1、2016湖北襄樊市高考英语：书面表达二轮精炼（3）及参考范文【广东省广州市2014综合测试】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）为了弘扬中国茶文化，你就读的国际学校举办“中国茶，知多少”英语征文比赛。【写作内容】请你根据以下信息卡，写一篇关于白茶的英语短文参赛。白茶（中国六大茶类之一）名字由来：因呈银白色而得名主要产地：福建、台湾历史：最早出现于北宋特点：形如银针，外形优美；口感甘甜；年份越久，功效越好功效：常饮有益健康，可预防高血压等疾病，还可以辅助治疗牙痛和发烧等参考词汇：针（needle），高血压（high blood pressure）【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句
2、子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】基础写作（满分15分） White Tea, which gets its name from its silver-colour, is regarded as one of the six major Chinese tea types. Dating back to the Beisong Dynasty, White Tea has a long history and it is mainly grown in Fujian and Taiwan. White Tea is famous for its beautiful silv
3、er-needle-like shape, its sweat taste and its medicinal effects. The longer it is preserved, the better effect it has. White Tea is good for health if drunk frequently and can be used in preventing diseases like high blood pressure and helping relieve the pain of toothache and fever.【广东省广州市2014综合测试】
4、读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。I came from a family that never liked to waste money, and my parents taught me that living within my budget was the most important thing.I had a very comfortable childhood, and never felt the need to throw away money on unnecessary things.But things change
5、d in my twenties, when I found myself in a city with plenty of food and shopping attractions! I burned through my income in the department stores on Saturday mornings, then burned through my credit cards at the night clubs on Saturday nights. Before too long, I was deeply in debt and constantly borr
6、owing more money from my friends. It was during this time that I reflected on my behaviour, and decided that life was a lot more comfortable when you weren;t continually stressed about money.For me, being thrifty （节俭）is not about being short on money. Its about being smart with your money so you can
7、 enjoy your life to is fullest. I love recycling and getting back to nature, and teaching the kids about eco-friendly and responsible living.Whether I like it or not, my natural feeling is to find ways to do everything for less. Less money, less time and less stress!【写作内容】1. 以30个词概括上文的主要内容。2. 以约120个
8、词就“节俭”的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：对你来说，节俭是什么？你认为节俭是否重要？为什么？就生活中如何做到节俭提一些建议。【写作要求】1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【参考范文】读写任务（满分25分） 概括要点：1. family never liked to waste money; 2. was deeply in debt; 3. being thrifty is being smart with your money find w
9、ays to do everything for less.第二部分：1. 对节俭的理解；2. 对节俭的重要性的论述； 3. 就生活中如何做到节俭提出建议。Version 1In the passage, the writer describes how he forgot his familys thrifty tradition and eventually met with financial difficulty. This helped him realized the importance of thriftiness and start to practise thriftine
10、ss again.To me, being thrifty means valuing money, making the most of what I have and trying never to spend beyond my budget or on unnecessary things.Thrift is an old and dated concept to many young people. As life has become a lot easier, people tend to indulge(沉溺) in a luxurious lifestyle. Thats w
11、hy I regard this nearly forgotten practice more important now than ever before.Actually, to be thrifty can be really simple. Most of the time, its simply a matter of being more thoughtful in our everyday life: turning off lights when leaving the room, not using the air-conditioners unless necessary,
12、 bringing our water bottle from home rather than spending on soft drinks, using public transports to avoid needles driving and parking, ordering just enough when eating out, and so forth. To do these might mean doing things others wont do and controlling our desires. But remember, a smart person is
13、not one who always tries to impress others by showing off their wealth, but one who spares no effort to save for the future and for others.Version 2The writer recalls the stress and economic problems he had after moving to a big city, forgetting the thrifty habits of his youth and wasting all his mo
14、ney. At last, however, he learned his lesson and became thrifty once more.I think a thrifty person is someone who uses only what they need and avoids wastes. Being thrifty can save us money, but more importantly, it is necessary if we want to save our planet. In the face of growing environmental pro
15、blems, I believe it is more necessary than ever to reduce the amount of rubbish and pollution each individual produces. If we fail to control the amount of waste we produce, our society and our planet are doomed(毁灭) and this concern must outweigh any short-term satisfaction we get from buying and co
