1、专题2第3讲A假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10 处，多者(从11处起)不计分。(2020东北三省四市教研联合体高考模拟)It is known that as the development of economy，a number of cars is increasingly g
2、rowing in our daily life.Cars indeed had greatly improved our life and brought much convenience.Therefore，they also bring problems，among which the traffic accident is on the top of the list.What can we do to solve the problem effective？The best solution for their society is to obey the traffic regul
3、ations.For example，when we cross the street，we should go until the light turns green.Also，we should ride bikes on the bike lane.Besides，we should warn people not to looking at their mobile phone while they are riding or driving.Lots of traffic accidents can be avoided what if everyone obeys the traf
4、fic regulations.【答案】It is known that the development of economy， number of cars is increasingly growing in our daily life.Cars indeed greatly improved our life and brought much convenience.，they also bring problems，among which the traffic accident is on the top of the list.What can we do to solve th
5、e problem ？The best solution for society is to obey the traffic regulations.For example，when we cross the street，we should go until the light turns green.Also，we should ride bikes on the bike lane.Besides，we should warn people not to at their mobile while they are riding or driving.Lots of traffic a
6、ccidents can be avoided what if everyone obeys the traffic regulations.【解析】本文为记叙文。随着经济的发展，汽车越来越多。汽车确实极大地改善了我们的生活，带来了很多方便。然而，它们也带来了一些问题，其中交通事故是首当其冲的。只要每个人遵守交通规则，许多交通事故是可以避免的。1考查语境及介词。句意：众所周知，随着经济的发展，我们日常生活中汽车数量越来越多。分析句子可知， 当as为 “随着”时是连词，后面跟句子；而with意为“随着”时是介词，后面跟名词短语。本句中的“the development of economy”是名
7、词短语。故将as改成with。2考查冠词。句意：众所周知，随着经济的发展，我们的日常生活中汽车的数量越来越多。分析句子可知， “the number of.”意为“的数量”，“a number of.”意思为“许多的，大量的”，此处是指汽车的数量。故将a改成the。3考查现在完成时。句意：汽车确实极大地改善了我们的生活，带来了很多方便。分析句子可知，本句指汽车现在极大地改善了我们的生活，所以要用现在完成时，而不是过去的过去。故将 had改成have。4考查副词辨析。句意：然而，它们也带来了一些问题，其中交通事故是首当其冲的。分析句子可知，前后两句是转折关系，而非因果关系。故将Therefore
8、改成However。5考查副词。句意：我们怎样才能有效地解决这个问题？分析句子可知，句中的effective在句中修饰动词solve the problem，修饰动词要用副词修饰。故将effective改成effectively。6考查人称代词。句意：对我们社会来说最好的解决办法是遵守交通规则。分析句子可知，此处的主语是we，所以是我们的社会，而非他们的。故将their改为our。7考查语境。句意：当我们过马路时，交通灯变成绿色我们才能走。根据语境此句考查的not.until“直到才”。故在should后面加not。8考查固定用法。句意：我们应该提醒人们在开车或骑车时不要看手机。“warn s
9、b.not to do.”为固定搭配，意为“提醒某人不要做某事”。故将looking改成look。9考查名词复数。句意：我们应该提醒人们开车或骑车时不要看手机。本句是指提醒人们开车或骑车时不去看他们的手机，可知，手机要用复数。故将phone改成phones。10考查语境。句意：如果每个人都遵守交通规则，许多交通事故是可以避免的。“what if.”意为“倘若怎么办”，if意为“假如，如果”。分析句子可知，此处是指“如果”而非“倘若怎么办”。故将what if中的what去掉。B假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错
10、误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10 处，多者(从11处起)不计分。(2020安徽省统一考试调研卷)Last month，our school organized a knowledge contest what called “Motherland in My Heart”After our teacher announced the news，everyone was eager to parti
11、cipating.Then we spent the following days make preparations for it.We surfed the Internet about the changes in different aspect，including economy，technology，etc.We also invite an expert to deliver a lecture on the development of our country during the past 70 years.Having learnt about these achievem
12、ents，we felt so proud our country.Finally came a big day.My classmates and I tried my best and answered every question confident.After a few rounds，our team finally won the top prize.What happy we were!【答案】Last month，our school organized a knowledge contest what called “Motherland in My Heart”After
