1、题目要求考场作文Dear Terry，Im now writing to tell you some relevant details on how to be a guest in China.Generally speaking,your arrival shouldnt be later than the fixed time.Besides,youd better bring some little gifts.Speaking of table manners,keep your voice low and pleasant during the meal.The host like
2、s it if you have learned to use chopsticks.I hope these suggestions will be helpful to you.Im sure you will have a great time.Yours，Li Hua(2018全国卷)假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1.到达时间；2.合适的礼物；3.餐桌礼仪。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。由低分作文知审题构思的重要性1.要点缺失：本文遗漏要点“你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客”。2.时态错误：The host likes应表述为The host will like。3.词数不足：(80词)可在the fixed time后加具体的说明，以扩充词数，如A few minutes earlier is the best.可在some little gifts后举例说明，如such as a special food or drink from your country.4.语气不当：开头处可加Nice to hear from you.结尾处will be helpful最好改为would be helpful，以使语气表达得更加委婉。