16、nsuming more.It is for the reason that I buy as much fresh food as possible, rather than packaged food, which requires much more energy to produce and adds to our pollution problems. I also try to cycle or walk everywhere I go, or at least use public transport rather than getting a taxi or depending
17、 on a private car. Actions like these keep me fit and healthy, helping environment and leave me with more money in my pocket! Why dont you try these too? You might really enjoy the results.【2014高考英语湖北省武昌区调研试题】短文写作（共1题；满分30分） 请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。 As students in Senior Grade 3,we are under great pr
18、essure of the College Entrance Examination and quite often feel depressed However, if we are realistic about our abilities and do our best to achieve our goals, we can always be happy in school 注意： 无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； 除诗歌外，文体不限； 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 词数120以上。【参考范文】短文写作（共1题；满分30分）Sample writing:How can we be
19、 happy under the great pressure of the College Entrance Examination? The answer lies in the fact that we can have an objective understanding of our abilities and set a reasonable goal. Furthermore, what really matters is that we have tried our best to achieve them.In junior middle school, I was one
20、of the top ten students in my school. I was confident and happy. But things have changed since I started senior school. However hard I tried, I was unable to be listed on the top one hundred. I felt stressed and depressed. After thinking carefully, I painfully realized that I was not as smart as I i
21、magined. To my comfort, I have always been doing my best and I have never wasted a single hour. What makes me proud is that all my hard work paid off at last.In our life voyage, we cant change the direction of the wind, but we can adjust our sails to reach our destinations. Be realistic and hardwork
22、ing, and we can always be happy enough to live through our hard school life.【2014高考英语湖北省襄阳市统考试题】短文写作（共1题：满分30分） 请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。 A goal can guide us in the right direction, so a life without a goal is just like a travelling ship without a compass注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； 除诗歌外，文体不限； 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
23、 词数为l20左右。短文写作：一、评分原则： 1本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。2先根据文章内容和语言初步确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。评分档次的确定应在内容符合题目要求的前提下侧重于语言的表达3词数少于100的，将分数降低一个档次。4评分时主要关注：内容切题，语言表达准确、多样、连贯、得体。5拼写与标点符号，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，但英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6书写较差，以至于影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、书面表达各档次的划分及给分范围第五档（很好）：（2530分） 要点完整，表达清楚，无重大语法错误完全完成了试题规定的任务。 所有内容
24、与提示吻合。 应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇。 语法结构或词汇运用准确，虽有个别错误，但不影响意义的表达，具备较强的语言运用能力。 恰当地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档（好）：（1924分） 表达基本清楚，缺少个别要点，有些语法错误。完成了试题规定的任务。 主要内容与提示吻合。 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，个别错误对意义的表达影响。-较恰当地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构较紧凑。 达到了预期的写作目的。第三档（适当）：（1318分）尚能表达，缺少多个要点，语法错误较多。基本完成了试题规定的任务。 主要内容与提
25、示比较吻合。 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 有一些语法结构和词汇的错误，对意义的表达有较大影响。 基本能使用语句间的连接成分，全文结构比较松散。 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档（较差）：（712分）表达含糊不清，不能成篇。未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 主要内容与提示基本吻合。 语法结构单调，应用词汇有限。 有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了意义的表达。 语句间的连接成分运用不当，缺少连贯性。 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档（差）：（16分）动了笔，仅罗列了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。未能完成试题规定的任务。 主要内容与提示不太吻合语法结构单一，应用词汇项十
26、分有限。 较多语法结构或词汇方面的严重错误，严重影响了意义的表达。 缺乏语法之间的连接成分，内容不连贯。 信息未能传达给读者。0分未能传达给读者任何信息，内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。【参考范文】One possible version:In order to succeed ,we should realize the importance of life goal Without a clear goal ,we will feel confused and lost while if a goal is set ,we may make a sensi
27、ble schedule and confirm to it I was not aware what I wanted to chase until the discussion what is My Chinese Dream was held in my class last term I used to believe that it made no difference whether I studied hard or not to our nation The fate of a country had nothing to do with the individual student Fortunately, because of the hot discussion from my classmates, I have transformed my mind Now, Im conscious I have to devote all my passion to achieving my personal goal as well as to striving for the great revival of the motherlandWith the life goal set, we can achieve anything we want
