1、My Favorite SportUnit 2 The Olympic Games WritingWatch a short video and try to speak out the sport events in which Chinese players got gold medals.Lead-inswimmingtable tenniswalking(竞走)badminton(羽毛球)womens volleyball(女排)air pistol(气手枪)diving(跳水)weightlifting(举重)track cycling(场地自行车)taekwondo(跆拳道)Dis
2、cussion.Do you know other kinds of sports?Basketball,football,skating,skiing,climbing,high jump,long jump,shooting(射击),sailing(帆船),horsing(赛马),hockeying(曲棍球),and ect.What is your favorite sport?When did you become interested in this sport?Why do you like this sport?How do you improve your skill?Who
3、is your favorite athlete?Do you have a plan for your future?My favorite sportWhenWhyHowWhoYour planMy favorite sport is 1.When I was years old,I fell in love with2.I first became interested in it when I was 1.I like because it can help me(relax my body and mind/keep a good figure/learn the importanc
4、e of cooperation/build up my body/forgetanxieties and worries)1.I practise.twice a week/three times a month.2.I usually.with my friends who have the same interest with me.My favorite sportWhenWhyHowWhoYour planMy favorite sport is 1.My favorite athlete/footballer/sportsman.is.who is successful in hi
5、s/her sport career.2.I like him/her because.(he/she is persistent/full of positiveenergy.).3.It is really enjoyable to watch his/her games.1.I plan to join a club to practise it in a more professional way.2.In the future,I hope to improve my skills and join in some games about.Think about the follow
6、ing question:After discussion,do you think how to write a composition entitled“My Favorite Sport”?Look at the writing topic假设你是李华,请以 My Favorite Sport 为题写一篇英文短文,介绍一个自己喜欢的运动项目,内容要包括以下几点:1.你喜欢的项目及其原因。2.你最喜欢的运动员是谁,为何喜欢。3.你平常如何提高你的技巧与水平,未来希望在该运动项目上有何作为。词数100左右。五个步骤1、审题文字信息图画信息文体、人称、时态、要点2、定框架、列提纲3、写要点4、
7、润句增色:使用高级词汇句式多变:定语从句,感叹句等过渡词的使用5、检查修改,规范抄写五步骤1.审题文体:描述性说明文人称:第一人称时态:一般现在时五步骤2.列提纲定框架总分总开门见山,直接说明要写的对象可以(My favorite sport is.)开头三段论进一步阐释与所描写对象相关的信息(本段可以My favorite athelete is.开头)对全文进行简单的小结与提升,(本段可以 In the future.开头)五步骤最喜欢的运动项目My favorite sport is.原因(why)最喜欢的运动员My favorite athelete is.原因(why)你平常如何提高
8、自己的技巧(how)未来你希望在该运动项目上有何作为(your plan)In the future.3.写要点4.润句增色使用高级词汇句式多变:定语从句,感叹句,it is+adj+for sb+to do sth等句式。过渡词的使用一句多译1.我第一次见到足球时就喜欢上了它。The first time I saw football,Iliked it.was fond of fell in love with became interested in it高级词汇2.贝克汉姆被认为是最优秀的足球运动员之一。Beckham is considered as one of the excel
9、lent football players.is regarded as3.我经常踢足球,踢足球使我快乐。I often play football and it brings me happiness.(改成定语从句)I often play football,which brings me happiness.多样句式4.加入足球俱乐部可以提高我的水平.can improve my skills.动名词当主语Joining a football club一、文章及段落起始的过渡词常用的过渡词to begin with,first of all,二、文章及段落结尾常用的过渡词 therefo
10、re,in a word,in short,all in all 三、常见的表示先后次序的过渡词 first/second,firstly/secondly,next,eventually(最后)/finally 四、常见的表示因果关系的过渡词as a result,in this way,so,therefore五、常用表示举例的过渡词 for example,such as(举例多个)六、常用表示强调的过渡词 besides,also 5、检查修改,规范抄写1.书写整洁、卷面清晰2.分段!3.标点!大小写!4.格式正确5.不遗漏要点6.时态正确7.不犯低级的语法错误A Writing Ta
11、sk Please write the composition entitled“My Favorite Sport”.Look at the writing topic假设你是李华,请以 My Favorite Sport 为题写一篇英文短文,介绍一个自己喜欢的运动项目,内容要包括以下几点:1.你喜欢的项目及其原因。2.你最喜欢的运动员是谁,为何喜欢。3.你平常如何提高你的技巧与水平,未来希望在该运动项目上有何作为。词数100左右。评分原则以及给分范围第五档(很好):完全完成试题规定的任务(21-25)-所有内容要点;较多的语法结构和词汇;语句连接词,少量错误。第四档(好):较好地完成试题规
12、定的任务(16-20)-漏掉1、2个次重点;一定量的语法结构、词汇及连接词;些许错误。第三档(适当):基本完成试题规定的任务(11-15)-漏掉一些内容;一定量的语法结构、词汇及连接词;一些错误但不影响理解。第二档(较差):末完成试题规定的任务(6-10)-漏掉一些主要内容;语法结构单调、词汇有限;错误较多影响理解。第一档(差):末完成试题规定的任务。只能写出与所给要求内容有关的一些单词(1-5)0分:末能传达读者任何信息。My favorite sport My favorite sport is football.I first became interested in it when I
13、 was eight.Firstly,in my opinion,playing football helps me build up my body.Secondly,it can relax my mind.Thirdly,it can help me learn the importance of cooperation as well.My favorite football player is David Beckham who is considered as one of the most excellent football players in the world.His g
14、reat skills attract lots of fans including me.In the future,I hope to improve my skills.As we know,practice makes perfect.Therefore,I often play football in my free time.Besides,I also join a football club,in which I can learn a lot from others.My favorite sport My favorit sport is.I first became in
15、terested in it when I was eight.Firstly,in my opinion,it helps me.Secondly,it can.Thirdly,it canas well.My favorite athelete is who is considered as one of the most excellent(basketball player/swimmer/footballer.).His/Her great skills attract lots of fans including me.In the future,i hope to improve my skills.As we know,practice makes perfect.Thus,I often in my free time.Besides,I also join in a club,in which I can learn a lot from others.Homework1.Recite the sample.2.Revise your draft of composition and carefully copy it on your paper.