1、2021届高考英语二轮复习短文改错压轴20篇（一）1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。I have many hobbies, among that fishing ranks first. It is fishing that have he
2、lped me improve my self-control. Three years ago my academic performance is not satisfactory for my lack of patience. Then my father came up a good idea and taught me to fish. Having been told that fishing was full of funs, I followed him without hesitation. To his surprise, fishing turned out to be
3、 more difficult than I had expected it. I didnt remember how many times I had failed before I caught a fish. Amazing, the patience I developed by learning to fish has a influence on my study. Now Id like to share my experience with those who have the same trouble, encouraged them to study with full
4、devotion and attention.2.文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加上一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。“Welcome to the Arctic,” the guide said, as we jumped onto the runway. Both of we were a little surprised by the fact which th
5、e temperature was extremely low. Kiruna was most northern town in Sweden, 144 kilometers above the Arctic Circle. Around us, forest covering by snow spread away for nearly 390,000 square kilometers. A strong wind shakes the cabin as we landed on. We had been travelling from Denver for 18 hour. “Tell
6、 me again,” I asked my wife, Kim, “Why are we coming to the Arctic in winter?” “Just to seeing the wonderful view.” she answered cheerful. She loves the cold, but she saysit wakes her up.3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多
7、余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear friends, It is real a good chance to have met all of you here. We have spent several precious weekends in English study in the English Club. Although we have been member for a short period of time, we have made a
8、great progress. That is why we are all very active and the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interested. I am very pleased to say that all of us improved our spoken English greatly so fa
9、r. I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future! 4.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。I have been learning Eng
10、lish since I am in primary school, but the truth was that I was not so good at listening. No matter how hardly I tried, I couldnt understand clearly which my English teachers or native speakers said. One day, I was surfing the Internet while an advertisement for English listening drew your attention
11、. To my amaze,it was a website that recordings of some well-known books were provided. When see the website, I fell in love it, which turned out to be that useful. Now I have made a progress in listening.5.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
12、),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 Dear Lucy, I am glad to receive your e-mail ask me about my future career plan. Here I want to share them with you. As the matter of fact, I want to be a translator. To begin with, I am fond o
13、f the languages, of that my English is always second to none. I appreciate the beauty hiding in literature. In addition, literature is like a bridge which helps people understand the world better. I did hope the classical Chinese literature works can be conveyed every corner of the world with my eff
14、orts. So what do you find my plan? Please reply to me in your convenience. Yours, Karo答案以及解析1.答案：I have many hobbies, among fishing ranks first. It is fishing that helped me improve my self-control. Three years ago my academic performance not satisfactory for my lack of patience. Then my father came
15、 up a good idea and taught me to fish. Having been told that fishing was full of, I followed him without hesitation. To surprise, fishing turned out to be more difficult than I had expected it. I didnt remember how many times I had failed before I caught a fish., the patience I developed by learning
