt at adapting a novel I had read before for an English play is unforgettable.As a member of English Theater Club,I volunteered to be responsibl
7、e for the script to be played in the approaching English Drama Festival.Consequently,I took advantage of the winter vacation to prepare for the adaptation.The most challenging but rewarding part was to overcome the language barriers.Fortunately,with nearly two weeks effort,the lines were not only beautifully uttered but also easily understood.
