1、Dear Tom，It is a great pleasure to welcome you to study in our class.It is said that you have been studying in an EnglishChinese bilingual school since your early years，therefore，I think you will surely keep up with us classmates in your studies.Our class is an excellent class.All my classmates are
2、united as one in whatever we do.All of us work hard at our lessons，help each other in everything，and learn from each other the strong points.After you come to our class，we can learn from you in our English studies.And we can help you in overcoming all the difficulties that you will meet both in your
3、 studies and your daily life.Yours truly，Li Hua1.书写规范、卷面整洁2.结构美：有合理的段落层次，多为3段式，条理清晰；每段有每段的主题。整体三部分1.Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；2.Body中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending小结；呼应主题Sir,DearIm a senior 3 student.Im writing to tell you the discussion about whether to board in the school or at home.My parents and teachers suggeste
4、d I board in the school with a handful of reasons.They said it would be convenient for me to ask teachers questions at any time.However,I think when staying at home in the evening,I can have more time to work at my lessons,especially the subjects Im not good at.I really dont know what to do and want
5、 you to give me your advice.Yours,Liu Hai3.词汇美：词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。appreciate 替换thankThank you very much for you help.We appreciate your help very much./Your help is much appreciated.round the corner 替换 coming soonThe summer vacation is coming.Do you have any plans?The summer vacation is r
6、ound the corner.Do you have any plans?We think换成It is widely shared thatIt is universally acknowledged thatWe think its our duty to protect the environment.It is widely shared that its our duty to protect the environment.in my opinion 换成from my own perspective In my opinion,plenty of memory work is
7、undoubtedly helpful to English study.From my own perspective,plenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study.very 换成 extremely,intensely I very like it.I like it very much.It is very beautiful.I extremely like it.It is extremely beautiful.have a ball替换have a good time/enjoy oneselfAfte
8、r visiting the workshop,we went back to school.Every one of us had a good time.After visiting the workshop,we went back to school.Every one of us had a ball(尽情玩乐).more often than not替换usuallyUsually,the meaning of many words can be easily guessed.More often than not,the meaning of many words can be
9、easily guessed.be of+n.替换adj.The products very good and are sold everywhere in China.The products are of high quality and are sold everywhere in China.first/second/third:第一：First and foremost,第二：Furthermore,第三：Last but not least,4.句式美：运用得当的高级句式结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。The reason why+句子 is that+句子(的原
10、因是)The reason why Tom was absent is that he was ill.我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air.The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.On no account can we+V(我们绝对不能)On no account can we ignore the value
11、 of knowledge.We cant ignore the value of knowledge.It is+被强调部分+that1)It is what Yang Liwei has done thatencourages us a lot.2)Those who like reading extensively say it is through reading that we get our knowledge.more than any other 表示最高级Among the optional courses,spoken English and computer study
12、are more popular than any one else.名词从句 It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.My hometown is no longer what it used to be.（非限制性）定语从句 The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.It is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.The flat is in a building
13、on Fangcao Street,which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.It was quite an experience for us both,which Ill never forget for the rest of my life.5.衔接美：使用恰当的连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。常用的连接词1.表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容另外，还有：whats more;besides;also;moreover;in addition2.表示转折关系但是，然而，相反：but;however;y
14、et;instead;on the other hand;on the contrary.3.表示因果关系因为，因此，所以:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;as a result;4.表示条件关系如果，只要:if;on condition(that);as long as除非:unless 否则:or else5.表示时间关系当 的时候:when;while在之后:after在之前:before直到:until 直到才:notuntil一就:as soon as后来，然后:later;afterwards不久:soon近来:lately;recen
15、tly自从:since 从那时起:from then on6.表示特定的顺序关系首先:firstly最主要的:above all其次:secondly然后:then;next最后:finally;in the end7.换一种方法表述换句话说:in other words;that is to say;8.进行举例说明例如，比如:for instance;for example;like;such as;that is to say,namely,actually,and so on,believe it or not,to tell you the truth,for this reason
16、9.用于陈述事实实际上:in fact;actually;as a matter of fact跟你说实话:to tell you the truth10.对一个话题进行总结总而言之，总的来说:on the whole;in short;all in all;in general;in a word,finally,in conclusion,generally speaking,as you know,in the end,12.表示结果：thus,therefore,so,as a result,seeing that,luckily,unfortunately 13.表示强调：above all,indeed,surely,certainly,of course,after all,without any delay,at least,at most,most important,undoubtedlyFive Steps:Analyze the writing task.Organize it.Draft.Revise.Edit.
