1、Unit 1 FriendshipSection Guided Writing写 作 技 法 指 导 文体指导本单元的写作项目属于应用体类别中的“建议信”。这种题目要求我们就有关问题进行分析，并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。一、基本框架1开头(beginning)开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点(state your idea)。2主体(body)对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)。3结尾(ending)呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion)。二、注意事项1开门见山，直入主题。在书信正文的开头找准话题的切入
2、点，自然而然地引出自己想要谈的主题。写信时要充分了解情况，有的放矢，以提高书信的针对性。2给出希望对方采取或者终止某种行为的理由。在陈述理由的过程中要换位思考，尽量为对方考虑。要用事实说话，以增强说服力。3语气要和缓，让对方考虑你的想法或者建议，以理服人是关键，不能把自己的想法强加于人。4给出合理建议，通过提建议让对方明确行动的方向，从而达到写信的最终目的。亮点句式首段常用的句型：1Im sorry you have trouble in.2I am writing to share some advice with you.3You have asked me for my advice a
3、bout.4I am writing to express my views on/concerning.5You have asked for some advice concerning.and I will try to give you my suggestions.提出建议时常用的句型：1I think it would be a good idea if.2In my opinion it would be wise to.3I suggest that you should.4In my opinion，youd better.5I advise you to.6If I wer
4、e you，I would.7Why not.？/Why dont you.?8How about.？/What about.?结尾段常用的句型：1 I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/tips practical/useful/helpful.2I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in more details.3I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.4 In the e
5、nd，I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful/helpful.5I hope you will take my advice into account.6I will be glad if you will consider my tips.满 分 佳 作 构 建 写作任务假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提示给她写一封信。词数：100 左右。1要交朋友首先要做一个朋友；2要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；3友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为_
6、；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应用_；3确定时态：主要使用_。建议信第二人称一般现在时二、构思第一段：点出写信的目的；第二段：正文列出所提的建议；最后一段：写出写信人的希望。第二步：核心词汇想周全1_ 建议2_交朋友3_做有困难4_和同甘共苦5_需要6_全心全意tip/advice/suggestion make friends have trouble/difficulty in doing.share happiness and sorrow with.call for/need put ones heart into 第三步：由词扩句雏形现1知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很抱歉(宾语从句)I
7、am sorry to know _2如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种处境是很容易的。(beadj.to do)The situation _ if you take my advice.that you are having trouble in making friends is easy to change 3要交朋友首先要做一个朋友。(主谓结构)If you want to make friends，_4你要和朋友同甘共苦。You should _5患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。A friend _ is _6友谊需要时间和投入。(主谓宾结构)Friendship _you should
8、be a friend first share happiness and sorrow with your friend in need a friend indeed calls for/needs time and effort 第四步：句式升级造亮点1用 why not 改写句 3_2用 Wouldnt it be a good idea if.改写句 4_Why not be a friend first if you want to make friends?Wouldnt it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow wi
9、thyour friend?3用 just as a saying goes 来丰富句 5_Just as a saying goes，“A friend in need is a friend indeed.”第五步：过渡衔接联成篇(注意使用 however，to begin with，in addition，last but not least等关联词)_【参考范文】Dear Su Ru，I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in making friends.However，the situation is easy to chan
10、ge if you take my advice.Here are some tips to help you.To begin with，why not be a friend first if you want to make friends？In addition，wouldnt it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your friend？Just as a saying goes，“A friend in need is a friend indeed.”Last but not least，it would be a good idea if you put your heart into making friends.It is well-known to us all that friendship calls for time and effort.I hope you will find these ideas useful.Yours，Li HuaThank you for watching!
