1、请根据以下信息，写一篇关于孙杨的短文：1.孙杨，中国的游泳新星,1991年12月1日出生，身高198cm，浙江杭州人，主攻中长距离自由泳。2.父母都是排球运动员，遗传了父母良好的运动基因。小时候就被游泳教练看中并说服其父母带他去进行游泳训练。他现在的教练就是曾担任过澳大利亚游泳运动员Grant Hackett(10年前创造了1500米自由泳的世界纪录)教练的Dennis Cotterell。3.在2011年上海游泳世锦赛中，孙杨在800米、1500米自由泳两个项目上夺金，在4200米自由泳接力中为中国男队获得铜牌而立下汗马功劳。4.他打破了1500米自由泳的世界纪录，成为打破奥运会游泳项目世界
2、纪录的中国男子第一人。他书写了中国游泳的传奇，也让我们对2012年伦敦奥运会中国男泳的表现有了更多的期待。参考词汇：自由泳 freestyle 游泳世锦赛 swimmingworld championships【写作要求】必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容。_One possible version：Sun Yang,born in December 1st,1991,Hangzhou,Zhejiang Province,is good at middle-andlongdistance freestyle and has stood out as anew swimming star these
3、 years.With his parentsboth as volleyball players,the 198cm Sun has anatural gift for sports and when he was a child,hisparents were persuaded by a swimming coach totake him to receive training in swimming.Now coached by Hacketts former mentor,DennisCotterell,Sun won two gold medals in the 800mand 1
4、,500m freestyle,plus a bronze with Chinas4200 relay squad in the 2011 swimming worldchampionships held in Shanghai.In the 1,500meters,he broke the world record,for which hebecomes the first Chinese man breaking a record inswimming as an Olympic event.This legend inChineseswimminghistoryhasbuiltupour
5、confidenceinagoodjobofChinesemensswimming team in the 2012 London Olympics.【思路点拨】第一步：审题本篇基础写作是人物介绍，需要首先确定基本的时态，人物的经历部分毫无疑问是过去时，而个人成就和后世评论可考虑现在时或完成时。第二步：翻译基本要点，整合信息，分成5句话。在这个过程中，注意上下文之间的联系及时间线索的处理。第三步：连句成篇，考虑合适的连接词，分词，从句，达到上下文连贯。一、人物介绍写作步骤及常用词句：1.age,birthday and birthplace(个人概况)was/were born in(plac
6、e)on(date)出生于某地某时at the age of在某人多少岁时the son of a poor family来自穷苦家庭的孩子was born into a peasant family出生于一个农民家庭live/lead a happy/difficult life过着幸福/艰苦的生活2.character(性格特征)kindhearted/warmhearted好心的，热心的hardworking/diligent 勤奋的humorous 幽默的confident 有信心的independent 独立的sociable 爱社交的，外向的patient 有耐心的be willi
7、ng/ready to help others 乐于助人3.education background(教育背景)be admitted touniversity考取大学graduate fromdepartment ofuniversity从某大学某系毕业receive/get a masters/doctors degree获取硕士/博士学位go abroad for further studies 出国深造When at college,he majored in English/he was anEnglish major.读大学时他主修英语。4.big events in his or
8、 her life(生平经历)serve as做工作devote oneself/ones effort/ones life to;be devoted to致力于make up ones mind/be determined to do决心做have a gift/talent for 有的天赋5.evaluation(评价)famous/wellknown at home and abroad国内外著名的make great/rapid progress in在取得很大/快速进步gain/win the first prize/place 获得一等奖/第一名set a good examp
9、le to为树立好榜样speak/think highly of高度赞扬be honored as被授予make great contributions to为作出巨大贡献二、人物介绍写作技巧点拨使用分词短语、同位语结构、with复合结构，使文章简洁、通顺；尽量使用动词短语和词组、定语从句等复合句，修辞润色文章。1.钟南山1941年出生于广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一。ZhongNanshan,born_in_Guangzhou_in_1941,_isone of the greatest doctors in China.ZhongNanshan,one_of_the_greatest_do
10、ctors_in_China,_was born in Guangzhou in 1941.2.马丁路德金于1929年出生于美国，是一位伟大的黑人民权运动领袖，他为黑人的权利、平等和自由而奋斗。Born_in_America_in_1929,_Martin Luther King wasablackmanandacivilrightsleaderwho_fought_for_the_rights,_equality_and_freedom_of_black_people.3.从北京大学英语系毕业后，她继续学习，获得了博士学位。Having_graduated_from_the_English_
11、department_ofPeking_University,_she went on further education andreceived a doctors degree.4他对科学极感兴趣，也有音乐天赋。Not_only_is_he interested in science,but also he hasa gift for music.5.雷锋给我们树立了一个良好的榜样，我们都很敬重他LeiFengset_us_a_good_example,_soweallthink_highly_of him and respect him.三、常用的表示逻辑关系的关联词1.递 进：furt
12、hermore,moreover,besides,inaddition2.转折：however,but3.总结：in a word,all in all,in short,to sum up,inconclusion4.强调：in fact,especially,what is more5.让步：although,though,even though/if6.并 列：and,also,aswell,eitheror，bothand，not onlybut also7.顺序：first,second,third;on the one hand，onthe other hand8.结果：as a
13、result,therefore,so,thusOne possible version：Born in a poor peasants family in Zibo,ShandongProvince in 1931,Li Zhensheng graduated fromShandong Agriculture College in 1951.Since then,hehas devoted himself to the research and developmentof high yield wheat and become a leading expert in thisfield.Hehasmadegreatcontributionstothedevelopment of Chinas agriculture.For this reason,hewasgiventhe2006NationalTopScienceandTechnology Award and honored as the“Father ofwheat”in China.He donated his entire prize to poor students asfinancial assistance.
