1、中考英语热门话题劳动实践写作专题一、命题探索为了切实落实教育改革要求学生“德智体美劳”全面发展，近几年全国中高考试题都不同程度增加了五育的考查。如“结合自身体会谈论如何培养劳动精神”。分析全国中考真题可知，此话题有以下命题角度：1) 树立劳动观念，进行实践活动。如: 云南省卷“Doing Housework Makes me _”；南充 “我劳动，我快乐”；重庆A卷 “Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School”；烟台 “邀请好友参加劳动实践周活动”；2019湘潭 “Help with Some Housework”等；2)
2、参加体育运动，倡导健康理念。如：怀化“申请当亚运会的志愿者”；娄底以Sports为题的征文比赛；襄阳“谈一谈你对中考体育考试的改革方案的态度和观点”；3) 渗透美育知识，引导审美情趣。如：衡阳“介绍中国的文化特色”；杭州“接受朋友的邀请去发表关于中国民族音乐的演讲并询问相关事宜”；连云港“邀请外籍教师参加学校举办的我是美猴王在线才艺展示活动”；荆门“向笔友介绍学校的戏曲进校园展演活动”等。二、写作指导假定你是李华，近日你校开展了以“热爱劳动，珍爱粮食”为主题的实践活动。请你结合以下图示，用英语给笔友 John 写一封信，分享活动过程和感受。词数 80 左右。注意事项：1.必须包含所有提示信息，
3、可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。三、写作步骤第一步 细审题 定要点（五审法：审主题、审人称、审文体、审时态、审要点）1）审主题：热爱劳动，珍爱粮食2）审时态：以一般过去时为主3）审人称：以第一人称为主4）审文体：应用文第二步 分段落 列要点首段 (Beginning)：开门见山，引出话题：自己在田间劳动一日的经历。中间段 (Body)：详细介绍活动的时间、地点、内容以及自己的感受。结尾 (Ending)：用疑问句来呼应首段（已给出）。第三步 扩句子 精加工首段：引出话题：田间劳动一般句 Im glad
4、to tell you my experience in rice fields.高分句 Im glad to tell you my one-day experience in rice fields./ My one-day experience in rice fields is well worth sharing with you.中间段：活动的时间、地点、内容及感受【要点一】 活动时间和地点一般句 On June 18, my classmates and I went to the community farm.高分句 On June 18, my classmates and
5、I went to the community farm, laughing and jumping.(v.-ing 形式作伴随状语 )【要点二】 活动内容一般句 Some learned to harvest rice.Some helped to carry rice, and others picked ears of rice.【要点三】 活动感受一般句 After one-day work, we were tired, but we felt happy.And I have come to realize that we should save food from now on.
6、第四步 连句子 成短文Dear John, How is everything going? Im glad to tell you my one-day experience in rice fields.On June 18, my classmates and I went to the community farm.When we arrived, we visited the farm and watched videos on farming.Then we worked together with farmers.Some learned to harvest rice.Some
7、 helped to carry rice while others picked ears of rice from the fields.Through the activities, Ive got the pleasure of hard work and learned to value each grain.Have you had any experience of this kind?Yours,Li Hua第五步 查全文 得高分首先依次检查人称、时态是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。四、素材积累【劳动教育】做家务 do chores整理房间 tid
8、y the room叠衣服 fold the clothes做饭 cook meals种树和种菜 plant trees and grow vegetables做志愿服务工作 do volunteer work拜访养老院 visit the old peoples home组织游学 organize the study tour建立实践俱乐部 set up practice clubs开设劳动教育课 offer / run a labor education course学习更多的生活技能和变得更加独立 learn more life skills and become more indepe
9、ndent培养责任感和好习惯 develop a sense of responsibility and good habits理解劳动的意义 understand the meaning of labor培养我们的独立性 develop our independence【美育知识】寻找生活中更多的幸福与美 find more happiness and beauty in life课外活动 after-class activities上培训课 attend training courses充分利用课外时间 make the best use of time after school培养兴趣爱
10、好 take up hobbies增强学生的身心健康 improve students physical and mental health五、实战演练假如你是李斌，开学初老师在劳动实践课 (labor class) 上布置了一项作业，内容是栽培一种植物 (绿植、花、水果、蔬菜等)，观察并记录它 (们) 的生长变化。你完成了这项作业并且觉得很有趣，打算写一封邮件和你的笔友Tom分享此次经历和感受。词数100左右。提示：1.What do you grow?2.How do you look after it? (watch, record)3.Feelings: a feeling of sa
11、tisfaction, fun, learn, .注意事项：1.必须包含所有信息，可适当发挥，开头和格式已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。【参考答案】高分句1.Some learned to harvest rice.Some helped to carry rice while others picked ears of rice from the fields.2.Through the activities, Ive got the pleasure of hard work and learned to valu
12、e each grain./ Thanks to these valuable activities, Ive got a strong sense of responsibility.More importantly, I knew the pleasure of hard work and the value of labor.实战演练时态：以一般过去时为主人称：以第一人称为主要点：the name of the plant; how to look after it, feelings范文Hi Tom, Hows it going? Id like to share the intere
13、sting experience of my labor homework with you.This term, my teacher asked us to grow a plant and record its changes.I chose a sunflower and named it Sunny.I put the seed into a nice container and carefully recorded its changes.Each day, I watered and looked after Sunny with care.It was fascinating
14、to see how it slowly grew taller and stronger.When I saw the sunflower grow well, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction.And the funny shape of the sunflower made me deeply interested in it.The interesting experience taught me patience and the beauty of nature.I hope you try this too!Can you share your interesting experience with me? Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Bin3
