1、描述生活方式本单元要求给编辑写一封描述生活方式的信件，符合正式书信的写作范畴。基本框架1开头(the beginning)写信目的2主体(the body)详细介绍自己的生活方式3结尾(the ending)表达谢意常用词块1be beneficial to对有益2live a healthy life过着健康的生活3sort out整理；归类4take measures to do sth.采取措施做某事5spare no effort to do sth.不遗余力地做某事6contribute to有助于常用语句精彩开头1Im writing to you to tell you some
2、thing about a healthy lifestyle.我写信给你是想告诉你一些关于健康的生活方式。2I want to share something about my lifestyle with you.我想和你分享一下我的生活方式。3I am willing to offer you some tips about living a healthy life.我愿意给你一些关于健康生活的建议。正文佳句1Exercise is beneficial to our health and wed better run for half an hour every day.运动有益于我
3、们的健康，我们最好每天跑步持续半小时。2Whats more，we should combine study with pleasure. 更重要的是，我们应该把学习和快乐结合起来。3. We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of a low carbon life. 我们可以在日常生活中做很多事情来实现低碳生活的目标。余味结尾1I would appreciate it if you can accept my suggestion.如果你能接受我的建议我将不胜感激。2Try your best and you will
4、live a healthier life. 努力吧，你会过上更健康的生活。3Its something about my daily lifestyle，thanks for your reading.这是我日常生活的一部分，谢谢你的阅读。假定你是李华，根据下面提示用英语给报社编辑写一封信。内容如下：1许多青少年不注重健康问题的现象及导致的危害；2简述你的看法，提出你的建议。注意：1词数80左右；2开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Editor，As we all know，health is very important.Only when we are healthy can we
5、 study well and enjoy life._Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua【学生习作】Dear Editor，As we all know，health is very important.Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.Many teenagers dont pay attention to their health.They spend too much time watch TV，play games and chat on the Internet.Firstly，this
6、 may make them to get nearsighted.Secondly，their bodies become weaker.Thirdly，they will lose the chance to communicate with others.They should play some sports and have a healthy lifestyle.Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua点评1.要点虽然齐全，但内容不够丰富，字数不足80字。2.高级词汇和高级句式的运用太少，句式太简单，且不够多样。3.文中出现了一些简单的语法错误。如spend time (i
7、n) do，make them to get等。4.衔接不够顺畅，意义不连贯，未达到预期目的。【升格作文】Dear Editor，As we all know，health is very important.Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.However，many teenagers dont pay any attention to their health.And they spend too much time watching TV，playing games and chatting on the
8、Internet，which is bad for their health.Firstly，this may make them get nearsighted.Secondly，their bodies become much weaker.Thirdly，they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face.In my opinion，they should spend less time in front of the TV or the computer.Go out to get much exercis
9、e，play some sports and have a healthy lifestyle.Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua假如你是中学生李华，请你给某报社编辑写一封信，指出健康的重要性，并针对“如何保持健康”给出自己的建议。信的内容需包含以下信息：1健康的重要性；2给出健康的方法，如：避免含糖高、脂肪高的食物；摒弃不良习惯；多锻炼等。注意：1词数80左右；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Editor，_Yours sincerely，Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Editor，Fitness is far more important than anyth
10、ing else.How can we keep healthy？Here are some suggestions for you.Firstly，we should keep a balanced diet，which is good for our health.We should try to cut out foods containing lots of sugar and fat.Whats more，we have to quit those bad habits that damage our health.Last but not least，we should work out every day to reduce stress.Even if we are busy，we should try to do some exercise to strengthen our body，such as jogging and skiing.Yours sincerely，Li Hua