13、our teacher announced the news，everyone was eager to .Then we spent the following days preparations for it.We surfed the Internet about the changes in different ，including economy，technology，etc.We also an expert to deliver a lecture on the development of our country during the past 70 years.Having
14、learnt about these achievements，we felt so proud our country.Finally came big day.My classmates and I tried best and answered every question .After a few rounds，our team finally won the top prize. happy we were!【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。文章介绍了作者学校举办的“祖国在我心中”知识竞赛。1考查过去分词作定语。句意：我们学校举办的叫作“祖国在我心中”知识竞赛。根据句意可知此处为过去分词作定
15、语，因此去掉what，what也不能引导定语从句。故去掉what。2考查固定搭配。句意：每一个人都渴望参加。此处为短语be eager to do sth.“渴望做某事”。故将participating改为participate。3考查非谓语动词。句意：我们花了好几天为其做准备。此处为短语spend time (in) doing sth.“花时间做某事”。故将make改为making。4考查名词复数。句意：我们上网搜索各个方面发生的巨大变化。此处aspect为可数名词，且前面有different修饰，因此应用复数。故将aspect改为aspects。5考查一般过去时。句意：我们也邀请专家就过
16、去70年我们国家的发展做了讲座。本文讲述了过去发生的事情，因此应用一般过去时。故将invite改为invited。6考查介词。句意：了解到这些成就，我们为我们的国家感到自豪。根据句意可知此处为短语be proud of“为自豪”。故在proud后加of。7考查冠词。句意：最终，这一天终于到来了。此处特指比赛这一天，应用定冠词the。故将a改为the。8考查代词。句意：我和我的同学们尽我们的最大努力，自信地回答每一个问题。此处应用our代指classmates and I。故将my改为our。9考查副词。句意：我和我的同学们尽我们的最大努力，自信地回答每一个问题。此处修饰动词，应使用副词。故将c
17、onfident改为confidently。10考查感叹句。句意：我们多么快乐啊。分析句子可知，本句是感叹句。happy为形容词，因此应用how。故将What改为How。C假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10 处，多者(从11处起)不计分。(2020福建省龙岩市高三教学质检)What
18、are friends？We often talk about the topic for others.I think friends are those people whom can help you when you are in the trouble.Dont forget the saying，“A friend in need was a friend indeed.” Your friend can tell you your mistake，though what they say is hard for you to listen.You can share happin
19、ess，trouble and worry with our friends.Someone also says，“You cant walk some steps without a friend.” So I think friends are absolute important to us.I would like to make as much friends as possible.【答案】What are friends？We often talk about the topic others.I think friends are those people can help y
20、ou when you are in the trouble.Dont forget the saying，“A friend in need a friend indeed.” Your friend can tell you your ，though what they say is hard for you to listen .You can share happiness，trouble and worry with friends.Someone also says，“You cant walk steps without a friend.” So I think friends
21、 are important to us.I would like to make as friends as possible.【解析】这是一篇说明文。文章讲述了朋友是患难之交以及朋友的重要性。1考查介词。句意：我们经常和其他人讨论这个话题。“与一起”应使用介词with。故将for改为with。2考查定语从句。句意：我认为朋友是那些当你在困难之中时可以帮助你的人。这是一个定语从句，先行词为those people，指人，并且先行词在从句中作主语，所以使用关系词who。故将whom改为who。3考查介词短语。句意同上。“处于困境”在英语中一般翻译为in trouble。故将in后的the去掉。
22、4考查一般现在时。句意：不要忘记一句谚语：“患难中的朋友才是真正的朋友。”引号内是引用的一句谚语，所以时态应用一般现在时。故将was改为is。5考查名词复数。句意：你的朋友能告诉你你的错误，尽管他们说的话听起来很难接受。“mistake(错误)”在这里是名词形式，这是一个可数名词。根据常识，你的错误不可能只有一个，所以应使用名词的复数形式。故将mistake改为mistakes。6考查介词。句意同上。“listen”是一个不及物动词，若后面要接事物的话，一般会在listen后面加上介词“to”。这句话中listen的逻辑宾语是what they say。故在listen后加to。7考查物主代词。句意：你可以与你的朋友分享你的幸福、困难与烦恼。根据句意，你肯定是与你的朋友分享这些东西。故将our改为your。8考查不定代词。句意：有人也说，“没有朋友陪着，你会举步维艰。”some意为“一些”，一般用在肯定句中，这句话是一个否定句。故将some改为any。9考查副词。句意：所以我认为朋友对我们是绝对重要的。“绝对地”修饰形容词important，所以应使用副词形式。故将absolute改为absolutely。10考查形容词。句意：我想交尽可能多的朋友。friends(朋友)为可数名词，所以不能使用形容词much修饰，much修饰不可数名词。故将much改为many。
