1、提要：How to Improve Writing？Do you want to get high scores in writing?18？20？?Nothing is impossible!？How to Improve Writing高考作文谈谈减负前后自己的学习和生活的变化。I will tell you the changes of my life.Before,we had many classes everyday.I had to do a lot of homework after school.I went to bed at 11:30 in the evening.I
2、had no time to play.I was very tired.Now I can visit libraries.I can learn computer and drawing.In the evening,I can read books and newspa-pers and watch TV.I go to bed at 10:00 now.信息全面，但句式单一，缺乏组织性 17分 Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my lifesince our homework has reduced.Before that,lear
3、ning during the day was very simple.Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do.We could not go to bed until 11:30.Nevertheless,since reducing the learning load,my life has become much more interesting.I often visit libraries and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time.
4、In the evening,I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers.on the contrary,I go to bed at about 10 pm.In short,I am quite satisfied with my life now.范文范文.How to write a good composition?A good compositionTopic sentenceWe have had a heated discussion about whether Senior Three students should go
5、 spring outing.There are some different ideas about it.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior Three students should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air.On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.They say th
6、at with the college entrance examination drawing near,they dont feel like going anywhere.（2007全国卷 I）：假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一个英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：1 年龄；2 性别；3 爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。（2007全国卷 I）：笔友条件：爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）I hope my pen friend likes travelling,sports and keeping pets.要点齐全、语言正确，但句
7、式简单 Improve it!I like sports very much,爱好运动such as basketball and football.Improve it!I like to find a pen friend who is interested in travelling just like me,爱好旅游so that we can travel together and share experiences.Improve it!I have another hobby,that is,keeping pets,and喜欢养宠物I have kept a lovely do
8、g for one year.I want to have a pen friend who is interested in traveling,sports and keeping pets.I like sports very much,such as basketball and football.I also hope to find a pen pal who is interested in travelling just like me,so that we can travel together and share traveling experiences.Whats mo
9、re,I have another hobby,that is,keeping pets.I have kept a lovely dog for one year.对对比比.Advanced words,phrases and sentencesA good compositionChoose advanced phrases(选取高级词汇)WordPhrase 1.I like history.2.I want to have a picnic.be fond of/be interested in/have a great interest inwould like toChoose a
10、dvanced phrases(选取高级词汇)Simple phraseAdvanced phrase 1.I want to do something for the library.2.Ill try my best to offer the best service.make a contribution tospare no pains/effort Use different sentences(使用多样句型）1.There is no _ that I can get there in a short time because I live near the school.doub
11、t2.I like history very much.(使用强调）I _ like history very much.do/really 3.If you give me the chance,Ill offer the best service to others.(使用非谓语动词）If _ the chance,Ill offer the best service to others.given我过去常常晚饭后散步。After supper,I used to take a walk.使用习语（短语、成语）使语言更有文采只有通过努力学习，我们才能取得进步。Only by working
12、 hard,使用倒装句can we make progress.听到这条消息，他很兴奋。非谓语动词简捷、生动，富有内涵Hearing the news，he got excited.我们积极参加活动，这对我们健康非常有益。We take an active part in activities,定语从句的灵活运用which is good for our health.Coherence(语篇的连贯性)A good compositionWhen he saw the boy in the street,he stopped to speak to him.He saw the boy in
13、the street.He stopped to speak to him.We tried our best.We lost our game.We tried our best,but we lost our game./Although we tried our best,we lost our game.She finished the task ahead of time.She came to help us.After she finished the task ahead of time，she came to help us.1.表罗列顺序2.表递进3.表转折 4.表因果5.
14、表目的6.表归纳first of all/to start/begin with/in the first placeand/then/also/besides/whats more/in addition.but/however/although/though/on the contrary.because/since/therefore/so/thus/as a result.in order that/so that/for the purpose of.in brief/in short/in conclusion/in a word.2008全国高考（II）假定你是李华,你的英国朋友
15、Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文.请你根据下列要点写回信.要点:1.参加中文学习班;2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Best wishes Li Huait is important to take a Chinese course,as you can learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow classmates.i
16、t also helps to watch TV and read books,newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.you should make more Chinese friends.They will tell you a lot about China and
17、help you learn Chinese.Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.it is important to take a Chinese course,as you can learn from the teachers and practice with your classmates.it helps to watch TV and read books,newspapers in Chinese whenever possible
18、.it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs.you should make more Chinese friends who can help you learn Chinese.To start with,Besides,In addition,In short,I suggest北京国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平、友谊”夏令营活动，假设你是李华，请根据下列信息写一封申请信。注意：1、词数不少于100字。2、可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯姓名:李华性别:男年龄:17岁学校:长沙市一中其它:爱好
19、音乐,摄影;善于与人交流,乐于助人;热爱自然,热爱和平参加夏令营的目的:结交朋友,了解外国文化ConsolidationA sample of writingDear Sir/Madam My name is Li Hua,and Im a 17-year-old boy（1）就读（分词或定语从句）in Changshai No.1 Middle School.I have varieties of interests.First of all,（2）我爱听音乐（doing作主语）.（3）过渡词,Im also interested in photography.Being good at c
20、ommunicating with others,I make many friends.（4）过渡词,Im always ready to help others.I would like to join the Peace and Friendship Summer Camp for many reasons.The first reason lies in the fact that I love life,nature as well as peace.But（5）最重要的原因是结交朋友对我来说很容易to make friends with people from different
21、countries.If（6）（省略&非谓语）the chance,I will make full use of it to broaden my horizon and learn from others.（7）（信的末尾，同学们可以自己完成吧？）Yours faithfully,Li HuaA sample of writingDear Sir/Madam My name is Li Hua,and Im a 17-year-old boy(1)in Changshai No.1 Middle School.I have varieties of interests.First of a
22、ll,(2).（3）,Im also interested in photography.Being good at communicating with others,I make many friends.（4）Im always ready to help others.就读（分词或定从）(who is)studying过渡词In addition,过渡词Whats more我爱听音乐（doing 做主语）listening to music is my favorite.A sample of writingI would like to join the Peace and Frie
23、ndship Summer Camp for many reasons.The first reason is the fact that I love life,nature as well as peace.But（5）to make friends with people fromdifferent countries.If(6)the chance,I will make full use of it to broaden my horizon and learn from others.（7）Yours faithfully,Li Huathe important reason is
24、 that it is given/getting最重要的原因是结交朋友对我来说很容易（省略&非谓语）（信的末尾，同学们可以自己完成吧？）Look forward to your reply.easy for me审要求，列要点,扩成句，连成文,查错误。英文写作五步法Check your composition quickly:名词单复数，动词时语态；主谓代词一致性，单词拼写须准确；固定搭配应规范，行文逻辑要连贯。Which composition feels more attractive,why?Please perfect your composition after class.Make your final copy as neat as possible.