16、 to fish has influence on my study. Now Id like to share my experience with those who have the same trouble, them to study with full devotion and attention.解析： 【主旨概要】作者以第一人称讲述了自己学习钓鱼的过程及收获。学习中作者因为缺乏耐心儿学习成绩不理想,在父亲的建议下认真的学习了钓鱼,虽然比预想的要难,但是作者通过努力练习而变得熟练,更为惊喜的收获是他的耐心得到了很好的培养,进而促进了学习。作者想要把这一经验与所有其他有类似问题的朋
17、友分享。【主题语境】人与自我。【核心素养】读懂以“钓鱼培养耐心”为语境的短文,能在语境中准确运用语法知识。【选材意义】这篇文章以学习中遇到的困难为切入点,旨在鼓励学生积极面对学习中的困难,从生活中培养性格,对学生的性格养成和解决问题的信心有指导意义。【语篇类型】记叙文。1.【解题思路】本句句意为:我有很多爱好,而其中最大的爱好就是钓鱼。定语从句中关系代词that不能位于介词后,因为关系代词指代hobbies,故应将that改为which。【参考答案】that改为which。2.【解题思路】本句句意为:是钓鱼帮助了我提升了自我控制能力。通过句意和结构判断本句是强调句型的基本句式,被强调的部分为句
18、子的主语,因此谓语动词应该与fishing 致使用第三人称单数。【参考答案】have改为has。3.【解题思路】整个故事叙述一个过去发生的事情,时态定位在一般过去时态。is应该为was.【参考答案】is改为was4.【解题思路】本句句意:看到这种情况,爸爸提出一个好主意,并且教我如何通过钓鱼克服这个困难。【参考答案】come up后加with。5.【解题思路】本句句意:被告知钓鱼充满乐趣,我毫不犹豫地跟从了父亲去钓鱼。虽然前面有full of但是fan作为不可数名词是不会有单复数变化的。【参考答案】funs改为fun。6.【解题思路】本句句意:令我吃惊的是,而非父亲,故应将his改为my。【参
19、考答案】his改为my。7.【解题思路】本句中表示“比我预期的要难”,expect后不需要加宾语,故应去掉it。【参考答案】去掉it。8.【解题思路】本中不应使用形容词Amazing修饰整个句子,故应将Amazing改为副词Amazingly。【参考答案】Amazing改为Amazingly。9.【解题思路】本句表达“对我的学习有影响”,influence的第一个因素是元音因素,故应将a改为an。【参考答案】a改为an。10.【解题思路】本句句意:现在我愿意去与有相同困难的人分享我的经验,鼓励他们全力地,全情地投入到他们的学习。本句的主语是I,前半句是句子的主干部分,逗号后面的成份是用来做状语
20、的,那么encourage与主语I的逻辑关系判断决定了 encourage非谓语动词的形式,根据encourage的词义和用法,判定encourage 和 I 是主动关系,所以 encouraged 改成 encouraging。【参考答案】encouraged改为encouraging。2.答案：“Welcome to the Arctic,” the guide said, as we jumped onto the runway. Both of were a little surprised by the fact the temperature was extremely low.
21、Kiruna most northern town in Sweden, 144 kilometers above the Arctic Circle. Around us, forest by snow spread away for nearly 390,000 square kilometers. A strong wind the cabin as we landed on. We had been travelling from Denver for 18. “Tell me again,” I asked my wife, Kim, “Why are we coming to th
22、e Arctic in winter?” “Just to the wonderful view.” she answered. She loves the cold, she saysit wakes her up.3.答案：Dear friends, It is a good chance to have met all of you here. We have spent several precious weekends English study in the English Club. Although we have been for a short period of time
23、, we have made a great progress. That is we are all very active and the activities are not only enjoyable also helpful. Besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try best to make the activities lively and. I am very pleased to say that all of us improved our spoken English greatly so far. I a
24、m looking forward to all of you again in the near future! 解析： 1real改为really考查副词修饰句子要用副词2in改为on考查介词spend time/money on sth意为在上花费时间（金钱），是固定搭配3member改为members考查名词复数此处主+系动词+表语结构要一致，都应用复数形式4去掉a考查冠词progress是不可数名词，其前不加不定冠词a5why改为because 考查连词根据句意：这是因为我们都活跃用连词because6and改为but 考查连词前后两个分句之间是转折关系而非并列关系，用连词but7h
25、is改为their 考查代词their指代上文中的foreignteachers8interested改为interesting考查现在分词and是并列连词，它前后连接两个相同的语法成分，lively和interesting都是形容词作宾语补足语，修饰物要用形容词化的现在分词，interesting意为有趣的9加have 考查动词时态根据句中状语sofar，要用现在完成时态10see改为seeing 考查动名词to是介词，后接动词时要用动名词形式4.答案：I have been learning English since I in primary school, but the truth
26、was that I was not so good at listening. No matter how I tried, I couldnt understand clearly my English teachers or native speakers said. One day, I was surfing the Internet an advertisement for English listening drew attention. To my, it was a website recordings of some well-known books were provid
27、ed. When the website, I fell in love it, which turned out to be that useful. Now I have made a progress in listening.5.答案：Dear Lucy, I am glad to receive your e-mail me about my future career plan. Here I want to share with you. As matter of fact, I want to be a translator. To begin with, I am fond
28、of the languages, of my English is always second to none. I appreciate the beauty in literature. In addition, literature is like a bridge which helps people understand the world better. I hope the classical Chinese literature works can be conveyed every corner of the world with my efforts. So do you find my plan? Please reply to me your convenience. Yours, Karo
