1、专题15 短文改错Passage 1 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Hello， everyone.Its nice to speak about that we can do for our school，and I think small actio
2、ns can make big difference.The first thing we can do is to make our campus more beautifully.Every one of them may plant a tree in the school or to organize a thorough cleaning on the campus.We can also form a good habit of putting rubbishes into trashcans.Never forget to turn off the lights and clos
3、e the doors.We should not leave the tap water run or waste any materials in the laboratory class.In that case，I believe well turn our school in a better place to study and live in.How I wish we can enjoy a better school life!Thank you for listening!Passage 2 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10
4、处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear Jack，Welcome to my school！Upon your arrival，there will be a party for you organizing by my classmates.You may attend to English classes to feel a di
5、fferently learning style.After that，you can go to your host family that you can experience the Chinese way of life.You can have meals together chatting about whatever interest you.The host family will also show you off some famous scenic spots.You can see people selling kites everywhere because our
6、city was home to kites.There are varieties of kites to choose.So isnt that a good idea to buy some for your friends？Write to me unless you have any questions about the schedule.Yours，Li HuaPassage 3 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。
7、删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。I am very happy that you are interested in the protection of antelopes in China，so Id like to tell you everything about it.In the past，some people kill antelopes for their free fur which can be made into many beau
8、tiful things that are very expensive.As the result，the number of antelopes was decreasing day by day.Now things are begun to change.The government and the local people take powerful measures to protect antelopes so that they will not die in the future.They had taken many effective measures，such as m
9、aking strict laws to protecting antelopes，setting up several reserves for the antelopes，and so on.Of course，its strong prohibited to buy or sell anything made of antelopes fur.Nowadays，to our joy，there are much more and more antelopes in China.Whats more，their living conditions have greatly improved
10、.Passage 4 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。In the summer holiday，we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there.Its a long and bored j
11、ourney.But the moment I arrived，I fall in love with the city.Its such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it.The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue.If you walk along the coast，you can feel the wind to blowing on your face.The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a bo
12、at or a ship.You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted.Moreover，I think the driver there drive too fast in the street.You can never be too careless when crossing the street.Passage 5 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：
13、把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。As we all know，everyone have a dream.I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school.Nowadays with modern life go rapidly，many people suffer from different kind of diseases，both mentally and
14、physically.As a result，doctors are in great need at home and abroad.My dream is to become successful doctor，helping to save peoples lives.Although to be a good doctor was very difficult，I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health.To make my dream come true，I have told me over and over again tha
15、t Ill concentrate more to studies.After all，only by working hardly can one succeed.Passage 6 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。We all have dreams，
16、but not all these dreams can come true.People give up his dreams for this or that reason.Those who dreams have come true have at least one thing in common，which is，they always hold fast to their dreams.Marie Curie set us the good example.In 1898，Marie has found a new element.In order to prove her di
17、scovery，she had to get it and showed it to the world.Then to get the new element become her dream and goal of her life.After four years hard work，Marie and her husband last saw the dim blue light of the new elementradium.Hold fast to your dreams，no matter how big and small they are.The path to your
18、dreams may not be smoothly and wide，even some sacrifices are needed，but hold on to the end.Passage 7 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Id like to
19、give you some advices on how to learn Chinese well.First，it was important to take a Chinese course，as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practising with your fellow students.Then，it also help to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible.It will make y
20、ou familiar to Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!Besides，it is a good idea learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easy.You can also make more Chinese friends，they will tell you a lot about China and help you
21、 learn Chinese.Try to speak Chinese as many as possible.Passage 8假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Its pleasure for me to have a chance to ma
22、ke a short speech today.I have found that some of my classmates study deeply into the night.Whats more，they did not spare any time to exercise during the day.But they are less energetic than the others in class and cant always stay focusing on their lessons.Worse than that，some of them seldom have breakfast，with which is also a bad habit and will certainly do harm for their health.Obvious，its important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet.We must learn to make wise use of our time，and only in this way can we keep fit and study well.I hope my advices can help you.Thanks for listen.
